Comments received on poems by Alta H Mabin
A darker shade of grey
orchidee said:
Not 50 shades of that grey, or I will swoon! heehee. How would I know? And what am I doing? Am I going to see the film?! oohh.
October 11th, 2019 11:42
orchidee said:
Not 50 shades of that grey, or I will swoon! heehee. How would I know? And what am I doing? Am I going to see the film?! oohh.
October 11th, 2019 11:42
Colorful accessories and grey memories
Goldfinch60 said:
I think we all do this to some extent but both good and bad feelings are shown.
October 11th, 2019 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
I think we all do this to some extent but both good and bad feelings are shown.
October 11th, 2019 01:39
Colorful accessories and grey memories
FredPeyer said:
Alta, you are very good at putting the pain and melancholy into words that move the reader!
October 10th, 2019 21:03
FredPeyer said:
Alta, you are very good at putting the pain and melancholy into words that move the reader!
October 10th, 2019 21:03
Colorful accessories and grey memories
dusk arising said:
The days go on, their beauty pushed aside by dark clouds of inner turmoil which overrules and challenges our control.
Resolute we know the days will ease and pains will give way to laughter somewhere, somehow, and it does, somewhere, somehow.
Superb piece of melancholy expressed here which drew me right in.
October 10th, 2019 11:36
dusk arising said:
The days go on, their beauty pushed aside by dark clouds of inner turmoil which overrules and challenges our control.
Resolute we know the days will ease and pains will give way to laughter somewhere, somehow, and it does, somewhere, somehow.
Superb piece of melancholy expressed here which drew me right in.
October 10th, 2019 11:36
Colorful accessories and grey memories
Clara said:
Alta, I can sense such deep pain and sorrow in your words but such bravery to continue your day. Letting your emotions out is sometimes the only way we can start our day with a clear mind... until we lose ourselves again. Great work.
October 10th, 2019 04:20
Clara said:
Alta, I can sense such deep pain and sorrow in your words but such bravery to continue your day. Letting your emotions out is sometimes the only way we can start our day with a clear mind... until we lose ourselves again. Great work.
October 10th, 2019 04:20
Colorful accessories and grey memories
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes dear Alta writing out our sorrows and anguish at losing love is the only way to cope at times......... a solemn read but with wise advice to those undergoing such trials.
October 10th, 2019 03:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes dear Alta writing out our sorrows and anguish at losing love is the only way to cope at times......... a solemn read but with wise advice to those undergoing such trials.
October 10th, 2019 03:16
Colorful accessories and grey memories
orchidee said:
Aww, I\'ll come back then. I won\'t stay away, if you\'re having a bad-hair day! heehee.
October 10th, 2019 02:42
orchidee said:
Aww, I\'ll come back then. I won\'t stay away, if you\'re having a bad-hair day! heehee.
October 10th, 2019 02:42
Morning coffee
orchidee said:
I best be on my way to you, for some of that. I\'ll have what he\'s having! lol. But, woof, my imaginary watchdog, Fido, won\'t let me have anything \'exciting!\' heehee.
October 10th, 2019 01:49
orchidee said:
I best be on my way to you, for some of that. I\'ll have what he\'s having! lol. But, woof, my imaginary watchdog, Fido, won\'t let me have anything \'exciting!\' heehee.
October 10th, 2019 01:49
Morning coffee
Goldfinch60 said:
May those precious moments always be there for you Alta, I am sure that they will.
October 10th, 2019 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May those precious moments always be there for you Alta, I am sure that they will.
October 10th, 2019 00:59
Morning coffee
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a warm and romantic scene you describe and so well Alta - thank you for sharing it.
October 9th, 2019 15:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a warm and romantic scene you describe and so well Alta - thank you for sharing it.
October 9th, 2019 15:33
Morning coffee
dusk arising said:
Yes, the moments of essence, moments when pleasure alleviates all.
October 9th, 2019 15:24
dusk arising said:
Yes, the moments of essence, moments when pleasure alleviates all.
October 9th, 2019 15:24
Morning coffee
FredPeyer said:
Alta, the only thing you missed are the wine tipped lips. Otherwise, a beautiful poem and declaration of love.
October 9th, 2019 15:15
FredPeyer said:
Alta, the only thing you missed are the wine tipped lips. Otherwise, a beautiful poem and declaration of love.
October 9th, 2019 15:15
Morning coffee
Thoughts In Time said:
Coffee is one of the best things first thing in the morning ..bringing an awakening that only certain substances can...lovely write..from one South African to another...🌹
October 9th, 2019 15:11
Thoughts In Time said:
Coffee is one of the best things first thing in the morning ..bringing an awakening that only certain substances can...lovely write..from one South African to another...🌹
October 9th, 2019 15:11
The perfect gentleman
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Alta and what dusk arising said is so true.
October 8th, 2019 23:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Alta and what dusk arising said is so true.
October 8th, 2019 23:41
The perfect gentleman
Poetic Dan said:
I agree with gentleman above, we wait in ocean of a woman\'s love!
Great work
October 8th, 2019 17:53
Poetic Dan said:
I agree with gentleman above, we wait in ocean of a woman\'s love!
Great work
October 8th, 2019 17:53
The perfect gentleman
dusk arising said:
A gentleman will never demand, he awaits your pleasure.
October 8th, 2019 15:22
dusk arising said:
A gentleman will never demand, he awaits your pleasure.
October 8th, 2019 15:22
Bounded dreams - A collaboration with Andy N (Poetry Novelist)
orchidee said:
Good write Alta. You mean me again?! I\'m a pest, keep upsetting you! heehee.
October 7th, 2019 01:46
orchidee said:
Good write Alta. You mean me again?! I\'m a pest, keep upsetting you! heehee.
October 7th, 2019 01:46
Bounded dreams - A collaboration with Andy N (Poetry Novelist)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write.
October 6th, 2019 15:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write.
October 6th, 2019 15:12
Lonely heart
orchidee said:
C\'mon now gal. I told ya - one will never be lonely with me! heehee.
October 6th, 2019 01:23
orchidee said:
C\'mon now gal. I told ya - one will never be lonely with me! heehee.
October 6th, 2019 01:23
Lonely heart
FredPeyer said:
Like it, Alta. We know that the sun is always shining somewhere. While it might be night in South Africa, I am dancing in the sunshine in Hawaii.
October 5th, 2019 14:10
FredPeyer said:
Like it, Alta. We know that the sun is always shining somewhere. While it might be night in South Africa, I am dancing in the sunshine in Hawaii.
October 5th, 2019 14:10
I am a dreamer
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
...and you are not alone
Great write, Love hurts
BRAVO!
October 4th, 2019 05:01
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
...and you are not alone
Great write, Love hurts
BRAVO!
October 4th, 2019 05:01
I am a dreamer
Fay Slimm. said:
Dreamers tag onto a fanciful memory and keep enlarging to help life along........... as do us poets dear Alta.......... good read.
October 4th, 2019 04:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Dreamers tag onto a fanciful memory and keep enlarging to help life along........... as do us poets dear Alta.......... good read.
October 4th, 2019 04:21
I am a dreamer
orchidee said:
Oohh let\'s not dream, let\'s have it for real. Have what?! heehee.
October 4th, 2019 02:28
orchidee said:
Oohh let\'s not dream, let\'s have it for real. Have what?! heehee.
October 4th, 2019 02:28
I am a dreamer
FredPeyer said:
We are all dreamers, Alta. At the end that is all we have left. Your great poem reminds me of the old saying: Better to have loved and lost that not to have loved at all.
October 4th, 2019 01:47
FredPeyer said:
We are all dreamers, Alta. At the end that is all we have left. Your great poem reminds me of the old saying: Better to have loved and lost that not to have loved at all.
October 4th, 2019 01:47
Waves crashing
Fay Slimm. said:
Soul mates are ever connected and as your verse points to the stars as the place of your loving dreams the words resurrect the same feelings for this poet too Alta. - a lovely read.
October 3rd, 2019 02:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Soul mates are ever connected and as your verse points to the stars as the place of your loving dreams the words resurrect the same feelings for this poet too Alta. - a lovely read.
October 3rd, 2019 02:11
Waves crashing
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stars are holes in heavens floor where we will all be one day. Not too soon though.
Wonderful words Alta.
October 3rd, 2019 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stars are holes in heavens floor where we will all be one day. Not too soon though.
Wonderful words Alta.
October 3rd, 2019 01:34
Waves crashing
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta. OK I won\'t go, if this is the theme of the poem? I\'ll stay. I never realised it would so dramatic if I left ya. lol.
October 3rd, 2019 01:12
orchidee said:
A fine write Alta. OK I won\'t go, if this is the theme of the poem? I\'ll stay. I never realised it would so dramatic if I left ya. lol.
October 3rd, 2019 01:12
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