Comments received on poems by Jerry Reynolds
Happy Birthday
L. B. Mek said:
\'rearview mirror
distorts the
new moon\'..
headlight\'s
warp, eye sight
pervert: insight...
just wanted to try and
mirror your wisdom, as feebly as I could;
thank you Jerry,
forgive me for not wishing USA
a happy birthday
but I\'ll thank it for the ingenious home comforts
its children created, to anchor modernity\'s civilisation
and I\'ll toast to your continued wellbeing
all the same my friend! 🍻
July 5th, 2021 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'rearview mirror
distorts the
new moon\'..
headlight\'s
warp, eye sight
pervert: insight...
just wanted to try and
mirror your wisdom, as feebly as I could;
thank you Jerry,
forgive me for not wishing USA
a happy birthday
but I\'ll thank it for the ingenious home comforts
its children created, to anchor modernity\'s civilisation
and I\'ll toast to your continued wellbeing
all the same my friend! 🍻
July 5th, 2021 04:26
Happy Birthday
dusk arising said:
Happy birthday young america. Fireworks all round and a slice of cake.
July 4th, 2021 15:46
dusk arising said:
Happy birthday young america. Fireworks all round and a slice of cake.
July 4th, 2021 15:46
The towers
orchidee said:
A fine write Jerry.
I would say - nope - cos I don\'t believe in luck!
July 3rd, 2021 01:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Jerry.
I would say - nope - cos I don\'t believe in luck!
July 3rd, 2021 01:59
The towers
Neville said:
I am inclined to think not .. but my mental muscle has been working overtime and I need to hit the sack ..
July 2nd, 2021 16:54
Neville said:
I am inclined to think not .. but my mental muscle has been working overtime and I need to hit the sack ..
July 2nd, 2021 16:54
The towers
Fay Slimm. said:
wow - these few lines make me wonder if the question you put can be answered at all with luck - words on which to ponder over Jerry.
July 2nd, 2021 11:36
Fay Slimm. said:
wow - these few lines make me wonder if the question you put can be answered at all with luck - words on which to ponder over Jerry.
July 2nd, 2021 11:36
Economics
L. B. Mek said:
funny part, is that
eventually we realise
its those elements of ourselves
we pawn, with - our treasures
that colour our regrets
so painfully: raw...
thanks for sharing Jerry
a fun read
with an even more important message
July 2nd, 2021 03:02
L. B. Mek said:
funny part, is that
eventually we realise
its those elements of ourselves
we pawn, with - our treasures
that colour our regrets
so painfully: raw...
thanks for sharing Jerry
a fun read
with an even more important message
July 2nd, 2021 03:02
Economics
Neville said:
This has a deep personal meaning for me, and I am sure that many others will be able to relate also ....
another good un JR :)
July 1st, 2021 16:46
Neville said:
This has a deep personal meaning for me, and I am sure that many others will be able to relate also ....
another good un JR :)
July 1st, 2021 16:46
Memorial
L. B. Mek said:
that river of Time, I guess
where we shall forever exist
as long, as existence
chooses to remain: timeless..
another wonderful shorty Jerry
measured, yet inspiring - as ever
thank you!
July 1st, 2021 02:35
L. B. Mek said:
that river of Time, I guess
where we shall forever exist
as long, as existence
chooses to remain: timeless..
another wonderful shorty Jerry
measured, yet inspiring - as ever
thank you!
July 1st, 2021 02:35
Memorial
dusk arising said:
into the vast unknown.... beyond us
a resting place for all the questions
A great three liner Jerry.
June 30th, 2021 21:37
dusk arising said:
into the vast unknown.... beyond us
a resting place for all the questions
A great three liner Jerry.
June 30th, 2021 21:37
Memorial
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent three liner which powerfully takes us into beyondness - thanks Jerry..
June 30th, 2021 15:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent three liner which powerfully takes us into beyondness - thanks Jerry..
June 30th, 2021 15:31
Memorial
Goldfinch60 said:
That wil certainly be true in my case, I have asked that my ashes be discarded onto My River- but not yet.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 14:32
Goldfinch60 said:
That wil certainly be true in my case, I have asked that my ashes be discarded onto My River- but not yet.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 14:32
Memorial
Neville said:
.. I can not explain just how good this is and I\'m usually not too bad with words ..
June 30th, 2021 08:30
Neville said:
.. I can not explain just how good this is and I\'m usually not too bad with words ..
June 30th, 2021 08:30
The Card From The Yard
Neville said:
cor blimey mate a crime in rhyme methinks ... sounds great .. fair cop :)
June 29th, 2021 16:23
Neville said:
cor blimey mate a crime in rhyme methinks ... sounds great .. fair cop :)
June 29th, 2021 16:23
The Card From The Yard
dusk arising said:
Jerry you\'ve tied me in knots with this one LOL. I have read it four times and it flows very nicely but i\'m fkkd if i know what to do with it.
Nice one.
June 29th, 2021 14:17
dusk arising said:
Jerry you\'ve tied me in knots with this one LOL. I have read it four times and it flows very nicely but i\'m fkkd if i know what to do with it.
Nice one.
June 29th, 2021 14:17
Tom Cardin
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of a plot from Hitchcock\'s fun thrillers
titled \'Rear Window\'
only your story is seemingly set in the UK
and based on a grim reality..
an engrossing read Jerry, thank you
kinda makes me want to know
if you developed a detective character
would it be hapless/clueless type like Columbo
or a Sherlock-esque self-centred genius
or that intuitive Jessica Fletcher from murder she wrote?
June 29th, 2021 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of a plot from Hitchcock\'s fun thrillers
titled \'Rear Window\'
only your story is seemingly set in the UK
and based on a grim reality..
an engrossing read Jerry, thank you
kinda makes me want to know
if you developed a detective character
would it be hapless/clueless type like Columbo
or a Sherlock-esque self-centred genius
or that intuitive Jessica Fletcher from murder she wrote?
June 29th, 2021 03:52
Tom Cardin
Saxon Crow said:
Conjured up Victorian times here Jerry. I like this sinister little piece
June 28th, 2021 10:39
Saxon Crow said:
Conjured up Victorian times here Jerry. I like this sinister little piece
June 28th, 2021 10:39
Rejection
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I can so relate to this poignant wording
of Poetically brunt and unfiltered truth
in our somewhat warped valuation of Art, Jerry..
and then, those splinters - that dig deep
under our thin layer of bruised - skin
lingering to torment, us
with unrealistically ambitious mirages
of self-doubting inadequacy\'s: futile musings...
June 28th, 2021 06:53
L. B. Mek said:
yup, I can so relate to this poignant wording
of Poetically brunt and unfiltered truth
in our somewhat warped valuation of Art, Jerry..
and then, those splinters - that dig deep
under our thin layer of bruised - skin
lingering to torment, us
with unrealistically ambitious mirages
of self-doubting inadequacy\'s: futile musings...
June 28th, 2021 06:53
Rejection
Neville said:
.. go on, beat ya self up why don\'t ya ..
we all admire and enjoy wot you post ..
although, to be honest, I dont think that is one of your concerns at all .. I do think however, you are darn good at this particular poetic genre ..
Neville :)
June 28th, 2021 03:30
Neville said:
.. go on, beat ya self up why don\'t ya ..
we all admire and enjoy wot you post ..
although, to be honest, I dont think that is one of your concerns at all .. I do think however, you are darn good at this particular poetic genre ..
Neville :)
June 28th, 2021 03:30
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