Comments received on poems by Clara



Your Call
Neville said:

how lovely is this.. your words I mean... very I reply.....

October 1st, 2019 07:39

Here lies She
Bragee said:

sad fight to lose but the resurrection makes it all worth it!

September 30th, 2019 15:27

Here lies She
Fay Slimm. said:

A tale of battle lost but fought hard to retain being the One - -what a unique way of describing betrayal dear Clara.......... a compelling read.

September 30th, 2019 13:21

The Battle of Us
Neville said:

what a great poem my friend a powerful and determined love poem.... N

September 30th, 2019 11:56

The Battle of Us
Goldfinch60 said:

Your strength of purpose shines through your words and you have achieved that purpose and WILL win the war.

September 30th, 2019 00:58

Namaste
Goldfinch60 said:

Namaste.

September 29th, 2019 00:09

The Coupling
Neville said:

well crafted, well done and well presented....... N

September 28th, 2019 18:14

Namaste
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE - Good Evening - Thanks for sharing CLARA ! A NAMASTAR is a traditional Indian Greeting - Bowing with Palms together ! A NAMASTE is the act of doing the same ! If we were all more relaxed especially in our dealings with People the World would be a much more gentle place. My MUM always said take three deep breaths before you react to a situation - to calm yourself !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check our FUSION POEM
Do we get the Leaders we deserve ?
Click on DEVELOPING to see the POEM

September 28th, 2019 15:16

Namaste
FredPeyer said:

And I bow to the divine in you!
Very well written.

September 28th, 2019 14:37

Namaste
Neville said:

a little cracker.... much enjoyed..

September 28th, 2019 09:57

Namaste
Alta H Mabin said:

An absolute gem.

September 28th, 2019 09:44

Namaste
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

\"Namaskar\" Clara big respect for this blessing of a poem

September 28th, 2019 08:25

Namaste
Laura🌻 said:

Clara,

Your poem has energized me this fine morning!

...‘Namaste’...

~Laura~🌻

September 28th, 2019 07:58

Serenity
Poetic Dan said:

Absolutely this is why you should laugh when people say you are day dreaming of sleep walking, it\'s the only way to truly live in the moment of Serenity.

Thank you for the words you created with me ;)

September 28th, 2019 02:57

The Coupling
Poetic Dan said:

Great stuff and well expressed!

September 28th, 2019 01:40

Serenity
Goldfinch60 said:

That peace and light in sleep is so calming. Good write.

September 27th, 2019 00:44

Serenity
FredPeyer said:

Well written, Clara. Love that last line!

September 26th, 2019 21:14

Serenity
marijoy said:

Lovely poem. I could feel the sweet serenity of lights fusing with unconscious thoughts before our senses give up and rest.

September 26th, 2019 21:03

Serenity
G84 said:

Sleep and dreaming has always intrigued me, I believe its where we learn the most about ourselves!

Your poem re-iterated this to me, the waking world has too many distractions and problems to allow us to delve into our own souls and I believe this is why us lot in here write! It provides something personal, therapeutic and beautiful for our souls :) cracking poem!

September 26th, 2019 18:23

Serenity
G84 said:

Sleep and dreaming has always intrigued me, I believe its where we learn the most about ourselves!

Your poem re-iterated this to me, the waking world has too many distractions and problems to allow us to delve into our own souls and I believe this is why us lot in here write! It provides something personal, therapeutic and beautiful for our souls :) cracking poem!

September 26th, 2019 17:57

Serenity
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - I love this piece...The serenity of sleep is so well expressed here in your honest poem dear Clara - - keep standing your ground and writing it down dear poet-friend.

September 26th, 2019 07:58

Serenity
Neville said:

and so say all of us.... a lovely poem Clara and needing far more attention.... Neville

September 26th, 2019 06:43

The Crossing
Goldfinch60 said:

That eternal peace will be forever with you.

September 26th, 2019 00:23

The Crossing
FredPeyer said:

I like this one. Sometimes we just have to let go.

September 25th, 2019 13:45

The Crossing
Neville said:

delightful and poetically reassuring....

Neville

September 25th, 2019 12:50

You
FredPeyer said:

Even though I am not religious, this beautifully written poem, and I mean really beautiful!, shows a person waiting for Christ.

September 24th, 2019 12:33

Void
FredPeyer said:

Sounds like you have your own black hole. I do like the way you write!

September 24th, 2019 12:27

Elation to Desolation
Goldfinch60 said:

That balance in life can be difficult to achieve in some circumstances but as your life goes on the experience of those challenges will come to balance that life and you will go the true way into your life

September 9th, 2019 00:40

Elation to Desolation
orchidee said:

I don\'t rely entirely on my feelings - well, I try not to, though we would not be human without them.
Meanwhile - I told ya not listen in to me singing! It\'s enough to plunge anyone from elation to desolation in a quick moment! It\'s all downhill from then on, once you\'ve tuned in to me. heehee.

September 8th, 2019 07:39

Elation to Desolation
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

Clara
Are you lying next to the one you love or lying, next to that person?

September 8th, 2019 07:11

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