Comments received on poems by MrNobody40
Unnoticed
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment of our lives do fall away but each moment we live in now becomes even more precious.
Wonderful words.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment of our lives do fall away but each moment we live in now becomes even more precious.
Wonderful words.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 01:29
Unnoticed
dusk arising said:
Story of my life mate.
But upon reflection i read your piece again and gained it\'s hidden truths.
Yes the story of ones life. One\'s loves, pains, struggles and gains all transcribed into our poetic outpourings. But what matter those? At the end of each day they have been but a mere palliative to our turmoil over which others may ponder and relate.... Then they are gone.... lest the wind should blow open our book of life and other eyes fall upon our words...
This is most deserving of a place among my favourite poetry posted upon MPS.
September 9th, 2020 12:02
dusk arising said:
Story of my life mate.
But upon reflection i read your piece again and gained it\'s hidden truths.
Yes the story of ones life. One\'s loves, pains, struggles and gains all transcribed into our poetic outpourings. But what matter those? At the end of each day they have been but a mere palliative to our turmoil over which others may ponder and relate.... Then they are gone.... lest the wind should blow open our book of life and other eyes fall upon our words...
This is most deserving of a place among my favourite poetry posted upon MPS.
September 9th, 2020 12:02
Stone
Goldfinch60 said:
That time has no beginning and no ending as we live our lives forever.
Andy
September 5th, 2020 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
That time has no beginning and no ending as we live our lives forever.
Andy
September 5th, 2020 00:05
Nightscape
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, but realising that you are no longer invincible can make you stronger and move on into your life with that new found strength.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, but realising that you are no longer invincible can make you stronger and move on into your life with that new found strength.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 00:13
Through These Eyes
dusk arising said:
The seer in you reaching out to the future and maybe realising what you are and how you fit into the sceme of things.
A levelling piece from you today.
September 1st, 2019 04:30
dusk arising said:
The seer in you reaching out to the future and maybe realising what you are and how you fit into the sceme of things.
A levelling piece from you today.
September 1st, 2019 04:30
Through These Eyes
kevin browne said:
I hope in those distant miles that it brings you eveything you need...
September 1st, 2019 02:22
kevin browne said:
I hope in those distant miles that it brings you eveything you need...
September 1st, 2019 02:22
Summer Sky
MendedFences27 said:
Greatly expressing the fires of youth. Keeping them burning is the challenge. Those times fill both souls with that \"freedom\" you describe.A tribute to Love\'s allure. Nicely done. - Phil A.
July 25th, 2019 14:49
MendedFences27 said:
Greatly expressing the fires of youth. Keeping them burning is the challenge. Those times fill both souls with that \"freedom\" you describe.A tribute to Love\'s allure. Nicely done. - Phil A.
July 25th, 2019 14:49
Summer Sky
dusk arising said:
Wonderfully composed reflection upon a time when life was a vibrant mysterious wonderland for the writer.
July 25th, 2019 02:36
dusk arising said:
Wonderfully composed reflection upon a time when life was a vibrant mysterious wonderland for the writer.
July 25th, 2019 02:36
Daydreaming
Goldfinch60 said:
We all change as we progress through our lives, it is called experience and without experience we would not progress into a better life.
July 4th, 2019 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
We all change as we progress through our lives, it is called experience and without experience we would not progress into a better life.
July 4th, 2019 00:09
Mindless
Goldfinch60 said:
Those infinite spaces surround us all and each moment we can get lost in them.
May 3rd, 2019 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Those infinite spaces surround us all and each moment we can get lost in them.
May 3rd, 2019 00:53
From the Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:
That trace left behind shows that we were there.
April 8th, 2019 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
That trace left behind shows that we were there.
April 8th, 2019 00:29
Lost Memories
sylviasearcher said:
Poignant.
I felt the solitude and how the warm air of your memories interrupted it.
January 22nd, 2019 05:46
sylviasearcher said:
Poignant.
I felt the solitude and how the warm air of your memories interrupted it.
January 22nd, 2019 05:46
Reprise
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes those thoughts can never be lost from the mind.
January 12th, 2019 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes those thoughts can never be lost from the mind.
January 12th, 2019 01:30
Frozen
Goldfinch60 said:
Some thoughts and images of others are timeless and will always be with you.
December 11th, 2018 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Some thoughts and images of others are timeless and will always be with you.
December 11th, 2018 01:26
In My Time
Goldfinch60 said:
The question that many have asked, including me, but are still waiting for an answer; or is it that the answer is that doing it by ourselves makes us stronger and that IS the answer.
July 28th, 2018 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The question that many have asked, including me, but are still waiting for an answer; or is it that the answer is that doing it by ourselves makes us stronger and that IS the answer.
July 28th, 2018 00:45
In My Time
Heartwriter said:
Great write! Sometimes we do feel so all alone in our battles. I understand what you are saying. Deserves an answer....
July 27th, 2018 18:31
Heartwriter said:
Great write! Sometimes we do feel so all alone in our battles. I understand what you are saying. Deserves an answer....
July 27th, 2018 18:31
Behind These Walls
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day follows another and there are many of them to enjoy.
July 25th, 2018 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day follows another and there are many of them to enjoy.
July 25th, 2018 01:16
Behind These Walls
dusk arising said:
Nice one! These days just run away with themselves now we are no longer children.
July 24th, 2018 23:05
dusk arising said:
Nice one! These days just run away with themselves now we are no longer children.
July 24th, 2018 23:05
Silence
SLR said:
Is there anything as intimidating to a writer as a blank sheet of paper?!?! So much to say by such a struggle sometimes to find exactly the right words.
June 14th, 2018 10:40
SLR said:
Is there anything as intimidating to a writer as a blank sheet of paper?!?! So much to say by such a struggle sometimes to find exactly the right words.
June 14th, 2018 10:40
The Illusion
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, life is what we make it and what we believe and in blinking our life on Earth may disappear but I know that My Spirit will go on towards infinity.
June 14th, 2018 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, life is what we make it and what we believe and in blinking our life on Earth may disappear but I know that My Spirit will go on towards infinity.
June 14th, 2018 01:13
The Illusion
GON said:
The opening lines remind me of the Atlas myth, and I love that precisely because I think the connection between the sky and our lives is the connection the Ancient Greeks were making as well.
June 13th, 2018 11:24
GON said:
The opening lines remind me of the Atlas myth, and I love that precisely because I think the connection between the sky and our lives is the connection the Ancient Greeks were making as well.
June 13th, 2018 11:24
Blood to Ice
Frogspoetry said:
Emotions are much easier to express to people I don\'t know.especially to fellow posts,who understand the power of words and the impact they can make on someone.
June 12th, 2018 22:07
Frogspoetry said:
Emotions are much easier to express to people I don\'t know.especially to fellow posts,who understand the power of words and the impact they can make on someone.
June 12th, 2018 22:07
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