Comments received on poems by Dove



A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HOLA ROMANTICA ~ Gracias por esta Poema muy classica ! VILLANELLES are an excellent Poetic Form with lots of Repetition and only two Rhyming words (choose carefully !) in this case LIGHT & LIPS. The Rhyme pattern - and number of lines (19 ~ 5 triplets & a quatrain) is always the same. It is an excellent form for a Romantic or Spiritual Ode ~ because of the Repetition. In your case:

In darkness I knew i could touch the light
Floating on the stars on a heavenly flight

Very romantic. Brian & I loved this Poem ~ thanks for Sharing !
Your Poem sounds like *A Spiritual Translation* like ENOCH
getting to Heaven without Physical Death ~ AWESOME !

Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Con Amor Angela - Brian y El Gato Ahumado ! ! !


September 10th, 2020 15:31

A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
Goldfinch60 said:

Very fine words Romantic, it suits your new name.

Andy

September 10th, 2020 15:18

A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
Trenz Pruca said:

Good use of that interesting form.

September 10th, 2020 14:08

A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
orchidee said:

A fine write R.

September 10th, 2020 10:00

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
Dove said:

Thanks Unsub, it’s a beautiful way of phrasing it! Glad my poem could relax you!
I usually like writing sad poetry, moving people’s heart’s! But I also like soothing romantic tones!

Anyhow hope you had a great day at work!
Thanks for the read and comment!

September 10th, 2020 06:44

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Romantic, or should that be beautiful romantic words.

Andy

September 10th, 2020 01:33

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
Dove said:

Thanks Dusk, I highlighted the line!
So that it would stand out! Just following
The rules,! It’s French, I’ll be posting a plain
Kyrielle, , and Rondelet, soon!

Thanks again


September 9th, 2020 19:00

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
dusk arising said:

Super construction in classic style verse.

I particularly like (and envy) the way you have taken the first line and placed it together with the repeating last line of each stanza to form the finale...

September 9th, 2020 12:07

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon ROMANTIC BLOOM (awesome name !) Thanks for sharing a very ELEGANT KYRIELLE SONNET ! Love the Rhyme Pattern aabB ccbB ddbB bB. Repetition is very important in Classical Poetry ! I will remember *Whose petals never fall apart* ! Thank for sharing.

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛

September 9th, 2020 09:53

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
orchidee said:

A good write, erm - is that you, Dove?! heehee.

September 9th, 2020 09:40

La’ libertas : Fantasies
Dove said:

Again, thank you kindly!

Have a great Day!

September 7th, 2020 23:00

A Treasure within my Soul
Dove said:

Thank you kindly Mek!
I appreciate you read and comment

September 7th, 2020 22:57

A Treasure within my Soul
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully rhythmic and blessed with that rare quality of effortless flow

September 7th, 2020 04:06

La’ libertas : Fantasies
L. B. Mek said:

I second what Andy said above,
like your wonderful flow as well

September 7th, 2020 03:50

La’ libertas : Fantasies
Goldfinch60 said:

One day those fantasies may be come real and the love will come to fruition.

Andy

September 7th, 2020 00:46

A Treasure within my Soul
ron parrish aka wordman said:

and may it linger there forever

September 6th, 2020 14:33

A Treasure within my Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

May that treasure be forever in your soul.

Welcome to MPS.

September 6th, 2020 01:24

A Treasure within my Soul
Goddess of the Mist said:

A very sweet poem with a unique rhythm!

September 5th, 2020 21:50

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