Comments received on poems by Mimie
The verge of falling
verona said:
I liked this part in particular:
\"
I know he worships the ground I walk on but I can\'t help but think
What if he\'s just in love with the soil on the ground, not me\"
really resonated :-/ lol
June 20th, 2022 02:20
verona said:
I liked this part in particular:
\"
I know he worships the ground I walk on but I can\'t help but think
What if he\'s just in love with the soil on the ground, not me\"
really resonated :-/ lol
June 20th, 2022 02:20
The verge of falling
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully expressive, a great read!
thanks for sharing
may I recommend a song by India Arie
titled, \'he heals me\'
(for that \'he\', substitute it
to whatever your preference is)
but the songs lyrics, resonate
with your write\'s sentiments
I think, like in these lines:
\'I can play him songs, all through the night,
And he will listen to every line,
And even when I\'m wrong, he is still kind
He chooses his words wisely when he tells me I\'m not right.
And yes he is a beautiful man,
But he is also a beautiful friend
He heals me
He knows the real me
And he accepts me, he never hurts me
He heals me\'
April 21st, 2022 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully expressive, a great read!
thanks for sharing
may I recommend a song by India Arie
titled, \'he heals me\'
(for that \'he\', substitute it
to whatever your preference is)
but the songs lyrics, resonate
with your write\'s sentiments
I think, like in these lines:
\'I can play him songs, all through the night,
And he will listen to every line,
And even when I\'m wrong, he is still kind
He chooses his words wisely when he tells me I\'m not right.
And yes he is a beautiful man,
But he is also a beautiful friend
He heals me
He knows the real me
And he accepts me, he never hurts me
He heals me\'
April 21st, 2022 03:55
The verge of falling
Hanani said:
If he truly isn\'t in love with the soil of the ground you walk on but you, then I\'m sure even if he hears of your past that broke your heart and is only kept together by your insecurities, he\'ll want to stay, scrap away your fears and mend it up with deep affection till you forget you even had a past!
April 21st, 2022 02:05
Hanani said:
If he truly isn\'t in love with the soil of the ground you walk on but you, then I\'m sure even if he hears of your past that broke your heart and is only kept together by your insecurities, he\'ll want to stay, scrap away your fears and mend it up with deep affection till you forget you even had a past!
April 21st, 2022 02:05
The verge of falling
Crowns4Christ said:
Yes, definitely tell him everything,it will ease your mind that he knows and that you\'re not hiding anything,he will understand and hold you tight, kissing your fears away,you do deserve happiness, and if he makes you happy, then let go of your fears and let him love you, complete honesty is the most important thing
April 20th, 2022 18:35
Crowns4Christ said:
Yes, definitely tell him everything,it will ease your mind that he knows and that you\'re not hiding anything,he will understand and hold you tight, kissing your fears away,you do deserve happiness, and if he makes you happy, then let go of your fears and let him love you, complete honesty is the most important thing
April 20th, 2022 18:35
Blurry assumptions
L. B. Mek said:
\'Aww little girl don\'t you remember, you can\'t take what\'s not yours
You wanted to capture a soul and place them in your palace of endless fantasies
Where you can play house without the disruption of tomorrow
Only you know how it feels to taste something so sweet but as you are about to swallow you realize it never was\'
words I could relate with
thanks for sharing
(but then again
there are those, who grew up as neighbours
and went on to die side by side
as each others, first love\'s,
as absurd as that probability
seems, it exists...
but only for some
cruelly!)
March 29th, 2022 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'Aww little girl don\'t you remember, you can\'t take what\'s not yours
You wanted to capture a soul and place them in your palace of endless fantasies
Where you can play house without the disruption of tomorrow
Only you know how it feels to taste something so sweet but as you are about to swallow you realize it never was\'
words I could relate with
thanks for sharing
(but then again
there are those, who grew up as neighbours
and went on to die side by side
as each others, first love\'s,
as absurd as that probability
seems, it exists...
but only for some
cruelly!)
March 29th, 2022 04:22
Blurry assumptions
Hanani said:
As much as I can relate to this, I still believe that the fantasy does exist and will happen with the right person. If we believe it and constantly tell ourselves, remind ourselves that it is, fate will give it to us. Don\'t worry, fate works on her own clock!
March 28th, 2022 23:21
Hanani said:
As much as I can relate to this, I still believe that the fantasy does exist and will happen with the right person. If we believe it and constantly tell ourselves, remind ourselves that it is, fate will give it to us. Don\'t worry, fate works on her own clock!
March 28th, 2022 23:21
Blurry assumptions
mamane19 said:
In love with those words 😍 💕 ❤ 💖
Keep going 💪 ✨
March 28th, 2022 19:29
mamane19 said:
In love with those words 😍 💕 ❤ 💖
Keep going 💪 ✨
March 28th, 2022 19:29
Blurry assumptions
Christina8 said:
Just don\'t give up. The fantasy does happen. I\'ve been married for 20 years. Keep your chin up!
March 28th, 2022 18:45
Christina8 said:
Just don\'t give up. The fantasy does happen. I\'ve been married for 20 years. Keep your chin up!
March 28th, 2022 18:45
It\'s Me
Hanani said:
Powerful and self reflective poem of the pain that we go through in process of letting go, if ever there\'s such a thing as letting go. But somehow we\'ve got to find our peace, hope you find yours
December 9th, 2021 22:43
Hanani said:
Powerful and self reflective poem of the pain that we go through in process of letting go, if ever there\'s such a thing as letting go. But somehow we\'ve got to find our peace, hope you find yours
December 9th, 2021 22:43
It\'s Me
C E Thomas said:
Incredible. Please write more, for the sake of us that can relate. Stranger, you\'ve made me feel that I know you inside and out with your words. I have - and still - struggle with the things you\'ve written here. From one blood-and-whiskey soaked person to another, I wish you all the best, and hope you find the peace that you deserve.
December 9th, 2021 20:31
C E Thomas said:
Incredible. Please write more, for the sake of us that can relate. Stranger, you\'ve made me feel that I know you inside and out with your words. I have - and still - struggle with the things you\'ve written here. From one blood-and-whiskey soaked person to another, I wish you all the best, and hope you find the peace that you deserve.
December 9th, 2021 20:31
It\'s Me
woundedheart said:
Remember love yourself first has your own well being must always be foremost in your life. Powerfully penned poem
December 9th, 2021 16:33
woundedheart said:
Remember love yourself first has your own well being must always be foremost in your life. Powerfully penned poem
December 9th, 2021 16:33
It\'s Me
Paul Bell said:
This is a tough poem that many can relate to. In the end, it\'s all down to you. Keep writing.
December 9th, 2021 16:27
Paul Bell said:
This is a tough poem that many can relate to. In the end, it\'s all down to you. Keep writing.
December 9th, 2021 16:27
Unrequited love
Hanani said:
Right now I feel like I\'m the one who buried his heart in an unknown location. Self reflection😔
July 21st, 2021 13:09
Hanani said:
Right now I feel like I\'m the one who buried his heart in an unknown location. Self reflection😔
July 21st, 2021 13:09
Final goodbyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Very thoughtful words Mimie, may all be well.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Very thoughtful words Mimie, may all be well.
Andy
July 21st, 2021 00:33
Toxic Lover
Accidental Poet said:
No man worthy of your time or love would make you feel this way. But your pen has some real talent. ; )
July 17th, 2021 17:21
Accidental Poet said:
No man worthy of your time or love would make you feel this way. But your pen has some real talent. ; )
July 17th, 2021 17:21
Toxic Lover
Deezy04 said:
Wow👏👏
That was the best Mimmie keep writin,,,that was some real stuff💯💯
July 17th, 2021 04:25
Deezy04 said:
Wow👏👏
That was the best Mimmie keep writin,,,that was some real stuff💯💯
July 17th, 2021 04:25
Toxic Lover
AzaleaTruth said:
This is the best Flood of emotions I\'ve come across...
July 17th, 2021 01:18
AzaleaTruth said:
This is the best Flood of emotions I\'ve come across...
July 17th, 2021 01:18
Toxic Lover
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Mimie, you must move on as the person who is right for you will be waiting when you move into your new life.
Welcome to MPS
July 17th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Mimie, you must move on as the person who is right for you will be waiting when you move into your new life.
Welcome to MPS
July 17th, 2021 00:38
Toxic Lover
osetsie said:
\'surel a gentlemen\'s agreement can be broken\'.
.this s**t is crazy man. I felt it. one of the best i have ever read💯💯🔥
July 16th, 2021 22:12
osetsie said:
\'surel a gentlemen\'s agreement can be broken\'.
.this s**t is crazy man. I felt it. one of the best i have ever read💯💯🔥
July 16th, 2021 22:12
