Comments received on poems by Neville
Bring Along a Lantern
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Nicely penned Neville full of intrigue
February 25th, 2019 06:53
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Nicely penned Neville full of intrigue
February 25th, 2019 06:53
Bring Along a Lantern
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. We going for a night-walk? I went once, but the battery in me torch ran out. Doh! Well, you told us to bring a lantern, but I thought a troch would do....
February 25th, 2019 05:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. We going for a night-walk? I went once, but the battery in me torch ran out. Doh! Well, you told us to bring a lantern, but I thought a troch would do....
February 25th, 2019 05:05
Little White Lies
dusk arising said:
We all tell a few porky pies don\'t we. But i never do in these comments.
Nonsense on the other hand is something i\'m all too good at publishing on MPS.
Would you rather be remembered for your porkies or a few items of nonsense?
February 24th, 2019 12:28
dusk arising said:
We all tell a few porky pies don\'t we. But i never do in these comments.
Nonsense on the other hand is something i\'m all too good at publishing on MPS.
Would you rather be remembered for your porkies or a few items of nonsense?
February 24th, 2019 12:28
Little White Lies
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh I can relate to that
It\'s not a lie if you tell the truth straight away afterwards
That\'s nonesense
Great write Neville good sunday to you
February 24th, 2019 05:16
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh I can relate to that
It\'s not a lie if you tell the truth straight away afterwards
That\'s nonesense
Great write Neville good sunday to you
February 24th, 2019 05:16
Little White Lies
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the read but why are white which stands for purity shouldn\'t they be little black lies - come to that how come they have any colour at all - unless they are written of course and then if they really are white you would need black paper - can you get it anywhere? I am so confused.
February 24th, 2019 04:50
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the read but why are white which stands for purity shouldn\'t they be little black lies - come to that how come they have any colour at all - unless they are written of course and then if they really are white you would need black paper - can you get it anywhere? I am so confused.
February 24th, 2019 04:50
Little White Lies
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Aww, why they say I talk nonsense any day?! lol.
February 24th, 2019 03:07
orchidee said:
A fine write Neville. Aww, why they say I talk nonsense any day?! lol.
February 24th, 2019 03:07
Together Parted
sylviasearcher said:
Like a stroll in a pretty meadow.
It made me think of Spring.
The words felt like I already knew them.
February 23rd, 2019 10:04
sylviasearcher said:
Like a stroll in a pretty meadow.
It made me think of Spring.
The words felt like I already knew them.
February 23rd, 2019 10:04
Together Parted
Michael Edwards said:
Ahhh - the way I read was naughty but subtly nice. A work to be proud of.
February 23rd, 2019 08:04
Michael Edwards said:
Ahhh - the way I read was naughty but subtly nice. A work to be proud of.
February 23rd, 2019 08:04
Together Parted
FineB said:
Hello Neville.
Thank you this beautiful moment of poetry.
Keep writing FineB.
February 23rd, 2019 05:07
FineB said:
Hello Neville.
Thank you this beautiful moment of poetry.
Keep writing FineB.
February 23rd, 2019 05:07
Together Parted
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Neville this reads so many ways and with many meanings Perefct!
Bravo!
February 23rd, 2019 03:49
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Neville this reads so many ways and with many meanings Perefct!
Bravo!
February 23rd, 2019 03:49
Together Parted
Neville said:
thank you orchidee... bed sounds like a good idea to me... N
February 23rd, 2019 03:02
Neville said:
thank you orchidee... bed sounds like a good idea to me... N
February 23rd, 2019 03:02
Together Parted
orchidee said:
A fine write N, but you have *robably *icked out all the \'p\'s (there\'s one sneaked in). No more left for me to \'*ick u* a *enguin!\'
Why don\'t I go back to bed and wake up again - talking rubbish!
February 23rd, 2019 02:55
orchidee said:
A fine write N, but you have *robably *icked out all the \'p\'s (there\'s one sneaked in). No more left for me to \'*ick u* a *enguin!\'
Why don\'t I go back to bed and wake up again - talking rubbish!
February 23rd, 2019 02:55
A Certain Point of Beauty
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a beautiful lady.
February 22nd, 2019 15:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a beautiful lady.
February 22nd, 2019 15:45
A Certain Point of Beauty
orchidee said:
Ooh should I meet her?! (heehee). \'Yeah, go on\', you say. She don\'t sound as fierce as Boudicea.
February 22nd, 2019 15:22
orchidee said:
Ooh should I meet her?! (heehee). \'Yeah, go on\', you say. She don\'t sound as fierce as Boudicea.
February 22nd, 2019 15:22
A Certain Point of Beauty
dusk arising said:
Ahhh that moment of descision \"should I stay or should i go\".
Beauty, being in the eye of the beholder, can be a short lived quality.
February 22nd, 2019 07:20
dusk arising said:
Ahhh that moment of descision \"should I stay or should i go\".
Beauty, being in the eye of the beholder, can be a short lived quality.
February 22nd, 2019 07:20
A Certain Point of Beauty
Fay Slimm. said:
A casket of treasured words here Neville - - beauty of course is in the eye of the beholder they say - - but those mentioned exercises sound helpful and methinks to try \'em !! Great read.
February 22nd, 2019 06:43
Fay Slimm. said:
A casket of treasured words here Neville - - beauty of course is in the eye of the beholder they say - - but those mentioned exercises sound helpful and methinks to try \'em !! Great read.
February 22nd, 2019 06:43
A Certain Point of Beauty
Michael Edwards said:
Could be about my lovely Asian wife but I stayed and that was over half a century ago - this is an intriguing write which will live me for some time.
February 22nd, 2019 06:21
Michael Edwards said:
Could be about my lovely Asian wife but I stayed and that was over half a century ago - this is an intriguing write which will live me for some time.
February 22nd, 2019 06:21
A Certain Point of Beauty
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
NOW,,, That is a moement WELL Captured
Truly a beautiful write
BUT... Did he stay or did he leave that is one of life\'s great questions
February 22nd, 2019 04:49
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
NOW,,, That is a moement WELL Captured
Truly a beautiful write
BUT... Did he stay or did he leave that is one of life\'s great questions
February 22nd, 2019 04:49
A Certain Point of Beauty
sylviasearcher said:
Reminded me of the moments when I sometimes manage to write a beautiful poem.
February 22nd, 2019 04:43
sylviasearcher said:
Reminded me of the moments when I sometimes manage to write a beautiful poem.
February 22nd, 2019 04:43
Heathen
sylviasearcher said:
I had to come back to this one after letting it linger in my senses.
It made me want to reconnect with my inner heathen.
To let go of something.
February 22nd, 2019 03:17
sylviasearcher said:
I had to come back to this one after letting it linger in my senses.
It made me want to reconnect with my inner heathen.
To let go of something.
February 22nd, 2019 03:17
Heathen
Goldfinch60 said:
We find out so much about our previous selves nowadays.
Good write Neville.
February 22nd, 2019 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
We find out so much about our previous selves nowadays.
Good write Neville.
February 22nd, 2019 01:33
Heathen
SerenWise said:
I love this! very evocative imagery, really nicely written :)
February 21st, 2019 18:09
SerenWise said:
I love this! very evocative imagery, really nicely written :)
February 21st, 2019 18:09
Heathen
Suresh said:
I stare at those relic and wonder. .....
....in the absence of being there, wonder is all I can do!
Love the read
February 21st, 2019 13:05
Suresh said:
I stare at those relic and wonder. .....
....in the absence of being there, wonder is all I can do!
Love the read
February 21st, 2019 13:05
Heathen
Fay Slimm. said:
Inside a museum to the poet is a chance for fancy to impregnate the relics with seeing and tasting flakes of past loves - which your verse has done well - in fact so well that i felt myself there wearing the clay mask - - another thrill of a read Nev.
February 21st, 2019 12:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Inside a museum to the poet is a chance for fancy to impregnate the relics with seeing and tasting flakes of past loves - which your verse has done well - in fact so well that i felt myself there wearing the clay mask - - another thrill of a read Nev.
February 21st, 2019 12:03
Heathen
Neville said:
That may have been becoz you were lagging behind... thanks for throwing yourself into this scribble DA..... N
February 21st, 2019 10:36
Neville said:
That may have been becoz you were lagging behind... thanks for throwing yourself into this scribble DA..... N
February 21st, 2019 10:36
Heathen
dusk arising said:
Cor mistah, you dont half bring out the neanderthal in me. Me and the boys invented the spear you know.
57 varieties of us there was. They called me ketchup.
February 21st, 2019 09:45
dusk arising said:
Cor mistah, you dont half bring out the neanderthal in me. Me and the boys invented the spear you know.
57 varieties of us there was. They called me ketchup.
February 21st, 2019 09:45
Heathen
orchidee said:
Yep, we was roaming about in those caves centuries ago. Well I was. Was you too?!
February 21st, 2019 05:14
orchidee said:
Yep, we was roaming about in those caves centuries ago. Well I was. Was you too?!
February 21st, 2019 05:14
What Do You Drive
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes a good fun write that fits well with the music -da doo.
February 21st, 2019 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes a good fun write that fits well with the music -da doo.
February 21st, 2019 01:41
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