Comments received on poems by Alta H Mabin



Pick up the pieces
dusk arising said:

They are the making of us.

October 1st, 2019 18:58

Midnight rendezvous
dusk arising said:

All ingredients of the evenings recipe for love....

October 1st, 2019 12:18

Midnight rendezvous
Bragee said:

Great writing.
Very enchanting type feeling.

October 1st, 2019 11:19

Midnight rendezvous
orchidee said:

Oohh, I should be in bed by then - on me own! OK then, I\'ll stay out late and let my hair down! lol.

October 1st, 2019 10:50

Midnight rendezvous
Neville said:

delightful and then some..

October 1st, 2019 08:08

Pick up the pieces
Fay Slimm. said:

Picking up pieces can often take much more time than any of us realize - good points made Alta.

September 30th, 2019 08:16

Pick up the pieces
Neville said:

true enough..... and well said say\'s I ....

September 30th, 2019 06:42

Pick up the pieces
Goldfinch60 said:

Those broken pieces are part of our experience in life and in life experience cannot be taught.

September 30th, 2019 01:52

Pick up the pieces
orchidee said:

It\'s difficult if we can\'t seem to move on beyond them.
Meanwhile - no one seems to move on beyond my singing. It scars them for life! lol.

September 30th, 2019 01:41

I know
Fay Slimm. said:

Yea the right love can always be felt whether near or far true hearts ever beat as one........... a lovely read Alta

September 29th, 2019 05:35

I know
Neville said:

that\'s a whole lotta love...

Neville

September 29th, 2019 04:24

I know
orchidee said:

A fine write Alta. Ain\'t no-one who forgets me! I hang around like a ….pest! heehee.

September 29th, 2019 01:34

Ancient love
FredPeyer said:

No matter how ancient, once love is in your heart, it stays. I like your poem.

September 28th, 2019 14:39

Ancient love
Clara said:

Love whether new or ancient, is probably the most powerful force. It cannot be denied. Emotive write Alta. Sending blessings to you.

September 28th, 2019 13:48

Ancient love
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Ghosts in the heart Alta... beautiful

September 28th, 2019 05:12

Ancient love
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive write Alta, that love will always be with you.

September 28th, 2019 04:50

Ancient love
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Beautifully written and presented work, Ally, 8.00 am Saturday morning here and a fine start to my day.

Ex animo, Alan

September 28th, 2019 02:04

Ancient love
orchidee said:

How do you know me? This one\'s about me too - the \'ancient\' bit anyway! heehee. A fine write Alta.

September 28th, 2019 01:32

Just once more
Clara said:

Wonderful way of seeing the world. Lovely poem.

September 27th, 2019 08:41

Just once more
Fay Slimm. said:

As long as we see we can write clearly about all around us for others to take note........ a lovely read Alta.

September 27th, 2019 05:21

Just once more
Neville said:

I concur, there is indeed beauty all around...

September 27th, 2019 03:39

Just once more
orchidee said:

Ok, I\'ll smile once more time for ya - like a Cheshire cat smile! lol.

September 27th, 2019 01:47

Just once more
Goldfinch60 said:

Beauty is all around us, all we need to do is look.

September 27th, 2019 01:34

Breathe
Goldfinch60 said:

Breathe in the glory of each moment, moments are so important in our lives, treasure them.

September 27th, 2019 00:45

Breathe
FredPeyer said:

Alta, thank you!
It is 8am here and your poem is exactly what I needed this morning. Beautiful writing!

September 26th, 2019 13:01

Breathe
Clara said:

Comforting little poem. What will be will be :)

September 26th, 2019 08:53

Breathe
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

You know, Ally, actuALLY every morning the dawn rises in order to greet YOU, for that is the reason it is there. Your S.A. dawn must be a sight to behold.

Ex animo, Alan

September 26th, 2019 08:37

Breathe
Neville said:

dark roast... my favourite...

September 26th, 2019 08:04

Breathe
orchidee said:

Dark roast, eh? Or you on the gin?! heehee. I wish I would shut up sometimes! lol.

September 26th, 2019 07:56

Breathe
Fay Slimm. said:

And what better to reconcile a distracting dawn with than quietly breathing in its new offerings. Thanks Alta for pointers to find a way through daily challenges.

September 26th, 2019 07:55

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