Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
why does the moon..?
L. B. Mek said:
\'She looks like a lonely waif, a reflector poised in space
And sometimes to enliven herself, with the clouds, does have a race
And sometimes she hides behind the clouds
As if to hide her face
While sometimes, she races ahead of it
Laughing at it its slow pace.\'
(what a fabulous verse
a wonderful showcasing
of your poetic talents
genuine originality and creativity..
a lovely read..
i bet you made the moon blush)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 1st, 2022 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'She looks like a lonely waif, a reflector poised in space
And sometimes to enliven herself, with the clouds, does have a race
And sometimes she hides behind the clouds
As if to hide her face
While sometimes, she races ahead of it
Laughing at it its slow pace.\'
(what a fabulous verse
a wonderful showcasing
of your poetic talents
genuine originality and creativity..
a lovely read..
i bet you made the moon blush)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 1st, 2022 03:38
SNOW WHITE CLOUDS
NafisaSB said:
gray clouds i wonder
why you always thunder
the white are so serene
and beautify the scene
and to appreciate their beauty
is now a daily duty
June 29th, 2022 01:12
NafisaSB said:
gray clouds i wonder
why you always thunder
the white are so serene
and beautify the scene
and to appreciate their beauty
is now a daily duty
June 29th, 2022 01:12
the lake
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Nafisa, lakes can be so calming when sitting by them.
Andy
June 29th, 2022 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Nafisa, lakes can be so calming when sitting by them.
Andy
June 29th, 2022 01:09
SNOW WHITE CLOUDS
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
forgive me, dear Poet
I read your words and couldn\'t help
but be inspired to scribble
my own, little poetic reply:
(\'Puffed white cotton, glides\'
to serenade our eyes
with Nature\'s, guile
majestic, in its simplicity
effortless in its, complexity
these clouds
that look down
without ever, making us feel
marginalised or small,
these clouds
that sway our heart\'s
with a glimpse of the wonder
in existence\'s duality,
these clouds
now kind, subtle and beautiful
then monstrously thundersome
and just as quickly, revert back
to glistening beacons, championing
Sunshine\'s, soothing rays...
these clouds, we
far, too often fail
to appreciate!)
June 28th, 2022 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
forgive me, dear Poet
I read your words and couldn\'t help
but be inspired to scribble
my own, little poetic reply:
(\'Puffed white cotton, glides\'
to serenade our eyes
with Nature\'s, guile
majestic, in its simplicity
effortless in its, complexity
these clouds
that look down
without ever, making us feel
marginalised or small,
these clouds
that sway our heart\'s
with a glimpse of the wonder
in existence\'s duality,
these clouds
now kind, subtle and beautiful
then monstrously thundersome
and just as quickly, revert back
to glistening beacons, championing
Sunshine\'s, soothing rays...
these clouds, we
far, too often fail
to appreciate!)
June 28th, 2022 03:31
it is spring
L. B. Mek said:
Spring! Spring! Spring!
thank you! dear Poet
(this senior is going
for a fun, run
erm
to go grab some
...
Rum
...)
\'don\'t hate me\'.. lol
June 24th, 2022 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
Spring! Spring! Spring!
thank you! dear Poet
(this senior is going
for a fun, run
erm
to go grab some
...
Rum
...)
\'don\'t hate me\'.. lol
June 24th, 2022 04:03
flowers
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah its good and refreshing to have fresh flowers and this poem is lovely to read. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
June 23rd, 2022 07:37
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah its good and refreshing to have fresh flowers and this poem is lovely to read. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
June 23rd, 2022 07:37
flowers
L. B. Mek said:
\'We find them in the bowers\'
(what a poignant write, dear Poet
couldn\'t help but try and poetically reply
thank you for sharing and inspiring my little scribble)
\'born into a Time
that\'s stopped, smelling
nature\'s Flowers..\'
instead we\'re sold
synthetic petals, in plastic bags
to adorn our floors
and colour our manmade mirage, occasions
then we wipe them away, free
of dirt or earth
marketed to be used and thrown away...
later
we drink our wines alone
look upon our dead gardens
\'this Spring\' we promise ourselves
\'I\'ll definitely get started this Year\'
we whisper, to that forgiving air
...
June 23rd, 2022 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'We find them in the bowers\'
(what a poignant write, dear Poet
couldn\'t help but try and poetically reply
thank you for sharing and inspiring my little scribble)
\'born into a Time
that\'s stopped, smelling
nature\'s Flowers..\'
instead we\'re sold
synthetic petals, in plastic bags
to adorn our floors
and colour our manmade mirage, occasions
then we wipe them away, free
of dirt or earth
marketed to be used and thrown away...
later
we drink our wines alone
look upon our dead gardens
\'this Spring\' we promise ourselves
\'I\'ll definitely get started this Year\'
we whisper, to that forgiving air
...
June 23rd, 2022 05:06
One
L. B. Mek said:
\'One doctor can cure lots of men\'
what about the lovely ladies?
lol
thanks for sharing
(a person I admire greatly
introduced me to a film, titled
\'the power of one\'
which relates so well
to your poetry\'s themes)
June 20th, 2022 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'One doctor can cure lots of men\'
what about the lovely ladies?
lol
thanks for sharing
(a person I admire greatly
introduced me to a film, titled
\'the power of one\'
which relates so well
to your poetry\'s themes)
June 20th, 2022 05:01
Never befriend a mermaid
L. B. Mek said:
for me, personally
it all smells a little
fishy..
so yeah, i stick
to land dweller\'s
love\'s me
me chicks...
lmao
(it\'s Friday, a heatwave
and I\'m in a silly mood
forgive me, dear poet)
June 17th, 2022 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
for me, personally
it all smells a little
fishy..
so yeah, i stick
to land dweller\'s
love\'s me
me chicks...
lmao
(it\'s Friday, a heatwave
and I\'m in a silly mood
forgive me, dear poet)
June 17th, 2022 04:32
Never befriend a mermaid
tallisman said:
Made me laugh, so random i guess! Thanks!
June 17th, 2022 00:58
tallisman said:
Made me laugh, so random i guess! Thanks!
June 17th, 2022 00:58
caring mode
L. B. Mek said:
\'Riding a high horse
Intolerant of jest
These are the people
Who consider they’re best\'..
wonderfully, idyllic
message, dear poet
and yet, so realisable
with little
effort and a pinch of humility..
still
inevitably, we watch
as unseen it passes, most
like
the clouds they forget
to heed...
June 16th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'Riding a high horse
Intolerant of jest
These are the people
Who consider they’re best\'..
wonderfully, idyllic
message, dear poet
and yet, so realisable
with little
effort and a pinch of humility..
still
inevitably, we watch
as unseen it passes, most
like
the clouds they forget
to heed...
June 16th, 2022 04:57
Gaiety & Contentment
L. B. Mek said:
a fantastic read, dear Poet
this is the \'Animal Farm\', theme
I wish Orwell would have, gifted
the world
rather than, adding more fuel
material
for our
evermore segregated, existence..
in the words of a True, genius
Will Durant:
\'gaiety, is wiser than wisdom\'
lol
\'Live\' my poetic kin
dream, cry, laugh, love
Live, Live, Live!
for our gifted Tomorrow\'s
will soon
be those \'good old days\'
Live
June 10th, 2022 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
a fantastic read, dear Poet
this is the \'Animal Farm\', theme
I wish Orwell would have, gifted
the world
rather than, adding more fuel
material
for our
evermore segregated, existence..
in the words of a True, genius
Will Durant:
\'gaiety, is wiser than wisdom\'
lol
\'Live\' my poetic kin
dream, cry, laugh, love
Live, Live, Live!
for our gifted Tomorrow\'s
will soon
be those \'good old days\'
Live
June 10th, 2022 05:36
DO NOT BE DISCOURAGED
L. B. Mek said:
a great message, dear Poet
I read and learn
and take comfort from, heeding
your wisdom
June 9th, 2022 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
a great message, dear Poet
I read and learn
and take comfort from, heeding
your wisdom
June 9th, 2022 05:32
Break up
L. B. Mek said:
\'The eyes still kept seeking
Though the torrents had dried\'..
ain\'t it always the case, dear poet
(bright green fields, ahead
a horizons sea, full of fish
and yet
we drag our feet, look back
at that barren land, we just
can\'t
let go - of, without taring
away
a part of ourselves, this
our burden for loving, with all
we\'ve got to give, every time...)
June 3rd, 2022 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'The eyes still kept seeking
Though the torrents had dried\'..
ain\'t it always the case, dear poet
(bright green fields, ahead
a horizons sea, full of fish
and yet
we drag our feet, look back
at that barren land, we just
can\'t
let go - of, without taring
away
a part of ourselves, this
our burden for loving, with all
we\'ve got to give, every time...)
June 3rd, 2022 03:55
I am a stream
L. B. Mek said:
may you Ever, shine Bright
form Inside - out...!
dear Poet
May 31st, 2022 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
may you Ever, shine Bright
form Inside - out...!
dear Poet
May 31st, 2022 05:40
The brave soldier
L. B. Mek said:
(there may be glory
in the deed
but Never
in the need
for this to be a reality
replicated, daily, generationally
all over the world..
indeed, we salute the bravery
and mourn
that such brave souls
never strived
to make art and beauty
their purpose in life..)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
\'salute their sacrifices
never
celebrate its necessity!\'
May 27th, 2022 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
(there may be glory
in the deed
but Never
in the need
for this to be a reality
replicated, daily, generationally
all over the world..
indeed, we salute the bravery
and mourn
that such brave souls
never strived
to make art and beauty
their purpose in life..)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
\'salute their sacrifices
never
celebrate its necessity!\'
May 27th, 2022 05:12
Ooty
L. B. Mek said:
\'The panorama was magnificent – it was truly a work of art\'..
like your words..
(I read and simply close my eyes and drift
and drift
between your syllables, feel
life\'s breeze
in a room with closed windows
delighting, once more
in Nature\'s gifts..)
thank you! dear Poet
so well written
May 26th, 2022 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'The panorama was magnificent – it was truly a work of art\'..
like your words..
(I read and simply close my eyes and drift
and drift
between your syllables, feel
life\'s breeze
in a room with closed windows
delighting, once more
in Nature\'s gifts..)
thank you! dear Poet
so well written
May 26th, 2022 05:34
Blessings
L. B. Mek said:
Love, in its Purest form
will avenge, all
those discrepancies
in our life\'s, ill-fate..
see, maybe
that absent father, made way
for the Greatest mother, figure
to shine
and imbue a Hue, of beloved-ness
on a soul
that deserved, nothing less!
so yes, it would be nice
if all our stories
came pre prepared, like modernity\'s
ready to go, meal\'s
but you see, dear insightful Poet
some of the best, dishes
we make
from life\'s chaotic ingredients
taste, that much better
for those mistaken, dashes
of flavourful vinegar, we add
whose, bitterness
awakens the sweetness
imbued
in those ingredients, waiting
for an opportunity
to Glow
with luminous, uncontainable: Pride...
(I\'m so happy
that the one you care for so much
had her special day!
cheers, to you witnessing
the fruition of your selfless
care and support, dear Poet
🥂🍾🥂)
thanks for sharing
May 24th, 2022 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
Love, in its Purest form
will avenge, all
those discrepancies
in our life\'s, ill-fate..
see, maybe
that absent father, made way
for the Greatest mother, figure
to shine
and imbue a Hue, of beloved-ness
on a soul
that deserved, nothing less!
so yes, it would be nice
if all our stories
came pre prepared, like modernity\'s
ready to go, meal\'s
but you see, dear insightful Poet
some of the best, dishes
we make
from life\'s chaotic ingredients
taste, that much better
for those mistaken, dashes
of flavourful vinegar, we add
whose, bitterness
awakens the sweetness
imbued
in those ingredients, waiting
for an opportunity
to Glow
with luminous, uncontainable: Pride...
(I\'m so happy
that the one you care for so much
had her special day!
cheers, to you witnessing
the fruition of your selfless
care and support, dear Poet
🥂🍾🥂)
thanks for sharing
May 24th, 2022 05:44
Success shall be mine
tallisman said:
And a successful poem! Enjoyed it. All the best!
May 21st, 2022 01:41
tallisman said:
And a successful poem! Enjoyed it. All the best!
May 21st, 2022 01:41
be careful
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Nafisa, to see the true beauty of a person you must look into their eyes and see their heart.
Andy
May 19th, 2022 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Nafisa, to see the true beauty of a person you must look into their eyes and see their heart.
Andy
May 19th, 2022 02:05
A broken heart
L. B. Mek said:
really clever!
thank you, dear Poet
\'brought a ring – a cute little thing
But you back at me, my present did fling\'..
\'Boy buys ring, girl throws it away
The same old story repeated everyday\'..
May 17th, 2022 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
really clever!
thank you, dear Poet
\'brought a ring – a cute little thing
But you back at me, my present did fling\'..
\'Boy buys ring, girl throws it away
The same old story repeated everyday\'..
May 17th, 2022 05:35
Daily walk
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy, immersive reads
like this, dear poet
wonderful imagery and insightful, commentary
gift wrapped in such a positive message..
thank you!
May 16th, 2022 06:26
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy, immersive reads
like this, dear poet
wonderful imagery and insightful, commentary
gift wrapped in such a positive message..
thank you!
May 16th, 2022 06:26
Last September
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully vivid, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
\'Its frosty stare
Its knowing look
Searched my heart-
An open book
Its pretty wings
Flashed in the sun
Its haughty gaze
Deceived no one\'
May 9th, 2022 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully vivid, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
\'Its frosty stare
Its knowing look
Searched my heart-
An open book
Its pretty wings
Flashed in the sun
Its haughty gaze
Deceived no one\'
May 9th, 2022 05:54
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