Comments received on poems by Alta H Mabin



Running into the night
orchidee said:

OK, here\'s my hand. You got a torch? Can\'t see much in this dark night!

November 1st, 2019 02:43

Running into the night
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Alta, may we all be there to help others in need.

November 1st, 2019 01:29

Running into the night
Thoughts In Time said:

Beautiful words and comforting gestures...we can only offer a loving helping hand..🌹

October 31st, 2019 16:19

Love vs Fire
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love be forever with you Alta.

October 28th, 2019 02:14

Love vs Fire
Fay Slimm. said:

A gorgeous colour to choose for a love-smitten river of emotions\" is blood-red -fire dear Alta. I just adore that final line.

October 27th, 2019 12:32

I hold your hand
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Alta, I have a friend who has cancer and I took her to hospital yesterday for her daily chemo therapy.

October 24th, 2019 00:38

I hold your hand
FredPeyer said:

Alta, with friends like you our lives would be so much better and easier! Beautiful poem!

October 23rd, 2019 18:40

I hold your hand
Neville said:

tis true....

October 23rd, 2019 17:14

I hold your hand
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Alta. Just \'being there\' can really help.
Meanwhile - a ligther side - cooeeee, you here for me?! I\'m always here. I never go! heehee.

October 23rd, 2019 14:24

Beauty in the storm
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Superb haiku captures nature vividly and with muse comparison. Kudos.


Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.

October 22nd, 2019 13:13

Beauty in the storm
Goldfinch60 said:

Good haiku Alta.

October 20th, 2019 00:38

Beauty in the storm
Neville said:

Brevity at its finest..

October 19th, 2019 11:47

Beauty in the storm
orchidee said:

A fine write Alta. It made a storm, and a big mess anyway, when I was about to empty me hole-punch, and the bottom of it fell off when I picked it up! Always tricky if a bottom falls off. lol.

October 19th, 2019 11:29

You are
orchidee said:

A fine write Alta.

October 17th, 2019 02:00

You are
Goldfinch60 said:

May those dreams come true Alta, with words like this they will.

Andy

October 17th, 2019 00:15

You are
Thoughts In Time said:

Beautiful...yes in our dreams..if only it was so but we cannot stop believing ...🌹

October 16th, 2019 15:14

You are
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Nicely done Ally ~ very nice.

Ex animo, Alan

October 16th, 2019 13:14

You are
Jamie said:

Great morning read!

October 16th, 2019 11:31

Treasured memories
orchidee said:

I\'m missing all this, ya know. I\'m on my way! And will I enjoy it? Is it a case of \'I don\'t know what I\'m missing?\' or \'What I don\'t know, won\'t hurt me?!\' heehee. A fine write Alta.

October 16th, 2019 01:26

Morning brew and perfect moments with you
Goldfinch60 said:

That morning brew is what gets us going for the day. Colombian for me please.

October 15th, 2019 00:49

Morning brew and perfect moments with you
dusk arising said:

Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it whilst he\'s away?


October 14th, 2019 16:15

Morning brew and perfect moments with you
orchidee said:

I\'m on me way there! lol.

October 14th, 2019 14:01

Morning brew and perfect moments with you
dusk arising said:

Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it whilst he\'s away?


October 14th, 2019 12:49

My love for you will never die
Goldfinch60 said:

Powerful Senryu Alta.

October 14th, 2019 00:33

My love for you will never die
dusk arising said:

Firstly, an excuse, you\'ll never find me a fan of mixed arithmetic and poetry (haiku etc)..

This reminds me of how i used to feel towards a certain lost lover (or two). Then somehow i learned to love myself. Everything changed! Love itself changed, was enhanced by a new awareness. Now i love that the \'heroine\' was able to move on into a more hopefully suitable situation.

October 13th, 2019 13:15

My love for you will never die
Jamie said:

That’s a powerful emotional drop!

October 13th, 2019 13:06

My love for you will never die
orchidee said:

Ooohh, it\'ll all be OK. I\'ll stay with ya! Ya knew I would! lol.

October 13th, 2019 12:50

A darker shade of grey
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write but time will heal and the colours will come back into your life and all you will remember are the good times.

October 12th, 2019 00:24

A darker shade of grey
dusk arising said:

Emotional writing from the moment. Fresh and vivid.

Well captured and expressed here.

October 11th, 2019 14:13

A darker shade of grey
Thoughts In Time said:

Memories and heartache hit deep but tomorrow is another day joy blooms in the morning ...removing grey to allow brightness to play ...🌹

October 11th, 2019 11:44

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