Comments received on poems by Clara
He and... C
Goldfinch60 said:
That C word can be so debilitating but it should be discussed as d a has said. A good friend of mine has been diagnosed with it but her strength of mind and purpose shows every time we talk about it, we can still talk of the things that are also in our minds.
October 12th, 2019 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That C word can be so debilitating but it should be discussed as d a has said. A good friend of mine has been diagnosed with it but her strength of mind and purpose shows every time we talk about it, we can still talk of the things that are also in our minds.
October 12th, 2019 00:22
He and... C
dusk arising said:
The dreadful C is among us and thriving.... it\'s inside me right now and i am fighting it with my everything.
From a person so afflicted let me tell u this, i\'ve met so many sufferers and not one of them wants to be treated different to how u always treated them. I fought not to tell my son because i feared different treatment i fought the fear of being treated as something \'else\'. Don\'t do it. Don\'t avoid talking C but talk about other stuff too. He hasn\'t changed at all. He\'s just been invaded by something he will fight to be rid of.
Heartfelt
October 11th, 2019 14:21
dusk arising said:
The dreadful C is among us and thriving.... it\'s inside me right now and i am fighting it with my everything.
From a person so afflicted let me tell u this, i\'ve met so many sufferers and not one of them wants to be treated different to how u always treated them. I fought not to tell my son because i feared different treatment i fought the fear of being treated as something \'else\'. Don\'t do it. Don\'t avoid talking C but talk about other stuff too. He hasn\'t changed at all. He\'s just been invaded by something he will fight to be rid of.
Heartfelt
October 11th, 2019 14:21
He and... C
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Clara - and not him alone, as you say. His wife/partner and kiddies too.
A prayer or two for comfort, yes - in senses of \'solace\' and old-fashioned \'strengthen\'.
Well, a bit differently, some colleagues may get on our wick. We may wish to throw them out of the window several floors up! Doh!
But that\'s a bit irrelevant, compared to this.
October 11th, 2019 11:40
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Clara - and not him alone, as you say. His wife/partner and kiddies too.
A prayer or two for comfort, yes - in senses of \'solace\' and old-fashioned \'strengthen\'.
Well, a bit differently, some colleagues may get on our wick. We may wish to throw them out of the window several floors up! Doh!
But that\'s a bit irrelevant, compared to this.
October 11th, 2019 11:40
He and... C
Fay Slimm. said:
All your warm concern for a known friend shines from these sad lines dear Clara - - there is no worse a fear these days than the word beginning with C - your note will no doubt bring him comfort and while there is life there is hope my old Gran used to say........ bless you for your kindness to a work colleague.
October 11th, 2019 11:06
Fay Slimm. said:
All your warm concern for a known friend shines from these sad lines dear Clara - - there is no worse a fear these days than the word beginning with C - your note will no doubt bring him comfort and while there is life there is hope my old Gran used to say........ bless you for your kindness to a work colleague.
October 11th, 2019 11:06
He and... C
Thoughts In Time said:
Not nice to hear sad news and it’s only natural to care out of a good heart..I’m sure he appreciated your kind words🌹
October 11th, 2019 10:34
Thoughts In Time said:
Not nice to hear sad news and it’s only natural to care out of a good heart..I’m sure he appreciated your kind words🌹
October 11th, 2019 10:34
My Light Knight
FredPeyer said:
Clara, your poem drew me in. No matter who, what, where we are, there is always hope. Especially like your last line.
October 10th, 2019 20:52
FredPeyer said:
Clara, your poem drew me in. No matter who, what, where we are, there is always hope. Especially like your last line.
October 10th, 2019 20:52
My Light Knight
dusk arising said:
The world is and will never be black and white. Give me those shades of grey for they are realistic. And we are all fallible, making the best of what comes along...... the more we dwell upon these situations, the wiser we become.
Someone in our past who seemed to have all the answers wasn\'t always right. Is anyone always right?
October 10th, 2019 19:22
dusk arising said:
The world is and will never be black and white. Give me those shades of grey for they are realistic. And we are all fallible, making the best of what comes along...... the more we dwell upon these situations, the wiser we become.
Someone in our past who seemed to have all the answers wasn\'t always right. Is anyone always right?
October 10th, 2019 19:22
My Firework
Fay Slimm. said:
Am so pleased to have caught this tribute to firework displays and woven with wonder for their effect on those faces we love this read has to be one of your best dear Clara. I enjoyed every line......... Fay
October 10th, 2019 03:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Am so pleased to have caught this tribute to firework displays and woven with wonder for their effect on those faces we love this read has to be one of your best dear Clara. I enjoyed every line......... Fay
October 10th, 2019 03:56
My Firework
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write Clara, it is complete nothing needs to be changed.
Andy
October 10th, 2019 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write Clara, it is complete nothing needs to be changed.
Andy
October 10th, 2019 00:32
My Firework
FredPeyer said:
Clara, I love this poem. The lead-in, the structure, the tender feelings of love that shine through, and the beautiful declaration of love at the end. Well crafted!
October 9th, 2019 13:50
FredPeyer said:
Clara, I love this poem. The lead-in, the structure, the tender feelings of love that shine through, and the beautiful declaration of love at the end. Well crafted!
October 9th, 2019 13:50
My Firework
Thoughts In Time said:
Beautiful to have such a love for another..beautiful colours taking you to another world as you watch from a distance ...the magic of simplicity in life...wonderful 🌹
October 9th, 2019 11:15
Thoughts In Time said:
Beautiful to have such a love for another..beautiful colours taking you to another world as you watch from a distance ...the magic of simplicity in life...wonderful 🌹
October 9th, 2019 11:15
My Firework
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Sparkling images explode in your words Clara ~ well done.
Kind regards, Alan
October 9th, 2019 06:08
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Sparkling images explode in your words Clara ~ well done.
Kind regards, Alan
October 9th, 2019 06:08
Who is She?
Poetic Dan said:
Omg that was amazing... So raw and real any gender can know of the shadow of one\'s own soul, for I once walked the walked you write of.
Thank you for another reflection ;)
October 8th, 2019 07:24
Poetic Dan said:
Omg that was amazing... So raw and real any gender can know of the shadow of one\'s own soul, for I once walked the walked you write of.
Thank you for another reflection ;)
October 8th, 2019 07:24
Broken Dreams
Poetic Dan said:
Dam it, you made me cry I guess this healing is never done! Thank you for such beautiful words, it can only reflect your own soul!
Much peace and respect
October 8th, 2019 07:20
Poetic Dan said:
Dam it, you made me cry I guess this healing is never done! Thank you for such beautiful words, it can only reflect your own soul!
Much peace and respect
October 8th, 2019 07:20
Broken Dreams
FredPeyer said:
Haunting, mesmerizing, a gem!
I cannot imagine how hard it must be to lose one\'s wife. \"He walks for miles in broken boots\"....dragging a broken heart.
October 3rd, 2019 17:39
FredPeyer said:
Haunting, mesmerizing, a gem!
I cannot imagine how hard it must be to lose one\'s wife. \"He walks for miles in broken boots\"....dragging a broken heart.
October 3rd, 2019 17:39
Broken Dreams
Michael Edwards said:
A great journey and that last line is so enigmatic - I can read into it - a cliff hanger.
October 3rd, 2019 11:49
Michael Edwards said:
A great journey and that last line is so enigmatic - I can read into it - a cliff hanger.
October 3rd, 2019 11:49
Broken Dreams
Bragee said:
wonderful writing,
enjoyed the journey,
would be very interested in the rest of the journey should it ever be written.
October 3rd, 2019 11:05
Bragee said:
wonderful writing,
enjoyed the journey,
would be very interested in the rest of the journey should it ever be written.
October 3rd, 2019 11:05
Broken Dreams
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI CLARA ~ BRIAN HERE ! In the last analysis LIFE & LOVE can be very CRUEL ! It is very sledom (except by design) that lovers die on the same day ! And whenever ONE LOVER dies ~ it is always TOO SOON ! All we are left with are our MEMORIES ! Angela and I are getting married and we hope to still be alive (and together !) for our RUBY WEDDING in 2060 ! However instead of 40 years we could only have 40 months ! SO we will cherish each day ! Please check our latest POEM *Discovering a New Cave* and our latest FUSION *National Ode Day* ! You can post a POEM ~ on Any Subject & in any Style !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 3rd, 2019 11:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI CLARA ~ BRIAN HERE ! In the last analysis LIFE & LOVE can be very CRUEL ! It is very sledom (except by design) that lovers die on the same day ! And whenever ONE LOVER dies ~ it is always TOO SOON ! All we are left with are our MEMORIES ! Angela and I are getting married and we hope to still be alive (and together !) for our RUBY WEDDING in 2060 ! However instead of 40 years we could only have 40 months ! SO we will cherish each day ! Please check our latest POEM *Discovering a New Cave* and our latest FUSION *National Ode Day* ! You can post a POEM ~ on Any Subject & in any Style !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 3rd, 2019 11:04
Broken Dreams
Neville said:
I really enjoyed the journey.. at first I thought of Saint Christopher, then Saint Francis of Assisi, then some bloke who lives in the next village.... Nice one Clara..... Neville
October 3rd, 2019 09:31
Neville said:
I really enjoyed the journey.. at first I thought of Saint Christopher, then Saint Francis of Assisi, then some bloke who lives in the next village.... Nice one Clara..... Neville
October 3rd, 2019 09:31
Broken Dreams
Fay Slimm. said:
A tale within the first line of this tantalizing read Clara - - you take an imaginative circumstance and weave such a story that readers like me want a second installment - first class writing my friend.
October 3rd, 2019 09:25
Fay Slimm. said:
A tale within the first line of this tantalizing read Clara - - you take an imaginative circumstance and weave such a story that readers like me want a second installment - first class writing my friend.
October 3rd, 2019 09:25
Who is She?
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some like this this that we meet in our lives, both women and men. Ignore them and move on, the good people are always out there.
Super poem Clara.
October 3rd, 2019 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some like this this that we meet in our lives, both women and men. Ignore them and move on, the good people are always out there.
Super poem Clara.
October 3rd, 2019 01:24
Who is She?
dusk arising said:
Life brings all sorts to our door including demons and disasters, which shape us into what we are.
Great poem displaying the dilemma of what we could be, should be, maybe and more.
October 2nd, 2019 10:03
dusk arising said:
Life brings all sorts to our door including demons and disasters, which shape us into what we are.
Great poem displaying the dilemma of what we could be, should be, maybe and more.
October 2nd, 2019 10:03
Who is She?
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the form and style of this denunciation of two-facedness Clara - - that girl certainly does need to change and oust those \"demons within\" - a good read my friend.
October 2nd, 2019 04:47
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the form and style of this denunciation of two-facedness Clara - - that girl certainly does need to change and oust those \"demons within\" - a good read my friend.
October 2nd, 2019 04:47
Who is She?
Neville said:
I once knew a girl who fitted these words perfectly... a lovely little poem ma\'am if you dont mind me just sayin.... N..
October 2nd, 2019 04:36
Neville said:
I once knew a girl who fitted these words perfectly... a lovely little poem ma\'am if you dont mind me just sayin.... N..
October 2nd, 2019 04:36
Here lies She
dusk arising said:
Sometimes that war just can\'t be resisted and oh boy do we pay the price. But all along the allies (your brain) was shouting no no no!
Well, good argument for being a bit wiser next time and being prepared to NOT take the risk.... but sadly that\'s far easier said than done... i have the scars to prove it.
Nicely written with wry finale.
October 1st, 2019 18:53
dusk arising said:
Sometimes that war just can\'t be resisted and oh boy do we pay the price. But all along the allies (your brain) was shouting no no no!
Well, good argument for being a bit wiser next time and being prepared to NOT take the risk.... but sadly that\'s far easier said than done... i have the scars to prove it.
Nicely written with wry finale.
October 1st, 2019 18:53
Your Call
Bragee said:
Those loving calls from a distant lover warm the heart like nothing else.
October 1st, 2019 11:34
Bragee said:
Those loving calls from a distant lover warm the heart like nothing else.
October 1st, 2019 11:34
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