Comments received on poems by Alta H Mabin
Running into the night
orchidee said:
OK, here\'s my hand. You got a torch? Can\'t see much in this dark night!
November 1st, 2019 02:43
orchidee said:
OK, here\'s my hand. You got a torch? Can\'t see much in this dark night!
November 1st, 2019 02:43
Running into the night
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Alta, may we all be there to help others in need.
November 1st, 2019 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Alta, may we all be there to help others in need.
November 1st, 2019 01:29
Running into the night
Thoughts In Time said:
Beautiful words and comforting gestures...we can only offer a loving helping hand..🌹
October 31st, 2019 16:19
Thoughts In Time said:
Beautiful words and comforting gestures...we can only offer a loving helping hand..🌹
October 31st, 2019 16:19
Love vs Fire
Fay Slimm. said:
A gorgeous colour to choose for a love-smitten river of emotions\" is blood-red -fire dear Alta. I just adore that final line.
October 27th, 2019 12:32
Fay Slimm. said:
A gorgeous colour to choose for a love-smitten river of emotions\" is blood-red -fire dear Alta. I just adore that final line.
October 27th, 2019 12:32
I hold your hand
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Alta, I have a friend who has cancer and I took her to hospital yesterday for her daily chemo therapy.
October 24th, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Alta, I have a friend who has cancer and I took her to hospital yesterday for her daily chemo therapy.
October 24th, 2019 00:38
I hold your hand
FredPeyer said:
Alta, with friends like you our lives would be so much better and easier! Beautiful poem!
October 23rd, 2019 18:40
FredPeyer said:
Alta, with friends like you our lives would be so much better and easier! Beautiful poem!
October 23rd, 2019 18:40
I hold your hand
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Alta. Just \'being there\' can really help.
Meanwhile - a ligther side - cooeeee, you here for me?! I\'m always here. I never go! heehee.
October 23rd, 2019 14:24
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Alta. Just \'being there\' can really help.
Meanwhile - a ligther side - cooeeee, you here for me?! I\'m always here. I never go! heehee.
October 23rd, 2019 14:24
Beauty in the storm
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Superb haiku captures nature vividly and with muse comparison. Kudos.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 13:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Superb haiku captures nature vividly and with muse comparison. Kudos.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 13:13
Beauty in the storm
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta. It made a storm, and a big mess anyway, when I was about to empty me hole-punch, and the bottom of it fell off when I picked it up! Always tricky if a bottom falls off. lol.
October 19th, 2019 11:29
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta. It made a storm, and a big mess anyway, when I was about to empty me hole-punch, and the bottom of it fell off when I picked it up! Always tricky if a bottom falls off. lol.
October 19th, 2019 11:29
You are
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams come true Alta, with words like this they will.
Andy
October 17th, 2019 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams come true Alta, with words like this they will.
Andy
October 17th, 2019 00:15
You are
Thoughts In Time said:
Beautiful...yes in our dreams..if only it was so but we cannot stop believing ...🌹
October 16th, 2019 15:14
Thoughts In Time said:
Beautiful...yes in our dreams..if only it was so but we cannot stop believing ...🌹
October 16th, 2019 15:14
Treasured memories
orchidee said:
I\'m missing all this, ya know. I\'m on my way! And will I enjoy it? Is it a case of \'I don\'t know what I\'m missing?\' or \'What I don\'t know, won\'t hurt me?!\' heehee. A fine write Alta.
October 16th, 2019 01:26
orchidee said:
I\'m missing all this, ya know. I\'m on my way! And will I enjoy it? Is it a case of \'I don\'t know what I\'m missing?\' or \'What I don\'t know, won\'t hurt me?!\' heehee. A fine write Alta.
October 16th, 2019 01:26
Morning brew and perfect moments with you
Goldfinch60 said:
That morning brew is what gets us going for the day. Colombian for me please.
October 15th, 2019 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That morning brew is what gets us going for the day. Colombian for me please.
October 15th, 2019 00:49
Morning brew and perfect moments with you
dusk arising said:
Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it whilst he\'s away?
October 14th, 2019 16:15
dusk arising said:
Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it whilst he\'s away?
October 14th, 2019 16:15
Morning brew and perfect moments with you
orchidee said:
I\'m on me way there! lol.
October 14th, 2019 14:01
orchidee said:
I\'m on me way there! lol.
October 14th, 2019 14:01
Morning brew and perfect moments with you
dusk arising said:
Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it whilst he\'s away?
October 14th, 2019 12:49
dusk arising said:
Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it whilst he\'s away?
October 14th, 2019 12:49
My love for you will never die
dusk arising said:
Firstly, an excuse, you\'ll never find me a fan of mixed arithmetic and poetry (haiku etc)..
This reminds me of how i used to feel towards a certain lost lover (or two). Then somehow i learned to love myself. Everything changed! Love itself changed, was enhanced by a new awareness. Now i love that the \'heroine\' was able to move on into a more hopefully suitable situation.
October 13th, 2019 13:15
dusk arising said:
Firstly, an excuse, you\'ll never find me a fan of mixed arithmetic and poetry (haiku etc)..
This reminds me of how i used to feel towards a certain lost lover (or two). Then somehow i learned to love myself. Everything changed! Love itself changed, was enhanced by a new awareness. Now i love that the \'heroine\' was able to move on into a more hopefully suitable situation.
October 13th, 2019 13:15
My love for you will never die
Jamie said:
That’s a powerful emotional drop!
October 13th, 2019 13:06
Jamie said:
That’s a powerful emotional drop!
October 13th, 2019 13:06
My love for you will never die
orchidee said:
Ooohh, it\'ll all be OK. I\'ll stay with ya! Ya knew I would! lol.
October 13th, 2019 12:50
orchidee said:
Ooohh, it\'ll all be OK. I\'ll stay with ya! Ya knew I would! lol.
October 13th, 2019 12:50
A darker shade of grey
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but time will heal and the colours will come back into your life and all you will remember are the good times.
October 12th, 2019 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but time will heal and the colours will come back into your life and all you will remember are the good times.
October 12th, 2019 00:24
A darker shade of grey
dusk arising said:
Emotional writing from the moment. Fresh and vivid.
Well captured and expressed here.
October 11th, 2019 14:13
dusk arising said:
Emotional writing from the moment. Fresh and vivid.
Well captured and expressed here.
October 11th, 2019 14:13
A darker shade of grey
Thoughts In Time said:
Memories and heartache hit deep but tomorrow is another day joy blooms in the morning ...removing grey to allow brightness to play ...🌹
October 11th, 2019 11:44
Thoughts In Time said:
Memories and heartache hit deep but tomorrow is another day joy blooms in the morning ...removing grey to allow brightness to play ...🌹
October 11th, 2019 11:44
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