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๐“ ๐“ก๐“ธ๐“ผ๐“ฎ ๐““๐“ป๐“ฒ๐”ƒ๐”ƒ๐“ต๐“ฎ๐“ญ ๐“ฒ๐“ท ๐“œ๐“ธ๐“ป๐“ท๐“ฒ๐“ท๐“ฐ ๐““๐“ฎ๐”€
jarcher54 said:

At first I thought... a little saccharine, a little predictable... but as I read it I became enchanted by the sound, the little repetitious device linking the parts so subtly, and the sincerity of the sentiments, and ultimately I was transported to a calm, fragrant place to just smell the roses and ponder love.

May 29th, 2021 02:07





๐”ธ๐••๐••๐•š๐•”๐•ฅ๐•š๐•ง๐•– ๐•ฅ๐•  ๐•๐• ๐•ง๐•–ย 
Accidental Poet said:

Its human nature to need love, even though some won\'t agree. Beautiful write Dove. ; )

May 21st, 2021 20:54




Let me Quilt My Affections
L. B. Mek said:

\'๐ฟ๐‘’๐“‰ ๐“‚๐‘’ weave ๐“‚๐“Ž ๐“Œ๐’ถ๐“‡๐“‚ ๐“๐‘œ๐“‹๐‘’ ๐’ถ๐“ˆ ๐’ถ ๐“Œ๐’ฝ๐‘œ๐“๐‘’
๐ฟ๐‘’๐“‰ ๐“‚๐‘’ weave ๐“‚๐“Ž ๐“‰๐‘’๐“ƒ๐’น๐‘’๐“‡ ๐’ธ๐’ถ๐“‡๐‘’๐“ˆ๐“ˆ๐‘’๐“ˆ

๐’ฒ๐’พ๐“‰๐’ฝ ๐‘’๐“‹๐‘’๐“‡๐“Ž ๐’ป๐’พ๐’ท๐‘’๐“‡ ๐“Œ๐’พ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ ๐“‚๐‘’,
๐“Œ๐’ถ๐“‡๐“‚๐“‰๐’ฝ ๐ผ ๐“ˆ๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“๐“ ๐’ท๐‘’๐“ˆ๐“‰๐‘œ๐“Œ\'..
Brilliant!!!

May 21st, 2021 02:56

Let me Quilt My Affections
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving write Dove, may that quilt of love always surround you.

Andy

May 21st, 2021 00:35

Let me Quilt My Affections
orchidee said:

A fine write Dove.
Grin - but not swoon?! heehee.

May 20th, 2021 13:35

Let me Quilt My Affections
Fay Slimm. said:

Such appeal in this tender love-verse - dear Dove --- I love that first line of superb imagery

May 20th, 2021 12:46

Let me Quilt My Affections
Neville said:


... a brilliant title and a smashing love poem too .. some guy is without any doubt whatsoever, a very lucky geezer indeed ..............

... Neville


May 20th, 2021 11:54

Let me Quilt My Affections
dusk arising said:

Enwrapped in such a quilt of love your lover will be sure to reward you with deserved devotions.

May 20th, 2021 09:44

The Earth Worm-a sonnetย 
dusk arising said:

The humble earthworm was not created to become hooked bait ot abused. No fish was harmed or starved in the writing of this comment LOL

May 8th, 2021 14:39

Sun Kissed
Neville said:


I came back in the hope of feeling the flutter of displaced wind on my shoulder from the downbeat of your wings ....... and of course because I kinda like being sun kissed................................................

... Neville

May 8th, 2021 04:35

The Earth Worm-a sonnetย 
Neville said:


I agree with you two too .. I mean both you n Fay .. after all, a worm is for life, not just for Christmas and weekends ..

Neville...

May 8th, 2021 04:31

The Earth Worm-a sonnetย 
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Dove, they are priceless to our earth.

Andy

May 8th, 2021 00:41

The Earth Worm-a sonnetย 
jarcher54 said:

Yes, they deserve THIS sonnet. It\'s not quite a classic sonnet, but it is sincere and respectful. I always rescue the poor worms that end up squirming to escape drowning in a puddle or container after a rain shower... I laughed when you refer to your particular worm as \"she.\" As you probably know, technically earthworms are hermaphroditic. Thanks for posting this...

May 7th, 2021 22:26

The Earth Worm-a sonnetย 
Accidental Poet said:

I\'ve not sacrificed a Earth Worm on a hook for about 55 years now. The fish rather appreciated it too I\'m sure. Nicely written Dove. ; )

May 7th, 2021 22:26

The Earth Worm-a sonnetย 
Doggerel Dave said:

A righteous cause, Dove. Publicised as a sonnet to boot, a form which looks quite scary.
You have elevated (wrong direction for a worm, but you know what I mean :-)) to it\'s rightful place in the scheme of things.

May 7th, 2021 18:57

The Earth Worm-a sonnetย 
ron parrish aka wordman said:

everything has a purpose in the ecology

May 7th, 2021 16:25

The Earth Worm-a sonnetย 
Fay Slimm. said:

Agree with each line of your tribute to this wriggly gardener\'s friend - - what a needed and powerful soil sifter the worm - great that you personify this underground life and love that last couplet dear Dove

May 7th, 2021 16:13

Beauty
Neville said:


Just as good this time around ... and read aloud, because I could ... x

April 23rd, 2021 02:16

Underneath the Shadow of my Wings
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Dove.

Andy

March 21st, 2021 01:27

Underneath the Shadow of my Wings
FredPeyer said:

Beautiful, Dove! To me it sounds like a tender message from a mother to her child. I love it!

March 20th, 2021 21:29

Underneath the Shadow of my Wings
Doggerel Dave said:

I feel safe as I read your work, Romantic B. Definitely no ambivalence there.

March 20th, 2021 15:36

Underneath the Shadow of my Wings
orchidee said:

A fine write RB.

March 20th, 2021 11:12

Underneath the Shadow of my Wings
Neville said:


if ya gonna be tucked ... there surely cant be a better place ... lovely words indeed RB ...

March 20th, 2021 10:38



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