Comments received on poems by Neville



Why Do I Love Thee
Fay Slimm. said:

I love the original classic but so heartwarming this modern ode to true love - thanks for posting it Neville.

November 23rd, 2018 06:39

Before We Die
Neville said:

Many thanks Goldfinch60, the \'Book of Longing\' was written by the late great Leonard Norman Cohen, who was kind enough to respond to a letter that I wrote to him regarding my Fathers eulogy.. tis a book that I would highly recommend to anyone.... Neville

November 23rd, 2018 04:46

Before We Die
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Neville, that Book of Longing could have a great deal for which to answer.

November 23rd, 2018 02:01

Abattoir Gulls
Goldfinch60 said:

I was there watching these gulls

\"Pinned to our sky
On invisible wire\"

Your words conveyed a glorious picture.

November 22nd, 2018 01:48

Abattoir Gulls
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Neville, the imagery is amazing in this write. I particularly liked

\"Angry and loud
Dancing and scything
High upon higher
Pinned to the sky
On invisible wire
How they do hang
There.\"

You paint such a beautiful canvas for your readers.

Great job!

November 21st, 2018 13:22

Abattoir Gulls
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - Loud applause for this flow of bird-assault Neville - - You capture so well the noise in flight of gulls whenever a meal is sighted. I relate to their cleverness as I live by the sea. An engaging read.

November 21st, 2018 11:19

Abattoir Gulls
Michael Edwards said:

Great flow - an enjoyable read.

November 21st, 2018 06:31

Abattoir Gulls
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

November 21st, 2018 06:00

A Taste of Nothing
Goldfinch60 said:

I believe there are many interpretations of this but the one that keeps on crossing my mind is the political one about the state of our country at the moment and this flaming brexit fiasco (I will not give it a capital letter). If this is anywhere near the truth I\'ll have a goldfish please.
Very intriguing write by the way.

November 21st, 2018 01:25

A Taste of Nothing
Neville said:

It seems my cigar, coconut & goldfish are all still safe, at least for the time being...

November 20th, 2018 14:23

A Taste of Nothing
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

I don\'t know about this one, Neville.
Perhaps the subject is a poet, awaiting a review of his or her poem.

Do read requests pertain to emails? Not certain.

Anyway, nice attempt to confuse the public. :-)

November 20th, 2018 13:41

Marcella
Goldfinch60 said:

Obviously a very beautiful lady with whom you are in awe (not sure she could be more exciting than a Ferrari though)
Welcome to MPS.

November 20th, 2018 01:14

Marcella
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME NEVILLE ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ an elegant tribute to a lovely LADY. Your have verbalised an awesome picture and (in my minds eye) I see her in all her Femininity ~ Beautiful. I share my site with Angela (my fiancee ~ who is in Auckland NZ until September 2019 on a work exchange) and ~ to me ~ she is more graceful & exciting than a Tiger or a Ford Mustang ! Please check our site to read some of our Poems ~ Thanks. Yours BRIAN (UK) & ANGELA (NZ).
The way MPS works is we read & comment on each others Poem ~ OK ~ B & A !

November 19th, 2018 09:19



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