Comments received on poems by Dove
And So the Waves Whispered...
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully calming read Dove -- especially liked the continued flow of the title throughout.
October 30th, 2020 08:34
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully calming read Dove -- especially liked the continued flow of the title throughout.
October 30th, 2020 08:34
And So the Waves Whispered...
L. B. Mek said:
\'It was our waves in twilight hours
as the sunset coated the sky
Upon our cascading waters
Its hues Glistening in your eyes\'
I cherish work\'s that plunge straight into the deep end, no gradual build-up or tentative intro\'s, I found your write immersive and captivating - from first to last line,
your chorus serves a distinct purpose, your subtle imagery and metaphors tease out that picturesque scene you elegantly paint, with words humming to a seamless beat,
subtle, ever so subtle: a great read
October 30th, 2020 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'It was our waves in twilight hours
as the sunset coated the sky
Upon our cascading waters
Its hues Glistening in your eyes\'
I cherish work\'s that plunge straight into the deep end, no gradual build-up or tentative intro\'s, I found your write immersive and captivating - from first to last line,
your chorus serves a distinct purpose, your subtle imagery and metaphors tease out that picturesque scene you elegantly paint, with words humming to a seamless beat,
subtle, ever so subtle: a great read
October 30th, 2020 04:13
And So the Waves Whispered...
Neville said:
what a beautiful title and followed closely by three perfectly precise verses separated only by a necessary ripple ..
October 30th, 2020 04:09
Neville said:
what a beautiful title and followed closely by three perfectly precise verses separated only by a necessary ripple ..
October 30th, 2020 04:09
And So the Waves Whispered...
orchidee said:
A fine write RB.
I whispered - or yelled - \"Cooeeeee! Do ya hear me?!\" (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
October 30th, 2020 02:28
orchidee said:
A fine write RB.
I whispered - or yelled - \"Cooeeeee! Do ya hear me?!\" (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
October 30th, 2020 02:28
And So the Waves Whispered...
Goldfinch60 said:
May those waves forever whisper their love upon you RB.
Andy
October 30th, 2020 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
May those waves forever whisper their love upon you RB.
Andy
October 30th, 2020 01:19
One with Nature
Dove said:
Thanks Neville. I’m sure there’s
A lot of nature lovers out there!
Maybe city folks need, to put their
hiking boots on! Though my friend
Use to worry as sometimes
You find coyotes! Once I saw a mountain
Lion!
October 29th, 2020 21:58
Dove said:
Thanks Neville. I’m sure there’s
A lot of nature lovers out there!
Maybe city folks need, to put their
hiking boots on! Though my friend
Use to worry as sometimes
You find coyotes! Once I saw a mountain
Lion!
October 29th, 2020 21:58
One with Nature
Neville said:
some just dont get it .. tis their loss.. what could possibly be better than that feeling you describe so well ..
a oneness with nature, sounds pretty cool to me ................
Neville
October 27th, 2020 14:16
Neville said:
some just dont get it .. tis their loss.. what could possibly be better than that feeling you describe so well ..
a oneness with nature, sounds pretty cool to me ................
Neville
October 27th, 2020 14:16
One with Nature
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am one with nature
bugs can\'t get me down
I see the clouds
dancing in the sky
Here away from the city
I never frown
Dashing deer
always seem to hide\'
smooth flow and wondrously conveys that pocket of moment, where our mind is seemingly at peace with all the abundant nuances, we usually take for granted
October 27th, 2020 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am one with nature
bugs can\'t get me down
I see the clouds
dancing in the sky
Here away from the city
I never frown
Dashing deer
always seem to hide\'
smooth flow and wondrously conveys that pocket of moment, where our mind is seemingly at peace with all the abundant nuances, we usually take for granted
October 27th, 2020 04:25
The Dent on my Pillow
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Melissa, may the stars always shine for you.
Andy
October 18th, 2020 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Melissa, may the stars always shine for you.
Andy
October 18th, 2020 00:39
The Dent on my Pillow
jarcher54 said:
Very touching... we\'ve pretty much all known that dent on the pillow. Nothing will ever fix it, but the experience makes us stronger and more grateful for other blessings that come along. Thanks for sharing this little vignette. I wonder if I\'ll be able to sleep tonight!
October 17th, 2020 11:40
jarcher54 said:
Very touching... we\'ve pretty much all known that dent on the pillow. Nothing will ever fix it, but the experience makes us stronger and more grateful for other blessings that come along. Thanks for sharing this little vignette. I wonder if I\'ll be able to sleep tonight!
October 17th, 2020 11:40
Scarecrow Ode
Lorna said:
Great imagery........ I can smell the hay.... took me back to the horse farms and my horseman husband....
October 15th, 2020 05:31
Lorna said:
Great imagery........ I can smell the hay.... took me back to the horse farms and my horseman husband....
October 15th, 2020 05:31
Scarecrow Ode
orchidee said:
Good write RB.
I\'m going nuts! I felt sorry for a scarecrow out in a field all night. I brought it indoors. Did I?! heehee.
October 15th, 2020 02:35
orchidee said:
Good write RB.
I\'m going nuts! I felt sorry for a scarecrow out in a field all night. I brought it indoors. Did I?! heehee.
October 15th, 2020 02:35
Scarecrow Ode
Goldfinch60 said:
In our area we have an annual scarecrow competition and when you drive round there are some wonderful scarecrows in the front gardens - I just stand still in mine. 😁
October 15th, 2020 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
In our area we have an annual scarecrow competition and when you drive round there are some wonderful scarecrows in the front gardens - I just stand still in mine. 😁
October 15th, 2020 00:14
Scarecrow Ode
dusk arising said:
Our local farmer has installed enhancements so that the scarecrow smells of curry and farts every once and a while.
The crows can be seen forming a queue.
Target practice.
October 14th, 2020 21:30
dusk arising said:
Our local farmer has installed enhancements so that the scarecrow smells of curry and farts every once and a while.
The crows can be seen forming a queue.
Target practice.
October 14th, 2020 21:30
One Summer’s Day
Dove said:
Thanks Neville, glad it could evoke your own memories
October 14th, 2020 14:12
Dove said:
Thanks Neville, glad it could evoke your own memories
October 14th, 2020 14:12
One Summer’s Day
Neville said:
A delightful little meander along the beach and prom ... thank you for taking me there RB ...
October 14th, 2020 14:10
Neville said:
A delightful little meander along the beach and prom ... thank you for taking me there RB ...
October 14th, 2020 14:10
Taste of Temptation
Neville said:
I just had to come back for more ...... you could say tempted, but ..
:)
October 14th, 2020 13:59
Neville said:
I just had to come back for more ...... you could say tempted, but ..
:)
October 14th, 2020 13:59
Taste of Temptation
L. B. Mek said:
effortless flow and a wonderful portrait of attraction and yearning in those otherworldly moments within early romance
October 12th, 2020 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
effortless flow and a wonderful portrait of attraction and yearning in those otherworldly moments within early romance
October 12th, 2020 05:11
Taste of Temptation
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words RB, may that passion never fail.
Andy
October 12th, 2020 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words RB, may that passion never fail.
Andy
October 12th, 2020 00:24
Taste of Temptation
Neville said:
I was gonna ask for a double in the first place ...
This is very good RB .. I like it a lot ..
October 11th, 2020 16:21
Neville said:
I was gonna ask for a double in the first place ...
This is very good RB .. I like it a lot ..
October 11th, 2020 16:21
Taste of Temptation
Trenz Pruca said:
\"the sensual desires takes for twisting in the soul\" So true.
Thank you...
October 11th, 2020 16:14
Trenz Pruca said:
\"the sensual desires takes for twisting in the soul\" So true.
Thank you...
October 11th, 2020 16:14
Taste of Temptation
orchidee said:
Oohh, will too much \'ecstasy\' be good for me? Will it be too much for me?! heehee.
October 11th, 2020 14:09
orchidee said:
Oohh, will too much \'ecstasy\' be good for me? Will it be too much for me?! heehee.
October 11th, 2020 14:09
Was it just a Dream
Dove said:
Well thank you kindly Sir Neville, and for you I give a double wink,
Thanks for the second glance
October 11th, 2020 13:02
Dove said:
Well thank you kindly Sir Neville, and for you I give a double wink,
Thanks for the second glance
October 11th, 2020 13:02
Sunshine
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure to read such a sun-shiny verse - -- - I enjoyed every warm and loving line.
October 11th, 2020 10:43
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure to read such a sun-shiny verse - -- - I enjoyed every warm and loving line.
October 11th, 2020 10:43
Was it just a Dream
Neville said:
a re-visit .. just because I can .. and because I think these words are more than worth it
October 11th, 2020 02:06
Neville said:
a re-visit .. just because I can .. and because I think these words are more than worth it
October 11th, 2020 02:06
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