Comments received on poems by Neville



Tell Me
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

A great, in-depth, romantic poem Neville.

You appear to be quite the romantic.
Thanks for posting. :-)

January 10th, 2019 12:53

Tell Me
Seek said:

Who says romance is history? Not a chance after reading this!

January 10th, 2019 12:24

Tell Me
Fay Slimm. said:

A delicate and tender position when love on the part of one becomes somewhat scared - - an appealing read Neville.

January 10th, 2019 04:47

Tell Me
orchidee said:

Oohh having fun there? Should I try some of this?!

January 10th, 2019 02:44

Tell Me
sylviasearcher said:

I wonder how it felt?

Your poetry has such an awe about it.
Like you seek to unravel something in a tender way.


January 10th, 2019 02:43

Tell Me
Goldfinch60 said:

It must be painful on that Parquet floor but we are prepared to do anything for love.

January 10th, 2019 02:38

Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Michael Edwards said:

Nice work N

January 9th, 2019 14:19

Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
Aislinn Wilson said:

I was surprised just how erotic this got. This feels like if a Zach Helms film delved into \"The Green Room\". Well writ, and much respect.

January 9th, 2019 10:51

Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
sylviasearcher said:

There is almost a feeling of a ruakistic dance in the way this flows.

Thanks for sharing and capturing the escape from nothing in the white room.

😉

January 9th, 2019 07:47

Rainbow Rooms Incorporated
orchidee said:

Glad someone\'s having fun! heehee. Swoon!

January 9th, 2019 05:34

A Handful of Nightingales
dusk arising said:

Far too complicated for a humble sinner like me to attempt. My body clock is already keeping planet Saturn time. Mostly i\'m awake or... is this a dream.

January 3rd, 2019 08:16

A Handful of Nightingales
sylviasearcher said:

I like this one.
Now I don\'t need to only turn to Keats for my nightingales.
Enjoy Italy 😊

January 3rd, 2019 03:27

A Handful of Nightingales
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Nice work Neville.....do you really want my phone number?lol

January 3rd, 2019 02:53

A Handful of Nightingales
orchidee said:

You got some nightingales for me? We have a Nightingale Road in our area. Not seen many of them birds there though.

January 3rd, 2019 02:49

A Handful of Nightingales
Goldfinch60 said:

Pretending to be awake in some of the sermons that I have sat through has become quite an art.

January 3rd, 2019 02:03

A Handful of Nightingales
Michael Edwards said:

In a bizarre sort of way I rather think your poem and mine his morning sort of go together even if they are not all there. Mt widest hand span is 8.24ins - how many will that hold?
Actually I really did enjoy the read.

January 3rd, 2019 01:31

Just Take a Look
Goldfinch60 said:

The lady dances throughout our thoughts and feelings.

January 2nd, 2019 16:05

Just Take a Look
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wow! She really gets around.

The wit is obvious in this poem, written by a talented author. The last verse is truly captivating. Thanks for posting. :-)

January 2nd, 2019 12:26

Just Take a Look
Michael Edwards said:

And long may she smile - i think she might also be the subject of some of my writes - an enigmatic lass no less

January 2nd, 2019 11:10

Just Take a Look
dusk arising said:

Truly enigmatic and very cleverly done.

January 2nd, 2019 09:59

Just Take a Look
sylviasearcher said:

It was the poem: to whom these words belong.

Noone claimed them ironically. I think they were written before I became an enigma so I forgot to pirouette!

January 2nd, 2019 05:24

Just Take a Look
orchidee said:

Should I meet here? Will it be swoony?! Do I need to take Fido, me watchdog, with me?! lol

January 2nd, 2019 05:23

Just Take a Look
sylviasearcher said:

Is the ending an invite to collaborate?

I thought sir did not participate in collaboration?

I like the mystery you create with this one. She seems enigmatic.

One day I would like to be an enigma.

January 2nd, 2019 05:12

Dali’s Eyes
sylviasearcher said:

Beautiful.
Dreamy.

January 2nd, 2019 02:01

Dali’s Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

To dream of being in the world of your favourites in the world of art(s) is so awe inspiring.
I feel this way when I see William Holman-Hunt\'s works.

January 2nd, 2019 01:20

Dali’s Eyes
MendedFences27 said:

A terrific poem. It speaks the desire of every poet. To take the \"breath away\" from all who read it. If Dali were a poet, who would he be? My choice is E. E. Cummings. Inspired by your poem. Thank you. - Phil A..

January 1st, 2019 20:31

Dali’s Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:

Great structure to this tribute - Dali and Hemingway are both inspirational to help such as me see the elusive in-betweeness of genius.

January 1st, 2019 14:10

Dali’s Eyes
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

January 1st, 2019 10:45

Dali’s Eyes
Kevin Michael Bloor said:

I like your aspirations. I don\'t know much about the Dali, but I have read my Hemingway and yes; what a writer! Nice concise poem, love your structure, by the way...

January 1st, 2019 10:28

Dali’s Eyes
dusk arising said:

LOL every writer dreams of such wishes.
But better to see and be who you are and who you will become in your own right (write).
Both the greats u mention had , their inspiration and maybe wished they could emulate them. They didn\'t though.


January 1st, 2019 06:52



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