Comments received on poems by Alta H Mabin
Perky pyramids
orchidee said:
Them perky things will make me swoon! But then again, so does anything remotely \'hot\'! heehee.
Erm, I can only guess you are in Egypt. I wouldn\'t know what else them pyramids are. Hmmm, lol.
September 19th, 2019 01:39
orchidee said:
Them perky things will make me swoon! But then again, so does anything remotely \'hot\'! heehee.
Erm, I can only guess you are in Egypt. I wouldn\'t know what else them pyramids are. Hmmm, lol.
September 19th, 2019 01:39
Perky pyramids
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes love is beautiful, more so if you can avoid the beautiful pyramids and reach the heart
Love is beautiful,
Avoiding the pyramids,
And reaching the heart.
September 19th, 2019 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes love is beautiful, more so if you can avoid the beautiful pyramids and reach the heart
Love is beautiful,
Avoiding the pyramids,
And reaching the heart.
September 19th, 2019 00:40
Perky pyramids
dusk arising said:
Love is beautiful in all it\'s forms yes. But those perky pyramids can be such a lustful distraction.
September 19th, 2019 00:07
dusk arising said:
Love is beautiful in all it\'s forms yes. But those perky pyramids can be such a lustful distraction.
September 19th, 2019 00:07
je t\'aime
dusk arising said:
Thank you Alta, I was so worried you wouldn\'t love my bits inbetween.
September 18th, 2019 06:09
dusk arising said:
Thank you Alta, I was so worried you wouldn\'t love my bits inbetween.
September 18th, 2019 06:09
je t\'aime
orchidee said:
I never knew you \'aime\'d\' me that much! heehee.
September 18th, 2019 03:41
orchidee said:
I never knew you \'aime\'d\' me that much! heehee.
September 18th, 2019 03:41
The hope of a sunflower
Neville said:
surrounded by sunflowers
but not a cloud in the sky....
a lovely little haiku my friend.... N
September 17th, 2019 14:02
Neville said:
surrounded by sunflowers
but not a cloud in the sky....
a lovely little haiku my friend.... N
September 17th, 2019 14:02
The hope of a sunflower
dusk arising said:
I\'m not a fan of mixing arithmetic/forulae to poetry. However yours is cleverly done here with meaningful conclusion.
September 17th, 2019 12:38
dusk arising said:
I\'m not a fan of mixing arithmetic/forulae to poetry. However yours is cleverly done here with meaningful conclusion.
September 17th, 2019 12:38
The hope of a sunflower
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a splendidly telling haiku again Alta.
September 17th, 2019 02:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a splendidly telling haiku again Alta.
September 17th, 2019 02:21
What women need 101
Goldfinch60 said:
May your needs be fulfilled with love (and good coffee of course).
September 17th, 2019 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
May your needs be fulfilled with love (and good coffee of course).
September 17th, 2019 00:30
What women need 101
Fay Slimm. said:
That\'s saying it and rhyming it beautifully Alta - - - hope those needs are met my friend ............... Fay
September 16th, 2019 07:24
Fay Slimm. said:
That\'s saying it and rhyming it beautifully Alta - - - hope those needs are met my friend ............... Fay
September 16th, 2019 07:24
What women need 101
Neville said:
what could be better than that eh\' you got me for a little while at least ...
Neville
September 16th, 2019 07:09
Neville said:
what could be better than that eh\' you got me for a little while at least ...
Neville
September 16th, 2019 07:09
My son, Jaden
Fay Slimm. said:
No tribute could be more filled with love and your son will surely treasure each line Alta. Thank you for sharing it
September 14th, 2019 14:40
Fay Slimm. said:
No tribute could be more filled with love and your son will surely treasure each line Alta. Thank you for sharing it
September 14th, 2019 14:40
My son, Jaden
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful tribute to your Son Alta I think this is he only unbreakable love there is.
Perfectly captured forever.
September 14th, 2019 02:58
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful tribute to your Son Alta I think this is he only unbreakable love there is.
Perfectly captured forever.
September 14th, 2019 02:58
My son, Jaden
Neville said:
A lovely poem indeed.. I suspect you are both very lucky and I say that unreservedly..... N
September 14th, 2019 02:54
Neville said:
A lovely poem indeed.. I suspect you are both very lucky and I say that unreservedly..... N
September 14th, 2019 02:54
My son, Jaden
Goldfinch60 said:
\" I love you
... unconditionally\"
As all parents should do to their children.
September 14th, 2019 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
\" I love you
... unconditionally\"
As all parents should do to their children.
September 14th, 2019 00:28
Right here
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Margie... Can you run me a bath please... I\'ll be up in a minute I\'ve just got to read this again!
September 13th, 2019 04:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Margie... Can you run me a bath please... I\'ll be up in a minute I\'ve just got to read this again!
September 13th, 2019 04:34
Right here
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - my favourite way of re-living the good times - bath-time as your verse states brings senses alive. Thanks for writing it right into my day dear Alta.
September 13th, 2019 03:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - my favourite way of re-living the good times - bath-time as your verse states brings senses alive. Thanks for writing it right into my day dear Alta.
September 13th, 2019 03:23
Right here
Neville said:
No one ever told me bath time could be such fun.....
Neville ...
September 13th, 2019 00:29
Neville said:
No one ever told me bath time could be such fun.....
Neville ...
September 13th, 2019 00:29
A to Z and you and me
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great form Alta
Lovely emotions and memories
September 12th, 2019 14:21
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great form Alta
Lovely emotions and memories
September 12th, 2019 14:21
A to Z and you and me
dusk arising said:
I\'m reading the algebra of a love equation i think. A over Z = a story of mutual bliss.
September 12th, 2019 11:55
dusk arising said:
I\'m reading the algebra of a love equation i think. A over Z = a story of mutual bliss.
September 12th, 2019 11:55
A to Z and you and me
Bragee said:
Nice write. Way to capture a vivid image of love in a pure and innocent form!
September 12th, 2019 09:25
Bragee said:
Nice write. Way to capture a vivid image of love in a pure and innocent form!
September 12th, 2019 09:25
A to Z and you and me
Neville said:
sounds just like my idea of heaven...
Reads like my kind of alphabet.. who\'s gonna want to wake up after this... N
September 12th, 2019 07:05
Neville said:
sounds just like my idea of heaven...
Reads like my kind of alphabet.. who\'s gonna want to wake up after this... N
September 12th, 2019 07:05
A to Z and you and me
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen a clear picture of sheer contentment when love grows between two like minds.
September 12th, 2019 04:26
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen a clear picture of sheer contentment when love grows between two like minds.
September 12th, 2019 04:26
To the heavens
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sunshine follows the rain...
Winters thaw...
September 11th, 2019 06:54
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sunshine follows the rain...
Winters thaw...
September 11th, 2019 06:54
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