Comments received on poems by Clara
The Girl Before
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be hard sometimes, we all go through bad/sad moments in our life. Those moments can be overcome and when overcome become experience and those experiences will not come again so use them to go into a better life which is there for us all.
Good emotive write.
September 2nd, 2019 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be hard sometimes, we all go through bad/sad moments in our life. Those moments can be overcome and when overcome become experience and those experiences will not come again so use them to go into a better life which is there for us all.
Good emotive write.
September 2nd, 2019 01:28
The Girl Before
G84 said:
Its easy to believe we are to be fixed beings with fixed morals and place ourselves in boxes, truth is life is fluid.
Things aren\'t always broken they are just polished with a rough surface that makes them shine brighter than before :)
September 1st, 2019 11:55
G84 said:
Its easy to believe we are to be fixed beings with fixed morals and place ourselves in boxes, truth is life is fluid.
Things aren\'t always broken they are just polished with a rough surface that makes them shine brighter than before :)
September 1st, 2019 11:55
The Girl Before
G84 said:
Its easy to believe we are to be fixed beings with fixed morals and place ourselves in boxes, truth is life is fluid.
Things aren\'t always broken they are just polished with a rough surface that makes them shine brighter than before :)
September 1st, 2019 11:50
G84 said:
Its easy to believe we are to be fixed beings with fixed morals and place ourselves in boxes, truth is life is fluid.
Things aren\'t always broken they are just polished with a rough surface that makes them shine brighter than before :)
September 1st, 2019 11:50
The Girl Before
orchidee said:
A fine write Clara.
You fell to bits there? You all of a heap?! Oops. (heehee).
September 1st, 2019 07:32
orchidee said:
A fine write Clara.
You fell to bits there? You all of a heap?! Oops. (heehee).
September 1st, 2019 07:32
I Reach For The Knife
dusk arising said:
Just a thought comes to mind. A drawer which only contains a picture of that knife..... you open the drawer and look at the knife.... and say... \"no, not today.... that was a yesterday... and i am better than that...\"
September 1st, 2019 05:30
dusk arising said:
Just a thought comes to mind. A drawer which only contains a picture of that knife..... you open the drawer and look at the knife.... and say... \"no, not today.... that was a yesterday... and i am better than that...\"
September 1st, 2019 05:30
The Girl Before
dusk arising said:
Because \"Life is what happens to you when you are busy doing something else\" (John Lennon).
Having principles which are untested is fine but we are human beings with frailty built into our very souls.... to err is human.... to live with the consequences becomes self knowledge, accepting self knowledge becomes love of what one is.... something worth striving for... we are all beautiful.
September 1st, 2019 04:49
dusk arising said:
Because \"Life is what happens to you when you are busy doing something else\" (John Lennon).
Having principles which are untested is fine but we are human beings with frailty built into our very souls.... to err is human.... to live with the consequences becomes self knowledge, accepting self knowledge becomes love of what one is.... something worth striving for... we are all beautiful.
September 1st, 2019 04:49
I Reach For The Knife
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, your words are sharper than any knife and the feelings that they carve onto the page will help you so much more. Keep those words flowing and the light will come to you.
September 1st, 2019 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, your words are sharper than any knife and the feelings that they carve onto the page will help you so much more. Keep those words flowing and the light will come to you.
September 1st, 2019 01:06
I Reach For The Knife
ron parrish aka wordman said:
emotional write,when we feel that much alone
August 31st, 2019 11:42
ron parrish aka wordman said:
emotional write,when we feel that much alone
August 31st, 2019 11:42
I Reach For The Knife
orchidee said:
I can see how this helps you in expression.
Erm, keep blunt knives nearby then! I wish I would shut up sometimes (oohh. lol) - sorry!
August 31st, 2019 11:20
orchidee said:
I can see how this helps you in expression.
Erm, keep blunt knives nearby then! I wish I would shut up sometimes (oohh. lol) - sorry!
August 31st, 2019 11:20
The Edge
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have edges in our life but they are not worth falling off as life away from the edge is so wonderful. Walk away and go along the road of your life into the beauty of it.
Welcome to MPS.
August 31st, 2019 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have edges in our life but they are not worth falling off as life away from the edge is so wonderful. Walk away and go along the road of your life into the beauty of it.
Welcome to MPS.
August 31st, 2019 00:24
The Edge
vvnrose said:
Good expression. This reminds me of the song “jumper” by third eye blind. Human to wonder. Chin up. Feet planted. The tide will soon change. That’s inevitable. Blessings to you.
August 30th, 2019 19:44
vvnrose said:
Good expression. This reminds me of the song “jumper” by third eye blind. Human to wonder. Chin up. Feet planted. The tide will soon change. That’s inevitable. Blessings to you.
August 30th, 2019 19:44
The Edge
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here ~ GOOD EVENING CLARA ~ Welcome to MPS ! It is an interesting site with some interesting Poets. It works by reading & coomenting on each others POEMS ~ OK !
Thanks for your FIRST POEM 19 lines in free verse and an interesting SUBJECT ~ THE EDGE !
We all have EDGES in our lives. Sometimes for whatever reason ~ we want to *Stop the WORLD and get off* ! The easiest way is to find an edge and JUMP ! Thousand attempt suicide each Year ~ some suceed ~ most dont. Those that dont often end up adding injury to insult ~ SAD.
I once a had a Problem and I stood on the EDGE of a Railway Platform and thought of jumping in front of a TRAIN (certain DEATH) ~ but the moment passed. Im a Waterfall Climber (extreme sport !) and sliding down Natural Waterfalls is dangerous. When I visited Niagara Horseshoe Falls in Canada it looked so inviting just to jump in and go over ~ but statistically it is certain death ~ so (because I had no problems) I didnt ! Stay away from the EDGE !
Blessings & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
August 30th, 2019 18:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here ~ GOOD EVENING CLARA ~ Welcome to MPS ! It is an interesting site with some interesting Poets. It works by reading & coomenting on each others POEMS ~ OK !
Thanks for your FIRST POEM 19 lines in free verse and an interesting SUBJECT ~ THE EDGE !
We all have EDGES in our lives. Sometimes for whatever reason ~ we want to *Stop the WORLD and get off* ! The easiest way is to find an edge and JUMP ! Thousand attempt suicide each Year ~ some suceed ~ most dont. Those that dont often end up adding injury to insult ~ SAD.
I once a had a Problem and I stood on the EDGE of a Railway Platform and thought of jumping in front of a TRAIN (certain DEATH) ~ but the moment passed. Im a Waterfall Climber (extreme sport !) and sliding down Natural Waterfalls is dangerous. When I visited Niagara Horseshoe Falls in Canada it looked so inviting just to jump in and go over ~ but statistically it is certain death ~ so (because I had no problems) I didnt ! Stay away from the EDGE !
Blessings & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
August 30th, 2019 18:18
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