Comments received on poems by Neville



A Taste of Nothing
sylviasearcher said:

It reminded me of someone

November 30th, 2018 10:46

The Long Drop
sylviasearcher said:

Fear is king?
Peace one day will win

November 30th, 2018 08:30

The Long Drop
Goldfinch60 said:

The mind can play such awful tricks but those tricks (fears) when faced just add to your experience.

November 30th, 2018 03:21

The Long Drop
orchidee said:

This about someone having a bad hair-day?! heehee.

November 30th, 2018 03:04

A Travelling Man
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Neville, those miracles are still there.

November 30th, 2018 02:07

A Travelling Man
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Makes me think of \"Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus.\"

Excellent poem and it gives the reader the perspective from both sides and ultimately melds into the G rating. LOL!

Great job, Neville. :-)

November 29th, 2018 17:03

A Travelling Man
orchidee said:

It\'s all right for him swanning about, while she\'s left grafting at home! lol. Does he bake some bread too?
I will have to swoon at the end of this poem. heehee.

November 29th, 2018 15:40

A Travelling Man
Michael Edwards said:

Super write although I would like to think miracles still do happen.

November 29th, 2018 13:20

Appetite for Words
Goldfinch60 said:

Those words in our lives are so important to many of us.

November 29th, 2018 01:55

Appetite for Words
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Neville,

No abibliophobia here!
As a logophile, I very much enjoyed reading your poem!

Check out the acrostic Goldfinch60 posted today...if you havenā€™t already. You May find it interesting.

~Laura~



November 28th, 2018 18:43

Appetite for Words
Neville said:

In succinct terms, I thank thee, but with a certain passion... N

November 28th, 2018 18:14

When You Were Perfect
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

A well-written poem Neville that cherishes your once lover and trumpets the fact there is no ill will, at least from your standpoint.

Loved the honesty in this write. :-)

November 27th, 2018 15:49

When You Were Perfect
Neville said:

much appreciated and true...

November 27th, 2018 04:36

When You Were Perfect
Goldfinch60 said:

Very moving emotive write Neville.

November 27th, 2018 03:03

When You Were Perfect
orchidee said:

A fine write Neville.
Meanwhile - I was perfect all the time - still am! heehee. I\'m getting too big for me boots. I best eat some humble pie!

November 27th, 2018 02:49

A Certain Distance
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Beautifully penned emotional romantic poem. You\'ve chosen your words wisely and, as a result, capture your readers\' hearts.

Great read, Neville. :-)

November 26th, 2018 17:56

A Certain Distance
Goldfinch60 said:

Those moments can be so near yet so far apart at the same time.

November 26th, 2018 16:33

Zen Hunting
Neville said:

thanks for the tip... N

November 26th, 2018 05:01

Zen Hunting
Goldfinch60 said:

Your Spirit can be fond in many ways. I know that My Spirit is always with me and it is nothing to do with a particular religion. I do hope that you bliss stays with you. Good write.

November 26th, 2018 01:11

Zen Hunting
Neville said:

What a delightful thing to say, and how very kind too.. nothing lasts forever though, does it......Many thank you\'s on their way... N

November 25th, 2018 15:41

The Pyramid of Longing
Neville said:

That love to which these words refer, was a very long time ago now my friend... N

November 25th, 2018 04:30

The Pyramid of Longing
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love increase like the pyramid that you have created. Clever write Neville.

November 25th, 2018 01:22

The Pyramid of Longing
Neville said:

Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging gift of words.. They are very much appreciated.. Neville

November 24th, 2018 12:37

Why Do I Love Thee
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good lovelorn write Neville.

November 24th, 2018 01:19

Why Do I Love Thee
Neville said:

I am truly grateful to you Fay.. many thank you\'s for such a kind & encouraging message... kind Regards & All Good Things, Neville

November 23rd, 2018 07:19

Why Do I Love Thee
Fay Slimm. said:

I love the original classic but so heartwarming this modern ode to true love - thanks for posting it Neville.

November 23rd, 2018 06:39

Before We Die
Neville said:

Many thanks Goldfinch60, the \'Book of Longing\' was written by the late great Leonard Norman Cohen, who was kind enough to respond to a letter that I wrote to him regarding my Fathers eulogy.. tis a book that I would highly recommend to anyone.... Neville

November 23rd, 2018 04:46

Before We Die
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Neville, that Book of Longing could have a great deal for which to answer.

November 23rd, 2018 02:01

Abattoir Gulls
Goldfinch60 said:

I was there watching these gulls

\"Pinned to our sky
On invisible wire\"

Your words conveyed a glorious picture.

November 22nd, 2018 01:48

Abattoir Gulls
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Neville, the imagery is amazing in this write. I particularly liked

\"Angry and loud
Dancing and scything
High upon higher
Pinned to the sky
On invisible wire
How they do hang
There.\"

You paint such a beautiful canvas for your readers.

Great job!

November 21st, 2018 13:22



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