Comments received on poems by Neville



Afterwards
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Very very nice work here...it is EROTIC AND PUT TOGETHER TASTEFULLY ALL AT ONCE...AWESOME JOB

December 9th, 2018 03:52

Afterwards
sylviasearcher said:

The last two lines are very powerful

December 9th, 2018 02:54

Afterwards
orchidee said:

What\'s going on there?! lol.

December 9th, 2018 02:38

Afterwards
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful passionate, sensual words Neville.

December 9th, 2018 02:34

How Far Do You Really Want to Go
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good intriguing write Neville, that passion is there.

December 9th, 2018 01:58

How Far Do You Really Want to Go
Michael Edwards said:

Enjoyed this and especially the bit of mystique in the last line.

December 8th, 2018 11:29

How Far Do You Really Want to Go
orchidee said:

Same thing happened to me, despite me saying I only wanted to go as far as the shops on a No.7 bus! heehee. Swoon!

December 8th, 2018 08:27

A Travelling Man
sylviasearcher said:

I think I know a girl just like that, except the baking bread...

December 7th, 2018 08:54

Appetite for Words
sylviasearcher said:

I think I have this relentless appetite for words...

December 7th, 2018 08:47

What Do I Want From You
sylviasearcher said:

The repetition works well to create a sense of longing. Though I don\'t think I have experienced the things you write of. Beyond the folly of my own imagination.

December 7th, 2018 07:12

What Do I Want From You
Michael Edwards said:

When love departs - thankfully I married my first love and we are still together and still in love but nonetheless I recognise this fine write.

December 7th, 2018 04:33

What Do I Want From You
Fay Slimm. said:

So many intimate memories belong to those left alone when love goes away - - a poignant feel to this read Neville.

December 7th, 2018 04:02

What Do I Want From You
orchidee said:

A fine write N. Erm is this about Polo mints? heehee.

December 7th, 2018 03:38

No Pillow Required
Goldfinch60 said:

Very passionate write, certainly no pillow is required.

December 7th, 2018 02:25

No Pillow Required
Michael Edwards said:

Yes a great write - we are waiting for that Part 2.

December 6th, 2018 13:51

No Pillow Required
orchidee said:

I\'m always swooning. Maybe it should change to 50+ , for me anyway! lol. I\'ve a got an 18+ \'watchdog\'. Fido. He barks to warn me of anything swoony. He reads the poems first, of course! Much more of this from me and we\'ll all go barmy. lol.

December 6th, 2018 11:45

No Pillow Required
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow my hubby always prefers me to pillows so this creative imaginative poem of love reminds me of that and it is fantastic to read. Kudos.

Pleez do add a comment/thoughts/ review on my newest poem too.

December 6th, 2018 07:29

No Pillow Required
sylviasearcher said:

My senses found it very satisfying

December 6th, 2018 04:32

No Pillow Required
sylviasearcher said:

Good

December 6th, 2018 04:07

Cova
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good intriguing write - what might have been.

December 6th, 2018 00:47

Cova
Michael Edwards said:

Well I do like this one a lot - an honest unpretentious write .

December 5th, 2018 04:34

Cova
orchidee said:

Should I have met her? Would I have swooned? heehee.

December 5th, 2018 04:18

Cova
Fay Slimm. said:

You write of beguiling memories so well Neville - - I am intrigued with multi-linguistic Cova myself after this read. Thanks for sharing her.

December 5th, 2018 03:17

Cova
sylviasearcher said:

I think I like this one a lot

December 5th, 2018 02:59

A Little Indiscretion
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

I agree with sylviasearcher. Bruises take quite a while to heal, especially those of the heart.

Nicely written though. :-)

December 4th, 2018 14:53

A Little Indiscretion
Fay Slimm. said:

A powerful reminder of what love can do to one or another of parting partners - - telling it as it is sometimes renews a forgotten time of happy union - - hope this poignant appeal hit the right mark Neville and the duo are now now makin\' whoopee again !! An engaging read .

December 4th, 2018 13:40

A Little Indiscretion
orchidee said:

You\'ll get me swooning with that \'familiar\' stuff! heehee.

December 4th, 2018 02:39

A Little Indiscretion
Neville said:

thank you sylviasearcher.. interesting is good and will do for me.. I guess these words, now captured here will likely remain long after I am gone and forgotten, and if so.. I will be happy..

December 4th, 2018 02:32

A Little Indiscretion
sylviasearcher said:

Interesting?
I\'m not convinced of how the words will remain \'long after you are forgotten’

It seems some ‘bruises’ never truly fade?

December 4th, 2018 02:26

Long Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories so well portrayed in your wonderful words.

December 4th, 2018 01:13



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