Comments received on poems by MrNobody40
The Illusion
Noah Malice said:
The opening lines remind me of the Atlas myth, and I love that precisely because I think the connection between the sky and our lives is the connection the Ancient Greeks were making as well.
June 13th, 2018 11:24
Noah Malice said:
The opening lines remind me of the Atlas myth, and I love that precisely because I think the connection between the sky and our lives is the connection the Ancient Greeks were making as well.
June 13th, 2018 11:24
Blood to Ice
Frogspoetry said:
Emotions are much easier to express to people I don\'t know.especially to fellow posts,who understand the power of words and the impact they can make on someone.
June 12th, 2018 22:07
Frogspoetry said:
Emotions are much easier to express to people I don\'t know.especially to fellow posts,who understand the power of words and the impact they can make on someone.
June 12th, 2018 22:07
The Setting Sun
SLR said:
It\'s a sad fact of life that even if someone means well, they can sometimes help but they can\'t usually fix depression or melancholy for someone else. Fight your way through it. Use the help they try to give. They mean well. ( most of them) one of these days you\'ll wake up and realize that you\'ve made it through the worst of it and things have gotten better.
June 11th, 2018 12:59
SLR said:
It\'s a sad fact of life that even if someone means well, they can sometimes help but they can\'t usually fix depression or melancholy for someone else. Fight your way through it. Use the help they try to give. They mean well. ( most of them) one of these days you\'ll wake up and realize that you\'ve made it through the worst of it and things have gotten better.
June 11th, 2018 12:59
Serenity
SLR said:
Love this. I do this all the time when my mind needs an escape. Really well written.
June 7th, 2018 22:02
SLR said:
Love this. I do this all the time when my mind needs an escape. Really well written.
June 7th, 2018 22:02
Fantasies and Daydreams
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Those moments are so precious. If only....
May 24th, 2018 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Those moments are so precious. If only....
May 24th, 2018 00:42
Fantasies and Daydreams
Michael Edwards said:
I know those moments - currently I wish life could stand still and I could endlessly enjoy my current situation, super work as ever.
May 23rd, 2018 11:08
Michael Edwards said:
I know those moments - currently I wish life could stand still and I could endlessly enjoy my current situation, super work as ever.
May 23rd, 2018 11:08
Infinite Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
You will remain unscathed throughout your life.
May 22nd, 2018 08:02
Goldfinch60 said:
You will remain unscathed throughout your life.
May 22nd, 2018 08:02
Timeless
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, those forgotten moments can be wondrous.
May 22nd, 2018 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, those forgotten moments can be wondrous.
May 22nd, 2018 01:59
From a Daydream
SLR said:
I agree with Gold finch. You are seen. The people around you see you, but when you share with us on mps you gift us with glimpses of your soul. I think many writers are a bit introverted at times and feel invisible to others but this is how we are REALLY able to be seen. For WHO we are inside. From what I\'ve \'seen\' you have a beautiful soul. We SEE you. Thank you for a wonderful post.
May 21st, 2018 21:59
SLR said:
I agree with Gold finch. You are seen. The people around you see you, but when you share with us on mps you gift us with glimpses of your soul. I think many writers are a bit introverted at times and feel invisible to others but this is how we are REALLY able to be seen. For WHO we are inside. From what I\'ve \'seen\' you have a beautiful soul. We SEE you. Thank you for a wonderful post.
May 21st, 2018 21:59
Down the Rabbit Hole
SLR said:
They\'re right. You left us hanging there. When is part two when she exits? Who did she become? What does she meet on the other side? I\'ll be looking for her continuing story. (Hint, hint) :-) :-)
May 21st, 2018 15:05
SLR said:
They\'re right. You left us hanging there. When is part two when she exits? Who did she become? What does she meet on the other side? I\'ll be looking for her continuing story. (Hint, hint) :-) :-)
May 21st, 2018 15:05
Timeless
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m getting quite addicted to your work - great simplistic style which conveys so much and doesn\'t dwell on the \'woe is me\' which dominates so much on this site. Keep writing.
May 21st, 2018 06:35
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m getting quite addicted to your work - great simplistic style which conveys so much and doesn\'t dwell on the \'woe is me\' which dominates so much on this site. Keep writing.
May 21st, 2018 06:35
From a Daydream
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write but that reflection you see in the mirror is just that a reflection, you cannot see yourself as others see you so you are not unseen.
May 21st, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write but that reflection you see in the mirror is just that a reflection, you cannot see yourself as others see you so you are not unseen.
May 21st, 2018 00:27
From a Daydream
drabbler said:
This is beautiful, powerful, and moving. Wonderful read.
May 20th, 2018 11:38
drabbler said:
This is beautiful, powerful, and moving. Wonderful read.
May 20th, 2018 11:38
Down the Rabbit Hole
Goldfinch60 said:
in any rabbit hole there is an entrance, that entrance is also the exit that will take you towards the light.
May 20th, 2018 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
in any rabbit hole there is an entrance, that entrance is also the exit that will take you towards the light.
May 20th, 2018 00:59
Down the Rabbit Hole
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m hanging - please keep writing.
May 19th, 2018 15:49
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m hanging - please keep writing.
May 19th, 2018 15:49
I See in a Thousand Colors
SLR said:
I would rather see the thousand colours. Good and bad. To know parts of the world that others will never see. To see her in all her glory, even her violent magnificence. She is breathtaking.
May 16th, 2018 21:01
SLR said:
I would rather see the thousand colours. Good and bad. To know parts of the world that others will never see. To see her in all her glory, even her violent magnificence. She is breathtaking.
May 16th, 2018 21:01
Silent Prison
SLR said:
I can really relate to this. The mind CAN be a prison. Really like this. Great post!
May 15th, 2018 21:14
SLR said:
I can really relate to this. The mind CAN be a prison. Really like this. Great post!
May 15th, 2018 21:14
I See in a Thousand Colors
G84 said:
Many people look but don’t completley see
You understand the beauty of life
Good write reminded me of inner happiness
May 15th, 2018 06:14
G84 said:
Many people look but don’t completley see
You understand the beauty of life
Good write reminded me of inner happiness
May 15th, 2018 06:14
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