Comments received on poems by Dove
The Moon & Stars
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and that last stanza says it all.
Andy
October 3rd, 2020 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and that last stanza says it all.
Andy
October 3rd, 2020 00:21
The Moon & Stars
Neville said:
Surely the most perfect villanelle I have variously visited all day ....
.... All joking aside .. beautiful and and no mean feat, I am both sure and in awe ...
Neville
October 3rd, 2020 00:10
Neville said:
Surely the most perfect villanelle I have variously visited all day ....
.... All joking aside .. beautiful and and no mean feat, I am both sure and in awe ...
Neville
October 3rd, 2020 00:10
Was it just a Dream
Dove said:
Shall read your dreamy poem ! The pearl has a gleaming quality, a luster like a mirror! Yes her look has a mysterious quality, Wisdom flowing!
Smilez
October 2nd, 2020 23:42
Dove said:
Shall read your dreamy poem ! The pearl has a gleaming quality, a luster like a mirror! Yes her look has a mysterious quality, Wisdom flowing!
Smilez
October 2nd, 2020 23:42
Was it just a Dream
L. B. Mek said:
oh snap, we both mused on dreaming in our last posts lol,
I like the angle of the picture and how it makes the pearl more prominent, somewhat like the pearl of wisdom your rhythmic lines are chasing to unmask
October 2nd, 2020 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
oh snap, we both mused on dreaming in our last posts lol,
I like the angle of the picture and how it makes the pearl more prominent, somewhat like the pearl of wisdom your rhythmic lines are chasing to unmask
October 2nd, 2020 04:17
Was it just a Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words RB, may those dreams be always with you.
Andy
October 2nd, 2020 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words RB, may those dreams be always with you.
Andy
October 2nd, 2020 00:24
Was it just a Dream
Michael Edwards said:
The words carry you with them - super work.
October 1st, 2020 16:09
Michael Edwards said:
The words carry you with them - super work.
October 1st, 2020 16:09
Was it just a Dream
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes unhurried and flowing slowly your verse depicts differing depths of dreams and love the girl in the pearl ear-ring you chose to accompany this enchanting rhyme - well done again D.
October 1st, 2020 13:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes unhurried and flowing slowly your verse depicts differing depths of dreams and love the girl in the pearl ear-ring you chose to accompany this enchanting rhyme - well done again D.
October 1st, 2020 13:17
Was it just a Dream
Dove said:
Thanks Neville, this was another poem challenge “ I just saw my Reflection Blink”
This is what it turned into! Thanks again for stopping by
Take care
October 1st, 2020 13:08
Dove said:
Thanks Neville, this was another poem challenge “ I just saw my Reflection Blink”
This is what it turned into! Thanks again for stopping by
Take care
October 1st, 2020 13:08
Was it just a Dream
Neville said:
I really like the progressive unhurried flow of these words .. from a blink .. to fading away ... so you can paddle another day .... :)
October 1st, 2020 13:05
Neville said:
I really like the progressive unhurried flow of these words .. from a blink .. to fading away ... so you can paddle another day .... :)
October 1st, 2020 13:05
“Sonnet” From the Ashes
Dove said:
Gust of luck , sounds mighty fine! Thanks sonnets are usually my favorite format and I’ve got the knack for them! I have been trying out new formats so my poetry doesn’t sound too familiar
Thanks again
October 1st, 2020 12:18
Dove said:
Gust of luck , sounds mighty fine! Thanks sonnets are usually my favorite format and I’ve got the knack for them! I have been trying out new formats so my poetry doesn’t sound too familiar
Thanks again
October 1st, 2020 12:18
“Sonnet” From the Ashes
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful demonstration of natural flow coexisting with established Poetry forms,
those dying embers within love need only a gust of luck - to reignite: our weary hearts
October 1st, 2020 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful demonstration of natural flow coexisting with established Poetry forms,
those dying embers within love need only a gust of luck - to reignite: our weary hearts
October 1st, 2020 03:39
“Sonnet” From the Ashes
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write RB, love can rise from many a spark.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write RB, love can rise from many a spark.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 00:09
“Sonnet” From the Ashes
Dove said:
Awe dearest Angela, you are a tender hearted soul, and it sure takes a lot of
Compassion to care for others, and luckily
You have a Wonderful relationship to nurse
You back to peacefulness! Of course Passion comes with the package! You two are equally blessed!
Thanks for stopping by! Best to the Trio!
September 30th, 2020 18:21
Dove said:
Awe dearest Angela, you are a tender hearted soul, and it sure takes a lot of
Compassion to care for others, and luckily
You have a Wonderful relationship to nurse
You back to peacefulness! Of course Passion comes with the package! You two are equally blessed!
Thanks for stopping by! Best to the Trio!
September 30th, 2020 18:21
“Sonnet” From the Ashes
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA AQUI - HOLA ROMANTICA - Gracias por esta Sonata d*Amor ! Love is like that it ebbs & flows with circumstances - But it is never totally extinguished ! Sometimes I come home shattered physically & emotionally because of the demands of my JOB (PHYSIO). The ANGST of my Clients flows into me and my TLC into them ! Brian is an excellent Chef and restores my Body & Soul with a glass of Rtoja and a medium-rare Steak ! Then all it takes is one Long French Kiss to restore my Libido _ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours with LOVE
Angela & Brian & El Gato Ahumido 💛💛💛
September 30th, 2020 17:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA AQUI - HOLA ROMANTICA - Gracias por esta Sonata d*Amor ! Love is like that it ebbs & flows with circumstances - But it is never totally extinguished ! Sometimes I come home shattered physically & emotionally because of the demands of my JOB (PHYSIO). The ANGST of my Clients flows into me and my TLC into them ! Brian is an excellent Chef and restores my Body & Soul with a glass of Rtoja and a medium-rare Steak ! Then all it takes is one Long French Kiss to restore my Libido _ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours with LOVE
Angela & Brian & El Gato Ahumido 💛💛💛
September 30th, 2020 17:58
“Sonnet” From the Ashes
Neville said:
I can\'t imagine how I could possibly inspire anyone or anything .. and certainly nowt as beautiful as this magnificent sonnet ..
but I aint gonna argue ...
I\'m just gonna sit back, smile inanely and blush all over ....
September 30th, 2020 11:02
Neville said:
I can\'t imagine how I could possibly inspire anyone or anything .. and certainly nowt as beautiful as this magnificent sonnet ..
but I aint gonna argue ...
I\'m just gonna sit back, smile inanely and blush all over ....
September 30th, 2020 11:02
“Sonnet” From the Ashes
Fay Slimm. said:
A bouquet of romantic reasons why flicker remains once love has fades - well done with this lovely sonnet dear Dove.
September 30th, 2020 10:54
Fay Slimm. said:
A bouquet of romantic reasons why flicker remains once love has fades - well done with this lovely sonnet dear Dove.
September 30th, 2020 10:54
“ Alluette” Heaven
Goldfinch60 said:
Heaven awaits us all and we will shine down on our loved ones.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Heaven awaits us all and we will shine down on our loved ones.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 00:17
“ Alluette” Heaven
Neville said:
wot a lark eh\'...
impossible to read without smiling and without doubt, one of my favourite words ... mon petit fleur :)
September 29th, 2020 10:43
Neville said:
wot a lark eh\'...
impossible to read without smiling and without doubt, one of my favourite words ... mon petit fleur :)
September 29th, 2020 10:43
“ Promises of Vows
Dove said:
Thank you kindly! Thanks for sharing your thoughts in the matter, and your compliments,
Best to you
September 29th, 2020 09:57
Dove said:
Thank you kindly! Thanks for sharing your thoughts in the matter, and your compliments,
Best to you
September 29th, 2020 09:57
“Palindrome” Passion
L. B. Mek said:
creative, has a meditatively warming element to it as well
September 28th, 2020 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
creative, has a meditatively warming element to it as well
September 28th, 2020 04:49
“ Promises of Vows
L. B. Mek said:
truly captured the duality that exists in the remnants of broken (though rarely - if ever: completely) love,
it is strange how your words from both voices resonate: maybe I have played both roles in the past (though not in terms of vows, merely promises and assurances)? I relate with the need to linger in what nostalgic reverie remains, while wondering how the other could have changed (so much) and left all these feelings of raw intoxicating wonder - behind,
a beautiful interpretation of feelings we all know far too intimately, delivered with such simple elegance
September 28th, 2020 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
truly captured the duality that exists in the remnants of broken (though rarely - if ever: completely) love,
it is strange how your words from both voices resonate: maybe I have played both roles in the past (though not in terms of vows, merely promises and assurances)? I relate with the need to linger in what nostalgic reverie remains, while wondering how the other could have changed (so much) and left all these feelings of raw intoxicating wonder - behind,
a beautiful interpretation of feelings we all know far too intimately, delivered with such simple elegance
September 28th, 2020 04:02
“ Promises of Vows
Goldfinch60 said:
Distance can be so hard between lovers. Great write RB.
Andy
September 28th, 2020 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Distance can be so hard between lovers. Great write RB.
Andy
September 28th, 2020 00:15
“ Promises of Vows
MendedFences27 said:
Vows, promises, etc.. They are meant, only as long as their intent. It\'s like a contact with unlimited loopholes. If gone, he probably had to go, and I\'m sure he felt justified.
Your poem depicts a much too common occurrence, the breaking of a promise or vow. The way in which you presented it is clever and your words ask all the right questions. Enjoyed reading this one. - Phil A.
September 27th, 2020 19:02
MendedFences27 said:
Vows, promises, etc.. They are meant, only as long as their intent. It\'s like a contact with unlimited loopholes. If gone, he probably had to go, and I\'m sure he felt justified.
Your poem depicts a much too common occurrence, the breaking of a promise or vow. The way in which you presented it is clever and your words ask all the right questions. Enjoyed reading this one. - Phil A.
September 27th, 2020 19:02
“ Promises of Vows
Fay Slimm. said:
Triolet or not this write about vows raises many a question in the hearts of those who are waiting........ a compelling read my friend.
September 27th, 2020 13:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Triolet or not this write about vows raises many a question in the hearts of those who are waiting........ a compelling read my friend.
September 27th, 2020 13:20
“ Promises of Vows
Neville said:
as a man of my word, as a rule, I vow never to make em ...
however, if you have ever been let down ma\'am feel free to point me in his direction ...
... if you reckon its a triolet, then its a triolet .... Nice un R B :)
September 27th, 2020 12:07
Neville said:
as a man of my word, as a rule, I vow never to make em ...
however, if you have ever been let down ma\'am feel free to point me in his direction ...
... if you reckon its a triolet, then its a triolet .... Nice un R B :)
September 27th, 2020 12:07
“ Promises of Vows
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA ROMANTICA ~ Gracias por este Poema ~ Trioleta ! Thnaks for colour coding ~ Sad content. Brian & I were 11,500 miles apart for 15 months (New Zealand) but we diid ZOOM most days which helped ! Separation is the hardest WORD ! Physical contact is so so important when you*re just newly engaged ! It would be even harder now we are married and have tasted the JOYS of intimacy ! For an ENGLISH (& American ?) TRIOLET the rhyme pattern shouuld be ABa Aab AB the one you have posted is ABc Acc AB but it doesnt matter there is always POETIC LICENSE even in Classic Poetic Forms ! The important thing ina TRIOLET and a VILLNELLE is the REPETITION ~ OK !
Love the VISUAL ~ DREAMY !
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Con Amor A & B & El Gato Ahumido 💛💛💛
September 27th, 2020 11:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOLA ROMANTICA ~ Gracias por este Poema ~ Trioleta ! Thnaks for colour coding ~ Sad content. Brian & I were 11,500 miles apart for 15 months (New Zealand) but we diid ZOOM most days which helped ! Separation is the hardest WORD ! Physical contact is so so important when you*re just newly engaged ! It would be even harder now we are married and have tasted the JOYS of intimacy ! For an ENGLISH (& American ?) TRIOLET the rhyme pattern shouuld be ABa Aab AB the one you have posted is ABc Acc AB but it doesnt matter there is always POETIC LICENSE even in Classic Poetic Forms ! The important thing ina TRIOLET and a VILLNELLE is the REPETITION ~ OK !
Love the VISUAL ~ DREAMY !
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Con Amor A & B & El Gato Ahumido 💛💛💛
September 27th, 2020 11:51
“ Promises of Vows
Michael Edwards said:
Doesn\'t matter what it is - It\'s still a great write.
September 27th, 2020 11:23
Michael Edwards said:
Doesn\'t matter what it is - It\'s still a great write.
September 27th, 2020 11:23
“ Promises of Vows
orchidee said:
I dunno if it\'s a Triolet either - well, it\'s not a Toilet! lol. A fine write RB.
September 27th, 2020 10:25
orchidee said:
I dunno if it\'s a Triolet either - well, it\'s not a Toilet! lol. A fine write RB.
September 27th, 2020 10:25
“ Promises of Vows
Dove said:
Changed the words , so don’t know if it’s still a Triolet
September 27th, 2020 07:40
Dove said:
Changed the words , so don’t know if it’s still a Triolet
September 27th, 2020 07:40
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