Comments received on poems by Dove
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jarcher54 said:
At first I thought... a little saccharine, a little predictable... but as I read it I became enchanted by the sound, the little repetitious device linking the parts so subtly, and the sincerity of the sentiments, and ultimately I was transported to a calm, fragrant place to just smell the roses and ponder love.
May 29th, 2021 02:07
jarcher54 said:
At first I thought... a little saccharine, a little predictable... but as I read it I became enchanted by the sound, the little repetitious device linking the parts so subtly, and the sincerity of the sentiments, and ultimately I was transported to a calm, fragrant place to just smell the roses and ponder love.
May 29th, 2021 02:07
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orchidee said:
Ohhh, writing about me again? Or have I delusions of my own grandeur.
Aww, they say I am more of a stinking hellebore than a rose! lol.
May 29th, 2021 01:57
orchidee said:
Ohhh, writing about me again? Or have I delusions of my own grandeur.
Aww, they say I am more of a stinking hellebore than a rose! lol.
May 29th, 2021 01:57
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Neville said:
Not to be sniffed at but cherished ..
... Absolutely bloomin luverly ..
Am so glad you found ya pen ...
May 29th, 2021 01:33
Neville said:
Not to be sniffed at but cherished ..
... Absolutely bloomin luverly ..
Am so glad you found ya pen ...
May 29th, 2021 01:33
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Caring dove said:
Very lovely ๐
May 28th, 2021 23:34
Caring dove said:
Very lovely ๐
May 28th, 2021 23:34
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Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful.
May 22nd, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful.
May 22nd, 2021 00:44
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Accidental Poet said:
Its human nature to need love, even though some won\'t agree. Beautiful write Dove. ; )
May 21st, 2021 20:54
Accidental Poet said:
Its human nature to need love, even though some won\'t agree. Beautiful write Dove. ; )
May 21st, 2021 20:54
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Neville said:
Super so and so, you old sew n sew ..
... N :)
May 21st, 2021 17:21
Neville said:
Super so and so, you old sew n sew ..
... N :)
May 21st, 2021 17:21
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orchidee said:
You means me?! heehee.
Good write Dove.
May 21st, 2021 09:16
orchidee said:
You means me?! heehee.
Good write Dove.
May 21st, 2021 09:16
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dusk arising said:
Addicted ! Love it.
May 21st, 2021 08:53
dusk arising said:
Addicted ! Love it.
May 21st, 2021 08:53
Let me Quilt My Affections
L. B. Mek said:
\'๐ฟ๐๐ ๐๐ weave ๐๐ ๐๐ถ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ถ๐ ๐ถ ๐๐ฝ๐๐๐
๐ฟ๐๐ ๐๐ weave ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐น๐๐ ๐ธ๐ถ๐๐๐๐๐๐
๐ฒ๐พ๐๐ฝ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ป๐พ๐ท๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐ฝ๐พ๐ ๐๐,
๐๐ถ๐๐๐๐ฝ ๐ผ ๐๐ฝ๐ถ๐๐ ๐ท๐๐๐๐๐\'..
Brilliant!!!
May 21st, 2021 02:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'๐ฟ๐๐ ๐๐ weave ๐๐ ๐๐ถ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ถ๐ ๐ถ ๐๐ฝ๐๐๐
๐ฟ๐๐ ๐๐ weave ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐น๐๐ ๐ธ๐ถ๐๐๐๐๐๐
๐ฒ๐พ๐๐ฝ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ป๐พ๐ท๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐ฝ๐พ๐ ๐๐,
๐๐ถ๐๐๐๐ฝ ๐ผ ๐๐ฝ๐ถ๐๐ ๐ท๐๐๐๐๐\'..
Brilliant!!!
May 21st, 2021 02:56
Let me Quilt My Affections
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write Dove, may that quilt of love always surround you.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write Dove, may that quilt of love always surround you.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:35
Let me Quilt My Affections
orchidee said:
A fine write Dove.
Grin - but not swoon?! heehee.
May 20th, 2021 13:35
orchidee said:
A fine write Dove.
Grin - but not swoon?! heehee.
May 20th, 2021 13:35
Let me Quilt My Affections
Fay Slimm. said:
Such appeal in this tender love-verse - dear Dove --- I love that first line of superb imagery
May 20th, 2021 12:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Such appeal in this tender love-verse - dear Dove --- I love that first line of superb imagery
May 20th, 2021 12:46
Let me Quilt My Affections
Neville said:
... a brilliant title and a smashing love poem too .. some guy is without any doubt whatsoever, a very lucky geezer indeed ..............
... Neville
May 20th, 2021 11:54
Neville said:
... a brilliant title and a smashing love poem too .. some guy is without any doubt whatsoever, a very lucky geezer indeed ..............
... Neville
May 20th, 2021 11:54
Let me Quilt My Affections
dusk arising said:
Enwrapped in such a quilt of love your lover will be sure to reward you with deserved devotions.
May 20th, 2021 09:44
dusk arising said:
Enwrapped in such a quilt of love your lover will be sure to reward you with deserved devotions.
May 20th, 2021 09:44
The Earth Worm-a sonnetย
dusk arising said:
The humble earthworm was not created to become hooked bait ot abused. No fish was harmed or starved in the writing of this comment LOL
May 8th, 2021 14:39
dusk arising said:
The humble earthworm was not created to become hooked bait ot abused. No fish was harmed or starved in the writing of this comment LOL
May 8th, 2021 14:39
Sun Kissed
Neville said:
I came back in the hope of feeling the flutter of displaced wind on my shoulder from the downbeat of your wings ....... and of course because I kinda like being sun kissed................................................
... Neville
May 8th, 2021 04:35
Neville said:
I came back in the hope of feeling the flutter of displaced wind on my shoulder from the downbeat of your wings ....... and of course because I kinda like being sun kissed................................................
... Neville
May 8th, 2021 04:35
The Earth Worm-a sonnetย
Neville said:
I agree with you two too .. I mean both you n Fay .. after all, a worm is for life, not just for Christmas and weekends ..
Neville...
May 8th, 2021 04:31
Neville said:
I agree with you two too .. I mean both you n Fay .. after all, a worm is for life, not just for Christmas and weekends ..
Neville...
May 8th, 2021 04:31
The Earth Worm-a sonnetย
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Dove, they are priceless to our earth.
Andy
May 8th, 2021 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Dove, they are priceless to our earth.
Andy
May 8th, 2021 00:41
The Earth Worm-a sonnetย
jarcher54 said:
Yes, they deserve THIS sonnet. It\'s not quite a classic sonnet, but it is sincere and respectful. I always rescue the poor worms that end up squirming to escape drowning in a puddle or container after a rain shower... I laughed when you refer to your particular worm as \"she.\" As you probably know, technically earthworms are hermaphroditic. Thanks for posting this...
May 7th, 2021 22:26
jarcher54 said:
Yes, they deserve THIS sonnet. It\'s not quite a classic sonnet, but it is sincere and respectful. I always rescue the poor worms that end up squirming to escape drowning in a puddle or container after a rain shower... I laughed when you refer to your particular worm as \"she.\" As you probably know, technically earthworms are hermaphroditic. Thanks for posting this...
May 7th, 2021 22:26
The Earth Worm-a sonnetย
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ve not sacrificed a Earth Worm on a hook for about 55 years now. The fish rather appreciated it too I\'m sure. Nicely written Dove. ; )
May 7th, 2021 22:26
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ve not sacrificed a Earth Worm on a hook for about 55 years now. The fish rather appreciated it too I\'m sure. Nicely written Dove. ; )
May 7th, 2021 22:26
The Earth Worm-a sonnetย
Doggerel Dave said:
A righteous cause, Dove. Publicised as a sonnet to boot, a form which looks quite scary.
You have elevated (wrong direction for a worm, but you know what I mean :-)) to it\'s rightful place in the scheme of things.
May 7th, 2021 18:57
Doggerel Dave said:
A righteous cause, Dove. Publicised as a sonnet to boot, a form which looks quite scary.
You have elevated (wrong direction for a worm, but you know what I mean :-)) to it\'s rightful place in the scheme of things.
May 7th, 2021 18:57
The Earth Worm-a sonnetย
ron parrish aka wordman said:
everything has a purpose in the ecology
May 7th, 2021 16:25
ron parrish aka wordman said:
everything has a purpose in the ecology
May 7th, 2021 16:25
The Earth Worm-a sonnetย
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree with each line of your tribute to this wriggly gardener\'s friend - - what a needed and powerful soil sifter the worm - great that you personify this underground life and love that last couplet dear Dove
May 7th, 2021 16:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree with each line of your tribute to this wriggly gardener\'s friend - - what a needed and powerful soil sifter the worm - great that you personify this underground life and love that last couplet dear Dove
May 7th, 2021 16:13
Beauty
Neville said:
Just as good this time around ... and read aloud, because I could ... x
April 23rd, 2021 02:16
Neville said:
Just as good this time around ... and read aloud, because I could ... x
April 23rd, 2021 02:16
Underneath the Shadow of my Wings
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Dove.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Dove.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 01:27
Underneath the Shadow of my Wings
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful, Dove! To me it sounds like a tender message from a mother to her child. I love it!
March 20th, 2021 21:29
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful, Dove! To me it sounds like a tender message from a mother to her child. I love it!
March 20th, 2021 21:29
Underneath the Shadow of my Wings
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel safe as I read your work, Romantic B. Definitely no ambivalence there.
March 20th, 2021 15:36
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel safe as I read your work, Romantic B. Definitely no ambivalence there.
March 20th, 2021 15:36
Underneath the Shadow of my Wings
Neville said:
if ya gonna be tucked ... there surely cant be a better place ... lovely words indeed RB ...
March 20th, 2021 10:38
Neville said:
if ya gonna be tucked ... there surely cant be a better place ... lovely words indeed RB ...
March 20th, 2021 10:38
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