Comments received on poems by Alta H Mabin
To the heavens
dusk arising said:
If there is love in one\'s soul, then there is love to give, love to share. Just don\'t be too hasty.
Your piece tells of yearning, asking the stars unanswerable questions which they tell you - you must look within yourself.
September 11th, 2019 05:14
dusk arising said:
If there is love in one\'s soul, then there is love to give, love to share. Just don\'t be too hasty.
Your piece tells of yearning, asking the stars unanswerable questions which they tell you - you must look within yourself.
September 11th, 2019 05:14
To the heavens
Neville said:
I have absolutely no doubt you will feel something very special .. whether it be love or something akin to it... if you yearn as you appear to yearn.. it will find you...
Well penned friend... N
September 11th, 2019 01:40
Neville said:
I have absolutely no doubt you will feel something very special .. whether it be love or something akin to it... if you yearn as you appear to yearn.. it will find you...
Well penned friend... N
September 11th, 2019 01:40
To the heavens
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Nice words Ally, though I guess by now everyone loves you.
Ex animo, Alan
September 11th, 2019 00:40
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Nice words Ally, though I guess by now everyone loves you.
Ex animo, Alan
September 11th, 2019 00:40
To the heavens
Goldfinch60 said:
That belief is strong in you so you WILL love again.
September 11th, 2019 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
That belief is strong in you so you WILL love again.
September 11th, 2019 00:32
Dandelion wishes
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Fragile like dreams
Well captured
September 10th, 2019 02:13
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Fragile like dreams
Well captured
September 10th, 2019 02:13
Dandelion wishes
dusk arising said:
And every windblown seed of a wish dances into a world of our dreamland fantasy were all find the rich soil of our desire.
I love to find myself inspired by pieces such as you\'ve created here.
Ethereal.
September 10th, 2019 02:11
dusk arising said:
And every windblown seed of a wish dances into a world of our dreamland fantasy were all find the rich soil of our desire.
I love to find myself inspired by pieces such as you\'ve created here.
Ethereal.
September 10th, 2019 02:11
Dandelion wishes
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Delicious wishes Ally.
Ex animo, Alan
September 10th, 2019 01:52
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Delicious wishes Ally.
Ex animo, Alan
September 10th, 2019 01:52
Rain dance
Suresh said:
How do we differentiate tears from drops when standing in the rain - one stings.
September 10th, 2019 00:58
Suresh said:
How do we differentiate tears from drops when standing in the rain - one stings.
September 10th, 2019 00:58
Love vs Pain
Neville said:
I sincerely think you may be more write than poetry usually permits ...
philosophy on the other hand is always open to poetic license ....
Penned to perfection my friend and poet.....
Neville
September 9th, 2019 14:50
Neville said:
I sincerely think you may be more write than poetry usually permits ...
philosophy on the other hand is always open to poetic license ....
Penned to perfection my friend and poet.....
Neville
September 9th, 2019 14:50
Rain dance
dusk arising said:
Dance away life\'s heartaches, dance away all pain, dance into tomorrow, dance - be born again.
But if we are dancing in the rain please, please be warm summers rain.
September 9th, 2019 14:08
dusk arising said:
Dance away life\'s heartaches, dance away all pain, dance into tomorrow, dance - be born again.
But if we are dancing in the rain please, please be warm summers rain.
September 9th, 2019 14:08
Rain dance
Fay Slimm. said:
That dance of aching souls leaves such a hollow when raindrops add to our sorrows - a sensitive piece Alta.
September 9th, 2019 07:57
Fay Slimm. said:
That dance of aching souls leaves such a hollow when raindrops add to our sorrows - a sensitive piece Alta.
September 9th, 2019 07:57
Rain dance
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good to see you know that there is sunshine within the rain Alta
Kind regards from under my umbrella Alan,
September 9th, 2019 05:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good to see you know that there is sunshine within the rain Alta
Kind regards from under my umbrella Alan,
September 9th, 2019 05:58
Rain dance
Neville said:
Beautiful...
I am not convinced the poem pinned to this page is entirely dedicated to rain though .. I think there is something so much deeper , just below the surface...regardless of whether I am right or a million miles off mark, I still applaud the author...... Neville
September 9th, 2019 02:48
Neville said:
Beautiful...
I am not convinced the poem pinned to this page is entirely dedicated to rain though .. I think there is something so much deeper , just below the surface...regardless of whether I am right or a million miles off mark, I still applaud the author...... Neville
September 9th, 2019 02:48
Rain dance
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta.
No, please! Not a rain dance; not more just now! (heehee). But we need it as well as sun.
September 9th, 2019 01:29
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta.
No, please! Not a rain dance; not more just now! (heehee). But we need it as well as sun.
September 9th, 2019 01:29
Infinite beauty
Fay Slimm. said:
An engaging unfolding through so few words of morning\'s beautiful dress rehearsal - a lovely read Alta.
September 8th, 2019 11:46
Fay Slimm. said:
An engaging unfolding through so few words of morning\'s beautiful dress rehearsal - a lovely read Alta.
September 8th, 2019 11:46
A million shattered pieces of my heart
dusk arising said:
This, beautifully written, is how lost love should be remembered.
Those were our finest days, we should honour them.
September 8th, 2019 09:54
dusk arising said:
This, beautifully written, is how lost love should be remembered.
Those were our finest days, we should honour them.
September 8th, 2019 09:54
Infinite beauty
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m a lover of this form and you\'ve sure done it justice.
September 8th, 2019 03:06
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m a lover of this form and you\'ve sure done it justice.
September 8th, 2019 03:06
Infinite beauty
orchidee said:
A lovely write Alta. We have plum hedges. Unfortunately we did not pick some plums in season, and they got wasted.
September 8th, 2019 01:33
orchidee said:
A lovely write Alta. We have plum hedges. Unfortunately we did not pick some plums in season, and they got wasted.
September 8th, 2019 01:33
Kisses & butterflies
Neville said:
the subjective juxtapositioning of repeatedly gentle but longing and urgent kisses and the correspondingly light caress of a butterflies wings is magnificently pulled off here... N
September 7th, 2019 13:25
Neville said:
the subjective juxtapositioning of repeatedly gentle but longing and urgent kisses and the correspondingly light caress of a butterflies wings is magnificently pulled off here... N
September 7th, 2019 13:25
A million shattered pieces of my heart
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words reach into the core and I feel the sadness yet that last stanza shows that despite a past love lasts forever. An emotive read Alta.
September 7th, 2019 13:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words reach into the core and I feel the sadness yet that last stanza shows that despite a past love lasts forever. An emotive read Alta.
September 7th, 2019 13:25
A million shattered pieces of my heart
Clara said:
Oh there\'s such depth in this... It\'s beautifully written. I feel the loss here, the pain but I sense too that there\'s no regrets in what was lost. The last part resonates loudly with me right now.
Thank you for sharing this
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 09:19
Clara said:
Oh there\'s such depth in this... It\'s beautifully written. I feel the loss here, the pain but I sense too that there\'s no regrets in what was lost. The last part resonates loudly with me right now.
Thank you for sharing this
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 09:19
A million shattered pieces of my heart
Neville said:
you write so well on the topic of a fragmented heart.. I sincerely hope the quality of this post reflects your poetic imagination, or is historical and well healed rather than current .... All Good Things, my friend and poet
Neville
September 7th, 2019 08:08
Neville said:
you write so well on the topic of a fragmented heart.. I sincerely hope the quality of this post reflects your poetic imagination, or is historical and well healed rather than current .... All Good Things, my friend and poet
Neville
September 7th, 2019 08:08
A million shattered pieces of my heart
Alta H Mabin said:
Thank you so much, Unsub. Really appreciate you reading my work and giving me valuable feedback.
September 7th, 2019 07:39
Alta H Mabin said:
Thank you so much, Unsub. Really appreciate you reading my work and giving me valuable feedback.
September 7th, 2019 07:39
Love vs Pain
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wonderful...
If someone said I have this amazing thing that will make you feel things you have never felt and take you places you\'ve never been but there is just a chance it will hurt like you\'ve never hurt...
Would you want it?
September 7th, 2019 06:27
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wonderful...
If someone said I have this amazing thing that will make you feel things you have never felt and take you places you\'ve never been but there is just a chance it will hurt like you\'ve never hurt...
Would you want it?
September 7th, 2019 06:27
Kisses & butterflies
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I love the thought that we all have little dormant butterflies so fragile and playfully released when we\'re excited
Wonderful metaphors
BRAVO
September 7th, 2019 06:22
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I love the thought that we all have little dormant butterflies so fragile and playfully released when we\'re excited
Wonderful metaphors
BRAVO
September 7th, 2019 06:22
Inside my soul
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well expressed
Love can touch the dark corners and the brightest star
September 7th, 2019 06:16
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well expressed
Love can touch the dark corners and the brightest star
September 7th, 2019 06:16
Lonely poets
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh so true Alta
The Old Laughing Lady has kept me company many a night
Excellent write
September 7th, 2019 06:13
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Oh so true Alta
The Old Laughing Lady has kept me company many a night
Excellent write
September 7th, 2019 06:13
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