Comments received on poems by Dove
“Terzanelle” A Million Stars
Dove said:
Awesome Angela & Brian! Glad you might try the Terzanelle, it’s why I posted the style, as you both have inspired me to try different formats ! I hope someone might break from their pattern of free verse!
Best to the Trio!
September 15th, 2020 15:19
Dove said:
Awesome Angela & Brian! Glad you might try the Terzanelle, it’s why I posted the style, as you both have inspired me to try different formats ! I hope someone might break from their pattern of free verse!
Best to the Trio!
September 15th, 2020 15:19
“Terzanelle” A Million Stars
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA ROMANTICA ~ Gracias por esta Poema. Love the theme all our destinies are in the STARS ! I have sussed out the rhyme pattern and will post one soon !
Blessings & Peace & Joy con Amor
Angela - Brain & El Gato Ahumido !!!
Please check *ANYONE FOR TENNIS ?* GRACIAS A & B
September 15th, 2020 13:19
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA ROMANTICA ~ Gracias por esta Poema. Love the theme all our destinies are in the STARS ! I have sussed out the rhyme pattern and will post one soon !
Blessings & Peace & Joy con Amor
Angela - Brain & El Gato Ahumido !!!
Please check *ANYONE FOR TENNIS ?* GRACIAS A & B
September 15th, 2020 13:19
Let me Serenade You
dusk arising said:
You really are quite the poet of romance here.
By heck...Oh some lucky chap is the recipient of this gem..... and gets the beats of your love embraces too.
I\'m jealous already.
September 15th, 2020 11:08
dusk arising said:
You really are quite the poet of romance here.
By heck...Oh some lucky chap is the recipient of this gem..... and gets the beats of your love embraces too.
I\'m jealous already.
September 15th, 2020 11:08
Let me Serenade You
orchidee said:
Oohh yes, serenade me. Start singing before I do, or you\'ll never hear the end of me squawking. Sing louder to drown me out! lol.
Aww, why they say, \'Is that you singing, or two cats fighting?!\' lol.
September 15th, 2020 11:01
orchidee said:
Oohh yes, serenade me. Start singing before I do, or you\'ll never hear the end of me squawking. Sing louder to drown me out! lol.
Aww, why they say, \'Is that you singing, or two cats fighting?!\' lol.
September 15th, 2020 11:01
Let me Serenade You
Neville said:
... Ah’ that both reads and feels so bloomin good...
... And I would gladly take thy pulsing and raise thee some intermittent tight squeezes .... 🍷x
September 15th, 2020 10:44
Neville said:
... Ah’ that both reads and feels so bloomin good...
... And I would gladly take thy pulsing and raise thee some intermittent tight squeezes .... 🍷x
September 15th, 2020 10:44
“Terzanelle” A Million Stars
Dove said:
Thanks Andy, blessings to you! Stars are many things, they are maps to kings, stepping stones to heaven, and light to the universe
Thanks for stopping by and leaving your pearls of wisdom!
September 15th, 2020 10:10
Dove said:
Thanks Andy, blessings to you! Stars are many things, they are maps to kings, stepping stones to heaven, and light to the universe
Thanks for stopping by and leaving your pearls of wisdom!
September 15th, 2020 10:10
“Terzanelle” A Million Stars
Goldfinch60 said:
I too look up at the stars and know that My Joyce is up there looking down on me. Looking at the stars is so comforting, after all the stars are holes in Heavens Floor.
Andy
September 15th, 2020 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I too look up at the stars and know that My Joyce is up there looking down on me. Looking at the stars is so comforting, after all the stars are holes in Heavens Floor.
Andy
September 15th, 2020 00:21
“Terzanelle” A Million Stars
Dove said:
Thanks Dusk! We always use to say “ I love you to the moon and back” and thus the heavens is where I look first!
Not a moon shall rise, that shall remind me of her bright eyes”
Thanks for stopping by!
September 14th, 2020 12:47
Dove said:
Thanks Dusk! We always use to say “ I love you to the moon and back” and thus the heavens is where I look first!
Not a moon shall rise, that shall remind me of her bright eyes”
Thanks for stopping by!
September 14th, 2020 12:47
“Terzanelle” A Million Stars
dusk arising said:
So many unanswered questions when we lose someone dear to us, so we look into the wonderous night sky, where more unanswered questions are found. But there is comfort for confronted with the vastness of the visible universe it\'s easy to feel the presence of your lost soul as if they were looking down upon your face.... and it\'s within our nature to demonstrate, one to one, feelings of love and sadness.
It\'s all there in your post, a lot more poetically though.
September 14th, 2020 12:31
dusk arising said:
So many unanswered questions when we lose someone dear to us, so we look into the wonderous night sky, where more unanswered questions are found. But there is comfort for confronted with the vastness of the visible universe it\'s easy to feel the presence of your lost soul as if they were looking down upon your face.... and it\'s within our nature to demonstrate, one to one, feelings of love and sadness.
It\'s all there in your post, a lot more poetically though.
September 14th, 2020 12:31
“Terzanelle” A Million Stars
Dove said:
Thank you kindly for the read Orchidee, smilez! The original brings tears to my eyes!
September 14th, 2020 11:01
Dove said:
Thank you kindly for the read Orchidee, smilez! The original brings tears to my eyes!
September 14th, 2020 11:01
“ Villanelle “ Shall I call it Defeat?
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart will never be empty RB, there is always love in your words.
Andy
September 14th, 2020 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart will never be empty RB, there is always love in your words.
Andy
September 14th, 2020 00:24
“ Villanelle “ Shall I call it Defeat?
orchidee said:
Good write R.
Ok, I\'ll come back. I\'ll stay. It won\'t be defeat. lol.
September 13th, 2020 14:25
orchidee said:
Good write R.
Ok, I\'ll come back. I\'ll stay. It won\'t be defeat. lol.
September 13th, 2020 14:25
“ A Kyrielle “ Contented Hearts
Goldfinch60 said:
THose contented heartbeats will be with you forever RB.
Andy
September 13th, 2020 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
THose contented heartbeats will be with you forever RB.
Andy
September 13th, 2020 00:51
A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
ron parrish aka wordman said:
kissing under the silver moon,kinda sexy
September 11th, 2020 17:48
ron parrish aka wordman said:
kissing under the silver moon,kinda sexy
September 11th, 2020 17:48
A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww what a stellar bright imaginative poem riding on stars so poetically with a fine refrain and musing dreamily. It was a delight to have spotted it and not missed out on your talent. Kudos!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:56
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww what a stellar bright imaginative poem riding on stars so poetically with a fine refrain and musing dreamily. It was a delight to have spotted it and not missed out on your talent. Kudos!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:56
A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
Dove said:
Hola Angela, Romantica, I like that ! More passionate sounding!
Thanks for explaining the poem, perhaps it’ll inspire others to create one!
Best to you and Brian, and Smokey el gato bonito!
September 10th, 2020 18:43
Dove said:
Hola Angela, Romantica, I like that ! More passionate sounding!
Thanks for explaining the poem, perhaps it’ll inspire others to create one!
Best to you and Brian, and Smokey el gato bonito!
September 10th, 2020 18:43
A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA ROMANTICA ~ Gracias por esta Poema muy classica ! VILLANELLES are an excellent Poetic Form with lots of Repetition and only two Rhyming words (choose carefully !) in this case LIGHT & LIPS. The Rhyme pattern - and number of lines (19 ~ 5 triplets & a quatrain) is always the same. It is an excellent form for a Romantic or Spiritual Ode ~ because of the Repetition. In your case:
In darkness I knew i could touch the light
Floating on the stars on a heavenly flight
Very romantic. Brian & I loved this Poem ~ thanks for Sharing !
Your Poem sounds like *A Spiritual Translation* like ENOCH
getting to Heaven without Physical Death ~ AWESOME !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Con Amor Angela - Brian y El Gato Ahumado ! ! !
September 10th, 2020 15:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA ROMANTICA ~ Gracias por esta Poema muy classica ! VILLANELLES are an excellent Poetic Form with lots of Repetition and only two Rhyming words (choose carefully !) in this case LIGHT & LIPS. The Rhyme pattern - and number of lines (19 ~ 5 triplets & a quatrain) is always the same. It is an excellent form for a Romantic or Spiritual Ode ~ because of the Repetition. In your case:
In darkness I knew i could touch the light
Floating on the stars on a heavenly flight
Very romantic. Brian & I loved this Poem ~ thanks for Sharing !
Your Poem sounds like *A Spiritual Translation* like ENOCH
getting to Heaven without Physical Death ~ AWESOME !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Con Amor Angela - Brian y El Gato Ahumado ! ! !
September 10th, 2020 15:31
A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words Romantic, it suits your new name.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 15:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very fine words Romantic, it suits your new name.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 15:18
A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
Trenz Pruca said:
Good use of that interesting form.
September 10th, 2020 14:08
Trenz Pruca said:
Good use of that interesting form.
September 10th, 2020 14:08
Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
Dove said:
Thanks Unsub, it’s a beautiful way of phrasing it! Glad my poem could relax you!
I usually like writing sad poetry, moving people’s heart’s! But I also like soothing romantic tones!
Anyhow hope you had a great day at work!
Thanks for the read and comment!
September 10th, 2020 06:44
Dove said:
Thanks Unsub, it’s a beautiful way of phrasing it! Glad my poem could relax you!
I usually like writing sad poetry, moving people’s heart’s! But I also like soothing romantic tones!
Anyhow hope you had a great day at work!
Thanks for the read and comment!
September 10th, 2020 06:44
Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Romantic, or should that be beautiful romantic words.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Romantic, or should that be beautiful romantic words.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 01:33
Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
Dove said:
Thanks Dusk, I highlighted the line!
So that it would stand out! Just following
The rules,! It’s French, I’ll be posting a plain
Kyrielle, , and Rondelet, soon!
Thanks again
September 9th, 2020 19:00
Dove said:
Thanks Dusk, I highlighted the line!
So that it would stand out! Just following
The rules,! It’s French, I’ll be posting a plain
Kyrielle, , and Rondelet, soon!
Thanks again
September 9th, 2020 19:00
Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
dusk arising said:
Super construction in classic style verse.
I particularly like (and envy) the way you have taken the first line and placed it together with the repeating last line of each stanza to form the finale...
September 9th, 2020 12:07
dusk arising said:
Super construction in classic style verse.
I particularly like (and envy) the way you have taken the first line and placed it together with the repeating last line of each stanza to form the finale...
September 9th, 2020 12:07
Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon ROMANTIC BLOOM (awesome name !) Thanks for sharing a very ELEGANT KYRIELLE SONNET ! Love the Rhyme Pattern aabB ccbB ddbB bB. Repetition is very important in Classical Poetry ! I will remember *Whose petals never fall apart* ! Thank for sharing.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
September 9th, 2020 09:53
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon ROMANTIC BLOOM (awesome name !) Thanks for sharing a very ELEGANT KYRIELLE SONNET ! Love the Rhyme Pattern aabB ccbB ddbB bB. Repetition is very important in Classical Poetry ! I will remember *Whose petals never fall apart* ! Thank for sharing.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
September 9th, 2020 09:53
Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
orchidee said:
A good write, erm - is that you, Dove?! heehee.
September 9th, 2020 09:40
orchidee said:
A good write, erm - is that you, Dove?! heehee.
September 9th, 2020 09:40
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