Comments received on poems by Alta H Mabin



Heavenly chakra
Saxon Crow said:

Lovely poem. Bye bye winter blues!

February 17th, 2020 06:15

Heavenly chakra
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

A great first read of the day for me today. nicely composed.

Ex animo, Alan

February 17th, 2020 04:16

Heavenly chakra
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Alta. You mean me, at the end?! heehee.

February 17th, 2020 02:48

Heavenly chakra
Alta H Mabin said:

Thank you so much, Goldfinch.

February 17th, 2020 02:43

Heavenly chakra
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful.

February 17th, 2020 02:37

Silent whispers of your heart
orchidee said:

Ok, I\'ll whisper, if you\'re waiting for me! lol.

January 11th, 2020 03:19

Silent whispers of your heart
Goldfinch60 said:

May those souls combine into one love.

January 11th, 2020 01:44

I am
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Very beautiful Ally and very well done.

Ex animo, Alan

January 8th, 2020 03:24

I am
orchidee said:

A fine write Alta. Now my version:
\'I am a pest
Cos I will always sing to ya
Torment ya day and night!\' heehee.

January 8th, 2020 02:44

I am
Goldfinch60 said:

That smile is with us all every new day.

January 8th, 2020 01:08

Bleeding pen
Goldfinch60 said:

May the words from your pen stop bleeding and write fine words in normality.

January 5th, 2020 02:33

Bleeding pen
orchidee said:

A fine write Alta.
But - aww, I\'ll be here for ya! I\'ll stay. Ya no need to bleed, or get into a tizzy over me! heehee.

January 4th, 2020 14:14

Sorrow
Goldfinch60 said:

May that smile be always with you.

January 4th, 2020 01:09

Sorrow
myself and me said:

Such a simple yet touching writing.

January 3rd, 2020 12:19

Sorrow
orchidee said:

A fine write Alta.

January 3rd, 2020 12:07

Fragile memories
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Why love when losing causes so much pain?
We love so as not to be alone!
You had two choices in life ~ there was the girl and there was the woman.
The girl chose the safety and the woman chose the suffering.
The pain now is part of the happiness.....
That\'s the deal.

Ex animo, Alan

January 2nd, 2020 16:11

Fragile memories
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write Alta.

January 2nd, 2020 02:32

Fragile memories
Fay Slimm. said:

You capture such pathos in these few lines of lost love dear Alta - - a heart-tugging read.

January 1st, 2020 17:26

Happy New Year
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

First of many, hopefully, this year Ally.

Ex animo, Alan

January 1st, 2020 08:47

Happy New Year
orchidee said:

A lovely write Alta. Pity I\'m gonna ruin the year by singing! I\'ve spoilt it from Day 1. heehee.

January 1st, 2020 03:11

Happy New Year
Goldfinch60 said:

This New year will be wonderful with your words to fill our minds Alta.

January 1st, 2020 02:24

Happy New Year
dusk arising said:

Hopes and dreams, grown and nurtured for years within us, brought to the fore by new years eve.
Old aquaintance are not forgot.

But hope springs eternal

Old aquaintances

December 31st, 2019 15:47

A new dawn
orchidee said:

Aww, I wasn\'t all that upset! heehee. Wish I would shut up sometimes! lol. Good write Alta.

December 26th, 2019 03:03

A new dawn
Goldfinch60 said:

May that new dawn be always there for you Alta.

December 26th, 2019 01:54

Oh, what a morning!
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

This is a good write Ally, thank you for sharing it today.

Ex animo, Alan

December 23rd, 2019 14:28

Oh, what a morning!
Goldfinch60 said:

Each new day is wonderful.

December 23rd, 2019 02:03

Tuck my love away
orchidee said:

OK I will! heehee.

December 16th, 2019 11:53

Laughter
Goldfinch60 said:

Laughter can cure most ills, laugh on Alta.

December 14th, 2019 01:35

Forever
orchidee said:

I never knew ya cared so much! The feeling\'s mutual! heehee.

December 12th, 2019 02:49

Forever
Goldfinch60 said:

Super Senryu Alta.

December 12th, 2019 01:50

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