Comments received on poems by Clara
Elation to Desolation
dusk arising said:
Elation to desolation is proof that you are tasting ALL the fruits of the ;life tree\'. Out there at the sharp end. No foot warmers and woolly cardigans in front of the TV. No! you are living life!
September 8th, 2019 05:41
dusk arising said:
Elation to desolation is proof that you are tasting ALL the fruits of the ;life tree\'. Out there at the sharp end. No foot warmers and woolly cardigans in front of the TV. No! you are living life!
September 8th, 2019 05:41
Elation to Desolation
Neville said:
balanced is indeed the optimum place to be.. a great little poem and true..
September 8th, 2019 03:54
Neville said:
balanced is indeed the optimum place to be.. a great little poem and true..
September 8th, 2019 03:54
Elation to Desolation
kevin browne said:
In the backgroubd, behind the poem itself I percieve there\'s an unsure emotion which isn\'t taking place, but you also appear to be half in control of your thoughts revealing in that which highlights are confronted by the skill of your pen. One to make readers to read a little deeper in though about who you actually are, Many things will proceed with determination. Thank you for sharing.
September 8th, 2019 03:48
kevin browne said:
In the backgroubd, behind the poem itself I percieve there\'s an unsure emotion which isn\'t taking place, but you also appear to be half in control of your thoughts revealing in that which highlights are confronted by the skill of your pen. One to make readers to read a little deeper in though about who you actually are, Many things will proceed with determination. Thank you for sharing.
September 8th, 2019 03:48
Our Crescendo
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
\'OUR CRESCENDO\'....
allows one\'s imagine to ~ imagine;
No need to spell things out to those who can spell ~ No need to show those who are able to see ~ No need to preach to those who are able to hear.
I will read you poem often, that\'s a promise (No need to make promises those who are able to understand)
Kindest regards, Alan
September 7th, 2019 06:41
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
\'OUR CRESCENDO\'....
allows one\'s imagine to ~ imagine;
No need to spell things out to those who can spell ~ No need to show those who are able to see ~ No need to preach to those who are able to hear.
I will read you poem often, that\'s a promise (No need to make promises those who are able to understand)
Kindest regards, Alan
September 7th, 2019 06:41
You
Poetic Dan said:
Interesting and I\'ve been on my knees to many times, now I\'ve found my wings and just fly. I hope one day you\'ll lift off too, tears dry quickly when there is more of you!
Great work!
September 7th, 2019 03:39
Poetic Dan said:
Interesting and I\'ve been on my knees to many times, now I\'ve found my wings and just fly. I hope one day you\'ll lift off too, tears dry quickly when there is more of you!
Great work!
September 7th, 2019 03:39
Lover\'s Game
Neville said:
tis the strangest game of all.. I oft wonder why unconditional love is favoured above all else, when there are always so many rules imposed.... N
September 7th, 2019 02:44
Neville said:
tis the strangest game of all.. I oft wonder why unconditional love is favoured above all else, when there are always so many rules imposed.... N
September 7th, 2019 02:44
You
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Clara
so many questions we ask others and ourselves what do we believe?
September 6th, 2019 07:40
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write Clara
so many questions we ask others and ourselves what do we believe?
September 6th, 2019 07:40
You
dusk arising said:
It is time to realise the spirit you seek is within you.
Glory in it\'s presence and let it shine from you upon everything you encounter.
September 6th, 2019 01:55
dusk arising said:
It is time to realise the spirit you seek is within you.
Glory in it\'s presence and let it shine from you upon everything you encounter.
September 6th, 2019 01:55
You
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is within you, just let it out to shine from you to the world around you.
September 6th, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is within you, just let it out to shine from you to the world around you.
September 6th, 2019 01:42
Lover\'s Game
Goldfinch60 said:
That love is there between you, may your souls combine into one.
September 6th, 2019 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That love is there between you, may your souls combine into one.
September 6th, 2019 01:20
You
orchidee said:
Ok, I\'m here. You won\'t have to wait any longer. I never knew you cared so much - I forgot! Dunno why I went away in the first place. heehee.
September 6th, 2019 01:17
orchidee said:
Ok, I\'m here. You won\'t have to wait any longer. I never knew you cared so much - I forgot! Dunno why I went away in the first place. heehee.
September 6th, 2019 01:17
You
Neville said:
A compelling read my friend and enjoyed from beginning to end.. I am sure many long lost desires will be invoked and brought forth to satisfy your own curiosity....... Neville
September 6th, 2019 00:55
Neville said:
A compelling read my friend and enjoyed from beginning to end.. I am sure many long lost desires will be invoked and brought forth to satisfy your own curiosity....... Neville
September 6th, 2019 00:55
Lover\'s Game
Bragee said:
Love is one of the more confusing games we play.
scared to give our all because we fear losing and winning both the same.
Great write!
September 5th, 2019 12:20
Bragee said:
Love is one of the more confusing games we play.
scared to give our all because we fear losing and winning both the same.
Great write!
September 5th, 2019 12:20
Our Crescendo
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a discrete description of physical love - - the lines tumble sensual words without being crude and bring to crescendo a beautifully intimate moment. Well crafted and thank you - into my favourites with this one Clara.
September 4th, 2019 09:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a discrete description of physical love - - the lines tumble sensual words without being crude and bring to crescendo a beautifully intimate moment. Well crafted and thank you - into my favourites with this one Clara.
September 4th, 2019 09:30
Our Crescendo
dusk arising said:
Beautifully expressed \'the dance of love\'.
Wonderfully crafted emphasis of love resounding from each line and not a hint of leudness present.
Probably the finest description of this i have ever read.
A must for my favourites.
September 4th, 2019 05:46
dusk arising said:
Beautifully expressed \'the dance of love\'.
Wonderfully crafted emphasis of love resounding from each line and not a hint of leudness present.
Probably the finest description of this i have ever read.
A must for my favourites.
September 4th, 2019 05:46
Our Crescendo
Neville said:
what a delicious pre breakfast bit of nicely crafted erotica... certainly gave my appetite a considerable boost this fair mane..... Neville
September 4th, 2019 02:50
Neville said:
what a delicious pre breakfast bit of nicely crafted erotica... certainly gave my appetite a considerable boost this fair mane..... Neville
September 4th, 2019 02:50
Our Crescendo
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s having fun there - or some ones! heehee.
September 4th, 2019 01:36
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s having fun there - or some ones! heehee.
September 4th, 2019 01:36
Deep Brown
G84 said:
it would be interesting to know your preferred genre of music, as it has left its print in the rhythm of your words, there\'s a particular flow to them I find myself almost rapping at times!
Loved the use of words, very expressive! keep it up!
September 3rd, 2019 14:35
G84 said:
it would be interesting to know your preferred genre of music, as it has left its print in the rhythm of your words, there\'s a particular flow to them I find myself almost rapping at times!
Loved the use of words, very expressive! keep it up!
September 3rd, 2019 14:35
I Reach For The Knife
thnx4dfish said:
Beautiful and relatable. I like the words you chose to express this feeling very much.
Lily
September 3rd, 2019 13:11
thnx4dfish said:
Beautiful and relatable. I like the words you chose to express this feeling very much.
Lily
September 3rd, 2019 13:11
Deep Brown
Poetic Dan said:
I won\'t lie I thought this was about drugs but then Is that not what love is! Absolutely outstanding!
Thank you for sharing
September 3rd, 2019 11:14
Poetic Dan said:
I won\'t lie I thought this was about drugs but then Is that not what love is! Absolutely outstanding!
Thank you for sharing
September 3rd, 2019 11:14
Draw The Line
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. So open and so pure, the only one you need stands in front of the mirror. As sir gold said above, your words are a treasure and not just for us.
I saw myself in the start of this writing and the changes I have been through, emotional and raw keep going to find your hardcore!
September 3rd, 2019 09:45
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. So open and so pure, the only one you need stands in front of the mirror. As sir gold said above, your words are a treasure and not just for us.
I saw myself in the start of this writing and the changes I have been through, emotional and raw keep going to find your hardcore!
September 3rd, 2019 09:45
Deep Brown
Neville said:
thoroughly enjoyed from the top to the bottom of the page of course.... N
September 3rd, 2019 06:50
Neville said:
thoroughly enjoyed from the top to the bottom of the page of course.... N
September 3rd, 2019 06:50
Deep Brown
kevin browne said:
A brilliant poem filled with exttraordinary skills of expressing how you feel towards a love captured witin yourr very own soul. Just beautiful..
September 3rd, 2019 01:47
kevin browne said:
A brilliant poem filled with exttraordinary skills of expressing how you feel towards a love captured witin yourr very own soul. Just beautiful..
September 3rd, 2019 01:47
Deep Brown
orchidee said:
A fine write Clara. Pity it started me singing (always a horror. lol). \'Ohh, reach out, and I\'ll be there....\'
I dunno if it\'s even a proper song. I\'ll go back to sleep! heehee.
September 3rd, 2019 01:32
orchidee said:
A fine write Clara. Pity it started me singing (always a horror. lol). \'Ohh, reach out, and I\'ll be there....\'
I dunno if it\'s even a proper song. I\'ll go back to sleep! heehee.
September 3rd, 2019 01:32
Deep Brown
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Clara, may that love go on forever.
September 3rd, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Clara, may that love go on forever.
September 3rd, 2019 00:57
Draw The Line
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no way that your soul could disapprove of you when you can write such a loving plea straight from your heart.
September 3rd, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no way that your soul could disapprove of you when you can write such a loving plea straight from your heart.
September 3rd, 2019 00:20
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