Comments received on poems by Reyas
Tiny Little Band
orchidee said:
Better than the sound of me singing being in ya head, I suppose - there ya go! But it\'s annoying - some tune or ditty in ya head, like a bee buzzing about! doh!
July 30th, 2018 13:12
orchidee said:
Better than the sound of me singing being in ya head, I suppose - there ya go! But it\'s annoying - some tune or ditty in ya head, like a bee buzzing about! doh!
July 30th, 2018 13:12
Everything and Nothing
Poetic Dan said:
That felt like a slap in the face at the end.
Brilliantly expressed, I can see how I\'ve never lived myself enough.
Thank you for sharing what feels like a emotional release
July 30th, 2018 11:46
Poetic Dan said:
That felt like a slap in the face at the end.
Brilliantly expressed, I can see how I\'ve never lived myself enough.
Thank you for sharing what feels like a emotional release
July 30th, 2018 11:46
Everything and Nothing
orchidee said:
Ok, I\'ll stay. I won\'t go, if it will make ya unhappy. Yep, I\'ll stay, but I\'ll sing too! Arrgghhh, can ya bear it?! lol.
July 30th, 2018 03:10
orchidee said:
Ok, I\'ll stay. I won\'t go, if it will make ya unhappy. Yep, I\'ll stay, but I\'ll sing too! Arrgghhh, can ya bear it?! lol.
July 30th, 2018 03:10
Everything and Nothing
dusk arising said:
If only more people could see this in themselves. I have to say that it took me long enough to correct my own perception of self.
Really enjoyed reading this positive piece. Hoping it will rub off onto some of the \'i\'m nothing without you\' repetitive poets on here.
July 29th, 2018 14:33
dusk arising said:
If only more people could see this in themselves. I have to say that it took me long enough to correct my own perception of self.
Really enjoyed reading this positive piece. Hoping it will rub off onto some of the \'i\'m nothing without you\' repetitive poets on here.
July 29th, 2018 14:33
The Wolf Pack
dusk arising said:
I was thinking as i read it, a wolf will rarely attack alone. Excellent short but gripping write.
July 28th, 2018 12:55
dusk arising said:
I was thinking as i read it, a wolf will rarely attack alone. Excellent short but gripping write.
July 28th, 2018 12:55
You ever wonder?
orchidee said:
A fine write Reyas. What if I would stop singing, and stop tormenting everyone?! heehee.
July 28th, 2018 01:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Reyas. What if I would stop singing, and stop tormenting everyone?! heehee.
July 28th, 2018 01:49
You ever wonder?
dusk arising said:
Announcement for our younger readers, the aforementioned characters are Geek Goggs ooppss Greek Gods.
I rekkon a sequel would be brill, erm maybe what is elvis presley wasnt a..... etc.
Enjoyed this a lot.
July 27th, 2018 15:42
dusk arising said:
Announcement for our younger readers, the aforementioned characters are Geek Goggs ooppss Greek Gods.
I rekkon a sequel would be brill, erm maybe what is elvis presley wasnt a..... etc.
Enjoyed this a lot.
July 27th, 2018 15:42
You ever wonder?
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ll second that mind adventure what a wonderful place I went to a magnificent end. It flowed with grace but in your face, I\'m left with needing more.
July 27th, 2018 14:27
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ll second that mind adventure what a wonderful place I went to a magnificent end. It flowed with grace but in your face, I\'m left with needing more.
July 27th, 2018 14:27
Deep Waters
orchidee said:
A bad hair day there then?! ooh.
Now a corny joke:
Patient: \'Doc, I feel so intense\'.
Doc: \'Well stop camping outdoors then! (in tents / intense). lol.
July 26th, 2018 13:13
orchidee said:
A bad hair day there then?! ooh.
Now a corny joke:
Patient: \'Doc, I feel so intense\'.
Doc: \'Well stop camping outdoors then! (in tents / intense). lol.
July 26th, 2018 13:13
Fragile Walls
dusk arising said:
There\'s a core within us all which is or was the timid young boy/girl of once upon a time.
Certain situations brought that timid one to the front of my personality so i learned to avoid them. I learned a strategy to deal with being near them. Eventually the wherewithal to confront head on became a part of me.
I guess it\'s just a part of growing.
Nicely written piece.
July 25th, 2018 17:08
dusk arising said:
There\'s a core within us all which is or was the timid young boy/girl of once upon a time.
Certain situations brought that timid one to the front of my personality so i learned to avoid them. I learned a strategy to deal with being near them. Eventually the wherewithal to confront head on became a part of me.
I guess it\'s just a part of growing.
Nicely written piece.
July 25th, 2018 17:08
Fragile Walls
orchidee said:
I suppose the thing is, if we\'re like an oyster for example. All safe inside its shell, but difficult to get out of it! The more so, the longer we are in the shell.
Not that we have to tell or show everyone absolutely everything about ourselves.
You\'ll make it surely, if you just be yourself - and I shall be myself, I hope!
July 25th, 2018 13:09
orchidee said:
I suppose the thing is, if we\'re like an oyster for example. All safe inside its shell, but difficult to get out of it! The more so, the longer we are in the shell.
Not that we have to tell or show everyone absolutely everything about ourselves.
You\'ll make it surely, if you just be yourself - and I shall be myself, I hope!
July 25th, 2018 13:09
Dark Abyss
dusk arising said:
Hey, what about life after death. I hope you took a packed lunch.
July 24th, 2018 14:58
dusk arising said:
Hey, what about life after death. I hope you took a packed lunch.
July 24th, 2018 14:58
Dark Abyss
orchidee said:
Oohh put a light on, then you\'ll see what\'s going on there! (heehee).
July 24th, 2018 13:24
orchidee said:
Oohh put a light on, then you\'ll see what\'s going on there! (heehee).
July 24th, 2018 13:24
Broken
dusk arising said:
Break out of the broken outlook. Many things may be broken but repairable. However the world, which is the planet we live upon, and the universe are not broken at all.
Delightfully negative piece.
July 23rd, 2018 11:25
dusk arising said:
Break out of the broken outlook. Many things may be broken but repairable. However the world, which is the planet we live upon, and the universe are not broken at all.
Delightfully negative piece.
July 23rd, 2018 11:25
Where am I?
orchidee said:
Sounds like ya stepped into a bonfire, or into some witches\' brewing pot! I\'ll hose ya down!
July 22nd, 2018 08:29
orchidee said:
Sounds like ya stepped into a bonfire, or into some witches\' brewing pot! I\'ll hose ya down!
July 22nd, 2018 08:29
Auto Pilot
dusk arising said:
I rekkon this is what it must be like on some of those drugs that alter you but youre still there inside wanting to be who u really are.
Quite frightening. A disturbing, enthralling write.... thought provoking
July 21st, 2018 13:44
dusk arising said:
I rekkon this is what it must be like on some of those drugs that alter you but youre still there inside wanting to be who u really are.
Quite frightening. A disturbing, enthralling write.... thought provoking
July 21st, 2018 13:44
The Sad Reality
dusk arising said:
Sad self mutilation and ultimate sacrifice. Disturbing reading. Well penned.
July 20th, 2018 11:39
dusk arising said:
Sad self mutilation and ultimate sacrifice. Disturbing reading. Well penned.
July 20th, 2018 11:39
A Young Poet’s Beginning
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m in floods of tears still riding this pain
Even have a healing session (today) booked for what you\'ve explained.
This window you opened from that beginning is healing more than yourself, I at least am one proff of that reading.
This did more than touch my heart you sat with soul and the younger part, I\'m more that grateful to your pen, but I\'m most honestly thankful for you to exist.
Much peace and respect
Keep writing my friend
July 20th, 2018 11:17
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m in floods of tears still riding this pain
Even have a healing session (today) booked for what you\'ve explained.
This window you opened from that beginning is healing more than yourself, I at least am one proff of that reading.
This did more than touch my heart you sat with soul and the younger part, I\'m more that grateful to your pen, but I\'m most honestly thankful for you to exist.
Much peace and respect
Keep writing my friend
July 20th, 2018 11:17
Who am I?
Poetic Dan said:
Another great hit you are becoming a favourite pretty quick
July 20th, 2018 11:02
Poetic Dan said:
Another great hit you are becoming a favourite pretty quick
July 20th, 2018 11:02
Puzzled
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, just what I needed to read. Thank you again for helping my mind breathe.
July 20th, 2018 10:59
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, just what I needed to read. Thank you again for helping my mind breathe.
July 20th, 2018 10:59
The Sad Reality
Poetic Dan said:
Very powerful my friend thank you for sharing.
July 20th, 2018 10:56
Poetic Dan said:
Very powerful my friend thank you for sharing.
July 20th, 2018 10:56
The Sad Reality
Stan Rodriguez said:
while your work is very sad and might be a call for help within your poem - it is nicely penned - descriptive and strong. please keep them coming - you have a lot to say. thank you for sharing.
July 20th, 2018 10:39
Stan Rodriguez said:
while your work is very sad and might be a call for help within your poem - it is nicely penned - descriptive and strong. please keep them coming - you have a lot to say. thank you for sharing.
July 20th, 2018 10:39
Crash Landing
dusk arising said:
I like this. It left my chuckling because the ending was quite a surprise. Maybe its just me will find that twist amusing, i don\'t know.
July 20th, 2018 01:00
dusk arising said:
I like this. It left my chuckling because the ending was quite a surprise. Maybe its just me will find that twist amusing, i don\'t know.
July 20th, 2018 01:00
Girl Made Of Ice
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, you often see people who are to destroy others lives with no apparent reason.
July 18th, 2018 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, you often see people who are to destroy others lives with no apparent reason.
July 18th, 2018 00:46
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