Comments received on poems by Clara
Last Kiss
peto said:
Today may not seem like a good one
Many more better to come
Keep writing
November 26th, 2023 20:44
peto said:
Today may not seem like a good one
Many more better to come
Keep writing
November 26th, 2023 20:44
Love Through The Pages
RDS said:
Finely worded to leave me thinking of love desired and love remembered. Nice work.
J
December 24th, 2020 10:40
RDS said:
Finely worded to leave me thinking of love desired and love remembered. Nice work.
J
December 24th, 2020 10:40
Love Through The Pages
L. B. Mek said:
\'Through my words
our love lives on Your pulse
beats through my pages, Just
like it did my skin\'
so talented at emoting the core essence of those same feelings you\'re invoking from your readers,
a wonderful write as testament to the fact that even when shattered - love\'s remnants, can transcend: to plant roots of comfort
December 24th, 2020 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'Through my words
our love lives on Your pulse
beats through my pages, Just
like it did my skin\'
so talented at emoting the core essence of those same feelings you\'re invoking from your readers,
a wonderful write as testament to the fact that even when shattered - love\'s remnants, can transcend: to plant roots of comfort
December 24th, 2020 05:27
Love Through The Pages
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of such brief profound love Clara.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of such brief profound love Clara.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:22
Love Through The Pages
Fay Slimm. said:
An engaging read Clara and versed so romantically that love between pages. Well done.
December 23rd, 2020 17:03
Fay Slimm. said:
An engaging read Clara and versed so romantically that love between pages. Well done.
December 23rd, 2020 17:03
Love Through The Pages
FredPeyer said:
You do have a way with words, Clara. Beautiful poem!
December 23rd, 2020 10:38
FredPeyer said:
You do have a way with words, Clara. Beautiful poem!
December 23rd, 2020 10:38
Our Relief
FredPeyer said:
Clara, your eloquent words express the meaning of \'making love\' beautifully! And it ends on the exact right note. Well done!
December 22nd, 2020 11:32
FredPeyer said:
Clara, your eloquent words express the meaning of \'making love\' beautifully! And it ends on the exact right note. Well done!
December 22nd, 2020 11:32
Our Relief
cabalo_blanco said:
nice. I was almost there with you, a good draw in.
December 22nd, 2020 10:41
cabalo_blanco said:
nice. I was almost there with you, a good draw in.
December 22nd, 2020 10:41
Our Relief
dusk arising said:
Sublime.
The unwritten truth of sharing love expressed as i have never seen before. Mesmerising - real.
You explore the beauty within the physical here.
I came back to this because i want it in my fav\'s. Its quite exceptional.
December 22nd, 2020 10:34
dusk arising said:
Sublime.
The unwritten truth of sharing love expressed as i have never seen before. Mesmerising - real.
You explore the beauty within the physical here.
I came back to this because i want it in my fav\'s. Its quite exceptional.
December 22nd, 2020 10:34
This Oyster Shell
SerenWise said:
Very interesting read, an enjoyable and unsettling metaphor
December 22nd, 2020 10:05
SerenWise said:
Very interesting read, an enjoyable and unsettling metaphor
December 22nd, 2020 10:05
Our Relief
L. B. Mek said:
problem with the general perception of anything titled erotic, is that we automatically tilt our corrupted mind\'s to that seedy underbelly of (nature gifted) physical attraction,
when in actuality write\'s like yours, penned with measured imagery (pointedly choosing not to indulge in too much of that \'crude\', we find so satisfying to shock other\'s with) and dedication to those subtle nuances within that universal language of electrifying intimacy between willing participants of never-ending skin conversations: speaks of love - in its raw purest form, with more clarity than most poems dare tiptoe - around...
sorry for penning yet another self-indulgent tangent on your page - in the guise of a \'comment\', if its any conciliation you can take all the credit/blame for inspiring my feeble scribbles, lol
thanks for sharing a wonderful read Clara
December 22nd, 2020 06:42
L. B. Mek said:
problem with the general perception of anything titled erotic, is that we automatically tilt our corrupted mind\'s to that seedy underbelly of (nature gifted) physical attraction,
when in actuality write\'s like yours, penned with measured imagery (pointedly choosing not to indulge in too much of that \'crude\', we find so satisfying to shock other\'s with) and dedication to those subtle nuances within that universal language of electrifying intimacy between willing participants of never-ending skin conversations: speaks of love - in its raw purest form, with more clarity than most poems dare tiptoe - around...
sorry for penning yet another self-indulgent tangent on your page - in the guise of a \'comment\', if its any conciliation you can take all the credit/blame for inspiring my feeble scribbles, lol
thanks for sharing a wonderful read Clara
December 22nd, 2020 06:42
Dare Call Home
L. B. Mek said:
relatable - at so many levels, for those with palate\'s that have been experience-scorched with all the varied guise\'s of love and more specifically to your write: trust,
may we all treasure that simple gift imbued within our choices - allowing us, to entrust in something we deem essential to that solace we covet with every ounce of fervent hope, carried to and from - each breath, we chose to serenade our lives with...
a wonderous dedication, emitting that seductive uncertainty of melancholy we treasure while brooding over our love\'s,
beautifully worded - prioritising accessibility over poetic ambition,
Happy Holidays dear Poet!
thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply
December 22nd, 2020 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
relatable - at so many levels, for those with palate\'s that have been experience-scorched with all the varied guise\'s of love and more specifically to your write: trust,
may we all treasure that simple gift imbued within our choices - allowing us, to entrust in something we deem essential to that solace we covet with every ounce of fervent hope, carried to and from - each breath, we chose to serenade our lives with...
a wonderous dedication, emitting that seductive uncertainty of melancholy we treasure while brooding over our love\'s,
beautifully worded - prioritising accessibility over poetic ambition,
Happy Holidays dear Poet!
thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply
December 22nd, 2020 05:43
Our Relief
orchidee said:
Good write Clara.
Oohh, it\'s too much for me - swoon! heehee. Erotica? Should I try some? \'Get my hat and coat, and get out more?\' as they say. lol.
December 22nd, 2020 02:50
orchidee said:
Good write Clara.
Oohh, it\'s too much for me - swoon! heehee. Erotica? Should I try some? \'Get my hat and coat, and get out more?\' as they say. lol.
December 22nd, 2020 02:50
Our Relief
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful intimate poem full of pure love Clara.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful intimate poem full of pure love Clara.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 02:21
Our Relief
GON said:
we are hardly ever more vulnerable than in these moments of pure intimacy and trust
December 22nd, 2020 02:01
GON said:
we are hardly ever more vulnerable than in these moments of pure intimacy and trust
December 22nd, 2020 02:01
Dare Call Home
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Clara, one day you will catch up with him and home will be full of love once more.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Clara, one day you will catch up with him and home will be full of love once more.
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:35
Dare Call Home
dusk arising said:
A mystery of dark devotion lives within these lines. A single read leaves me wanting more, so, re-reading twice more I find it\'s atmosphere - haunting.
Like romance in a thirties whodunnit in sepia tone.
December 21st, 2020 17:06
dusk arising said:
A mystery of dark devotion lives within these lines. A single read leaves me wanting more, so, re-reading twice more I find it\'s atmosphere - haunting.
Like romance in a thirties whodunnit in sepia tone.
December 21st, 2020 17:06
Dare Call Home
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Have a Happy Holiday and stay safe.
December 21st, 2020 16:17
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Have a Happy Holiday and stay safe.
December 21st, 2020 16:17
Sweet Female
cabalo_blanco said:
nice job.
the woman is our root, our queen, and will be treated as one in my kingdom!
December 21st, 2020 15:31
cabalo_blanco said:
nice job.
the woman is our root, our queen, and will be treated as one in my kingdom!
December 21st, 2020 15:31
Dark Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Clara, hopefully that love will see the light one day and all will be wonderful.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Clara, hopefully that love will see the light one day and all will be wonderful.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 01:45
Dark Love
FredPeyer said:
Very well written Clara, very compelling. I am wondering if you are talking about an illicit love.
December 18th, 2020 20:42
FredPeyer said:
Very well written Clara, very compelling. I am wondering if you are talking about an illicit love.
December 18th, 2020 20:42
Picture You
L. B. Mek said:
\'When fear knocked upon my door and my heart was a heavy weight upon the floor
I pictured you, my love
With deep brown eyes made of dirt
Of life enrichment
You never failed to chase the fear away and ground me upon this Earth\'
unquestionably Brilliant!
November 23rd, 2020 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'When fear knocked upon my door and my heart was a heavy weight upon the floor
I pictured you, my love
With deep brown eyes made of dirt
Of life enrichment
You never failed to chase the fear away and ground me upon this Earth\'
unquestionably Brilliant!
November 23rd, 2020 03:30
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