Comments received on poems by Neville
Versal Law
orchidee said:
Swoon! I thought ya was writing some \'laws of poetry\' or summat. Now I gotta have a lie down to recover. lol.
December 17th, 2018 05:28
orchidee said:
Swoon! I thought ya was writing some \'laws of poetry\' or summat. Now I gotta have a lie down to recover. lol.
December 17th, 2018 05:28
Upon A Midnight Calling
whisperingquill said:
Intricate weaving
fantastic word choices
December 16th, 2018 12:33
whisperingquill said:
Intricate weaving
fantastic word choices
December 16th, 2018 12:33
The Birth of Opals
Michael Edwards said:
Greensleeves is playing as I read this - the two go so well together - a super read.
December 16th, 2018 06:09
Michael Edwards said:
Greensleeves is playing as I read this - the two go so well together - a super read.
December 16th, 2018 06:09
Upon A Midnight Calling
Goldfinch60 said:
Those marks must always be left to show that you have been there.
December 15th, 2018 11:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Those marks must always be left to show that you have been there.
December 15th, 2018 11:33
Upon A Midnight Calling
orchidee said:
Swoon! He been cutting the grass at midnight?! I have to guess what\'s going on there, in me sheltered life. heehee.
December 15th, 2018 03:08
orchidee said:
Swoon! He been cutting the grass at midnight?! I have to guess what\'s going on there, in me sheltered life. heehee.
December 15th, 2018 03:08
On Waking
Fay Slimm. said:
Early morning coupling is good for those born as larks but not for owls - a read which revives memories for me - thanks for journey back to lovely times Neville.
December 14th, 2018 05:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Early morning coupling is good for those born as larks but not for owls - a read which revives memories for me - thanks for journey back to lovely times Neville.
December 14th, 2018 05:02
On Waking
orchidee said:
It all started with those swoony palms! lol. I must \'get out more\' as they say.
December 14th, 2018 03:08
orchidee said:
It all started with those swoony palms! lol. I must \'get out more\' as they say.
December 14th, 2018 03:08
On Waking
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Neville, it leads me in one way only and the answer was yes.
December 14th, 2018 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Neville, it leads me in one way only and the answer was yes.
December 14th, 2018 02:05
The Company of Angels
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write leaving me lost in your world of words.
December 14th, 2018 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write leaving me lost in your world of words.
December 14th, 2018 01:55
On Waking
Michael Edwards said:
Well I have my interpretation - based, thankfully, on a long memory. Much enjoyed - thanks for posting - I will return to it later.
December 14th, 2018 00:22
Michael Edwards said:
Well I have my interpretation - based, thankfully, on a long memory. Much enjoyed - thanks for posting - I will return to it later.
December 14th, 2018 00:22
The Company of Angels
Nicholas Browning said:
This paints a picture in my mind of a man in a tight spot, perhaps fighting in a war or a battle of self reflection, being prayed for by an angel that happens to be someone he knows. Also, there seems to be a dark coven that is conducting some kind of ritual. I am confusion, America explain.
Oh well, don\'t mind me. Just trying to understand it.
I like it to say the least.
December 13th, 2018 16:03
Nicholas Browning said:
This paints a picture in my mind of a man in a tight spot, perhaps fighting in a war or a battle of self reflection, being prayed for by an angel that happens to be someone he knows. Also, there seems to be a dark coven that is conducting some kind of ritual. I am confusion, America explain.
Oh well, don\'t mind me. Just trying to understand it.
I like it to say the least.
December 13th, 2018 16:03
The Company of Angels
sylviasearcher said:
Kind of other worldly. Dreamy. I like it. It\'s well put together
December 13th, 2018 15:05
sylviasearcher said:
Kind of other worldly. Dreamy. I like it. It\'s well put together
December 13th, 2018 15:05
The Company of Angels
Michael Edwards said:
Ditto Diamond\'s comments - I will also reread.
December 13th, 2018 11:56
Michael Edwards said:
Ditto Diamond\'s comments - I will also reread.
December 13th, 2018 11:56
The Width of a Table
Fay Slimm. said:
An ongoing wish which I hope comes true the next time Neville - - you write a convincing story which catches attention most admirably.
December 12th, 2018 13:20
Fay Slimm. said:
An ongoing wish which I hope comes true the next time Neville - - you write a convincing story which catches attention most admirably.
December 12th, 2018 13:20
The Width of a Table
Michael Edwards said:
This carried me with it Neville - the sign of another superb write.
December 12th, 2018 04:28
Michael Edwards said:
This carried me with it Neville - the sign of another superb write.
December 12th, 2018 04:28
Blank Pages
Goldfinch60 said:
Like Michael, mine are written on screen except when I am in the Coffee Bar where I write them in a notebook ready to type out.
I do have a file on the computer called \'Ideas for Poems\' where I have started poems and not completed them, I migh soon have to get an external drive to kep them on.
December 12th, 2018 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Like Michael, mine are written on screen except when I am in the Coffee Bar where I write them in a notebook ready to type out.
I do have a file on the computer called \'Ideas for Poems\' where I have started poems and not completed them, I migh soon have to get an external drive to kep them on.
December 12th, 2018 01:23
Blank Pages
Michael Edwards said:
I write all mine on screen although I do gather ideas and word associations which come to me from time to time in a notebook. Anyway this worked out pretty darn good.
December 11th, 2018 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
I write all mine on screen although I do gather ideas and word associations which come to me from time to time in a notebook. Anyway this worked out pretty darn good.
December 11th, 2018 10:42
Blank Pages
orchidee said:
And yes, now you\'ve filled this page!
Answer: Erm, nope. I economise on rubbish. Never throw out a poem. Are they THAT good?! heehee.
December 11th, 2018 07:13
orchidee said:
And yes, now you\'ve filled this page!
Answer: Erm, nope. I economise on rubbish. Never throw out a poem. Are they THAT good?! heehee.
December 11th, 2018 07:13
Blank Pages
sylviasearcher said:
Unwritten yet known
Treasures evading capture
Sensed by me alone
???
December 11th, 2018 07:08
sylviasearcher said:
Unwritten yet known
Treasures evading capture
Sensed by me alone
???
December 11th, 2018 07:08
Blank Pages
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Well...
your pen certainly filled this page!
Blank page...no more!
I truly enjoyed the read!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2018 06:53
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Well...
your pen certainly filled this page!
Blank page...no more!
I truly enjoyed the read!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2018 06:53
A Very Special Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Those Special Days are so wonderful, as I get older those special days seem to increase.
December 11th, 2018 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Those Special Days are so wonderful, as I get older those special days seem to increase.
December 11th, 2018 01:19
A Very Special Day
sylviasearcher said:
Hope you have a special birthday! 😊
December 10th, 2018 07:16
sylviasearcher said:
Hope you have a special birthday! 😊
December 10th, 2018 07:16
A Very Special Day
Lorna said:
Great day share for us all Neville - happy birthday!
December 10th, 2018 07:08
Lorna said:
Great day share for us all Neville - happy birthday!
December 10th, 2018 07:08
A Very Special Day
orchidee said:
I thought ya was gonna write about ya birthday, with that title - today?! lol.
December 10th, 2018 06:57
orchidee said:
I thought ya was gonna write about ya birthday, with that title - today?! lol.
December 10th, 2018 06:57
Afterwards
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - the blissful feeling of sexual contentment this read with its honest journey through passion\'s abandon tells an intriguing tale in well chosen phrases - if only a chair could talk eh Neville ? A haunting piece of gentle erotica.
December 9th, 2018 04:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - the blissful feeling of sexual contentment this read with its honest journey through passion\'s abandon tells an intriguing tale in well chosen phrases - if only a chair could talk eh Neville ? A haunting piece of gentle erotica.
December 9th, 2018 04:14
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