Comments received on poems by NafisaSB



The storm
Sakwa Franc said:

Good write ... Keep it up dear author

January 26th, 2024 02:44

why does the moon ?
Veronica Achlys writes said:

I loved the poem! I think it captures the beauty of the moon beautifully!

January 24th, 2024 11:45

Restoration
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A very genuine impressive poem with good command of poetic language and flow to express and encourage reconciliation in relationships. Kudos dear!

January 8th, 2024 03:04

never leave the hand..
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Can you see my comment now? I can see it.

January 8th, 2024 01:17

Deadly games
2781 said:

Not by might, not by power, but by my Spirit says the Lord.

January 2nd, 2024 01:28

Sometimes..
Bragee said:

S E L F L O V E!!!!

January 1st, 2024 04:29

What I love..
Accidental Poet said:

Without family to ground us, we wander aimlessly without love and direction. Wonderful write Nafisa. 😉👍

December 30th, 2023 08:59

What I love..
Cassie58 said:

Like you family comes first. They are everything, but I also have lots of other things that give my heart a lift. Lovely poetry.

December 30th, 2023 07:13

Truth sets you free
Accidental Poet said:

Deceiving is to be leaving all who trust you. Well penned Nafisa. 👍

December 30th, 2023 05:05

What I love..
Sheryffat said:

Lovely!

December 30th, 2023 01:28

Truth sets you free
2781 said:

The fear of the Lord is the beginning of wisdom.

December 29th, 2023 09:28

Truth sets you free
sorenbarrett said:

True. It is \"a tangled web we weave when frist we practice to deceive\" Good write

December 29th, 2023 05:30

Mute Generation
sorenbarrett said:

A call to be human and a great message to all of us. Well written

December 28th, 2023 09:05

Season\'s greetings
2781 said:

Better to bless than curse.

December 27th, 2023 08:07

Season\'s greetings
Lorenz said:

Darker future and disasters .

December 27th, 2023 04:52

Gaza in tears
Doggerel Dave said:

And so it goes with all wars.... of which there appear to be a never ending succession.

November 16th, 2023 01:21

never leave the hand..
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A great message poem didactic and expressed in superb rhyming. Kudos!!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

October 4th, 2023 06:03

never leave the hand..
LIZ said:

Yes yes yes!!! Staying present!!! Loving your people! Life is too precious and short!! Loved it!! 💚

September 23rd, 2023 03:14

never leave the hand..
2781 said:

Correct.

September 23rd, 2023 01:45

never leave the hand..
Serhat Doğan said:

I liked rhyme in this one

September 23rd, 2023 01:43

I am human
Doggerel Dave said:

Never knew you are puny - don\'t believe it anyway.
Now then, you may have taught me a good lesson. I tend to get impatient with what I\'ve termed \'misery poets\' here....... Maybe those contributions do help the writers - and are a hell of a lot cheaper than professional counselling.....

September 17th, 2023 22:34

i am just me
Doggerel Dave said:

Please know I haven\'t ignored your poem, but do find your comment particularly pertinent.....

September 16th, 2023 17:01

I am human
Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t scare me off, will you...... Feel like I\'m walking on eggshells.....😂................................................. Satisfying write, actually.



September 16th, 2023 16:46

I am human
BlessedbyGod said:

I know how you feel, I have days like this,and sometimes the only way to express myself is by writing, like when I told my husband how I felt for the first time after we met, we were friends and I was scared how he would take it, I had to write him a letter

September 16th, 2023 08:14

I am human
jarcher54 said:

Just when you think everything that can be said has been said! I suspect you are a very passionate person, and while I\'ll be careful I also like the idea of some unbridled emotion! Yes, it is a mysterious world... no better way to explain it!

September 16th, 2023 01:30

Living the way i want..
Introverted Sage said:

This is great!
Second stanza is powerful!
Nice write!

September 10th, 2023 12:24

Living the way i want..
Doggerel Dave said:

You are in the right position, Nafisa. Go lady, go.

September 10th, 2023 06:40

Living the way i want..
LIZ said:

Hell yeah!!! This is powerful!! RESPECT!!

September 10th, 2023 01:11

Keep moving
Pop64 said:

This speaks well of the need, not for speed, but for momentum, advancement and growing. We all travel at different speeds, but we all can get to the same destination so long as we move.

September 8th, 2023 07:52

Keep moving
LIZ said:

Nice!!!!! Let people be! We all process things at different speeds! 🙏

September 8th, 2023 04:46



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