Comments received on poems by MrNobody40



Daydreaming
Goldfinch60 said:

We all change as we progress through our lives, it is called experience and without experience we would not progress into a better life.

July 4th, 2019 00:09

Mindless
Goldfinch60 said:

Those infinite spaces surround us all and each moment we can get lost in them.

May 3rd, 2019 00:53

Inevitable
MrNobody40 said:



April 28th, 2019 22:19

From the Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:

That trace left behind shows that we were there.

April 8th, 2019 00:29

Lost Memories
sylviasearcher said:

Poignant.
I felt the solitude and how the warm air of your memories interrupted it.

January 22nd, 2019 05:46

Reprise
Goldfinch60 said:

Sometimes those thoughts can never be lost from the mind.

January 12th, 2019 01:30

Frozen
Goldfinch60 said:

Some thoughts and images of others are timeless and will always be with you.

December 11th, 2018 01:26

In My Time
Goldfinch60 said:

The question that many have asked, including me, but are still waiting for an answer; or is it that the answer is that doing it by ourselves makes us stronger and that IS the answer.

July 28th, 2018 00:45

In My Time
Heartwriter said:

Great write! Sometimes we do feel so all alone in our battles. I understand what you are saying. Deserves an answer....

July 27th, 2018 18:31

Against the Seasons
Heartwriter said:

Very nice. Good one.

July 25th, 2018 14:47

Behind These Walls
Goldfinch60 said:

Each day follows another and there are many of them to enjoy.

July 25th, 2018 01:16

Behind These Walls
dusk arising said:

Nice one! These days just run away with themselves now we are no longer children.

July 24th, 2018 23:05

Silence
Goldfinch60 said:

The pen can always write silently.

June 15th, 2018 00:50

Silence
SLR said:

Is there anything as intimidating to a writer as a blank sheet of paper?!?! So much to say by such a struggle sometimes to find exactly the right words.

June 14th, 2018 10:40

The Illusion
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, life is what we make it and what we believe and in blinking our life on Earth may disappear but I know that My Spirit will go on towards infinity.

June 14th, 2018 01:13

The Illusion
SLR said:

Profound and thought provoking. Again. Great post Nic.

June 13th, 2018 21:01

The Illusion
Noah Malice said:

The opening lines remind me of the Atlas myth, and I love that precisely because I think the connection between the sky and our lives is the connection the Ancient Greeks were making as well.

June 13th, 2018 11:24

Blood to Ice
Frogspoetry said:

Emotions are much easier to express to people I don\'t know.especially to fellow posts,who understand the power of words and the impact they can make on someone.

June 12th, 2018 22:07

Blood to Ice
HangingbyaHalo said:

Chilling, I can feel this. Good read.

June 12th, 2018 18:25

Serenity
Clarita said:

Simply beautiful

June 12th, 2018 17:30

The Setting Sun
SLR said:

It\'s a sad fact of life that even if someone means well, they can sometimes help but they can\'t usually fix depression or melancholy for someone else. Fight your way through it. Use the help they try to give. They mean well. ( most of them) one of these days you\'ll wake up and realize that you\'ve made it through the worst of it and things have gotten better.

June 11th, 2018 12:59

Inevitable
SLR said:

Short and powerful. Had to screenshot this one for later.

June 10th, 2018 19:04

Serenity
SLR said:

Love this. I do this all the time when my mind needs an escape. Really well written.

June 7th, 2018 22:02

Fantasies and Daydreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. Those moments are so precious. If only....

May 24th, 2018 00:42

Fantasies and Daydreams
Michael Edwards said:

I know those moments - currently I wish life could stand still and I could endlessly enjoy my current situation, super work as ever.

May 23rd, 2018 11:08

Infinite Dreams
Michael Edwards said:

Another gem

May 22nd, 2018 12:49

Infinite Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

You will remain unscathed throughout your life.

May 22nd, 2018 08:02

Timeless
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, those forgotten moments can be wondrous.

May 22nd, 2018 01:59

From a Daydream
SLR said:

I agree with Gold finch. You are seen. The people around you see you, but when you share with us on mps you gift us with glimpses of your soul. I think many writers are a bit introverted at times and feel invisible to others but this is how we are REALLY able to be seen. For WHO we are inside. From what I\'ve \'seen\' you have a beautiful soul. We SEE you. Thank you for a wonderful post.

May 21st, 2018 21:59

Down the Rabbit Hole
SLR said:

They\'re right. You left us hanging there. When is part two when she exits? Who did she become? What does she meet on the other side? I\'ll be looking for her continuing story. (Hint, hint) :-) :-)

May 21st, 2018 15:05

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