Comments received on poems by Neville
My Lady Pleases Me This Way
dusk arising said:
The eye of the beholder sees as it sees.
What is it which makes one persons heart race yet leaves another cold. Individuality! Lovely poem revealing for you some of the things which turn you on - yet would not stir many others.
Enigma that is woman again arises in your work.
January 18th, 2019 13:44
dusk arising said:
The eye of the beholder sees as it sees.
What is it which makes one persons heart race yet leaves another cold. Individuality! Lovely poem revealing for you some of the things which turn you on - yet would not stir many others.
Enigma that is woman again arises in your work.
January 18th, 2019 13:44
My Lady Pleases Me This Way
Goldfinch60 said:
She would please me that way Neville.
January 18th, 2019 13:34
Goldfinch60 said:
She would please me that way Neville.
January 18th, 2019 13:34
My Lady Pleases Me This Way
Fay Slimm. said:
The read set my senses a-tingle dear Neville so I suspect your verse classification be jus\' right !! Good work again.
January 18th, 2019 10:58
Fay Slimm. said:
The read set my senses a-tingle dear Neville so I suspect your verse classification be jus\' right !! Good work again.
January 18th, 2019 10:58
My Lady Pleases Me This Way
orchidee said:
Heehee! But yes, I might meet her, without the ciggies. Is she Fag-ash Lil, as they say?
January 18th, 2019 10:53
orchidee said:
Heehee! But yes, I might meet her, without the ciggies. Is she Fag-ash Lil, as they say?
January 18th, 2019 10:53
My Lady Pleases Me This Way
Michael Edwards said:
She would please me if it wasn\'t for the stale cigarette smell on her breathe. Fine write.
January 18th, 2019 06:26
Michael Edwards said:
She would please me if it wasn\'t for the stale cigarette smell on her breathe. Fine write.
January 18th, 2019 06:26
Turquoise
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Neville, colours as with life can be seen differently through different peoples eyes.
January 18th, 2019 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Neville, colours as with life can be seen differently through different peoples eyes.
January 18th, 2019 01:24
Turquoise
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I was gonna write something similar. Erm, I held me breath for 24 hours (???), and someone said that too: \'You\'re the strangest shade of blue\'. Pity I can\'t write it now, due to a small fact - I\'m dead. lol.
January 17th, 2019 10:48
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I was gonna write something similar. Erm, I held me breath for 24 hours (???), and someone said that too: \'You\'re the strangest shade of blue\'. Pity I can\'t write it now, due to a small fact - I\'m dead. lol.
January 17th, 2019 10:48
Turquoise
Michael Edwards said:
Is orange red or is it yellow?
Is turquoise blue or is it green?
Well it all depends depends on the predominant pigment. If both pigments are of equal tonal value then it could be argued that they are colours in their own right but since neither are primary colours are they really colours at all? You should see the debates on the art websites along these lines - oh the trials and tribulations of being an artist. Anyway it\'s a fine write Neville.
January 17th, 2019 10:38
Michael Edwards said:
Is orange red or is it yellow?
Is turquoise blue or is it green?
Well it all depends depends on the predominant pigment. If both pigments are of equal tonal value then it could be argued that they are colours in their own right but since neither are primary colours are they really colours at all? You should see the debates on the art websites along these lines - oh the trials and tribulations of being an artist. Anyway it\'s a fine write Neville.
January 17th, 2019 10:38
Turquoise
dusk arising said:
Loves dance, loves game, poignant when we have to follow someone elses rules.
January 17th, 2019 09:04
dusk arising said:
Loves dance, loves game, poignant when we have to follow someone elses rules.
January 17th, 2019 09:04
Turquoise
Fay Slimm. said:
The colour of blue in your write called Turquoise gave me a walk down memory lane Neville - - a strange shade indeed when love has to be hidden - a beguiling read.
January 17th, 2019 05:49
Fay Slimm. said:
The colour of blue in your write called Turquoise gave me a walk down memory lane Neville - - a strange shade indeed when love has to be hidden - a beguiling read.
January 17th, 2019 05:49
Turquoise
sylviasearcher said:
Oh this is a beautiful piece.
I had a discussion the other day about how green was turquoise.
I had to accept in the end it was blue.
January 17th, 2019 05:35
sylviasearcher said:
Oh this is a beautiful piece.
I had a discussion the other day about how green was turquoise.
I had to accept in the end it was blue.
January 17th, 2019 05:35
The Weavers Knot
dusk arising said:
Ah, the enigmatic female dances through your words, enchanting, enticing, amazing creatures.
Long live their mystery.
January 16th, 2019 14:45
dusk arising said:
Ah, the enigmatic female dances through your words, enchanting, enticing, amazing creatures.
Long live their mystery.
January 16th, 2019 14:45
The Weavers Knot
Fay Slimm. said:
So evocative with its gentle reminders of erotic alertness when bewitched by love. Great flow to this bit of heated adornment to my first poetic read of the morning.
January 16th, 2019 09:35
Fay Slimm. said:
So evocative with its gentle reminders of erotic alertness when bewitched by love. Great flow to this bit of heated adornment to my first poetic read of the morning.
January 16th, 2019 09:35
The Weavers Knot
Michael Edwards said:
My type of poetry - it just flows - a great read.
January 16th, 2019 09:14
Michael Edwards said:
My type of poetry - it just flows - a great read.
January 16th, 2019 09:14
The Weavers Knot
Neville said:
I\'m darn sure he is a witch... thank you for helping to load my brush
January 16th, 2019 08:37
Neville said:
I\'m darn sure he is a witch... thank you for helping to load my brush
January 16th, 2019 08:37
The Weavers Knot
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I think this is a favourite of your erotic pieces
You paint your subject with a mystical magical sensual shade
January 16th, 2019 08:34
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I think this is a favourite of your erotic pieces
You paint your subject with a mystical magical sensual shade
January 16th, 2019 08:34
Borrowed Characters
Fay Slimm. said:
Borrowed indeed are the characters of people who like to ferment both hatred and judgement - - this verse hits the nail on its head Neville. in that we are all waiting on this beautiful planet for shadows as stated to disappear.
January 15th, 2019 10:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Borrowed indeed are the characters of people who like to ferment both hatred and judgement - - this verse hits the nail on its head Neville. in that we are all waiting on this beautiful planet for shadows as stated to disappear.
January 15th, 2019 10:43
Borrowed Characters
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I struggle because I want to have hope for the wretched and the damned too.
I want to believe that perhaps evil is man made and can be erased?
But people tell me I\'m naive and foolish and I know it\'s true. It\'s just my way...
January 15th, 2019 08:18
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I struggle because I want to have hope for the wretched and the damned too.
I want to believe that perhaps evil is man made and can be erased?
But people tell me I\'m naive and foolish and I know it\'s true. It\'s just my way...
January 15th, 2019 08:18
Borrowed Characters
dusk arising said:
Yep, sylviasearcher is right with her corinthians point...... all you/they need is love.
Except the last verse. This god is supposed to be full of love... but look at all the awful stuff that he, in his omnipotent glory, reigns down upon us. Worth our adoration? I think not.
January 15th, 2019 07:07
dusk arising said:
Yep, sylviasearcher is right with her corinthians point...... all you/they need is love.
Except the last verse. This god is supposed to be full of love... but look at all the awful stuff that he, in his omnipotent glory, reigns down upon us. Worth our adoration? I think not.
January 15th, 2019 07:07
Borrowed Characters
orchidee said:
Me singing is a waste of space (lol), let alone some people being like a dark shadow, as a waste of space seemingly.
January 15th, 2019 06:48
orchidee said:
Me singing is a waste of space (lol), let alone some people being like a dark shadow, as a waste of space seemingly.
January 15th, 2019 06:48
Borrowed Characters
sylviasearcher said:
I actually really love this one.
It played like a 70s song in my head.
Feel like I need to quote Corinthians 13:1 for the second time today.
Now dis that surprise you?
January 15th, 2019 04:18
sylviasearcher said:
I actually really love this one.
It played like a 70s song in my head.
Feel like I need to quote Corinthians 13:1 for the second time today.
Now dis that surprise you?
January 15th, 2019 04:18
Street Art
dusk arising said:
Though provoking and confusing .... but... i came out of it thinking about crowds of people gathering around a patch of pubic hair..... those little circles.... curly wirly pubes...
Now that would be street art... till the breeze picks up
January 14th, 2019 18:33
dusk arising said:
Though provoking and confusing .... but... i came out of it thinking about crowds of people gathering around a patch of pubic hair..... those little circles.... curly wirly pubes...
Now that would be street art... till the breeze picks up
January 14th, 2019 18:33
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