Comments received on poems by Jerry Reynolds



End of Spring
Goldfinch60 said:

Roll on autumn.

Andy

June 17th, 2021 00:46

What could go wrong?
AuburnScribbler said:

Very nice indeed Jerry, reminds me of the time I partook in a bit of \"backyard wrestling\", where we took bumps off the roof onto the trampoline below.

Thanks for sharing, bravo, and I hope that all is well!

June 16th, 2021 07:22

What could go wrong?
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful fun write Jerry - back in the day eh?

Andy

June 16th, 2021 00:14

What could go wrong?
Doggerel Dave said:

Get the joke, love the imagery.
Not going to get into a class confrontation here though, Jerry
BTW I too met a spider. Are they all the go round here?

June 15th, 2021 19:33

What could go wrong?
SureshG said:

That harsh reality now only a memory, so well expressed as a poem

June 15th, 2021 12:08

What could go wrong?
orchidee said:

A fine write Jerry, though I\'m not familiar with this, being in the U.K..

June 15th, 2021 09:17

What could go wrong?
dusk arising said:

Now what would one use to wet a roof with?????
Guess I\'m trash too b-t-w. Was brought up to believe i didn\'t count for a thing.

June 15th, 2021 09:06

What could go wrong?
Saxon Crow said:

Love t. Very sentimental poem Jerry

June 15th, 2021 09:00

Clutter Land
L. B. Mek said:

so true!
possibility, will ever outshine reality
that\'s how fear operates
with such devastating accuracy,
here we are
eating, drinking, sharing: existing
yet we spend all our time
expectantly fearing
that inevitability, of our ending..
\'Instead, let us: heed
love\'s whispered warnings
gather, all our wasteful clutter
and melt - past, those frozen memories
to curate our contour
lands, of opportunistic possibility
and cherish, what time we\'ve been gifted
to roam and love, meaningfully - freely\'
(what can I say jerry
time n again, your brilliant poetry
just continues to inspire me
thank you, so very much
my friend)


June 15th, 2021 03:43

Clutter Land
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Jerry and so true in many people.

Andy

June 15th, 2021 00:42

Clutter Land
Neville said:


... thoroughly enjoyed sir .. and from one end to the very other ...

Neville

June 14th, 2021 16:51

Clutter Land
Neville said:


... sage words indeed ...
sage is also known as the healer ...

June 14th, 2021 14:29

Clutter Land
Fay Slimm. said:

Agree wholeheartedly Jerry that love can turn somersaults without any warning. Well done with his poetic reminder.

June 14th, 2021 13:51

Clutter Land
Saxon Crow said:

Brilliant Jerry. So very well put, poet. Faved

June 14th, 2021 13:50

Clutter Land
SureshG said:

This is how words should be strewn together to expose the raw emotion. I am only a student in making.

June 14th, 2021 12:37

Clutter Land
AuburnScribbler said:

A great write here Jerry, though you chose love as the subject, this can be about anything, and the clear message I take from this is, it\'s how many times you get up, rather than how many times you get knocked down.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

June 14th, 2021 11:00

Clutter Land
orchidee said:

Good write Jerry.

June 14th, 2021 09:01

Clutter Land
dusk arising said:

Oh so true Jerry you sage of wisdom. Having experienced too many car crash romances i\'m now happily a onsome.

June 14th, 2021 06:55

Fog
L. B. Mek said:

that\'s why some believe
Sunset\'s: mark, our true beginnings...
a wonderful shorty, as ever
thanks Jerry

June 14th, 2021 06:13

Fog
orchidee said:

Good write Jerry.

June 14th, 2021 04:53

Fog
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Jerry.

Andy

June 14th, 2021 00:44

Fog
Saxon Crow said:

Love this Jerry. Yep definitely similar lol

June 13th, 2021 16:24

Fog
Fay Slimm. said:

A fantastic three lines which sets minds like mine sighing for such haiku mastery.

June 13th, 2021 16:12

Fog
dusk arising said:

=A seagul can spot a take-away in the thickest of fog.

June 13th, 2021 16:01

Fog
Neville said:


you really are very good at these my friend ...

June 13th, 2021 15:21

Unscathed
Neville said:


This is better than good, this is something else ...

ps I am honoured by your acknowledgement sir ... N :)

June 13th, 2021 01:14

Unscathed
dusk arising said:

Red. A dirt road? Red is the vivid colour of passion still in your heart it seems.

June 12th, 2021 07:31

Unscathed
Goldfinch60 said:

Those loves will always be with you Jerry.

Andy

June 12th, 2021 01:06

Unscathed
Doggerel Dave said:

And why not, indeed. Enjoy.
Point made succinctly - yer didn\'t go on about it for twenty stanzas, did yer?

June 11th, 2021 20:56

Unscathed
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes even crossing that river of woe former loves however old survive in our heart - - what a wonderful thought Jerry and how very true.

June 11th, 2021 15:37



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