Comments received on poems by Dove
In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write RB but beautifully written.
Those raindrops that are left will evaporate and form into love\'s mist one day.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write RB but beautifully written.
Those raindrops that are left will evaporate and form into love\'s mist one day.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:22
In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude
FineB said:
A poignant sad write but beautiful.
Thank you.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 21st, 2020 21:20
FineB said:
A poignant sad write but beautiful.
Thank you.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 21st, 2020 21:20
In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude
RDS said:
As much as you may place this as sad, I can\'t help but be somewhat consoled to be reminded in the first verse:
\"Wind-sweeping sad emotions
Infiltrating the beauty of my heart\"
That life moves through us rather than acting upon us. Then continues to reflect on the tenderness of loss, for those who have leapt and wept. Thank you.
November 21st, 2020 14:42
RDS said:
As much as you may place this as sad, I can\'t help but be somewhat consoled to be reminded in the first verse:
\"Wind-sweeping sad emotions
Infiltrating the beauty of my heart\"
That life moves through us rather than acting upon us. Then continues to reflect on the tenderness of loss, for those who have leapt and wept. Thank you.
November 21st, 2020 14:42
In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude
Michael Edwards said:
Having read Neville\'s posting and now this one I\'ve gone to mush - and now for the schnaps.
November 21st, 2020 13:49
Michael Edwards said:
Having read Neville\'s posting and now this one I\'ve gone to mush - and now for the schnaps.
November 21st, 2020 13:49
In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude
Neville said:
there appears to be a thread of both regret and desolation running through your finely crafted poem .. I particularly like the way you have punctuated each space between verses with an auditory utterance ..
yes indeed .. I enjoyed todays offering my friend .....................
November 21st, 2020 12:34
Neville said:
there appears to be a thread of both regret and desolation running through your finely crafted poem .. I particularly like the way you have punctuated each space between verses with an auditory utterance ..
yes indeed .. I enjoyed todays offering my friend .....................
November 21st, 2020 12:34
In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude
Fay Slimm. said:
A touching read Dove - your versing of emotional togetherness is so clear and relatable. Another gem of a write.
November 21st, 2020 12:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A touching read Dove - your versing of emotional togetherness is so clear and relatable. Another gem of a write.
November 21st, 2020 12:21
In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude
orchidee said:
Yep, I remember how......you and I.....
Do shut up Orchi. You\'ll ruin the tempo of the poem! lol.
November 21st, 2020 12:05
orchidee said:
Yep, I remember how......you and I.....
Do shut up Orchi. You\'ll ruin the tempo of the poem! lol.
November 21st, 2020 12:05
In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude
dusk arising said:
Be positive, for in your life there has been the joy of love which is denied to so many for so many differing reasons. Deep emotional love with it\'s physical coupling is a gem. It may come again, it may not, but rejoice in the fact that you have felt the exhilaration of the finest emotions known to mankind.
Great poetry with atmospheric melancholy of reminiscence.
November 21st, 2020 10:35
dusk arising said:
Be positive, for in your life there has been the joy of love which is denied to so many for so many differing reasons. Deep emotional love with it\'s physical coupling is a gem. It may come again, it may not, but rejoice in the fact that you have felt the exhilaration of the finest emotions known to mankind.
Great poetry with atmospheric melancholy of reminiscence.
November 21st, 2020 10:35
LIFETIME
Neville said:
I just know there has to be someone out here who is not only a lucky individual but who is probably blushing all over ................ a super love song/poem and most deserving of all the praise and positivity being heaped upon both it and you ma\'am ...
Neville
November 20th, 2020 13:51
Neville said:
I just know there has to be someone out here who is not only a lucky individual but who is probably blushing all over ................ a super love song/poem and most deserving of all the praise and positivity being heaped upon both it and you ma\'am ...
Neville
November 20th, 2020 13:51
LIFETIME
Dove said:
Thanks Mek, your words are truly appreciated! Loved them,
Best to you and thanks for stopping by
November 20th, 2020 11:11
Dove said:
Thanks Mek, your words are truly appreciated! Loved them,
Best to you and thanks for stopping by
November 20th, 2020 11:11
LIFETIME
L. B. Mek said:
whoever inspired these words to resonate within you must be a special individual, not easy to instil such intricately profound feeling\'s in each other, thank you for sharing this courageous dedication,
brilliantly written!
November 16th, 2020 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
whoever inspired these words to resonate within you must be a special individual, not easy to instil such intricately profound feeling\'s in each other, thank you for sharing this courageous dedication,
brilliantly written!
November 16th, 2020 04:57
LIFETIME
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful emotive words RB, that love will last for eternity.
Andy
November 15th, 2020 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful emotive words RB, that love will last for eternity.
Andy
November 15th, 2020 01:31
LIFETIME
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Buenas Tardes - ANGELA AQUI - Hola Paloma = como este Tu ahora? Gracias por una Poema d\'Amor directo de Tu Amorada Carazon !
Loved every line and I could feel the passion I will write a *Love Poem * like thta for BRIAN in HIS Christmas Card - He loved it too.
On another Subject we think JOE & MALALA are a Dream Ticket & are praying for them every day as they seek to repair the Environmental & Social Damage inflicted on the USA in the last four Years by GRUMP ! He must never be allowed to RUN AGAIN for PRESIDENT ~ AMEN
Blessings & Paz & Alegria to YOU & YOURS
Con Amor Angela - Brian Y El Gato Ahumido ! ! !
November 14th, 2020 16:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Buenas Tardes - ANGELA AQUI - Hola Paloma = como este Tu ahora? Gracias por una Poema d\'Amor directo de Tu Amorada Carazon !
Loved every line and I could feel the passion I will write a *Love Poem * like thta for BRIAN in HIS Christmas Card - He loved it too.
On another Subject we think JOE & MALALA are a Dream Ticket & are praying for them every day as they seek to repair the Environmental & Social Damage inflicted on the USA in the last four Years by GRUMP ! He must never be allowed to RUN AGAIN for PRESIDENT ~ AMEN
Blessings & Paz & Alegria to YOU & YOURS
Con Amor Angela - Brian Y El Gato Ahumido ! ! !
November 14th, 2020 16:31
LIFETIME
Doggerel Dave said:
Both deeply affecting and erotic.........aah......
Many thanks for that one.
Dave
November 14th, 2020 16:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Both deeply affecting and erotic.........aah......
Many thanks for that one.
Dave
November 14th, 2020 16:27
LIFETIME
orchidee said:
Oohh, OK, I will then. I mght swoon though! heehee.
November 14th, 2020 14:11
orchidee said:
Oohh, OK, I will then. I mght swoon though! heehee.
November 14th, 2020 14:11
LIFETIME
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh lovely -- - all through the loving tender appeal makes its claims so gently - one of your best dear Dove......... into my list of faves this goes.
November 14th, 2020 13:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh lovely -- - all through the loving tender appeal makes its claims so gently - one of your best dear Dove......... into my list of faves this goes.
November 14th, 2020 13:39
Winter Twilight
Dove said:
Thank you Neville, all warm chills welcome! Glad you enjoyed, best to you
November 14th, 2020 11:51
Dove said:
Thank you Neville, all warm chills welcome! Glad you enjoyed, best to you
November 14th, 2020 11:51
Winter Twilight
Neville said:
......your winter dedicated sonnet sent a pleasantly warming little chill write through me ....
November 12th, 2020 08:17
Neville said:
......your winter dedicated sonnet sent a pleasantly warming little chill write through me ....
November 12th, 2020 08:17
Winter Twilight
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful write,
especially like the strong start and undeniably emotive ending
November 12th, 2020 06:06
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful write,
especially like the strong start and undeniably emotive ending
November 12th, 2020 06:06
Winter Twilight
orchidee said:
Now why didn\'t I write this fine poem about you, if the poem was about a person?! heehee.
November 12th, 2020 02:39
orchidee said:
Now why didn\'t I write this fine poem about you, if the poem was about a person?! heehee.
November 12th, 2020 02:39
Winter Twilight
Goldfinch60 said:
That grace is instilled in us all with your wonderful words RB.
Andy
November 12th, 2020 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
That grace is instilled in us all with your wonderful words RB.
Andy
November 12th, 2020 01:21
Seas of Dreams
L. B. Mek said:
\'yet caressing your vastness with its breath
As every magical pulse, th*r*ough me flows
Do you remember me? The flow within
The sea of dreams Underneath my skin\'
beautiful imagery and well thought-out rhythm and flow, good write
November 10th, 2020 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'yet caressing your vastness with its breath
As every magical pulse, th*r*ough me flows
Do you remember me? The flow within
The sea of dreams Underneath my skin\'
beautiful imagery and well thought-out rhythm and flow, good write
November 10th, 2020 05:42
Seas of Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
May your sea of dreams bring you joy and love throughout your life RB.
Andy
November 10th, 2020 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
May your sea of dreams bring you joy and love throughout your life RB.
Andy
November 10th, 2020 01:47
Seas of Dreams
Fay Slimm. said:
What a wonderful flow to this romantic verse - - a delightfully dreamy read my dear friend.
November 9th, 2020 13:02
Fay Slimm. said:
What a wonderful flow to this romantic verse - - a delightfully dreamy read my dear friend.
November 9th, 2020 13:02
Dressing aTurkey
Dove said:
Thank you kindly kindly! Best to you dearest! I was trying to make a poem for the challenge word” “dress” , this was the best I could do! After all one must be original, most poems were about dresses
November 9th, 2020 12:57
Dove said:
Thank you kindly kindly! Best to you dearest! I was trying to make a poem for the challenge word” “dress” , this was the best I could do! After all one must be original, most poems were about dresses
November 9th, 2020 12:57
Dressing aTurkey
Neville said:
I tend to eat very little meat but thought your \'Dressing a Turkey\' was pretty kinda neat ...
Am sending a seasonal hug and a kiss .. remember tho\' a snog is for life.. not just for Christmas x
November 9th, 2020 12:46
Neville said:
I tend to eat very little meat but thought your \'Dressing a Turkey\' was pretty kinda neat ...
Am sending a seasonal hug and a kiss .. remember tho\' a snog is for life.. not just for Christmas x
November 9th, 2020 12:46
Dressing aTurkey
Doggerel Dave said:
Bound to RB - in fact my user photo was taken last season at my friend/partner\'s place (her dressing gown too). V warm - note the sunshine outside.
Stay safe, Dave
November 6th, 2020 17:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Bound to RB - in fact my user photo was taken last season at my friend/partner\'s place (her dressing gown too). V warm - note the sunshine outside.
Stay safe, Dave
November 6th, 2020 17:52
Dressing aTurkey
Dove said:
Thanks for stopping by! May you enjoy the season as well!,
November 6th, 2020 10:41
Dove said:
Thanks for stopping by! May you enjoy the season as well!,
November 6th, 2020 10:41
Dressing aTurkey
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Romantic B/Dove:
As a long time vegetarian (and I mean long time - nothing trendy or fashionable about me!) I wish you hadn\'t.
Merry Festive Season anyway..
Take care, Dave.
November 4th, 2020 23:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Romantic B/Dove:
As a long time vegetarian (and I mean long time - nothing trendy or fashionable about me!) I wish you hadn\'t.
Merry Festive Season anyway..
Take care, Dave.
November 4th, 2020 23:47
And So the Waves Whispered...
Dove said:
Thanks Fay! Yes, repeat lines, ingrains the message deeper! Smiles to you dear Lady
November 4th, 2020 20:48
Dove said:
Thanks Fay! Yes, repeat lines, ingrains the message deeper! Smiles to you dear Lady
November 4th, 2020 20:48
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