Comments received on poems by nicolibellamont



You Need Me
Jonas Robinson said:

I\'m sure they do need you. And whoever that was, was a fool. Thank you for sharing. :)

May 28th, 2022 14:44

You Need Me
JudyStella said:

A great poem that harps on the theme of longing and desperation!

May 28th, 2022 08:35

You Need Me
crypticbard said:

Filled with so much feeling and so relatable. Thanks for sharing.

May 28th, 2022 06:57

You Need Me
ladyfe said:

This is beautiful

May 28th, 2022 06:05

Only Pieces
JudyStella said:

Sadness and emptiness is portrayed well with elements of nature! Such a relatable theme of society and a well crafted piece of work! Good job!

May 26th, 2022 11:14

Sleepless Dreamer
Goldfinch60 said:

Super place to be where time is meaningless.

Andy

April 24th, 2021 00:15

Sleepless Dreamer
dusk arising said:

What a great situation that would be. To be able to live in dreams which are a wonderland.

April 23rd, 2021 09:43

A Moment
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful tone and flow, measured vulnerability depicted skilfully
thanks for sharing

April 23rd, 2021 05:48

A Moment
Goldfinch60 said:

Each moment in our lives is so precious as was this one in yours.

Andy

April 23rd, 2021 00:19

A Moment
annonymouswonder said:

I love this, some of the best parts of life are only a moment long

April 22nd, 2021 13:25

A Moment
dusk arising said:

As life goes on so such brief encounters colour the poets character.

April 22nd, 2021 11:45

A Thousand Before
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write good read, N.

March 6th, 2021 17:41

Silent Prayer
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Awesome wording and rhythm in this muse in brevity, so poetic to get lost in labyrinths of the mind. The last line woah fabulous!! Kudos!!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

February 15th, 2021 12:35

Silent Prayer
Goldfinch60 said:

In that labyrinth there is always a way out into freedom, it may well be around the next corner in your life.

Andy

February 12th, 2021 01:46

Silent Prayer
FredPeyer said:

Well penned, nicoli. I think there are times in everybody\'s life where we feel that big black hole inside. But contrary to the real black holes, ours can turn into a sun again.

February 11th, 2021 16:19

Silent Prayer
willow tree said:

Interesting ! What’s grows in you ?

February 11th, 2021 10:09

Plague
L. B. Mek said:

there is a rhythmic element to your writing style that\'s hard to pinpoint, yet its presence is undeniable,
a good read of Phoenix aspirations

February 11th, 2021 03:44

Plague
Goldfinch60 said:

As those ashes drift away your new fulfilling life will be ahead of you - enjoy its wonder.

Andy

February 10th, 2021 01:09

I Could Have
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true nicoli, the thought that comes to us all when we think back on our live - \"If only....\"

Andy

December 14th, 2020 02:41

I Could Have
FredPeyer said:

Well written nicoli!
Would have, could have, should have...
Forget the rear-view mirror!

December 13th, 2020 13:10

Empty Streets
Goldfinch60 said:

In the empty streets we often see at least you are there and will continue moving forward in your life.

Andy

September 21st, 2020 00:18

Covered Moon
Goldfinch60 said:

That darkness may be there but all it needs is a spark to lighten life.

Andy

September 13th, 2020 00:47

Covered Moon
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A sublime hazy muse very poetic yayy. Imaginative wow!

Pls do read my newest poem too.

September 12th, 2020 14:03

Covered Moon
Dove said:

Nicely written! A lost soul, a ghost perhaps!

September 12th, 2020 12:47

Wasn\'t There
Goldfinch60 said:

You remembered that voice, so you are there, one day all will come back to you.

We all have times when our thoughts are lost, but the do come back.

Andy

September 10th, 2020 15:14

Unnoticed
L. B. Mek said:

it takes rare depths of insight and wisdom, to appreciate something while busily experiencing it, usually its with a hindsight perspective we learn the true value of those jagged paths our life\'s take us to,
wonderful write

September 10th, 2020 03:00

Unnoticed
Goldfinch60 said:

Each moment of our lives do fall away but each moment we live in now becomes even more precious.

Wonderful words.

Andy

September 10th, 2020 01:29

Unnoticed
Michael Edwards said:

And it deserves a fave from me as well.

September 9th, 2020 13:36

Unnoticed
dusk arising said:

Story of my life mate.

But upon reflection i read your piece again and gained it\'s hidden truths.
Yes the story of ones life. One\'s loves, pains, struggles and gains all transcribed into our poetic outpourings. But what matter those? At the end of each day they have been but a mere palliative to our turmoil over which others may ponder and relate.... Then they are gone.... lest the wind should blow open our book of life and other eyes fall upon our words...

This is most deserving of a place among my favourite poetry posted upon MPS.

September 9th, 2020 12:02

Stone
Goldfinch60 said:

That time has no beginning and no ending as we live our lives forever.

Andy

September 5th, 2020 00:05

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