Comments received on poems by Alta H Mabin
Only you
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a heart-rending read Alta - hoping it was not written from experience............ if so then all my sincere condolences.
September 25th, 2019 02:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a heart-rending read Alta - hoping it was not written from experience............ if so then all my sincere condolences.
September 25th, 2019 02:26
Only you
dusk arising said:
What changed? Why don\'t you do what you used to do in verse one anymore?
You\'ll upset Orchidee toying with his emotions so.
September 25th, 2019 01:40
dusk arising said:
What changed? Why don\'t you do what you used to do in verse one anymore?
You\'ll upset Orchidee toying with his emotions so.
September 25th, 2019 01:40
Only you
orchidee said:
Ohh, swoon, you knew it was me, though I was in disguise! heehee. Cooeee, I\'m here, like a friend in need, who can sometimes be..... a pest! lol.
September 25th, 2019 01:26
orchidee said:
Ohh, swoon, you knew it was me, though I was in disguise! heehee. Cooeee, I\'m here, like a friend in need, who can sometimes be..... a pest! lol.
September 25th, 2019 01:26
Not so perfect, dinner for one
FredPeyer said:
What I find most sad in this poem is how that self-assured, relaxed and happy, silky and sexy woman turns into a teary and lonely creature. Well written Alta.
September 24th, 2019 12:14
FredPeyer said:
What I find most sad in this poem is how that self-assured, relaxed and happy, silky and sexy woman turns into a teary and lonely creature. Well written Alta.
September 24th, 2019 12:14
Not so perfect, dinner for one
Neville said:
No one aint not gonna like this... I know I do..
September 24th, 2019 09:38
Neville said:
No one aint not gonna like this... I know I do..
September 24th, 2019 09:38
Not so perfect, dinner for one
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Better to dine alone, Ally, than dine with the devil.
Ex animo, Alan
September 24th, 2019 05:07
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Better to dine alone, Ally, than dine with the devil.
Ex animo, Alan
September 24th, 2019 05:07
Not so perfect, dinner for one
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - sighs after reading these words dear Alta. -A tale so well told and if from experience a heart-rending account as well.
September 24th, 2019 04:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - sighs after reading these words dear Alta. -A tale so well told and if from experience a heart-rending account as well.
September 24th, 2019 04:38
Not so perfect, dinner for one
dusk arising said:
Firmly entrenched as a singleton now mealtimes are no occasion at all.
The ceremony of high dining would be enjoyable no doubt but looking at the long game.... is it ever worth it..... a step in the direction of eventually finding out t hey weren\'t the one anyway. (me in pessimistic mode)
September 24th, 2019 02:40
dusk arising said:
Firmly entrenched as a singleton now mealtimes are no occasion at all.
The ceremony of high dining would be enjoyable no doubt but looking at the long game.... is it ever worth it..... a step in the direction of eventually finding out t hey weren\'t the one anyway. (me in pessimistic mode)
September 24th, 2019 02:40
Not so perfect, dinner for one
orchidee said:
Ooohh, just give us a call, and I\'ll pop round! Then you won\'t be alone. I might swoon though, if you\'re \'silky and sexy\'! lol.
September 24th, 2019 01:32
orchidee said:
Ooohh, just give us a call, and I\'ll pop round! Then you won\'t be alone. I might swoon though, if you\'re \'silky and sexy\'! lol.
September 24th, 2019 01:32
Not so perfect, dinner for one
Goldfinch60 said:
Dinner for one can be so sad.
September 24th, 2019 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Dinner for one can be so sad.
September 24th, 2019 01:24
Waiting
FredPeyer said:
Great Haiku. Today I didn\'t have to wait for the rain, it started even before I got up and is still going strong. Am now waiting for the sun! :-)
September 23rd, 2019 19:53
FredPeyer said:
Great Haiku. Today I didn\'t have to wait for the rain, it started even before I got up and is still going strong. Am now waiting for the sun! :-)
September 23rd, 2019 19:53
I made a vow
FredPeyer said:
Are you saying that opposites attract?
Beautiful poem!
September 23rd, 2019 19:45
FredPeyer said:
Are you saying that opposites attract?
Beautiful poem!
September 23rd, 2019 19:45
The beauty in pain
FredPeyer said:
I do like your poem. True beauty comes from the inside. The beauty emerges not only from how we reflect that pain but also from how we handle it, i.e. with dignity, compassion, and empathy. With just a few words you captured it perfectly.
September 23rd, 2019 19:37
FredPeyer said:
I do like your poem. True beauty comes from the inside. The beauty emerges not only from how we reflect that pain but also from how we handle it, i.e. with dignity, compassion, and empathy. With just a few words you captured it perfectly.
September 23rd, 2019 19:37
Waiting
dusk arising said:
Sad that many such human beauties appear to be awaiting stormy weather.
Maybe they get hurt too young.
September 23rd, 2019 02:51
dusk arising said:
Sad that many such human beauties appear to be awaiting stormy weather.
Maybe they get hurt too young.
September 23rd, 2019 02:51
Waiting
orchidee said:
A lovely write Alta. I don\'t expect the butterfly is waiting for me to sing. If it hears me, it will fly away! lol.
September 23rd, 2019 01:21
orchidee said:
A lovely write Alta. I don\'t expect the butterfly is waiting for me to sing. If it hears me, it will fly away! lol.
September 23rd, 2019 01:21
I made a vow
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta. The easiest vow to make? Erm, to stop listening to my singing?! lol.
September 22nd, 2019 01:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta. The easiest vow to make? Erm, to stop listening to my singing?! lol.
September 22nd, 2019 01:34
The beauty in pain
dusk arising said:
Emotional pain can be a great teacher for us. Well that has been my experience. However, as can be seen in some younger poets on mps, pain can distort one\'s outlook and take one to dark places where entrapment temps lurkingly.
Great thought provoking writing.
September 21st, 2019 02:48
dusk arising said:
Emotional pain can be a great teacher for us. Well that has been my experience. However, as can be seen in some younger poets on mps, pain can distort one\'s outlook and take one to dark places where entrapment temps lurkingly.
Great thought provoking writing.
September 21st, 2019 02:48
The beauty in pain
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta. Now I thought you meant my singing, cos there may bb beauty in my melodious tones. But there sure is pain, as it sounds to the ears as two cats fighting. So they say! heehee.
September 21st, 2019 01:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta. Now I thought you meant my singing, cos there may bb beauty in my melodious tones. But there sure is pain, as it sounds to the ears as two cats fighting. So they say! heehee.
September 21st, 2019 01:42
To the sounds of Debussy
orchidee said:
A good write Alta.
I\'m on my way.......! heehee. Get some of Deb\'s music out. Very un-cultured there, calling him Debs. Should I called Beethoven \'Beet\'?
Wish I would shut up sometimes. lol.
September 20th, 2019 01:58
orchidee said:
A good write Alta.
I\'m on my way.......! heehee. Get some of Deb\'s music out. Very un-cultured there, calling him Debs. Should I called Beethoven \'Beet\'?
Wish I would shut up sometimes. lol.
September 20th, 2019 01:58
To the sounds of Debussy
Fay Slimm. said:
What a great way to go to sleep and then awake - - -and all beside a loved one .
September 20th, 2019 01:26
Fay Slimm. said:
What a great way to go to sleep and then awake - - -and all beside a loved one .
September 20th, 2019 01:26
To the sounds of Debussy
FredPeyer said:
This one took my breath away! Thanks for the \'inhale...exhale\' lines!
September 20th, 2019 00:56
FredPeyer said:
This one took my breath away! Thanks for the \'inhale...exhale\' lines!
September 20th, 2019 00:56
My son, Jaden
FredPeyer said:
After three kids and now six grand children I agree with you one 100%. Well written!
September 20th, 2019 00:50
FredPeyer said:
After three kids and now six grand children I agree with you one 100%. Well written!
September 20th, 2019 00:50
Perky pyramids
FredPeyer said:
Alta, your short poem really got me thinking. Maybe I am overthinking this, but without the heart it ain\'t love, even though it can be beautiful.
September 20th, 2019 00:47
FredPeyer said:
Alta, your short poem really got me thinking. Maybe I am overthinking this, but without the heart it ain\'t love, even though it can be beautiful.
September 20th, 2019 00:47
To the sounds of Debussy
dusk arising said:
Et tu ma Claire de Lune?
Lovely loving words to one of my fav classic composers.
mmm that morning dance to Golliwogs Cakewalk perhaps?
September 20th, 2019 00:21
dusk arising said:
Et tu ma Claire de Lune?
Lovely loving words to one of my fav classic composers.
mmm that morning dance to Golliwogs Cakewalk perhaps?
September 20th, 2019 00:21
Perky pyramids
orchidee said:
You knows really, Orchi - dark horse! heehee.
September 19th, 2019 01:39
orchidee said:
You knows really, Orchi - dark horse! heehee.
September 19th, 2019 01:39
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