Comments received on poems by Neville
Autumn
sylviasearcher said:
O the season of mists and mellow fruitfulness! I always thought her a liar and a thief!
But she is honest about her deception!
Stealing summer\'s dream, bringing fruitfulness to fill our bellies before the onset of desolate winter.
To quote my favourite poet twice...
Indeed I think in autumn
Now more than ever seems it rich to die.
Sorry waffling.
I\'m very good at waffling!
But are you still listening?
Ps you write well.
December 3rd, 2018 02:34
sylviasearcher said:
O the season of mists and mellow fruitfulness! I always thought her a liar and a thief!
But she is honest about her deception!
Stealing summer\'s dream, bringing fruitfulness to fill our bellies before the onset of desolate winter.
To quote my favourite poet twice...
Indeed I think in autumn
Now more than ever seems it rich to die.
Sorry waffling.
I\'m very good at waffling!
But are you still listening?
Ps you write well.
December 3rd, 2018 02:34
Beautiful Bruises
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write of a passed love, those memories will never fade.
December 3rd, 2018 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write of a passed love, those memories will never fade.
December 3rd, 2018 00:59
Beautiful Bruises
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for this warm and intimate expression of love so tenderly worded.
December 2nd, 2018 14:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for this warm and intimate expression of love so tenderly worded.
December 2nd, 2018 14:25
Beautiful Bruises
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is really raw. It shows a beautiful and intimate exchange. I didn’t want it to end!
December 2nd, 2018 12:04
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is really raw. It shows a beautiful and intimate exchange. I didn’t want it to end!
December 2nd, 2018 12:04
Beautiful Bruises
Michael Edwards said:
I enjoyed the write
Memories fade and bruises pale
but scars remain to tell the tale.
December 2nd, 2018 10:37
Michael Edwards said:
I enjoyed the write
Memories fade and bruises pale
but scars remain to tell the tale.
December 2nd, 2018 10:37
Beautiful Bruises
orchidee said:
Ooh, what\'s going on there? Swoon! heehee.
December 2nd, 2018 09:12
orchidee said:
Ooh, what\'s going on there? Swoon! heehee.
December 2nd, 2018 09:12
Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is always there and it can be found in your words. Autumn is a wonderful season, it is my favourite of them all.
December 2nd, 2018 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Beauty is always there and it can be found in your words. Autumn is a wonderful season, it is my favourite of them all.
December 2nd, 2018 01:14
Autumn
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful words, Neville, and they take us on a journey through your viewpoint of the four seasons. I like your use of slant rhyme teeth/thief and leaf in the verses.
And it\'s great to know you\'ve never been a liar or a thief. :-)
December 1st, 2018 17:00
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderful words, Neville, and they take us on a journey through your viewpoint of the four seasons. I like your use of slant rhyme teeth/thief and leaf in the verses.
And it\'s great to know you\'ve never been a liar or a thief. :-)
December 1st, 2018 17:00
Autumn
orchidee said:
This poem did not \'fall\' down on being a good write, N!
December 1st, 2018 07:38
orchidee said:
This poem did not \'fall\' down on being a good write, N!
December 1st, 2018 07:38
The Long Drop
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
In short, you are my worst nightmare. LOL!
Great poem, Neville, with lots of food for thought. :-)
November 30th, 2018 17:02
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
In short, you are my worst nightmare. LOL!
Great poem, Neville, with lots of food for thought. :-)
November 30th, 2018 17:02
The Long Drop
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can play such awful tricks but those tricks (fears) when faced just add to your experience.
November 30th, 2018 03:21
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can play such awful tricks but those tricks (fears) when faced just add to your experience.
November 30th, 2018 03:21
The Long Drop
orchidee said:
This about someone having a bad hair-day?! heehee.
November 30th, 2018 03:04
orchidee said:
This about someone having a bad hair-day?! heehee.
November 30th, 2018 03:04
A Travelling Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville, those miracles are still there.
November 30th, 2018 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville, those miracles are still there.
November 30th, 2018 02:07
A Travelling Man
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Makes me think of \"Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus.\"
Excellent poem and it gives the reader the perspective from both sides and ultimately melds into the G rating. LOL!
Great job, Neville. :-)
November 29th, 2018 17:03
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Makes me think of \"Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus.\"
Excellent poem and it gives the reader the perspective from both sides and ultimately melds into the G rating. LOL!
Great job, Neville. :-)
November 29th, 2018 17:03
A Travelling Man
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for him swanning about, while she\'s left grafting at home! lol. Does he bake some bread too?
I will have to swoon at the end of this poem. heehee.
November 29th, 2018 15:40
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for him swanning about, while she\'s left grafting at home! lol. Does he bake some bread too?
I will have to swoon at the end of this poem. heehee.
November 29th, 2018 15:40
A Travelling Man
Michael Edwards said:
Super write although I would like to think miracles still do happen.
November 29th, 2018 13:20
Michael Edwards said:
Super write although I would like to think miracles still do happen.
November 29th, 2018 13:20
Appetite for Words
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words in our lives are so important to many of us.
November 29th, 2018 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words in our lives are so important to many of us.
November 29th, 2018 01:55
Appetite for Words
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
No abibliophobia here!
As a logophile, I very much enjoyed reading your poem!
Check out the acrostic Goldfinch60 posted today...if you haven’t already. You May find it interesting.
~Laura~
November 28th, 2018 18:43
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
No abibliophobia here!
As a logophile, I very much enjoyed reading your poem!
Check out the acrostic Goldfinch60 posted today...if you haven’t already. You May find it interesting.
~Laura~
November 28th, 2018 18:43
Appetite for Words
Neville said:
In succinct terms, I thank thee, but with a certain passion... N
November 28th, 2018 18:14
Neville said:
In succinct terms, I thank thee, but with a certain passion... N
November 28th, 2018 18:14
When You Were Perfect
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A well-written poem Neville that cherishes your once lover and trumpets the fact there is no ill will, at least from your standpoint.
Loved the honesty in this write. :-)
November 27th, 2018 15:49
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
A well-written poem Neville that cherishes your once lover and trumpets the fact there is no ill will, at least from your standpoint.
Loved the honesty in this write. :-)
November 27th, 2018 15:49
When You Were Perfect
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Meanwhile - I was perfect all the time - still am! heehee. I\'m getting too big for me boots. I best eat some humble pie!
November 27th, 2018 02:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville.
Meanwhile - I was perfect all the time - still am! heehee. I\'m getting too big for me boots. I best eat some humble pie!
November 27th, 2018 02:49
A Certain Distance
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Beautifully penned emotional romantic poem. You\'ve chosen your words wisely and, as a result, capture your readers\' hearts.
Great read, Neville. :-)
November 26th, 2018 17:56
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Beautifully penned emotional romantic poem. You\'ve chosen your words wisely and, as a result, capture your readers\' hearts.
Great read, Neville. :-)
November 26th, 2018 17:56
A Certain Distance
Goldfinch60 said:
Those moments can be so near yet so far apart at the same time.
November 26th, 2018 16:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Those moments can be so near yet so far apart at the same time.
November 26th, 2018 16:33
Zen Hunting
Goldfinch60 said:
Your Spirit can be fond in many ways. I know that My Spirit is always with me and it is nothing to do with a particular religion. I do hope that you bliss stays with you. Good write.
November 26th, 2018 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Your Spirit can be fond in many ways. I know that My Spirit is always with me and it is nothing to do with a particular religion. I do hope that you bliss stays with you. Good write.
November 26th, 2018 01:11
Zen Hunting
Neville said:
What a delightful thing to say, and how very kind too.. nothing lasts forever though, does it......Many thank you\'s on their way... N
November 25th, 2018 15:41
Neville said:
What a delightful thing to say, and how very kind too.. nothing lasts forever though, does it......Many thank you\'s on their way... N
November 25th, 2018 15:41
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