Comments received on poems by Clara
Sweet Female
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words in this verse have flowed so well with a subject we often feel strongly about yet are reluctant to deal with ..... a compelling read Clara
March 4th, 2020 11:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words in this verse have flowed so well with a subject we often feel strongly about yet are reluctant to deal with ..... a compelling read Clara
March 4th, 2020 11:57
Generation World Saviours
Fay Slimm. said:
How vivid the picture your words paint in this re-cap of yesteryear when the world was our oyster and we all overflowed with plans for technology to take over the world and how sad the results - you verse it so well dear Clara and thank you for this solemn wake-up to a dangerous future which most certainly needs generation world-saviours.
March 4th, 2020 03:06
Fay Slimm. said:
How vivid the picture your words paint in this re-cap of yesteryear when the world was our oyster and we all overflowed with plans for technology to take over the world and how sad the results - you verse it so well dear Clara and thank you for this solemn wake-up to a dangerous future which most certainly needs generation world-saviours.
March 4th, 2020 03:06
Generation World Saviours
Goldfinch60 said:
That dream to save the world is within most of us except those who can see money and power through letting the world die.
Andy
March 4th, 2020 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
That dream to save the world is within most of us except those who can see money and power through letting the world die.
Andy
March 4th, 2020 02:17
His Masterpiece
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful artwork in your words Clara.
Andy
March 3rd, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful artwork in your words Clara.
Andy
March 3rd, 2020 01:27
His Masterpiece
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
You paint a vivid picture here, Clara, I think it will take a while for the paint to dry. The artist has chosen his pallet of colours carefully to bring out the very best in his subject.
Kind regards, Alan
March 2nd, 2020 15:15
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
You paint a vivid picture here, Clara, I think it will take a while for the paint to dry. The artist has chosen his pallet of colours carefully to bring out the very best in his subject.
Kind regards, Alan
March 2nd, 2020 15:15
His Masterpiece
Neville said:
A captivating tale and poemed so perfectly... tantalising even...
Should ya ever consider modelling again, give a bell.
Neville
March 2nd, 2020 13:37
Neville said:
A captivating tale and poemed so perfectly... tantalising even...
Should ya ever consider modelling again, give a bell.
Neville
March 2nd, 2020 13:37
His Masterpiece
dusk arising said:
Love what you\'ve done here. Truly artistic poetry. Frame it LOL.
March 2nd, 2020 13:22
dusk arising said:
Love what you\'ve done here. Truly artistic poetry. Frame it LOL.
March 2nd, 2020 13:22
This Is Our Life Now
dusk arising said:
Laughed out loud at your last line. The scurge of society today... erm thought.... is it still a society if we only interact with tiny machines in public.... gulp.... im an old thing... that future we dreaded way back then ....IS HERE!
February 12th, 2020 03:47
dusk arising said:
Laughed out loud at your last line. The scurge of society today... erm thought.... is it still a society if we only interact with tiny machines in public.... gulp.... im an old thing... that future we dreaded way back then ....IS HERE!
February 12th, 2020 03:47
This Is Our Life Now
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Yes Clara, a poem of today. Modern and up to date (not like me). I enjoyed reading this piece this morning and, of course, very true.
Kind regards, Alan
February 12th, 2020 02:13
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Yes Clara, a poem of today. Modern and up to date (not like me). I enjoyed reading this piece this morning and, of course, very true.
Kind regards, Alan
February 12th, 2020 02:13
This Is Our Life Now
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true. I too see this happen at the Coffee House that I regularly frequent and you see couples sitting at the table both on their mobile \'phones and not talking to each other.
Andy
February 12th, 2020 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true. I too see this happen at the Coffee House that I regularly frequent and you see couples sitting at the table both on their mobile \'phones and not talking to each other.
Andy
February 12th, 2020 01:29
This Is Our Life Now
FredPeyer said:
This poem is so GOOD! And REAL!
How did we live before cellphones? Do we really need to know what everybody else had for breakfast???
Love your writing!
February 11th, 2020 22:04
FredPeyer said:
This poem is so GOOD! And REAL!
How did we live before cellphones? Do we really need to know what everybody else had for breakfast???
Love your writing!
February 11th, 2020 22:04
This Is Our Life Now
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - loud applause Clara for bringing the third party in any relationship to our needed attention - - you capture the addiction so well - must have this in my list of favourites - - looking forward to more of your engaging work.
February 11th, 2020 16:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - loud applause Clara for bringing the third party in any relationship to our needed attention - - you capture the addiction so well - must have this in my list of favourites - - looking forward to more of your engaging work.
February 11th, 2020 16:52
This Is Our Life Now
Neville said:
This is an absolutely splendid 21 st century poem.. I hope to read more of you.... all good things,
Neville
February 11th, 2020 16:33
Neville said:
This is an absolutely splendid 21 st century poem.. I hope to read more of you.... all good things,
Neville
February 11th, 2020 16:33
Wishes
Goldfinch60 said:
When that chance appears grab it and move forward, your life is there before you and each moment can be enjoyed.
Good write.
Andy
January 31st, 2020 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
When that chance appears grab it and move forward, your life is there before you and each moment can be enjoyed.
Good write.
Andy
January 31st, 2020 01:40
Wishes
BluebirdBlack said:
I enjoyed this thank you for sharing!
Hooked by the first line!! :)
January 30th, 2020 17:35
BluebirdBlack said:
I enjoyed this thank you for sharing!
Hooked by the first line!! :)
January 30th, 2020 17:35
Wishes
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good write today Clara.
\'Do not seek to bring things to pass in accordance with your wishes, but wish for them as they are, and you will find them\'.
~ Epictetus
Kind regards, Alan
January 30th, 2020 15:36
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good write today Clara.
\'Do not seek to bring things to pass in accordance with your wishes, but wish for them as they are, and you will find them\'.
~ Epictetus
Kind regards, Alan
January 30th, 2020 15:36
Your Praises
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show the \'praise\' within you and with those praises the door will be opened and the light in your life will be with you.,
January 24th, 2020 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show the \'praise\' within you and with those praises the door will be opened and the light in your life will be with you.,
January 24th, 2020 01:57
Your Praises
BluebirdBlack said:
I enjoyed this. I especially liked \'\'I want you to know the darkness of my soul\'\'
January 23rd, 2020 18:30
BluebirdBlack said:
I enjoyed this. I especially liked \'\'I want you to know the darkness of my soul\'\'
January 23rd, 2020 18:30
Your Praises
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Same song as you quoted yesterday to me Clara. \'Hello darkness my old friend\'. I play it often, it goes on to say \'I turn my collar to the cold and damp\'.
Give it another listen sometime...
Kind regards, Alan
January 23rd, 2020 16:47
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Same song as you quoted yesterday to me Clara. \'Hello darkness my old friend\'. I play it often, it goes on to say \'I turn my collar to the cold and damp\'.
Give it another listen sometime...
Kind regards, Alan
January 23rd, 2020 16:47
Signed, The Devil
Goldfinch60 said:
God dark write but as Alan has said the light is there for you and soon all with be well.
January 23rd, 2020 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
God dark write but as Alan has said the light is there for you and soon all with be well.
January 23rd, 2020 00:31
Signed, The Devil
Nicholas Browning said:
This is quite nice. I enjoy darker themes.
January 22nd, 2020 18:18
Nicholas Browning said:
This is quite nice. I enjoy darker themes.
January 22nd, 2020 18:18
Signed, The Devil
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
They may be dark words Clara but lighter, brighter ones are just around the corner ~ I just know it. Wait a minute....isn\'t that a rainbow I can see???
Kind regards, Alan
January 22nd, 2020 18:02
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
They may be dark words Clara but lighter, brighter ones are just around the corner ~ I just know it. Wait a minute....isn\'t that a rainbow I can see???
Kind regards, Alan
January 22nd, 2020 18:02
My Spaceman
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good to see you back in harness on MPS Clara. I nice flowing poem to get one\'s teeth into. Well done and HNY.
Kind regards, Alan
January 4th, 2020 02:09
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good to see you back in harness on MPS Clara. I nice flowing poem to get one\'s teeth into. Well done and HNY.
Kind regards, Alan
January 4th, 2020 02:09
Home
Poetic Dan said:
You express so well how we all deal with our own unique random minds, I guess the only real connection is that we are all looking for our own harmony and balance.
Thanks for sharing, much peace and respect.
October 15th, 2019 14:45
Poetic Dan said:
You express so well how we all deal with our own unique random minds, I guess the only real connection is that we are all looking for our own harmony and balance.
Thanks for sharing, much peace and respect.
October 15th, 2019 14:45
Home
dusk arising said:
What a lovely clear honest declaration of your feelings you give today.
I know i have similar feelings, beyond my UK frontier i have no wunderlust. Maybe because i like the security and familiarity of my surroundings... or maybe it\'s something else. To be honest i haven\'t explored the issue. But i know the feeling.
Don\'t try and change! Why bother? Home is where you\'ve made your nest and it\'s safe. We all need safety. That\'s an important sentence... \'we all need safety\'. If you don\'t feel safe (and secure) then you won\'t be acting like the real you and (unless you\'re an actor) you will not be able to relax properly.
Great piece to read Clara and as you see it got my juices flowing.
Don\'t go changing.
October 13th, 2019 14:18
dusk arising said:
What a lovely clear honest declaration of your feelings you give today.
I know i have similar feelings, beyond my UK frontier i have no wunderlust. Maybe because i like the security and familiarity of my surroundings... or maybe it\'s something else. To be honest i haven\'t explored the issue. But i know the feeling.
Don\'t try and change! Why bother? Home is where you\'ve made your nest and it\'s safe. We all need safety. That\'s an important sentence... \'we all need safety\'. If you don\'t feel safe (and secure) then you won\'t be acting like the real you and (unless you\'re an actor) you will not be able to relax properly.
Great piece to read Clara and as you see it got my juices flowing.
Don\'t go changing.
October 13th, 2019 14:18
Home
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, the home is such a special place and it is always a pleasure to walk through the door.
October 13th, 2019 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, the home is such a special place and it is always a pleasure to walk through the door.
October 13th, 2019 01:39
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