Comments received on poems by MrNobody40



Two Hands
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Wow! Simple yet evocative. Beautiful!

October 15th, 2024 02:14

Exposed
rengoku said:

its like me sometimes
its a good read and very true

July 5th, 2024 00:47

These Four Walls
aDarkerMind said:

a life I lead every day.

true to life and all else.

May 21st, 2024 11:49

I Miss
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

May 21st, 2024 11:34

Everything on Me
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

January 17th, 2024 15:39

When
Bobby O said:

E=MC^3

August 6th, 2023 19:10

How Life Goes
L. B. Mek said:

humanity calls it wisdom
when taking two paracetamols
before getting drunk, beginning
to counter the aftereffects
of what we do to ourselves..
crazy eh? lol
(a relatable lament, worded well
thanks for sharing)

July 3rd, 2023 03:11

But Me
agocl said:

Love this one

March 25th, 2023 09:06

You Need Me
Jonas Robinson said:

I\'m sure they do need you. And whoever that was, was a fool. Thank you for sharing. :)

May 28th, 2022 14:44

You Need Me
JudyStella said:

A great poem that harps on the theme of longing and desperation!

May 28th, 2022 08:35

You Need Me
arqios said:

Filled with so much feeling and so relatable. Thanks for sharing.

May 28th, 2022 06:57

You Need Me
ladyfe said:

This is beautiful

May 28th, 2022 06:05

Only Pieces
JudyStella said:

Sadness and emptiness is portrayed well with elements of nature! Such a relatable theme of society and a well crafted piece of work! Good job!

May 26th, 2022 11:14

Sleepless Dreamer
Goldfinch60 said:

Super place to be where time is meaningless.

Andy

April 24th, 2021 00:15

Sleepless Dreamer
dusk arising said:

What a great situation that would be. To be able to live in dreams which are a wonderland.

April 23rd, 2021 09:43

A Moment
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful tone and flow, measured vulnerability depicted skilfully
thanks for sharing

April 23rd, 2021 05:48

A Moment
Goldfinch60 said:

Each moment in our lives is so precious as was this one in yours.

Andy

April 23rd, 2021 00:19

A Moment
annonymouswonder said:

I love this, some of the best parts of life are only a moment long

April 22nd, 2021 13:25

A Moment
dusk arising said:

As life goes on so such brief encounters colour the poets character.

April 22nd, 2021 11:45

A Thousand Before
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write good read, N.

March 6th, 2021 17:41

Silent Prayer
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Awesome wording and rhythm in this muse in brevity, so poetic to get lost in labyrinths of the mind. The last line woah fabulous!! Kudos!!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

February 15th, 2021 12:35

Silent Prayer
Goldfinch60 said:

In that labyrinth there is always a way out into freedom, it may well be around the next corner in your life.

Andy

February 12th, 2021 01:46

Silent Prayer
FredPeyer said:

Well penned, nicoli. I think there are times in everybody\'s life where we feel that big black hole inside. But contrary to the real black holes, ours can turn into a sun again.

February 11th, 2021 16:19

Silent Prayer
willow tree said:

Interesting ! What’s grows in you ?

February 11th, 2021 10:09

Plague
L. B. Mek said:

there is a rhythmic element to your writing style that\'s hard to pinpoint, yet its presence is undeniable,
a good read of Phoenix aspirations

February 11th, 2021 03:44

Plague
Goldfinch60 said:

As those ashes drift away your new fulfilling life will be ahead of you - enjoy its wonder.

Andy

February 10th, 2021 01:09

I Could Have
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true nicoli, the thought that comes to us all when we think back on our live - \"If only....\"

Andy

December 14th, 2020 02:41

I Could Have
FredPeyer said:

Well written nicoli!
Would have, could have, should have...
Forget the rear-view mirror!

December 13th, 2020 13:10

Empty Streets
Goldfinch60 said:

In the empty streets we often see at least you are there and will continue moving forward in your life.

Andy

September 21st, 2020 00:18

Covered Moon
Goldfinch60 said:

That darkness may be there but all it needs is a spark to lighten life.

Andy

September 13th, 2020 00:47

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