Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Statement of accounts
Christina8 said:
Awesome poem! Great ideas and messages! Thanks for sharing!
April 25th, 2022 08:03
Christina8 said:
Awesome poem! Great ideas and messages! Thanks for sharing!
April 25th, 2022 08:03
Statement of accounts
L. B. Mek said:
\'He draws a margin for profits, and one for losses too
So that he will obtain a statement that *isn\'t quite fully true.\'..
(sorry it read to me as isn\'t
if I\'m wrong, please
forgive my foolish boldness)..
I cherish, so much in your
poetically didactive, message..!
but, I think
notion\'s of \'sin\' and \'purity\'
are so troublesome
to incorporate, in-to our chaotic
everyday struggles and blessings
coin flips of fate
see
\'sin\', brings with it such destructive
notions of poisonously
self-defeating, internalisations
of events and momentary choices
that sculpt, our regrets in life
when in actuality
upon reflection, of sound mind
removed from that intensity
of a moment\'s, supposed magnitude
we, just made mistakes
mistakes, embedded
in our nature\'s, fallibility..
and \'Purity\'
is just, such a futile ideal, as
we\'re born
into this world, dripping
in blood and muck
crying our heart\'s out
and its all, downhill
from there
with blessed, high points
of relief
star lighting, our cherished lives...
(forgive me, for my opinionated ranting
I just feel, our word choices
make a huge impact
and at all times
we should live a backdoor open
for those who\'ve been dropped
into that monsoon of life\'s strife
and are looking for a way, back
so for sin I Choose, to read -\'mistake\'
and for purity, I Choose to see - \'flawed beauty\')
thank you! dear Poet
please, don\'t misunderstand
I champion
your empathetic compassion
and empowering message!!!
April 25th, 2022 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'He draws a margin for profits, and one for losses too
So that he will obtain a statement that *isn\'t quite fully true.\'..
(sorry it read to me as isn\'t
if I\'m wrong, please
forgive my foolish boldness)..
I cherish, so much in your
poetically didactive, message..!
but, I think
notion\'s of \'sin\' and \'purity\'
are so troublesome
to incorporate, in-to our chaotic
everyday struggles and blessings
coin flips of fate
see
\'sin\', brings with it such destructive
notions of poisonously
self-defeating, internalisations
of events and momentary choices
that sculpt, our regrets in life
when in actuality
upon reflection, of sound mind
removed from that intensity
of a moment\'s, supposed magnitude
we, just made mistakes
mistakes, embedded
in our nature\'s, fallibility..
and \'Purity\'
is just, such a futile ideal, as
we\'re born
into this world, dripping
in blood and muck
crying our heart\'s out
and its all, downhill
from there
with blessed, high points
of relief
star lighting, our cherished lives...
(forgive me, for my opinionated ranting
I just feel, our word choices
make a huge impact
and at all times
we should live a backdoor open
for those who\'ve been dropped
into that monsoon of life\'s strife
and are looking for a way, back
so for sin I Choose, to read -\'mistake\'
and for purity, I Choose to see - \'flawed beauty\')
thank you! dear Poet
please, don\'t misunderstand
I champion
your empathetic compassion
and empowering message!!!
April 25th, 2022 06:03
On thanking God
dusk arising said:
Dont forget to thank your god for earthquakes and tsunamis, famines and plagues - god being omnipotent is therefore responsible. But there\'s the pathetic rhetorical excuse brainwashed christians come up with that it\'s all the fault of the wickedness of mankind... earthquakes and tsunamis oh yes, brainwashing serves them well.
April 23rd, 2022 17:13
dusk arising said:
Dont forget to thank your god for earthquakes and tsunamis, famines and plagues - god being omnipotent is therefore responsible. But there\'s the pathetic rhetorical excuse brainwashed christians come up with that it\'s all the fault of the wickedness of mankind... earthquakes and tsunamis oh yes, brainwashing serves them well.
April 23rd, 2022 17:13
On thanking God
Crowns4Christ said:
So grateful you wrote this, most tend to thank God for when He helps us
April 23rd, 2022 16:12
Crowns4Christ said:
So grateful you wrote this, most tend to thank God for when He helps us
April 23rd, 2022 16:12
My thoughts
Rocky Lagou said:
\"Doubts give rise to doubts.\" Yes. and Yes. We are our own setback. I enjoy your imagery and wording, excellent!
April 22nd, 2022 08:18
Rocky Lagou said:
\"Doubts give rise to doubts.\" Yes. and Yes. We are our own setback. I enjoy your imagery and wording, excellent!
April 22nd, 2022 08:18
My thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
\'Cyclonic in their strength like Wyatt’s Hurricane\'..
now that\'s: simile, metaphor and imagery
combined, to devastating - poetic effect..
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'Cyclonic in their strength like Wyatt’s Hurricane\'..
now that\'s: simile, metaphor and imagery
combined, to devastating - poetic effect..
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:56
The helpless victim
L. B. Mek said:
Awesome!
you are so talented, dear poet
thank you
for gifting me my fist chuckle of the day
and sharing such an immersive read
for all of us to enjoy!
April 21st, 2022 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
Awesome!
you are so talented, dear poet
thank you
for gifting me my fist chuckle of the day
and sharing such an immersive read
for all of us to enjoy!
April 21st, 2022 05:10
Thhe soldier\'s song
Crowns4Christ said:
Thank you for this piece and for supporting the fighting soldiers, it\'s nice to see the support for them
April 20th, 2022 13:26
Crowns4Christ said:
Thank you for this piece and for supporting the fighting soldiers, it\'s nice to see the support for them
April 20th, 2022 13:26
Life is....
Rocky Lagou said:
The beauty of life is that it can be all these things you\'ve presented. It\'s always changing and never still. Amazing.
April 19th, 2022 09:23
Rocky Lagou said:
The beauty of life is that it can be all these things you\'ve presented. It\'s always changing and never still. Amazing.
April 19th, 2022 09:23
Life is....
L. B. Mek said:
life is these words of your poetry
touching so many, and you
asking for nothing, in return
dear poet
April 19th, 2022 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
life is these words of your poetry
touching so many, and you
asking for nothing, in return
dear poet
April 19th, 2022 05:59
my lovely days have gone..
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean wow, that first line, \"The thorn’s prick no longer evokes a long-drawn sigh\" is so dulcet. It truly evokes images and your wistful yearning is felt. I hope you at least were able to enjoy your youth days to the fullest. The golden years are also wonderful.
April 18th, 2022 12:45
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean wow, that first line, \"The thorn’s prick no longer evokes a long-drawn sigh\" is so dulcet. It truly evokes images and your wistful yearning is felt. I hope you at least were able to enjoy your youth days to the fullest. The golden years are also wonderful.
April 18th, 2022 12:45
my lovely days have gone..
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
\'Satiated as I am, with life’s joys and sorrows
I am no longer concerned with waiting for the morrows.
Once I was young, ah, once I was young,
Once I was humble, and once highly-strung
Life then for me was sheer enchantment and joy
It lasted much longer than an unbreakable toy.
Today, I sit back and reflect on the past
Which was boundless, corner-less, and oh, so vast\'
April 18th, 2022 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
\'Satiated as I am, with life’s joys and sorrows
I am no longer concerned with waiting for the morrows.
Once I was young, ah, once I was young,
Once I was humble, and once highly-strung
Life then for me was sheer enchantment and joy
It lasted much longer than an unbreakable toy.
Today, I sit back and reflect on the past
Which was boundless, corner-less, and oh, so vast\'
April 18th, 2022 05:42
Life - 2 main aspects
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing ! Great last line 🙂 I think life should be more happiness than sadness ..
April 17th, 2022 01:04
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing ! Great last line 🙂 I think life should be more happiness than sadness ..
April 17th, 2022 01:04
Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m not sure I understand..
but whatever you\'re up to
stay safe, dear poet
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m not sure I understand..
but whatever you\'re up to
stay safe, dear poet
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:38
the Super \"Super Powers\"
L. B. Mek said:
and all, \'Voted\'
in-to power...
just
an all round, demoralising
theme, to contemplate
dear poet, thanks for sharing
(and I so agree, with every
infuriatedly bristling syllable
you\'ve inked!)
April 14th, 2022 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
and all, \'Voted\'
in-to power...
just
an all round, demoralising
theme, to contemplate
dear poet, thanks for sharing
(and I so agree, with every
infuriatedly bristling syllable
you\'ve inked!)
April 14th, 2022 04:04
the Super \"Super Powers\"
voices of ghosts said:
no kidding, that is exactly how it works
April 13th, 2022 18:28
voices of ghosts said:
no kidding, that is exactly how it works
April 13th, 2022 18:28
The traveler
L. B. Mek said:
\'How I crave for a kind look.\'
(such a relatable read
really like your brave portrait, of yearning
for something
we once were so quick, to move-on
from..
a great write, dear Poet
thanks for sharing)
\'Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And never brought to mind?
Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And auld lang syne!
Chorus - For auld land syne, my dear,
For auld lang syne,
We\'ll tak a cup o\' kindness yet,
For auld lang syne.\'
as said best, by that great Burns
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4686 )
April 12th, 2022 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'How I crave for a kind look.\'
(such a relatable read
really like your brave portrait, of yearning
for something
we once were so quick, to move-on
from..
a great write, dear Poet
thanks for sharing)
\'Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And never brought to mind?
Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And auld lang syne!
Chorus - For auld land syne, my dear,
For auld lang syne,
We\'ll tak a cup o\' kindness yet,
For auld lang syne.\'
as said best, by that great Burns
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4686 )
April 12th, 2022 05:31
My treasure trove
L. B. Mek said:
\'And though my throne is grassy
I am not one who rues it.\'
loved the humility, imbued
in your song of victorious, acceptance
may whatever God you choose to believe-in
reward your humanist, openness
and
the love and respect
your poetry alludes to
for those, brethren
with differing ideal\'s, to yours..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
hope you have a peaceful week
April 11th, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'And though my throne is grassy
I am not one who rues it.\'
loved the humility, imbued
in your song of victorious, acceptance
may whatever God you choose to believe-in
reward your humanist, openness
and
the love and respect
your poetry alludes to
for those, brethren
with differing ideal\'s, to yours..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
hope you have a peaceful week
April 11th, 2022 05:43
moonlight
voices of ghosts said:
very beautiful 👏
that is the power of the moon .....
April 10th, 2022 11:01
voices of ghosts said:
very beautiful 👏
that is the power of the moon .....
April 10th, 2022 11:01
moonlight
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nature can calm is sometimes . A lovely poem .. like your choice of words
April 10th, 2022 01:10
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nature can calm is sometimes . A lovely poem .. like your choice of words
April 10th, 2022 01:10
Why study?
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear friend…truly understand…i too always forget…as if all goes in some kind of abyss…cause when i draw my hands to fetch I don’t remember anything to write on that sheet of mine…
April 9th, 2022 09:39
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear friend…truly understand…i too always forget…as if all goes in some kind of abyss…cause when i draw my hands to fetch I don’t remember anything to write on that sheet of mine…
April 9th, 2022 09:39
My grandchildren
L. B. Mek said:
\'Their wriggling and their giggling
On which we dote and thrive\'..
so happy for you!
(to recognise, a child\'s light
gracing your life
is to introduce, our existence\'s
unadulterated: Beauty
in-to your hopes and dreams)
thank you!
for this soothing read, dear Poet
April 8th, 2022 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'Their wriggling and their giggling
On which we dote and thrive\'..
so happy for you!
(to recognise, a child\'s light
gracing your life
is to introduce, our existence\'s
unadulterated: Beauty
in-to your hopes and dreams)
thank you!
for this soothing read, dear Poet
April 8th, 2022 05:38
My grandchildren
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of grandchildren is so wonderful, may those memories always remain with us.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of grandchildren is so wonderful, may those memories always remain with us.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 01:16
Do you know..
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice poem ) lovely words
April 7th, 2022 01:06
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice poem ) lovely words
April 7th, 2022 01:06
Cupid rides pillion
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s not the silly ‘puppy love’ of youth
But the stark, plain and wholesome truth
For sun may sleep and death may die
But we’ll be together – she and I\'..
such a great read, what poetic flow!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
worthy of being favourably compared
to one of the best, love poem
dedications:
\'Annabel Lee\', by Poe
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22550 )
April 5th, 2022 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s not the silly ‘puppy love’ of youth
But the stark, plain and wholesome truth
For sun may sleep and death may die
But we’ll be together – she and I\'..
such a great read, what poetic flow!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
worthy of being favourably compared
to one of the best, love poem
dedications:
\'Annabel Lee\', by Poe
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22550 )
April 5th, 2022 04:21
An advice to sweethearts..
L. B. Mek said:
kinda like life, eh?
why not make the best of it
whilst we still can, I say
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
kinda like life, eh?
why not make the best of it
whilst we still can, I say
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:20
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