Comments received on poems by Neville



A Travelling Man
sylviasearcher said:

I think I know a girl just like that, except the baking bread...

December 7th, 2018 08:54

Appetite for Words
sylviasearcher said:

I think I have this relentless appetite for words...

December 7th, 2018 08:47

What Do I Want From You
sylviasearcher said:

The repetition works well to create a sense of longing. Though I don\'t think I have experienced the things you write of. Beyond the folly of my own imagination.

December 7th, 2018 07:12

What Do I Want From You
Michael Edwards said:

When love departs - thankfully I married my first love and we are still together and still in love but nonetheless I recognise this fine write.

December 7th, 2018 04:33

What Do I Want From You
Fay Slimm. said:

So many intimate memories belong to those left alone when love goes away - - a poignant feel to this read Neville.

December 7th, 2018 04:02

What Do I Want From You
orchidee said:

A fine write N. Erm is this about Polo mints? heehee.

December 7th, 2018 03:38

No Pillow Required
Goldfinch60 said:

Very passionate write, certainly no pillow is required.

December 7th, 2018 02:25

No Pillow Required
Michael Edwards said:

Yes a great write - we are waiting for that Part 2.

December 6th, 2018 13:51

No Pillow Required
orchidee said:

I\'m always swooning. Maybe it should change to 50+ , for me anyway! lol. I\'ve a got an 18+ \'watchdog\'. Fido. He barks to warn me of anything swoony. He reads the poems first, of course! Much more of this from me and we\'ll all go barmy. lol.

December 6th, 2018 11:45

No Pillow Required
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow my hubby always prefers me to pillows so this creative imaginative poem of love reminds me of that and it is fantastic to read. Kudos.

Pleez do add a comment/thoughts/ review on my newest poem too.

December 6th, 2018 07:29

No Pillow Required
sylviasearcher said:

My senses found it very satisfying

December 6th, 2018 04:32

No Pillow Required
sylviasearcher said:

Good

December 6th, 2018 04:07

Cova
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good intriguing write - what might have been.

December 6th, 2018 00:47

Cova
Michael Edwards said:

Well I do like this one a lot - an honest unpretentious write .

December 5th, 2018 04:34

Cova
orchidee said:

Should I have met her? Would I have swooned? heehee.

December 5th, 2018 04:18

Cova
Fay Slimm. said:

You write of beguiling memories so well Neville - - I am intrigued with multi-linguistic Cova myself after this read. Thanks for sharing her.

December 5th, 2018 03:17

Cova
sylviasearcher said:

I think I like this one a lot

December 5th, 2018 02:59

A Little Indiscretion
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

I agree with sylviasearcher. Bruises take quite a while to heal, especially those of the heart.

Nicely written though. :-)

December 4th, 2018 14:53

A Little Indiscretion
Fay Slimm. said:

A powerful reminder of what love can do to one or another of parting partners - - telling it as it is sometimes renews a forgotten time of happy union - - hope this poignant appeal hit the right mark Neville and the duo are now now makin\' whoopee again !! An engaging read .

December 4th, 2018 13:40

A Little Indiscretion
orchidee said:

You\'ll get me swooning with that \'familiar\' stuff! heehee.

December 4th, 2018 02:39

A Little Indiscretion
Neville said:

thank you sylviasearcher.. interesting is good and will do for me.. I guess these words, now captured here will likely remain long after I am gone and forgotten, and if so.. I will be happy..

December 4th, 2018 02:32

A Little Indiscretion
sylviasearcher said:

Interesting?
I\'m not convinced of how the words will remain \'long after you are forgotten’

It seems some ‘bruises’ never truly fade?

December 4th, 2018 02:26

Long Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories so well portrayed in your wonderful words.

December 4th, 2018 01:13

Beautiful Bruises
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Intimacy in the raw. I\'m speechless.

Your memories of a loved one are incomparable. Maybe you\'ll meet up with her again. :-)

December 3rd, 2018 16:16

Long Shadows
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

A sensual memory of a loved one is always a great read, Neville.

Your heart-felt poem flowed like the River Thames. A wonderful write and a pleasure to read. :-)

December 3rd, 2018 16:12

Long Shadows
orchidee said:

Yes, enough to bring on a swoon for me. Then again, what doesn\'t bring on a swoon for me?! I shall not recover from \'erotica\' for at least a month! heehee. I should get out more, as they say! lol.

December 3rd, 2018 15:04

Long Shadows
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh tender the gentle erotica used here to depict a memory never forgotten - a gem of a read Neville.

December 3rd, 2018 09:50

Long Shadows
Neville said:

cheers..

December 3rd, 2018 08:42

Long Shadows
sylviasearcher said:

It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have marked as erotic...

I really liked how the words lingered and paused on the thoughts in my mind

December 3rd, 2018 06:33

Long Shadows
sylviasearcher said:

It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have marked as erotic...

I really liked how the words lingered and paused on the thoughts in my mind

December 3rd, 2018 06:33



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