Comments received on poems by Clara
Picture You
orchidee said:
A fine write Clara. Oohh, I will come back pronto then! Sorry I ever went away. Dunno what made me do it! heehee.
November 22nd, 2020 03:12
orchidee said:
A fine write Clara. Oohh, I will come back pronto then! Sorry I ever went away. Dunno what made me do it! heehee.
November 22nd, 2020 03:12
Picture You
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, it i so sad when love fails. It will come back to you though.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, it i so sad when love fails. It will come back to you though.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:26
Picture You
Neville said:
at the end of love, it is often easier to turn away and I think you have done an exemplary fine job of articulating this sad but true phenomenon ...
November 21st, 2020 17:26
Neville said:
at the end of love, it is often easier to turn away and I think you have done an exemplary fine job of articulating this sad but true phenomenon ...
November 21st, 2020 17:26
Picture You
RDS said:
Thank you Clara for this sensorial, grounded Lament in every sense your words evoke. It speaks to me of tension between strength and vulnerability.
November 21st, 2020 17:24
RDS said:
Thank you Clara for this sensorial, grounded Lament in every sense your words evoke. It speaks to me of tension between strength and vulnerability.
November 21st, 2020 17:24
This Oyster Shell
L. B. Mek said:
I like your direct voice and engaging metaphors, with an ending structured to encourage a few moments of contemplation,
some wise words of insightful observations you have shared with us:
\'Deeply fashioned with powdered fear
Tied up with insecurity bows
For even when you reach with all your might
Everything within this oyster shell
will always be
just
out
of
sight.\'
November 21st, 2020 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
I like your direct voice and engaging metaphors, with an ending structured to encourage a few moments of contemplation,
some wise words of insightful observations you have shared with us:
\'Deeply fashioned with powdered fear
Tied up with insecurity bows
For even when you reach with all your might
Everything within this oyster shell
will always be
just
out
of
sight.\'
November 21st, 2020 05:31
This Oyster Shell
orchidee said:
I know it! I\'ll \'get me coat\' and \'get out more\', as they say.
But I took too long deciding if I need a coat or not. Then it was too late to go out. Doh! heehee.
November 21st, 2020 02:49
orchidee said:
I know it! I\'ll \'get me coat\' and \'get out more\', as they say.
But I took too long deciding if I need a coat or not. Then it was too late to go out. Doh! heehee.
November 21st, 2020 02:49
This Oyster Shell
Goldfinch60 said:
Once that oyster shell is opened you can escape into the freedom and wonder of the world that is waiting for you.
Andy
November 21st, 2020 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Once that oyster shell is opened you can escape into the freedom and wonder of the world that is waiting for you.
Andy
November 21st, 2020 01:52
Walk Away
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, so real and written with such succinct and emotive word choices, I could not help but picture the scene as-if I was looking at an HD screen,
great write and even better read!
November 20th, 2020 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, so real and written with such succinct and emotive word choices, I could not help but picture the scene as-if I was looking at an HD screen,
great write and even better read!
November 20th, 2020 04:22
Walk Away
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Clara, that love is there and will walk back to you.
Andy
November 20th, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Clara, that love is there and will walk back to you.
Andy
November 20th, 2020 01:22
Walk Away
dusk arising said:
Here i quote an old song \"love hurts, love scars, love wounds and marrs any heart not tough or strong enough to take a lot of pain.... love is like a cloud... holds a lot of rain\"
Seems like your words show youve lived it
November 19th, 2020 18:47
dusk arising said:
Here i quote an old song \"love hurts, love scars, love wounds and marrs any heart not tough or strong enough to take a lot of pain.... love is like a cloud... holds a lot of rain\"
Seems like your words show youve lived it
November 19th, 2020 18:47
Walk Away
Neville said:
Some times it is not only the most sensible thing to do.. but also the safest ... a well crafted bit o poetry that made the corners of my mouth move skyward for a few moments.. and for that, I thank ya bigly :)
November 19th, 2020 18:31
Neville said:
Some times it is not only the most sensible thing to do.. but also the safest ... a well crafted bit o poetry that made the corners of my mouth move skyward for a few moments.. and for that, I thank ya bigly :)
November 19th, 2020 18:31
Walk Away
Poetic Dan said:
Felt that one and know of what I was not taught, love can\'t be destroyed... Although it can hide, walk away or be thrown...
Inspirational stuff, thanks for sharing...
November 19th, 2020 15:32
Poetic Dan said:
Felt that one and know of what I was not taught, love can\'t be destroyed... Although it can hide, walk away or be thrown...
Inspirational stuff, thanks for sharing...
November 19th, 2020 15:32
Isle of Skye
L. B. Mek said:
good read,
but I struggled with the font a little
November 19th, 2020 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
good read,
but I struggled with the font a little
November 19th, 2020 04:49
Isle of Skye
orchidee said:
Ahh, not been there. Now I know what it\'s like. I never knew I was missing so much! heehee.
November 19th, 2020 02:56
orchidee said:
Ahh, not been there. Now I know what it\'s like. I never knew I was missing so much! heehee.
November 19th, 2020 02:56
Isle of Skye
Goldfinch60 said:
My wife and I used to love going to Skye, such a wonderful place for us both with such wonderful memories.
It\'s good to see you back Clara, I do hope all is well with you.
Andy
November 19th, 2020 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
My wife and I used to love going to Skye, such a wonderful place for us both with such wonderful memories.
It\'s good to see you back Clara, I do hope all is well with you.
Andy
November 19th, 2020 02:12
Isle of Skye
Neville said:
Yes indeed, really quite enchanting .. and consequently, thoroughly enjoyed
...
Welcome back & here\'s wishing you all the very best of All Good Things,
Neville
November 19th, 2020 00:05
Neville said:
Yes indeed, really quite enchanting .. and consequently, thoroughly enjoyed
...
Welcome back & here\'s wishing you all the very best of All Good Things,
Neville
November 19th, 2020 00:05
Isle of Skye
Fay Slimm. said:
An enchanting read Clara - This poetic picture and altogether delightful rhyme brings Skye to life for readers like me who never have been far from my Cornish home - - your pen captures so clearly the spirit of mystery I was almost packing my bags to experience the fairy-welcome. Am so glad I caught your write on Skye and look forward to reading more of your work.
November 18th, 2020 22:30
Fay Slimm. said:
An enchanting read Clara - This poetic picture and altogether delightful rhyme brings Skye to life for readers like me who never have been far from my Cornish home - - your pen captures so clearly the spirit of mystery I was almost packing my bags to experience the fairy-welcome. Am so glad I caught your write on Skye and look forward to reading more of your work.
November 18th, 2020 22:30
The Edge
Neville said:
Very few actually fly.. many think they might … take my word for it... carry on writing.. it is much more rewarding and can give others pleasure too....
Neville
March 8th, 2020 10:23
Neville said:
Very few actually fly.. many think they might … take my word for it... carry on writing.. it is much more rewarding and can give others pleasure too....
Neville
March 8th, 2020 10:23
Shadows On The Wall
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Clara and as you have said the light is there and it will come out of the shadows to bring light to your life.
Andy
March 8th, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Clara and as you have said the light is there and it will come out of the shadows to bring light to your life.
Andy
March 8th, 2020 01:54
Shadows On The Wall
Saxon Crow said:
Ahhh Clara. Really enjoyed this piece. Secrets in shadows!
March 7th, 2020 13:39
Saxon Crow said:
Ahhh Clara. Really enjoyed this piece. Secrets in shadows!
March 7th, 2020 13:39
Chosen Memories
Goldfinch60 said:
Those passed loves were our loves at that time and for that reason they are always special as your words portray so well.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Those passed loves were our loves at that time and for that reason they are always special as your words portray so well.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 01:30
Chosen Memories
FredPeyer said:
So well written Clara, yes we must savior the past even if it hurts sometimes.
March 5th, 2020 12:37
FredPeyer said:
So well written Clara, yes we must savior the past even if it hurts sometimes.
March 5th, 2020 12:37
Chosen Memories
Saxon Crow said:
Soooooooooooo been there done that, secretly living it in my memories too. However, I found the reality of what I had became a fanciful fantasy in the end. But this poem, totally brings it all back. Brilliant!
March 5th, 2020 10:28
Saxon Crow said:
Soooooooooooo been there done that, secretly living it in my memories too. However, I found the reality of what I had became a fanciful fantasy in the end. But this poem, totally brings it all back. Brilliant!
March 5th, 2020 10:28
Chosen Memories
dusk arising said:
Blissful. So often we read on MPS of love which didn\'t last recounted in bitter and negative words. Whereas you (and me) rejoice the joy love brought to us for a time. A sad loss followed but oh my, what times we had.... we should rejoice our memories of the most joyous times.
I loved reading your love poem. Refreshing and joyous... two of the virtues of love itself.
March 5th, 2020 10:22
dusk arising said:
Blissful. So often we read on MPS of love which didn\'t last recounted in bitter and negative words. Whereas you (and me) rejoice the joy love brought to us for a time. A sad loss followed but oh my, what times we had.... we should rejoice our memories of the most joyous times.
I loved reading your love poem. Refreshing and joyous... two of the virtues of love itself.
March 5th, 2020 10:22
Chosen Memories
dusk arising said:
Blissful. So often we read on MPS of love which didn\'t last recounted in bitter and negative words. Whereas you (and me) rejoice the joy love brought to us for a time. A sad loss followed but oh my, what times we had.... we should rejoice our memories of the most joyous times.
I loved reading your love poem. Refreshing and joyous... two of the virtues of love itself.
March 5th, 2020 10:00
dusk arising said:
Blissful. So often we read on MPS of love which didn\'t last recounted in bitter and negative words. Whereas you (and me) rejoice the joy love brought to us for a time. A sad loss followed but oh my, what times we had.... we should rejoice our memories of the most joyous times.
I loved reading your love poem. Refreshing and joyous... two of the virtues of love itself.
March 5th, 2020 10:00
Sweet Female
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write Clara, your words say so much.
Andy
March 5th, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write Clara, your words say so much.
Andy
March 5th, 2020 01:22
Sweet Female
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I see a sadness in this piece which causes me to worry somewhat about the narrator.
It takes a worried man to sing a worried song!
I am pleased that it is only fiction and your undirectionally flowing but well chosen words are but a story.
Kind regards, Alan
March 4th, 2020 15:00
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I see a sadness in this piece which causes me to worry somewhat about the narrator.
It takes a worried man to sing a worried song!
I am pleased that it is only fiction and your undirectionally flowing but well chosen words are but a story.
Kind regards, Alan
March 4th, 2020 15:00
Sweet Female
FredPeyer said:
Clara, great writing! Please keep on letting your words flow!!!
March 4th, 2020 12:36
FredPeyer said:
Clara, great writing! Please keep on letting your words flow!!!
March 4th, 2020 12:36
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