Comments received on poems by parker
Life
hzugman said:
Nice poem. Paints a pretty picture (as I once again check my parachute).
November 3rd, 2023 14:52
hzugman said:
Nice poem. Paints a pretty picture (as I once again check my parachute).
November 3rd, 2023 14:52
Discombobulated
orchidee said:
Ohh, since I heard that word, I gotta repeat it like some parrot: \'discombobulated, discombobulated, discom...\' lol.
July 30th, 2023 02:00
orchidee said:
Ohh, since I heard that word, I gotta repeat it like some parrot: \'discombobulated, discombobulated, discom...\' lol.
July 30th, 2023 02:00
Discombobulated
Bobby O said:
Accept. Theron lies the genius of life in just 6 letters.
July 29th, 2023 19:29
Bobby O said:
Accept. Theron lies the genius of life in just 6 letters.
July 29th, 2023 19:29
Canoe
parker said:
Thank you for the time you have taken to comment. Really appreciate the feedback, and yes I will rediscover the river.
March 13th, 2023 15:53
parker said:
Thank you for the time you have taken to comment. Really appreciate the feedback, and yes I will rediscover the river.
March 13th, 2023 15:53
Canoe
Mello said:
I really enjoyed reading your poem! The imagery you created with the upturned canoe and the weeds was powerful, and it really set the tone for the rest of the piece. I could feel the speaker\'s sense of loss and longing for the freedom they once felt on the river. The ending with the roof bars on the car was a great touch, giving hope that maybe the speaker will find their way back to the water. Overall, your writing style flowed well and made for a really engaging read. Keep up the great work!
March 13th, 2023 15:31
Mello said:
I really enjoyed reading your poem! The imagery you created with the upturned canoe and the weeds was powerful, and it really set the tone for the rest of the piece. I could feel the speaker\'s sense of loss and longing for the freedom they once felt on the river. The ending with the roof bars on the car was a great touch, giving hope that maybe the speaker will find their way back to the water. Overall, your writing style flowed well and made for a really engaging read. Keep up the great work!
March 13th, 2023 15:31
Life
L. B. Mek said:
these words represent
a wonderfully measured unfurling
of that thought process, we can all relate to
where, we have to balance
our need for making those hard choices
that will define our life\'s path
and
those family loyalties, representing
our most cherished anchors in life..
I also like how you depicted
your chosen faith/belief system
as a spine/foothold
for you to lean-on, gather yourself
and breathe..
(I loved the honesty
a great read!
thanks for sharing)
March 14th, 2022 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
these words represent
a wonderfully measured unfurling
of that thought process, we can all relate to
where, we have to balance
our need for making those hard choices
that will define our life\'s path
and
those family loyalties, representing
our most cherished anchors in life..
I also like how you depicted
your chosen faith/belief system
as a spine/foothold
for you to lean-on, gather yourself
and breathe..
(I loved the honesty
a great read!
thanks for sharing)
March 14th, 2022 04:45
Future
parker said:
Hi. Revalation according to St John.
The 4 horsemen of the apocalypse.
Not religious myself, but a significant allegory, I hope.
Thanks for the like.
February 4th, 2022 14:05
parker said:
Hi. Revalation according to St John.
The 4 horsemen of the apocalypse.
Not religious myself, but a significant allegory, I hope.
Thanks for the like.
February 4th, 2022 14:05
Writing
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s the true therapeutic value
in our poetry, even if we never share it with anyone
if we\'re sincere in our writing
it can become such a useful tool:
a release, a consoling mirror
or even a searching mechanism of our introspection...
(thanks for sharing
a relatable theme)
December 16th, 2021 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s the true therapeutic value
in our poetry, even if we never share it with anyone
if we\'re sincere in our writing
it can become such a useful tool:
a release, a consoling mirror
or even a searching mechanism of our introspection...
(thanks for sharing
a relatable theme)
December 16th, 2021 04:24
