Comments received on poems by parker



Insecure
Thomas W Case said:

Vulnerable.

January 2nd, 2024 19:14

Life
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous.

November 3rd, 2023 16:58

Life
hzugman said:

Nice poem. Paints a pretty picture (as I once again check my parachute).

November 3rd, 2023 14:52

Severn
parker said:

Thanks

November 3rd, 2023 14:15

Severn
orchidee said:

Good write P.

November 2nd, 2023 03:05

Discombobulated
orchidee said:

Ohh, since I heard that word, I gotta repeat it like some parrot: \'discombobulated, discombobulated, discom...\' lol.

July 30th, 2023 02:00

Discombobulated
orchidee said:



July 30th, 2023 01:59

Discombobulated
Bobby O said:

Accept. Theron lies the genius of life in just 6 letters.

July 29th, 2023 19:29

Canoe
parker said:

Thank you for the time you have taken to comment. Really appreciate the feedback, and yes I will rediscover the river.

March 13th, 2023 15:53

Canoe
Mello said:

I really enjoyed reading your poem! The imagery you created with the upturned canoe and the weeds was powerful, and it really set the tone for the rest of the piece. I could feel the speaker\'s sense of loss and longing for the freedom they once felt on the river. The ending with the roof bars on the car was a great touch, giving hope that maybe the speaker will find their way back to the water. Overall, your writing style flowed well and made for a really engaging read. Keep up the great work!

March 13th, 2023 15:31

With love
L. B. Mek said:

lovely!
thanks for sharing

August 18th, 2022 01:20

Short break
dean langmuir said:

Well done Parker,farm on.


August 16th, 2022 16:29

Life
L. B. Mek said:

these words represent
a wonderfully measured unfurling
of that thought process, we can all relate to
where, we have to balance
our need for making those hard choices
that will define our life\'s path
and
those family loyalties, representing
our most cherished anchors in life..
I also like how you depicted
your chosen faith/belief system
as a spine/foothold
for you to lean-on, gather yourself
and breathe..
(I loved the honesty
a great read!
thanks for sharing)

March 14th, 2022 04:45

Writing
dean langmuir said:

L.B.Mek and I agree

March 13th, 2022 15:53

Writing
dean langmuir said:



March 13th, 2022 15:51

Life
dean langmuir said:

Thank you.

March 13th, 2022 15:46

Morrninngs
L. B. Mek said:

lol, a fun read
thanks for sharing

February 7th, 2022 05:16

Morrninngs
Caring dove said:

Great read ! 🙂

February 7th, 2022 01:03

Morrninngs
Rozina said:

Haha! A fun poem to read.

February 6th, 2022 22:13

Future
parker said:

Hi. Revalation according to St John.
The 4 horsemen of the apocalypse.
Not religious myself, but a significant allegory, I hope.
Thanks for the like.

February 4th, 2022 14:05

Future
Rocky Lagou said:

I like the horse imagery. NIcely done.

February 4th, 2022 13:23

Writing
L. B. Mek said:

that\'s the true therapeutic value
in our poetry, even if we never share it with anyone
if we\'re sincere in our writing
it can become such a useful tool:
a release, a consoling mirror
or even a searching mechanism of our introspection...
(thanks for sharing
a relatable theme)

December 16th, 2021 04:24