Comments received on poems by Jerry Reynolds
Memorial
L. B. Mek said:
that river of Time, I guess
where we shall forever exist
as long, as existence
chooses to remain: timeless..
another wonderful shorty Jerry
measured, yet inspiring - as ever
thank you!
July 1st, 2021 02:35
L. B. Mek said:
that river of Time, I guess
where we shall forever exist
as long, as existence
chooses to remain: timeless..
another wonderful shorty Jerry
measured, yet inspiring - as ever
thank you!
July 1st, 2021 02:35
Memorial
dusk arising said:
into the vast unknown.... beyond us
a resting place for all the questions
A great three liner Jerry.
June 30th, 2021 21:37
dusk arising said:
into the vast unknown.... beyond us
a resting place for all the questions
A great three liner Jerry.
June 30th, 2021 21:37
Memorial
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent three liner which powerfully takes us into beyondness - thanks Jerry..
June 30th, 2021 15:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent three liner which powerfully takes us into beyondness - thanks Jerry..
June 30th, 2021 15:31
Memorial
Goldfinch60 said:
That wil certainly be true in my case, I have asked that my ashes be discarded onto My River- but not yet.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 14:32
Goldfinch60 said:
That wil certainly be true in my case, I have asked that my ashes be discarded onto My River- but not yet.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 14:32
Memorial
Neville said:
.. I can not explain just how good this is and I\'m usually not too bad with words ..
June 30th, 2021 08:30
Neville said:
.. I can not explain just how good this is and I\'m usually not too bad with words ..
June 30th, 2021 08:30
The Card From The Yard
Neville said:
cor blimey mate a crime in rhyme methinks ... sounds great .. fair cop :)
June 29th, 2021 16:23
Neville said:
cor blimey mate a crime in rhyme methinks ... sounds great .. fair cop :)
June 29th, 2021 16:23
The Card From The Yard
dusk arising said:
Jerry you\'ve tied me in knots with this one LOL. I have read it four times and it flows very nicely but i\'m fkkd if i know what to do with it.
Nice one.
June 29th, 2021 14:17
dusk arising said:
Jerry you\'ve tied me in knots with this one LOL. I have read it four times and it flows very nicely but i\'m fkkd if i know what to do with it.
Nice one.
June 29th, 2021 14:17
Tom Cardin
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of a plot from Hitchcock\'s fun thrillers
titled \'Rear Window\'
only your story is seemingly set in the UK
and based on a grim reality..
an engrossing read Jerry, thank you
kinda makes me want to know
if you developed a detective character
would it be hapless/clueless type like Columbo
or a Sherlock-esque self-centred genius
or that intuitive Jessica Fletcher from murder she wrote?
June 29th, 2021 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of a plot from Hitchcock\'s fun thrillers
titled \'Rear Window\'
only your story is seemingly set in the UK
and based on a grim reality..
an engrossing read Jerry, thank you
kinda makes me want to know
if you developed a detective character
would it be hapless/clueless type like Columbo
or a Sherlock-esque self-centred genius
or that intuitive Jessica Fletcher from murder she wrote?
June 29th, 2021 03:52
Tom Cardin
Saxon Crow said:
Conjured up Victorian times here Jerry. I like this sinister little piece
June 28th, 2021 10:39
Saxon Crow said:
Conjured up Victorian times here Jerry. I like this sinister little piece
June 28th, 2021 10:39
Rejection
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I can so relate to this poignant wording
of Poetically brunt and unfiltered truth
in our somewhat warped valuation of Art, Jerry..
and then, those splinters - that dig deep
under our thin layer of bruised - skin
lingering to torment, us
with unrealistically ambitious mirages
of self-doubting inadequacy\'s: futile musings...
June 28th, 2021 06:53
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I can so relate to this poignant wording
of Poetically brunt and unfiltered truth
in our somewhat warped valuation of Art, Jerry..
and then, those splinters - that dig deep
under our thin layer of bruised - skin
lingering to torment, us
with unrealistically ambitious mirages
of self-doubting inadequacy\'s: futile musings...
June 28th, 2021 06:53
Rejection
Neville said:
.. go on, beat ya self up why don\'t ya ..
we all admire and enjoy wot you post ..
although, to be honest, I dont think that is one of your concerns at all .. I do think however, you are darn good at this particular poetic genre ..
Neville :)
June 28th, 2021 03:30
Neville said:
.. go on, beat ya self up why don\'t ya ..
we all admire and enjoy wot you post ..
although, to be honest, I dont think that is one of your concerns at all .. I do think however, you are darn good at this particular poetic genre ..
Neville :)
June 28th, 2021 03:30
Random Thoughts-
Goldfinch60 said:
Good true words Jerry - they have no idea!
Andy
June 26th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good true words Jerry - they have no idea!
Andy
June 26th, 2021 00:31
Random Thoughts-
Neville said:
I quite like the idea of talking to a setting sun ... tis almost a poem unto itself ... hey ... maybe it will be, one day ............... N
June 25th, 2021 16:34
Neville said:
I quite like the idea of talking to a setting sun ... tis almost a poem unto itself ... hey ... maybe it will be, one day ............... N
June 25th, 2021 16:34
Random Thoughts-
SureshG said:
The extremes seems to be empowered - we better take notice, lest we loose freedom itself
June 25th, 2021 13:18
SureshG said:
The extremes seems to be empowered - we better take notice, lest we loose freedom itself
June 25th, 2021 13:18
Random Thoughts-
AuburnScribbler said:
A powerful write here Jerry, it would seem that elected \"suits\" will never learn!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
June 25th, 2021 11:10
AuburnScribbler said:
A powerful write here Jerry, it would seem that elected \"suits\" will never learn!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
June 25th, 2021 11:10
Random Thoughts-
dusk arising said:
Reads well but I have too little knowledge to make sensible comments about USA politics (other than to say i wasn\'t a fan of Mr Trump).
June 25th, 2021 07:47
dusk arising said:
Reads well but I have too little knowledge to make sensible comments about USA politics (other than to say i wasn\'t a fan of Mr Trump).
June 25th, 2021 07:47
Random Thought
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, L.B.
I am so jealous, cannot get that many words out of one thought.
June 25th, 2021 07:37
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thanks, L.B.
I am so jealous, cannot get that many words out of one thought.
June 25th, 2021 07:37
Random Thought
L. B. Mek said:
(What can I say Jerry
you\'ve inspired another rant/scribble
out of me today,
how incisively worded your Poetry: Roars
in my mind, thank you)..
People need to stop reading George Orwell
he was working: \'for Them\', to begin with
and more importantly
while they\'re busy watching and plotting
remember: we\'re doing the \'Living\'!
and in a blink, \'They\' and \'We\'
will arrive at that benchmark, 60\'th cake
and \'we\'re all\' left thinking, the same
\'who Fck\'n cares: anyway!
the best laid plans of mice and men
are there for us to excavate
in those Great Empires: of Sand...\'
In the words of that great sage and poetess
Sylvia Plath: from \'Ennui\'
\'Tea leaves thwart those who court catastrophe,
designing futures where nothing will occur:
cross the gypsy’s palm and yawning she
will still predict no perils left to conquer.
Jeopardy is jejune now: naïve knight
finds ogres out-of-date and dragons unheard
of, while blasé princesses indict
tilts at terror as downright absurd.\'
(so then let\'s boil some water
and sip our way, through the next batch
of inhumane horror
they\'ll be trying to introduce into our lives
one way or another)
June 25th, 2021 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
(What can I say Jerry
you\'ve inspired another rant/scribble
out of me today,
how incisively worded your Poetry: Roars
in my mind, thank you)..
People need to stop reading George Orwell
he was working: \'for Them\', to begin with
and more importantly
while they\'re busy watching and plotting
remember: we\'re doing the \'Living\'!
and in a blink, \'They\' and \'We\'
will arrive at that benchmark, 60\'th cake
and \'we\'re all\' left thinking, the same
\'who Fck\'n cares: anyway!
the best laid plans of mice and men
are there for us to excavate
in those Great Empires: of Sand...\'
In the words of that great sage and poetess
Sylvia Plath: from \'Ennui\'
\'Tea leaves thwart those who court catastrophe,
designing futures where nothing will occur:
cross the gypsy’s palm and yawning she
will still predict no perils left to conquer.
Jeopardy is jejune now: naïve knight
finds ogres out-of-date and dragons unheard
of, while blasé princesses indict
tilts at terror as downright absurd.\'
(so then let\'s boil some water
and sip our way, through the next batch
of inhumane horror
they\'ll be trying to introduce into our lives
one way or another)
June 25th, 2021 05:08
Random Thought
Neville said:
Now ya gone and done it .. cant stop checking .. does this apply to radio too by the way :)
June 24th, 2021 16:09
Neville said:
Now ya gone and done it .. cant stop checking .. does this apply to radio too by the way :)
June 24th, 2021 16:09
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