Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Living the way i want..
LIZ said:
Hell yeah!!! This is powerful!! RESPECT!!
September 10th, 2023 01:11
LIZ said:
Hell yeah!!! This is powerful!! RESPECT!!
September 10th, 2023 01:11
Keep moving
Pop64 said:
This speaks well of the need, not for speed, but for momentum, advancement and growing. We all travel at different speeds, but we all can get to the same destination so long as we move.
September 8th, 2023 07:52
Pop64 said:
This speaks well of the need, not for speed, but for momentum, advancement and growing. We all travel at different speeds, but we all can get to the same destination so long as we move.
September 8th, 2023 07:52
Keep moving
LIZ said:
Nice!!!!! Let people be! We all process things at different speeds! 🙏
September 8th, 2023 04:46
LIZ said:
Nice!!!!! Let people be! We all process things at different speeds! 🙏
September 8th, 2023 04:46
Do what is right
LIZ said:
Yes, because consequences will come. Good or bad! Might as well choose right! Very nice!!!
September 4th, 2023 02:27
LIZ said:
Yes, because consequences will come. Good or bad! Might as well choose right! Very nice!!!
September 4th, 2023 02:27
Beware
Doggerel Dave said:
Well you\'ve not left me with much room for manoeuvre, have you?..........😜
August 30th, 2023 06:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Well you\'ve not left me with much room for manoeuvre, have you?..........😜
August 30th, 2023 06:29
Breathes there a flower...
Doggerel Dave said:
Apologise to whomever you like - I had a good laugh!
August 29th, 2023 08:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Apologise to whomever you like - I had a good laugh!
August 29th, 2023 08:20
International Senior\'s Day
Doggerel Dave said:
I get your message and, to a certain extent applaud its intent.
However, Nafisa I\'d just like to point out that seniors aren\'t a special class and as a group should not be accorded special reverence. They are just the usual mix of humanity - good bad and indifferent, who have been around polluting the earth for longer than their unfortunately shorter lived co conspirators.........
August 22nd, 2023 18:54
Doggerel Dave said:
I get your message and, to a certain extent applaud its intent.
However, Nafisa I\'d just like to point out that seniors aren\'t a special class and as a group should not be accorded special reverence. They are just the usual mix of humanity - good bad and indifferent, who have been around polluting the earth for longer than their unfortunately shorter lived co conspirators.........
August 22nd, 2023 18:54
I am strong
Nicole Kay said:
Very well written and moving, Thank you for sharing!
August 12th, 2023 12:36
Nicole Kay said:
Very well written and moving, Thank you for sharing!
August 12th, 2023 12:36
I am strong
Parisab said:
Now everyone knows! My tolerance is my strength and My patience is my key-Your strength comes through your words…
August 11th, 2023 15:37
Parisab said:
Now everyone knows! My tolerance is my strength and My patience is my key-Your strength comes through your words…
August 11th, 2023 15:37
I am strong
Caring dove said:
A strong and nicely expressed writing .. I especially like this line
I build castles from the bricks
Yes sometimes people hurt us but sometimes we have to find strength
August 11th, 2023 01:43
Caring dove said:
A strong and nicely expressed writing .. I especially like this line
I build castles from the bricks
Yes sometimes people hurt us but sometimes we have to find strength
August 11th, 2023 01:43
Last September
peto said:
Great rhyme and flow
Does leave me wondering what did compel you to stay
Pleasure to read
August 9th, 2023 10:42
peto said:
Great rhyme and flow
Does leave me wondering what did compel you to stay
Pleasure to read
August 9th, 2023 10:42
two faces of married life
Doggerel Dave said:
I definitely understand VP 1 - I never married because I did not want to make any woman miserable for the whole of her life....
August 5th, 2023 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
I definitely understand VP 1 - I never married because I did not want to make any woman miserable for the whole of her life....
August 5th, 2023 19:09
two faces of married life
-Iris- said:
I absolutely adored this read!! Gave me a good chuckle here and there as well. Definitely worth the long read, well done!
July 9th, 2023 09:28
-Iris- said:
I absolutely adored this read!! Gave me a good chuckle here and there as well. Definitely worth the long read, well done!
July 9th, 2023 09:28
two faces of married life
mvvenkataraman said:
Just because the poem is very long,
Not reading it is absolutely wrong,
I think this is an educating song,
If read, benefits to all will belong!
July 9th, 2023 03:07
mvvenkataraman said:
Just because the poem is very long,
Not reading it is absolutely wrong,
I think this is an educating song,
If read, benefits to all will belong!
July 9th, 2023 03:07
Words of wisdom
L. B. Mek said:
well then, good thing
girls can set us feeble men straight
and rid the world of all evil, overnight
since, all blame is pre-assigned
to \'man\'
lol
yeah, ok
forgive me if i choose to believe
the warrior queen\'s in my life
and heroin\'s of history, who chose
to not hide behind that
oh so convenient victimhood
status
as their crutch, in life....
June 30th, 2023 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
well then, good thing
girls can set us feeble men straight
and rid the world of all evil, overnight
since, all blame is pre-assigned
to \'man\'
lol
yeah, ok
forgive me if i choose to believe
the warrior queen\'s in my life
and heroin\'s of history, who chose
to not hide behind that
oh so convenient victimhood
status
as their crutch, in life....
June 30th, 2023 06:29
stars
Caring dove said:
A lovely and interesting writing nicely expressed )) liked the read
June 28th, 2023 01:19
Caring dove said:
A lovely and interesting writing nicely expressed )) liked the read
June 28th, 2023 01:19
The wind
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! Nicely expressed poem ..
And yes the wind can be annoying sometimes .. but maybe it knows no other way .. just like some of us don’t know how to be any different
June 28th, 2023 01:02
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! Nicely expressed poem ..
And yes the wind can be annoying sometimes .. but maybe it knows no other way .. just like some of us don’t know how to be any different
June 28th, 2023 01:02
Improving self
2781 said:
Better to do something and expect nothing.
Than to do nothing and expect something.
That was my thought of the day!
June 27th, 2023 06:31
2781 said:
Better to do something and expect nothing.
Than to do nothing and expect something.
That was my thought of the day!
June 27th, 2023 06:31
Improving self
Ok Waleed said:
I like to think of it as a monkey race and I need the best banana
June 27th, 2023 01:34
Ok Waleed said:
I like to think of it as a monkey race and I need the best banana
June 27th, 2023 01:34
Upwards and onwards
Caring dove said:
Lovely words especially like the last few lines
June 26th, 2023 04:28
Caring dove said:
Lovely words especially like the last few lines
June 26th, 2023 04:28
on clouds
L. B. Mek said:
so beautiful
this, that kaleidoscopic view of life
where wisdom
grants a glimpse of life\'s gray feats
and rainfall\'s
cooling refrain of melodic, healing
..
such a soothing read, dear Poet
thank you!
June 5th, 2023 03:27
L. B. Mek said:
so beautiful
this, that kaleidoscopic view of life
where wisdom
grants a glimpse of life\'s gray feats
and rainfall\'s
cooling refrain of melodic, healing
..
such a soothing read, dear Poet
thank you!
June 5th, 2023 03:27
cascading water falls..
Soman Ragavan said:
NafisaSB
cascading water fall
My comments on the poem \"Cascading water fall” by NafisaSB
Your poetic eye has caught things happening in the waterfall :
--the water falls gently at first; --the droplets pause; --they drop madly, making noise; --the river foams and roars; --the waves rise with power; --the birds take flight; --the fishes scamper away from the pressure caused by the falling water.
We should point out that the falling water helps the water to oxygenate, which is good for the fish.
Regarding rivers, we can note the following :
The river flows on, going downhill, gathering speed and power; it can move rocks, break its banks, pull along nearby trees; it makes noise; it is mostly unsalty, but turns salty when it reaches the sea; when the river reaches the sea, it becomes the sea. All the noises and ravages it makes along the way end when it enters the sea. It enters the sea quietly. Its reign ends when it meets the sea.
The sun turns some sea water to moisture, that rise to form clouds; the clouds give place to rain at some places and snow at other places. Rain water turns into rivers; snow melts and flows downhill too. Rivers run downhill (through gravity) to reach the ocean. When river water reaches the sea, the wheel has turned full circle : the water returns to where it started…
Still, poets can write much about the beauty and workings of the river. Soman Ragavan. 4 June, 2023. //
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June 4th, 2023 01:32
Soman Ragavan said:
NafisaSB
cascading water fall
My comments on the poem \"Cascading water fall” by NafisaSB
Your poetic eye has caught things happening in the waterfall :
--the water falls gently at first; --the droplets pause; --they drop madly, making noise; --the river foams and roars; --the waves rise with power; --the birds take flight; --the fishes scamper away from the pressure caused by the falling water.
We should point out that the falling water helps the water to oxygenate, which is good for the fish.
Regarding rivers, we can note the following :
The river flows on, going downhill, gathering speed and power; it can move rocks, break its banks, pull along nearby trees; it makes noise; it is mostly unsalty, but turns salty when it reaches the sea; when the river reaches the sea, it becomes the sea. All the noises and ravages it makes along the way end when it enters the sea. It enters the sea quietly. Its reign ends when it meets the sea.
The sun turns some sea water to moisture, that rise to form clouds; the clouds give place to rain at some places and snow at other places. Rain water turns into rivers; snow melts and flows downhill too. Rivers run downhill (through gravity) to reach the ocean. When river water reaches the sea, the wheel has turned full circle : the water returns to where it started…
Still, poets can write much about the beauty and workings of the river. Soman Ragavan. 4 June, 2023. //
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June 4th, 2023 01:32
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