Comments received on poems by H.R.Powell
The prettiest girl on an island full of flowers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem .. you are the sun , he is the cool wind .. like your mention of nature in this , to describe two people and a relationship
June 3rd, 2022 11:54
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem .. you are the sun , he is the cool wind .. like your mention of nature in this , to describe two people and a relationship
June 3rd, 2022 11:54
The prettiest girl on an island full of flowers
L. B. Mek said:
just like all things
we must learn, to allow
another
to cherish us, for just
being ourselves
that\'s one of the many
liberating and empowering, gifts
of love!
thanks for sharing
a wonderful read
June 3rd, 2022 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
just like all things
we must learn, to allow
another
to cherish us, for just
being ourselves
that\'s one of the many
liberating and empowering, gifts
of love!
thanks for sharing
a wonderful read
June 3rd, 2022 04:22
The prettiest girl on an island full of flowers
Paul Bell said:
If his praises are genuine, then I think time will show this. Till then, stay on the rollercoaster.
June 3rd, 2022 04:21
Paul Bell said:
If his praises are genuine, then I think time will show this. Till then, stay on the rollercoaster.
June 3rd, 2022 04:21
Soft
L. B. Mek said:
seeking a mode of escape
is natural,
utilising the concept of shedding skin
is understandable,
assuming, as skeletons we will be free of our anxieties and concerns
is far-fetched, to say the least
for one thing, imagine how much more calcium, we would need? lol
(interesting read, thanks for sharing)
October 28th, 2021 03:14
L. B. Mek said:
seeking a mode of escape
is natural,
utilising the concept of shedding skin
is understandable,
assuming, as skeletons we will be free of our anxieties and concerns
is far-fetched, to say the least
for one thing, imagine how much more calcium, we would need? lol
(interesting read, thanks for sharing)
October 28th, 2021 03:14
Moonlight On The Ocean
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very lovely ) nice words
October 27th, 2021 15:56
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very lovely ) nice words
October 27th, 2021 15:56
Moonlight On The Ocean
Goldfinch60 said:
That moonlight on the ocean must be so wonderful to see, your words bring it to me.
Andy
June 26th, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That moonlight on the ocean must be so wonderful to see, your words bring it to me.
Andy
June 26th, 2021 00:49
Then, Now, and Then
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely but relative poem. Time is a funny old thing and based on ones perception of it.
June 19th, 2021 00:27
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely but relative poem. Time is a funny old thing and based on ones perception of it.
June 19th, 2021 00:27
Then, Now, and Then
Doggerel Dave said:
The past remembered only inasmuch as there were lessons learned; the present lived for the moment; all future plans provisional only.
I\'m sure you are not quite as lost as you make out, HR.
June 18th, 2021 23:57
Doggerel Dave said:
The past remembered only inasmuch as there were lessons learned; the present lived for the moment; all future plans provisional only.
I\'m sure you are not quite as lost as you make out, HR.
June 18th, 2021 23:57
Too Many Options
Goldfinch60 said:
We have many doors in our path of life and behind every one of them there are those dreams and thoughts we thought would never be part of us.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
We have many doors in our path of life and behind every one of them there are those dreams and thoughts we thought would never be part of us.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:36
Too Many Options
L. B. Mek said:
more choice is a good thing, treasure it
maybe its that feeling of incessantly ticking Time
that you find more constricting?
well, that too - is a choice, you can ignore
take your time, make your inevitable mistakes
just remember to enjoy the journey
and trust that the rest, will take care of itself..
thanks for sharing
June 1st, 2021 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
more choice is a good thing, treasure it
maybe its that feeling of incessantly ticking Time
that you find more constricting?
well, that too - is a choice, you can ignore
take your time, make your inevitable mistakes
just remember to enjoy the journey
and trust that the rest, will take care of itself..
thanks for sharing
June 1st, 2021 05:20
Too Many Options
Doggerel Dave said:
Maybe you might be all of them in the course of a long colourful life, HR.
Don\'t even ask \'Please\' - you do it.
And the very, most absolute best of luck.
June 1st, 2021 05:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Maybe you might be all of them in the course of a long colourful life, HR.
Don\'t even ask \'Please\' - you do it.
And the very, most absolute best of luck.
June 1st, 2021 05:10
Rough Neighborhood
L. B. Mek said:
stylistically paced and worded social commentary
executed really well, a good read
May 6th, 2021 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
stylistically paced and worded social commentary
executed really well, a good read
May 6th, 2021 03:52
Rough Neighborhood
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write HR, I do wish that respect and love for all would come to our world.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write HR, I do wish that respect and love for all would come to our world.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 00:46
Rough Neighborhood
Doggerel Dave said:
I thought Honolulu was all palm trees, beaches and houla......I\'m truly sorry .
Your situation , clearly and succinctly told is horrendous.
Get out as early as you can.
May 4th, 2021 22:30
Doggerel Dave said:
I thought Honolulu was all palm trees, beaches and houla......I\'m truly sorry .
Your situation , clearly and succinctly told is horrendous.
Get out as early as you can.
May 4th, 2021 22:30
She Was Cigarette Smoke
brianna jean zeiger said:
amazing. i felt the anger and pain deeply.
April 15th, 2021 12:13
brianna jean zeiger said:
amazing. i felt the anger and pain deeply.
April 15th, 2021 12:13
She Was Cigarette Smoke
Bragee said:
Wow!
It’s almost like a calm rage kind of vibe.
I love it...we’ve all been burned by a cigarette.
Peace and blessings
April 14th, 2021 19:38
Bragee said:
Wow!
It’s almost like a calm rage kind of vibe.
I love it...we’ve all been burned by a cigarette.
Peace and blessings
April 14th, 2021 19:38
Wretched Hands
Neville said:
an impressive bit of self disclosure.. or insight.. or maybe a bit of both.. enjoyed regardless.... Take care and stay safe... Neville
March 25th, 2020 06:55
Neville said:
an impressive bit of self disclosure.. or insight.. or maybe a bit of both.. enjoyed regardless.... Take care and stay safe... Neville
March 25th, 2020 06:55
Friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love lorn words, I hope your dream becomes reality.
Andy
March 11th, 2020 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love lorn words, I hope your dream becomes reality.
Andy
March 11th, 2020 00:56
Host
Netashi said:
Is it the thoughts are the host or the fear, maybe either or but either way its a great poem keep it up.
-Theta
August 23rd, 2018 14:28
Netashi said:
Is it the thoughts are the host or the fear, maybe either or but either way its a great poem keep it up.
-Theta
August 23rd, 2018 14:28
Indian King
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see her in my minds eye, may her song glorify.
May 29th, 2018 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see her in my minds eye, may her song glorify.
May 29th, 2018 00:42
I can\'t tell you how much I love you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HAYLEY for a very elegant and thought provoking Poem ~ Love is a paradox because it is simultaneously liberating and constraining ! In my experience the constraints of \"A Mothers Love\" are always for our GOOD although we don\'t always see this at the time ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for caring and the comment about your MUM ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B !
May 27th, 2018 03:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HAYLEY for a very elegant and thought provoking Poem ~ Love is a paradox because it is simultaneously liberating and constraining ! In my experience the constraints of \"A Mothers Love\" are always for our GOOD although we don\'t always see this at the time ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for caring and the comment about your MUM ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B !
May 27th, 2018 03:25
Porcelain Princess
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HAYLEY ~ welcome to MPS ! Loved your first Poem a very clever take on the situation of the Aristos during the FRENCH REVOLUTION ! There are many Porcelain Girls (Pampered & Petted) in the UK and Europe today ~ I just pray they will all keep their HEADS when the next Revolution Comes ~ because (as you say !) PORCELAIN ALWAYS BREAKS !
Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks B !
May 25th, 2018 18:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HAYLEY ~ welcome to MPS ! Loved your first Poem a very clever take on the situation of the Aristos during the FRENCH REVOLUTION ! There are many Porcelain Girls (Pampered & Petted) in the UK and Europe today ~ I just pray they will all keep their HEADS when the next Revolution Comes ~ because (as you say !) PORCELAIN ALWAYS BREAKS !
Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks B !
May 25th, 2018 18:48
