Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
An advice to sweethearts..
L. B. Mek said:
kinda like life, eh?
why not make the best of it
whilst we still can, I say
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
kinda like life, eh?
why not make the best of it
whilst we still can, I say
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:20
An advice to sweethearts..
Crowns4Christ said:
So true,but so worth it when your love is true
April 4th, 2022 01:45
Crowns4Christ said:
So true,but so worth it when your love is true
April 4th, 2022 01:45
A bride\'s steps
Christina8 said:
I like your rhymes and the meaning of hope, etc, behind each step a bride takes. Great job!
April 3rd, 2022 11:02
Christina8 said:
I like your rhymes and the meaning of hope, etc, behind each step a bride takes. Great job!
April 3rd, 2022 11:02
happy caring mode
L. B. Mek said:
interesting message and relatable read
thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
interesting message and relatable read
thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2022 05:00
Ageing
Rocky Lagou said:
A lovely piece. Those are the \"golden years\" of life and it\'s a moment to truly live life to the fullest. Continue living the perks!
March 31st, 2022 10:12
Rocky Lagou said:
A lovely piece. Those are the \"golden years\" of life and it\'s a moment to truly live life to the fullest. Continue living the perks!
March 31st, 2022 10:12
Ageing
L. B. Mek said:
\'in my, often flawed
but ever, humbled
opinionated - opinion\'
this, is brilliant!
reminded me
of one of my favourite poems
\'Warning\' by Jenny Joseph
( https://www.scottishpoetrylibrary.org.uk/poem/warning/ )
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet
March 31st, 2022 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'in my, often flawed
but ever, humbled
opinionated - opinion\'
this, is brilliant!
reminded me
of one of my favourite poems
\'Warning\' by Jenny Joseph
( https://www.scottishpoetrylibrary.org.uk/poem/warning/ )
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet
March 31st, 2022 05:05
in the street
Rocky Lagou said:
Really nice epitome of life and the different things going on at the same time. It\'s a nice reflection and vividly displayed.
March 30th, 2022 10:33
Rocky Lagou said:
Really nice epitome of life and the different things going on at the same time. It\'s a nice reflection and vividly displayed.
March 30th, 2022 10:33
Anger
L. B. Mek said:
(acutely poignant
a great write!
thanks for sharing
and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
\'sparks, emanating
eyes enraged enough
to carpet, skies
thunderously bleak\'
March 25th, 2022 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
(acutely poignant
a great write!
thanks for sharing
and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
\'sparks, emanating
eyes enraged enough
to carpet, skies
thunderously bleak\'
March 25th, 2022 06:10
Bitterness - the perfume
dean langmuir said:
You captured alot,my poem today is along the same lines,how smell dictates way more than we think.take care.
March 21st, 2022 08:13
dean langmuir said:
You captured alot,my poem today is along the same lines,how smell dictates way more than we think.take care.
March 21st, 2022 08:13
night
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It’s very beautiful ! Really like the words used in this !
March 19th, 2022 01:39
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It’s very beautiful ! Really like the words used in this !
March 19th, 2022 01:39
A sportsman
L. B. Mek said:
what encouraging words,
an uplifting message..
thanks for sharing
March 18th, 2022 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
what encouraging words,
an uplifting message..
thanks for sharing
March 18th, 2022 05:25
Peace
NafisaSB said:
i thank you all for your response, and sincerely wish that peace prevails and reigns all over the world
it\'s a big challenge now, but the world leaders need to open their eyes before catastrophe strikes
March 18th, 2022 00:56
NafisaSB said:
i thank you all for your response, and sincerely wish that peace prevails and reigns all over the world
it\'s a big challenge now, but the world leaders need to open their eyes before catastrophe strikes
March 18th, 2022 00:56
Peace
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'if only Peace
was our collective
religion...\'
(thanks for sharing)
March 17th, 2022 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'if only Peace
was our collective
religion...\'
(thanks for sharing)
March 17th, 2022 04:46
breathes there a flower
Rocky Lagou said:
Very vivid and the meaning is present. It\'s intense to see the distress of the flower but also the beauty it possesses. Great job.
March 16th, 2022 09:11
Rocky Lagou said:
Very vivid and the meaning is present. It\'s intense to see the distress of the flower but also the beauty it possesses. Great job.
March 16th, 2022 09:11
rejuvenate our land
L. B. Mek said:
\'Let us learn a lesson
To balance nature with nurture.
Weave it in the fabric
Of our daily lives\'..
timely and Important words
thanks for sharing
March 10th, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'Let us learn a lesson
To balance nature with nurture.
Weave it in the fabric
Of our daily lives\'..
timely and Important words
thanks for sharing
March 10th, 2022 05:04
Don\'t keep on running
sally said:
very nice and optimistic poem, right life is short and we should enjoy every beautiful detail on it : )
March 9th, 2022 06:57
sally said:
very nice and optimistic poem, right life is short and we should enjoy every beautiful detail on it : )
March 9th, 2022 06:57
Don\'t keep on running
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Good writing .. I think it’s difficult when we feel sad in life because nobody wants to feel that way .. but maybe there’s reasons behind sadness ..
March 9th, 2022 01:35
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Good writing .. I think it’s difficult when we feel sad in life because nobody wants to feel that way .. but maybe there’s reasons behind sadness ..
March 9th, 2022 01:35
fascinating colors
L. B. Mek said:
personally
I will just be happy
if I didn\'t have to \'LITERALLY\'
hear the word \'LITERALLY\'
in every sentence: \'LITERALLY\'...!
(good on you for trying, dear poet
me, I\'m more cynical
and like Rick Rubin
and his fake funeral for the word \'Def\'
I have already come to terms
to the exponentially limitless
demise
of the English language..
I mean, here we are
the most widely educated generation
in the history of humanity
and the best eloquence
we come across
\'on da daily\'
is so inanely, trite
\'innit tho, for reals... reals\'
.
.
\'LITERALLY!\'
(and no, \'slang\'
or other people\'s \'supposed\' culture
has little to do
with the universal dummying down
of language
in our universities and state offices)
lol
or I\'m just an old cranky, has-been
ranting
for the sake of ranting, who knows
March 7th, 2022 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
personally
I will just be happy
if I didn\'t have to \'LITERALLY\'
hear the word \'LITERALLY\'
in every sentence: \'LITERALLY\'...!
(good on you for trying, dear poet
me, I\'m more cynical
and like Rick Rubin
and his fake funeral for the word \'Def\'
I have already come to terms
to the exponentially limitless
demise
of the English language..
I mean, here we are
the most widely educated generation
in the history of humanity
and the best eloquence
we come across
\'on da daily\'
is so inanely, trite
\'innit tho, for reals... reals\'
.
.
\'LITERALLY!\'
(and no, \'slang\'
or other people\'s \'supposed\' culture
has little to do
with the universal dummying down
of language
in our universities and state offices)
lol
or I\'m just an old cranky, has-been
ranting
for the sake of ranting, who knows
March 7th, 2022 06:15
O leaders
L. B. Mek said:
so timely and worded
with that sincerity
of insightfully arrowed, precision..
thanks for sharing!
(I laud your control and capacity
to express yourself eloquently
while penning
what must have been such an emotional write,
even if the only emotion, present
was that uncontainable
infuriatedly bristling
utterly dispiriting, frustration)
March 3rd, 2022 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
so timely and worded
with that sincerity
of insightfully arrowed, precision..
thanks for sharing!
(I laud your control and capacity
to express yourself eloquently
while penning
what must have been such an emotional write,
even if the only emotion, present
was that uncontainable
infuriatedly bristling
utterly dispiriting, frustration)
March 3rd, 2022 05:49
O leaders
Doggerel Dave said:
Sussed out several of your poems - so I know your heart is very much in the right place.
Your lines \'How can a nation rise When its folks are not wise\' is the question, the answer not easy. If the folks can, they should study the processes of history, for “Those who do not learn history are doomed to repeat it.”
That is, if they have the chance....
March 3rd, 2022 04:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Sussed out several of your poems - so I know your heart is very much in the right place.
Your lines \'How can a nation rise When its folks are not wise\' is the question, the answer not easy. If the folks can, they should study the processes of history, for “Those who do not learn history are doomed to repeat it.”
That is, if they have the chance....
March 3rd, 2022 04:28
a complaint
L. B. Mek said:
a different and intriguing read, thanks for sharing..
(still, I wonder
are those savages, leaving
the Crows
or are the crowd\'s, waiting
till they can freely pick
their rewards
of, of
each others demise
cyclical reality
of that cannibalism
of ideal\'s...)
February 24th, 2022 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
a different and intriguing read, thanks for sharing..
(still, I wonder
are those savages, leaving
the Crows
or are the crowd\'s, waiting
till they can freely pick
their rewards
of, of
each others demise
cyclical reality
of that cannibalism
of ideal\'s...)
February 24th, 2022 06:25
a complaint
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Lesson learned, kill all the birds you want. Those bastards had it easy for far too long.
February 24th, 2022 05:03
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Lesson learned, kill all the birds you want. Those bastards had it easy for far too long.
February 24th, 2022 05:03
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