Comments received on poems by Alta H Mabin
A chill in the breeze (Haiku Tanka)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good tanka, each new morning is wonderful.
December 8th, 2019 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good tanka, each new morning is wonderful.
December 8th, 2019 01:50
A chill in the breeze (Haiku Tanka)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for sharing FRIEND ~ We are sure S Africa will be beautiful in Summer ! WE love tankas (57577) and see them as Mature Haiku ! You have chosen your WORDS carefully to produce a PERFECT TANKA ! Thanks for sharing & cheering a COLD & WET England !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 7th, 2019 12:44
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for sharing FRIEND ~ We are sure S Africa will be beautiful in Summer ! WE love tankas (57577) and see them as Mature Haiku ! You have chosen your WORDS carefully to produce a PERFECT TANKA ! Thanks for sharing & cheering a COLD & WET England !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 7th, 2019 12:44
The wind
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta.
Meanwhile - yes, it was those baked beans I had - a bit windy. I was talking out of my...…..! lol.
December 5th, 2019 12:56
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta.
Meanwhile - yes, it was those baked beans I had - a bit windy. I was talking out of my...…..! lol.
December 5th, 2019 12:56
SenSaTions
orchidee said:
Oohh, now what are you and I up to here?! heehee. My imaginary watchdog, Fido, is barking - to warn me of a swoon coming on! heehee.
December 5th, 2019 02:50
orchidee said:
Oohh, now what are you and I up to here?! heehee. My imaginary watchdog, Fido, is barking - to warn me of a swoon coming on! heehee.
December 5th, 2019 02:50
Your love
orchidee said:
Oohh, another poem about you and I. But not to worry, I\'ve not gone. I\'ll hang around! heehee.
December 3rd, 2019 02:46
orchidee said:
Oohh, another poem about you and I. But not to worry, I\'ve not gone. I\'ll hang around! heehee.
December 3rd, 2019 02:46
Your love
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes love goes on for eternity as will your words.
December 3rd, 2019 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes love goes on for eternity as will your words.
December 3rd, 2019 02:39
To love again
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be found and last for eternity.
December 2nd, 2019 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be found and last for eternity.
December 2nd, 2019 02:00
To love again
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta. You need not fear to love me again. I might swoon though, mind ya! heehee.
December 1st, 2019 13:36
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta. You need not fear to love me again. I might swoon though, mind ya! heehee.
December 1st, 2019 13:36
Leaping Frogs (Tri-Haiku)
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write Alta.
My happy bird sings - my Polly Parrot squawks in song each day! Well, it would, if I had a parrot. lol.
November 30th, 2019 03:19
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write Alta.
My happy bird sings - my Polly Parrot squawks in song each day! Well, it would, if I had a parrot. lol.
November 30th, 2019 03:19
Leaping Frogs (Tri-Haiku)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening ALTA ~ Thanks for three excellent HAIKU each one focussing on a different aspect of NATURE ! With HAIKU it always surprises me how beauiful a picture of NATURE can be painted with so few words ! I like the 7 7 structure of your second haiku !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙
November 29th, 2019 15:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening ALTA ~ Thanks for three excellent HAIKU each one focussing on a different aspect of NATURE ! With HAIKU it always surprises me how beauiful a picture of NATURE can be painted with so few words ! I like the 7 7 structure of your second haiku !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙
November 29th, 2019 15:52
Perhaps in the wind
orchidee said:
I\'m not just a \'blue-eyed-boy\', as they say! Ohhh, more about me! I never knew there was so much fine writing about me! lol.
November 26th, 2019 12:29
orchidee said:
I\'m not just a \'blue-eyed-boy\', as they say! Ohhh, more about me! I never knew there was so much fine writing about me! lol.
November 26th, 2019 12:29
If these walls could talk
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good to see you back Ally. Nice write ~ sad but nice.
Ex animo, Alan
November 25th, 2019 15:19
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good to see you back Ally. Nice write ~ sad but nice.
Ex animo, Alan
November 25th, 2019 15:19
If these walls could talk
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, but your smile is there and will keep you going forward.
November 25th, 2019 14:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, but your smile is there and will keep you going forward.
November 25th, 2019 14:53
If these walls could talk
orchidee said:
I thought as much - you cannot bear to turn away from me! heehee. What do I know of these things?! lol.
November 25th, 2019 14:45
orchidee said:
I thought as much - you cannot bear to turn away from me! heehee. What do I know of these things?! lol.
November 25th, 2019 14:45
You
Suresh said:
Something I wrote yesterday -
When love becomes our weakness, we leave our heart exposed
November 11th, 2019 22:08
Suresh said:
Something I wrote yesterday -
When love becomes our weakness, we leave our heart exposed
November 11th, 2019 22:08
You
Goldfinch60 said:
In love you must give your all so that your souls become one.
November 11th, 2019 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
In love you must give your all so that your souls become one.
November 11th, 2019 01:36
You
orchidee said:
Oohh I\'ll pop round and we\'ll soon melt the snow! Whatever have I in mind? I might make myself swoon! heehee.
November 10th, 2019 07:59
orchidee said:
Oohh I\'ll pop round and we\'ll soon melt the snow! Whatever have I in mind? I might make myself swoon! heehee.
November 10th, 2019 07:59
A tango love
FineB said:
Hello Alta,
A lovely passionate write.
If I had to dance with someone Id love it to be the tango.
Apparently Buenos Aires is the place where one should observe tango in all its glory.
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:43
FineB said:
Hello Alta,
A lovely passionate write.
If I had to dance with someone Id love it to be the tango.
Apparently Buenos Aires is the place where one should observe tango in all its glory.
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:43
A tango love
orchidee said:
Yeah, let\'s rave, us both! Let our hair down?! heehee.
November 1st, 2019 15:02
orchidee said:
Yeah, let\'s rave, us both! Let our hair down?! heehee.
November 1st, 2019 15:02
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