Comments received on poems by Dove



Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
Dove said:

Thanks Dusk, I highlighted the line!
So that it would stand out! Just following
The rules,! It’s French, I’ll be posting a plain
Kyrielle, , and Rondelet, soon!

Thanks again


September 9th, 2020 19:00

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
dusk arising said:

Super construction in classic style verse.

I particularly like (and envy) the way you have taken the first line and placed it together with the repeating last line of each stanza to form the finale...

September 9th, 2020 12:07

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon ROMANTIC BLOOM (awesome name !) Thanks for sharing a very ELEGANT KYRIELLE SONNET ! Love the Rhyme Pattern aabB ccbB ddbB bB. Repetition is very important in Classical Poetry ! I will remember *Whose petals never fall apart* ! Thank for sharing.

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛

September 9th, 2020 09:53

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
orchidee said:

A good write, erm - is that you, Dove?! heehee.

September 9th, 2020 09:40

La’ libertas : Fantasies
Dove said:

Again, thank you kindly!

Have a great Day!

September 7th, 2020 23:00

A Treasure within my Soul
Dove said:

Thank you kindly Mek!
I appreciate you read and comment

September 7th, 2020 22:57

A Treasure within my Soul
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully rhythmic and blessed with that rare quality of effortless flow

September 7th, 2020 04:06

La’ libertas : Fantasies
L. B. Mek said:

I second what Andy said above,
like your wonderful flow as well

September 7th, 2020 03:50

La’ libertas : Fantasies
Goldfinch60 said:

One day those fantasies may be come real and the love will come to fruition.

Andy

September 7th, 2020 00:46

A Treasure within my Soul
ron parrish aka wordman said:

and may it linger there forever

September 6th, 2020 14:33

A Treasure within my Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

May that treasure be forever in your soul.

Welcome to MPS.

September 6th, 2020 01:24

A Treasure within my Soul
Goddess of the Mist said:

A very sweet poem with a unique rhythm!

September 5th, 2020 21:50

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