Comments received on poems by Neville
Once Upon a Tablecloth
Fay Slimm. said:
A giggle a line for me in this tale of a lily-white thigh signing abroad to catch someone\'s eye - I could not believe that saucy wanton did not know she was being a-watched on that tablecloth - - ha ha your mind weaves a cheeky story really well Neville.
February 6th, 2019 14:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A giggle a line for me in this tale of a lily-white thigh signing abroad to catch someone\'s eye - I could not believe that saucy wanton did not know she was being a-watched on that tablecloth - - ha ha your mind weaves a cheeky story really well Neville.
February 6th, 2019 14:47
Once Upon a Tablecloth
dusk arising said:
Seeing this title in today\'s list just made me chuckle.
And yea, verily, a most rewarding read. Was that Alice and the march hare peeping from concealment. Were that there was jam upon the chequered blue and white, for thence he would not have held back methinks.
February 6th, 2019 12:43
dusk arising said:
Seeing this title in today\'s list just made me chuckle.
And yea, verily, a most rewarding read. Was that Alice and the march hare peeping from concealment. Were that there was jam upon the chequered blue and white, for thence he would not have held back methinks.
February 6th, 2019 12:43
Once Upon a Tablecloth
Lorna said:
ha ha - here\'s to all the wanton hussies - may they be free forever!
February 6th, 2019 06:59
Lorna said:
ha ha - here\'s to all the wanton hussies - may they be free forever!
February 6th, 2019 06:59
Once Upon a Tablecloth
Michael Edwards said:
Sounds idyllic but what about the wine?
February 6th, 2019 04:38
Michael Edwards said:
Sounds idyllic but what about the wine?
February 6th, 2019 04:38
Once Upon a Tablecloth
Neville said:
thanks for visiting orchidee.. she is somebodies wife, I believe.. not mine tho.... oops does that warrant a double mature warning label :)
February 6th, 2019 04:00
Neville said:
thanks for visiting orchidee.. she is somebodies wife, I believe.. not mine tho.... oops does that warrant a double mature warning label :)
February 6th, 2019 04:00
Once Upon a Tablecloth
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Should I meet her? Or is that the wife?!
February 6th, 2019 03:53
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Should I meet her? Or is that the wife?!
February 6th, 2019 03:53
Jun Kenshi
psychofemale said:
Need a little background on the subject I think....
February 5th, 2019 20:58
psychofemale said:
Need a little background on the subject I think....
February 5th, 2019 20:58
Jun Kenshi
Michael Edwards said:
Hey mate this aint no little scribble - lovely piece.
February 5th, 2019 11:39
Michael Edwards said:
Hey mate this aint no little scribble - lovely piece.
February 5th, 2019 11:39
Wanting to be Wanted
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, was taken on an awesome ride.
Much appreciated
February 5th, 2019 10:43
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, was taken on an awesome ride.
Much appreciated
February 5th, 2019 10:43
Jun Kenshi
Neville said:
no holes allowed, just take my word for it my friend... N
February 5th, 2019 07:36
Neville said:
no holes allowed, just take my word for it my friend... N
February 5th, 2019 07:36
Jun Kenshi
orchidee said:
Doh! I googled Jun Kenshi and info on some guy appeared. I don\'t know the fella. You know him?!
February 5th, 2019 07:10
orchidee said:
Doh! I googled Jun Kenshi and info on some guy appeared. I don\'t know the fella. You know him?!
February 5th, 2019 07:10
Jun Kenshi
Lorna said:
Beautiful and wonderful clean lines Neville and you taught us something new - thank you! Also \"she moved like a tiger on vaseline\" has put images in my head that will last all day..... hope yours is good......
February 5th, 2019 07:03
Lorna said:
Beautiful and wonderful clean lines Neville and you taught us something new - thank you! Also \"she moved like a tiger on vaseline\" has put images in my head that will last all day..... hope yours is good......
February 5th, 2019 07:03
Jun Kenshi
Neville said:
Domo arigato my friend & true... I was hoping you might find this little scribble.... Neville
February 5th, 2019 06:37
Neville said:
Domo arigato my friend & true... I was hoping you might find this little scribble.... Neville
February 5th, 2019 06:37
Jun Kenshi
Fay Slimm. said:
Jun Kenshi - - What a transcendent place to achieve Neville - - love the lilt to this romantic anecdote.
February 5th, 2019 06:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Jun Kenshi - - What a transcendent place to achieve Neville - - love the lilt to this romantic anecdote.
February 5th, 2019 06:22
Virus
Goldfinch60 said:
That virus found me a few days ago, they get everywhere Neville.
February 5th, 2019 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That virus found me a few days ago, they get everywhere Neville.
February 5th, 2019 01:30
Virus
dusk arising said:
And we, none of us, are immune to her intent...... for upon us she thrives?
Weird things conjured up from your words...... is she substance or merely... a fear which lurks within us.
February 4th, 2019 18:37
dusk arising said:
And we, none of us, are immune to her intent...... for upon us she thrives?
Weird things conjured up from your words...... is she substance or merely... a fear which lurks within us.
February 4th, 2019 18:37
Ink Blots
Lorna said:
I am sad that he cannot recognize the achingly beautiful butterflies trapped in the folds........ thank goodness your poem is out for all of us to see lovely Neville.
February 4th, 2019 17:20
Lorna said:
I am sad that he cannot recognize the achingly beautiful butterflies trapped in the folds........ thank goodness your poem is out for all of us to see lovely Neville.
February 4th, 2019 17:20
Virus
orchidee said:
Cooee, all OK still? Well it was 15 minutes ago! I\'m an old fuss-pot. lol.
February 4th, 2019 14:43
orchidee said:
Cooee, all OK still? Well it was 15 minutes ago! I\'m an old fuss-pot. lol.
February 4th, 2019 14:43
Virus
Lorna said:
Conjures up The Black Death (maybe that was bacteria)........ great images!
February 4th, 2019 08:45
Lorna said:
Conjures up The Black Death (maybe that was bacteria)........ great images!
February 4th, 2019 08:45
Virus
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. You not caught a bug have ya? Me bed bugs bit me - there ya go!
February 4th, 2019 04:14
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. You not caught a bug have ya? Me bed bugs bit me - there ya go!
February 4th, 2019 04:14
Virus
Fay Slimm. said:
Fro just the one word sprung all these images that so expertly leads the reader to want to read over again - first class writing Neville.
February 4th, 2019 03:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Fro just the one word sprung all these images that so expertly leads the reader to want to read over again - first class writing Neville.
February 4th, 2019 03:39
Virus
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way your mind works in putting together so many ideas so eloquently and seamlessly - a master poet sir.
February 4th, 2019 03:31
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way your mind works in putting together so many ideas so eloquently and seamlessly - a master poet sir.
February 4th, 2019 03:31
Ink Blots
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful imagery within this piece. Those ink blots are not insignificant to those who can get joy from them.
February 4th, 2019 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful imagery within this piece. Those ink blots are not insignificant to those who can get joy from them.
February 4th, 2019 01:32
Ink Blots
dusk arising said:
Some people place before us that which we cannot see.
Oft described as one of the enigmatic differences between the genders.
February 3rd, 2019 20:48
dusk arising said:
Some people place before us that which we cannot see.
Oft described as one of the enigmatic differences between the genders.
February 3rd, 2019 20:48
Ink Blots
Fay Slimm. said:
Good style and flow to this intriguing piece Neville - Ink blobs on paper will hold more mystery to me after this read of imaginative metaphor.
February 3rd, 2019 10:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Good style and flow to this intriguing piece Neville - Ink blobs on paper will hold more mystery to me after this read of imaginative metaphor.
February 3rd, 2019 10:53
Ink Blots
Neville said:
yes.. it works okay and can look great.. feel free ...
February 3rd, 2019 08:41
Neville said:
yes.. it works okay and can look great.. feel free ...
February 3rd, 2019 08:41
Ink Blots
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the good old clinical tests - we do ink blot art at some of our workshops - great fun. Actually this is seriously good Neville and I do like the construction.
February 3rd, 2019 06:29
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the good old clinical tests - we do ink blot art at some of our workshops - great fun. Actually this is seriously good Neville and I do like the construction.
February 3rd, 2019 06:29
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