Comments received on poems by lonelyraccoon



Sterilite Tubs and Reflections
dusk arising said:

I disagree with your final line. You\'ve got a life, and a good head. You\'re working your way through lifes hurdles at a young age.... formative years...... you will eventually become self aware and able to love that which you are.

Think butterflys. They dont start out beautiful... and you are on your way.

The way you write has you on the right path without a doubt.... more please.

October 14th, 2019 16:26

Hypo-Mania
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Thank you lonelyraccon for “using your words” to write such a beautiful and moving piece. I am privileged to come across the rare piece where one writes from the lovely interior most place of their heart. What can one do with such pain? The deep stabbing pain of depression? Rejection? Isolation? I know of only one remedy: Write and share. Your pain is my pain and trust me, I wont let it go to waste. Solidarity dear one with the One whom suffered like no other.

May 14th, 2019 21:12

\"Did I Get Too Old For You?\"
laurenroe said:

i love this!
keep writing

April 24th, 2019 00:37

\"Did I Get Too Old For You?\"
kalanigarcia said:

very interesting

April 10th, 2019 20:44

\"Did I Get Too Old For You?\"
dusk arising said:

Hope you feel better after that. I see you have only read 4 other peoples poems on here and never commented on any (info on your profile page). You will attract more comment/interest from other poets if you read and comment on others work. That\'s how this site works best.

April 10th, 2019 09:58

Who\'s Life Is This?
EliDagger said:

Truly amazing piece, keep up the good work!

April 3rd, 2019 22:11

Spring Cleaning
FineB said:

Hello tb,

A wonderful poem and perspective on Spring cleaning.

Keep writing FineB!

April 1st, 2019 15:00

Hungry for Answers
Poetic Dan said:

Wow this was breathtaking. I ran away from my dysfunctional family at 14, I remember this unanswerable feeling and I soon got lost in hip hop and disappeared for a few years.
It\'s not easy to stay level headed but I promise everything will work out in the end. Even smoother with a pen and words expressed like this, never forget you\'re wonderful gift.

We are all poets
Waiting to know it
Much peace and respect

March 28th, 2019 10:41

Count down
Nicholas Browning said:

Who knows? Life\'s scary because we never know.
Best regards.

March 25th, 2019 18:50

Count down
Fay Slimm. said:

Questions we all ask at one time or another and put into poetic lines such as this after a health scare would make time more vital - -- writing it out will help and hoping soon the obsession will lessen - a moving read.

March 25th, 2019 17:13

What’s Reality?
Nicholas Browning said:

Well, in personal experience I\'ve been knocked out at school, and arrested at school. When I was in the 1st or 2nd grade, a tall guy who was a couple years older than me jumped off a playground tower and landed on my head. He didn\'t see me, so it wasn\'t his fault. It just happened. When I woke up, the whole school was there. Just staring at me. The ambulance was there, and so were my parents. They put me in a stretcher and sent me away. I don\'t really remember it as a bad memory though. It\'s just something that happened.
Another thing, when I was in highschool I was arrested for assault and battery. I slapped, and pushed, a guy who was bullying someone that I thought was my friend. That \"friend\" of mine didn\'t back up my story. So, I got arrested for being the bully. Walked out in front of the whole school in handcuffs. That was a tad bit embarrassing. I laughed it off though. Didn\'t get into any trouble really.
So, I guess the only advice to give you is to laugh it off. Screw what other people say. Can\'t let a million voices get you down when there\'s only one that matters.
Best regards.

March 22nd, 2019 23:50

Lesson Unlearned
Nicholas Browning said:

Sight deceives us more than anything. Our eyes lie to us all the time, unbeknownst to us all the while.
A nice message to accompany your words.
Best regards.

March 21st, 2019 16:42

Lesson Unlearned
sylviasearcher said:

Intriguing write.

March 21st, 2019 08:49

Bodily Disfunctions
Nicholas Browning said:

Just don\'t let it define you, and everything will be peachy.
Best regards.

March 19th, 2019 14:35

Bodily Disfunctions
Angela1711 said:

Nice read :) def could relate to this myself x

March 19th, 2019 13:22

Puppy Love
Nicholas Browning said:

Love indeed. Puppies are nice though.
Best regards.

March 18th, 2019 14:23

Puppy Love
Poetic Dan said:

This was brilliant and well done for not assuming we are all the same, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful story.
Much peace and respect

March 18th, 2019 09:42

Rainbow
Sunshinefalling said:

Interesting and clever. Thanks for sharing.

March 15th, 2019 22:08

Rainbow
Nicholas Browning said:

The last stanza is in my opinion the best. Nice idea using the colors. Creative and a breath of fresh air.

March 15th, 2019 15:54

Side Effects Of Peace
Jo March said:

It\'s a wonderful poem. I really enjoyed it. I think that it\'s sort of natural for us to be confused by peace. We are used to worrying about events in our lives. We are used to trying to control every aspect of our reality. Peace doesn\'t seem natural to us. We are used to our busy lives with all the anxiety that accompanies them. At the same time, we long for peace. The irony seems to be that when we finally get the peace, we realize that perhaps that\'s not we want after all. We want the chaos at the same time... Oh the irony of life! Thank you so much for the poem.

March 15th, 2019 01:47

Side Effects Of Peace
Nicholas Browning said:

I\'ve said it before and I\'ll say it again! There is only meaning in life if you give it meaning. What life means to you is unique, and it\'s what you do with that knowledge that defines everything else, I think. I enjoyed the read. I\'ve been in similar situations before, and you\'re absolutely right. No one has the answers you seek except for you. I noticed that you are new here, so let me extend a friendly welcome to the site! We hope to see you around some more. Best regards.

March 14th, 2019 16:49

You
Goldfinch60 said:

Very meaningful write.
Welcome to MPS.

March 12th, 2019 01:39

You
dusk arising said:

Short and punchy does the trick every time. Why write twenty lines when you can say more in three... just as you do here.
A bad person as a lover can do us a lot of good in the end.... wisdom follows.

Excellent entry, ... more please.

March 11th, 2019 14:38

You
Neville said:

a little gem.. the first of many.. I hope.. Neville

March 11th, 2019 10:56

You
Fay Slimm. said:

Welcome to MPS with this short but oh so poignant a write - - I look forward to reading more of your work.

March 11th, 2019 10:12

You
Fay Slimm. said:

How true these few words can be when blind love guides.

March 11th, 2019 10:10

You
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

WELCOME FRIEND Thanks for your first Poem ~ short but bitter-sweet ! Sometimes when we escape from a bad relationship it continues to haunt our minds and fill our thoughts ! Im 35 now so one does recover. I share this site with Angela my Fiancee (30) we hope to be married @ Easter 2020. Blessings thanks for sharing ~ Please check our site ~ Yours BRIAN. You will find MPS a very empathetic site. It works by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ and building up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ OK.

March 11th, 2019 09:15