Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
The Bottle
Rozina said:
Vodka fumes from the genie in the bottle? By the way not even a cordless vacuum with instructions. Merry X\'mas.
December 24th, 2021 22:38
Rozina said:
Vodka fumes from the genie in the bottle? By the way not even a cordless vacuum with instructions. Merry X\'mas.
December 24th, 2021 22:38
The Bottle
spilleronsheet said:
A round tale
Walking in dreams
Merry Christmas dear Paul
In between i have put my thoughts in an empty bottle
Waiting for genie to appear
December 24th, 2021 08:48
spilleronsheet said:
A round tale
Walking in dreams
Merry Christmas dear Paul
In between i have put my thoughts in an empty bottle
Waiting for genie to appear
December 24th, 2021 08:48
The Bottle
L. B. Mek said:
\'Vodka bottle do.
Jesus, yes.
Okay, I\'ve run out of room.
You’re so predictable.
Just like you last night, standards are dropping.\'
😄
\'Take my word for it, I’m going to send you to sleep, then I’m going to join you.
How does that help me if we’re both asleep, you got a bit of telepathy going on here.
Yes, I’m going to put you into a trance, see if we can find you another guy.
What sort of guy are we talking about, I mean, I’ve already hit rock bottom with you.\'
😁
\'Just relax, breathe in, breathe out, stop doing that.
Doing what.
You’re thrusting your chest out, do you know what sort of guy that’ll attract.
Someone like you.\'
😂
\'Why is he in the Asylum.
He killed a snail.
My God, they put you in the Asylum for that.
No, he’s in for using a flamethrower.
What’s the snail got to do with it.
That was the trigger point.
So what happens if I upset him, and it triggers something, and he goes mad.
It won’t, I told him to put all his negative thoughts into your bottle.\'
🤣
(Happy holidays, dear poet
what a gift, I\'m literally
LMAO!)
December 24th, 2021 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'Vodka bottle do.
Jesus, yes.
Okay, I\'ve run out of room.
You’re so predictable.
Just like you last night, standards are dropping.\'
😄
\'Take my word for it, I’m going to send you to sleep, then I’m going to join you.
How does that help me if we’re both asleep, you got a bit of telepathy going on here.
Yes, I’m going to put you into a trance, see if we can find you another guy.
What sort of guy are we talking about, I mean, I’ve already hit rock bottom with you.\'
😁
\'Just relax, breathe in, breathe out, stop doing that.
Doing what.
You’re thrusting your chest out, do you know what sort of guy that’ll attract.
Someone like you.\'
😂
\'Why is he in the Asylum.
He killed a snail.
My God, they put you in the Asylum for that.
No, he’s in for using a flamethrower.
What’s the snail got to do with it.
That was the trigger point.
So what happens if I upset him, and it triggers something, and he goes mad.
It won’t, I told him to put all his negative thoughts into your bottle.\'
🤣
(Happy holidays, dear poet
what a gift, I\'m literally
LMAO!)
December 24th, 2021 06:36
What Women Want
L. B. Mek said:
lol
\'but Dear, Honey, Babyboo\'
\'you\'re always saying
we should be, more Practical
with our spending... Right?\'
(what great Fun
your last few posts have been
thanks for trying to share
a little bit of that festive cheer
dear Poet,
your efforts are noted
and appreciated
much more, than you imagine)
December 24th, 2021 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
lol
\'but Dear, Honey, Babyboo\'
\'you\'re always saying
we should be, more Practical
with our spending... Right?\'
(what great Fun
your last few posts have been
thanks for trying to share
a little bit of that festive cheer
dear Poet,
your efforts are noted
and appreciated
much more, than you imagine)
December 24th, 2021 04:12
What Women Want
spilleronsheet said:
Lol
Iron and hoover
I wonder what the man wanted after all
Sure enough the woman should vanish
December 23rd, 2021 22:27
spilleronsheet said:
Lol
Iron and hoover
I wonder what the man wanted after all
Sure enough the woman should vanish
December 23rd, 2021 22:27
What Women Want
Rozina said:
No no no, not iron and hoover, please!
Hahaha serves him right!
December 23rd, 2021 21:45
Rozina said:
No no no, not iron and hoover, please!
Hahaha serves him right!
December 23rd, 2021 21:45
What Women Want
Caring dove said:
Lol. Women want a lot more than that . If a man bought me a iron I would be upset ..,
December 23rd, 2021 13:17
Caring dove said:
Lol. Women want a lot more than that . If a man bought me a iron I would be upset ..,
December 23rd, 2021 13:17
What Women Want
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - -- and who could blame her eh Paul - -- the read made my hair curl until the last two lines. Ha - - Great stuff.
December 23rd, 2021 13:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - -- and who could blame her eh Paul - -- the read made my hair curl until the last two lines. Ha - - Great stuff.
December 23rd, 2021 13:10
The Tortoise
Rozina said:
So funny! Raining here but this poem has brightened up my morning!
December 20th, 2021 21:57
Rozina said:
So funny! Raining here but this poem has brightened up my morning!
December 20th, 2021 21:57
The Tortoise
L. B. Mek said:
I want these words
as my epitaph...
\'I told her
marriage was an institution.
She went mental.
I consoled myself
with shooting the tortoise.
It was for the best.
There was no way
it would win the greyhound derby.
She
was beyond, reason.
I was bringing it
out of its shell.
I sort of laughed, uncontrollably.\'
(pure, wry humour: Genius!
what a gift, you choose to share
thank you, dear Poet)
December 20th, 2021 06:22
L. B. Mek said:
I want these words
as my epitaph...
\'I told her
marriage was an institution.
She went mental.
I consoled myself
with shooting the tortoise.
It was for the best.
There was no way
it would win the greyhound derby.
She
was beyond, reason.
I was bringing it
out of its shell.
I sort of laughed, uncontrollably.\'
(pure, wry humour: Genius!
what a gift, you choose to share
thank you, dear Poet)
December 20th, 2021 06:22
Topeo Julie
Rozina said:
I believe many young women ended up in this sad situation. Often duped into believing that life would be much better for them in a city or in another country. Very sad situation.
December 19th, 2021 21:19
Rozina said:
I believe many young women ended up in this sad situation. Often duped into believing that life would be much better for them in a city or in another country. Very sad situation.
December 19th, 2021 21:19
Shirley
spilleronsheet said:
There was a comedy of errors
And here a comedy of human relationships
Good one dear Paul
December 18th, 2021 11:45
spilleronsheet said:
There was a comedy of errors
And here a comedy of human relationships
Good one dear Paul
December 18th, 2021 11:45
The Road
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey has its ups and downs but in my life the ups far outweigh the downs. Good words Paul.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey has its ups and downs but in my life the ups far outweigh the downs. Good words Paul.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 01:51
The Road
Neville said:
what a wonderful realisation .. thanks for allowing me to hitch a ride sir .. N
December 15th, 2021 12:14
Neville said:
what a wonderful realisation .. thanks for allowing me to hitch a ride sir .. N
December 15th, 2021 12:14
The Road
spilleronsheet said:
So true
It was only that thing needed
But while running one never realises
For what they started
This is a very thought provoking poetry
Thanks for sharing dear Paul
December 15th, 2021 07:38
spilleronsheet said:
So true
It was only that thing needed
But while running one never realises
For what they started
This is a very thought provoking poetry
Thanks for sharing dear Paul
December 15th, 2021 07:38
Man At Peace
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Paul, I can totally agree with them as my wife passed two years ago on 30th December.
Andy
December 15th, 2021 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Paul, I can totally agree with them as my wife passed two years ago on 30th December.
Andy
December 15th, 2021 02:38
Man At Peace
spilleronsheet said:
A very tragic one
He lived and he died
Yet the peace that was wanted, it came with death
So deep dear Paul
December 14th, 2021 14:55
spilleronsheet said:
A very tragic one
He lived and he died
Yet the peace that was wanted, it came with death
So deep dear Paul
December 14th, 2021 14:55
Man At Peace
Audrey Cocker said:
Well composed poem Paul.Reminded my father whom I lost last year.He was 91 years.It’s really God love that makes some to be at peace
December 14th, 2021 07:45
Audrey Cocker said:
Well composed poem Paul.Reminded my father whom I lost last year.He was 91 years.It’s really God love that makes some to be at peace
December 14th, 2021 07:45
The Mirror
Lorna said:
Whoa! So intense and you must have some real insight to see into these characters. She\'s scary and right out of a movie!
December 14th, 2021 05:54
Lorna said:
Whoa! So intense and you must have some real insight to see into these characters. She\'s scary and right out of a movie!
December 14th, 2021 05:54
Man At Peace
Lorna said:
Very well done Paul and sad but sweet ..... you summed up so many happy Christmases.....
December 14th, 2021 05:23
Lorna said:
Very well done Paul and sad but sweet ..... you summed up so many happy Christmases.....
December 14th, 2021 05:23
The Mirror
dusk arising said:
I like your mirror, mine\'s got my dad hiding in it.
December 13th, 2021 06:22
dusk arising said:
I like your mirror, mine\'s got my dad hiding in it.
December 13th, 2021 06:22
The Mirror
L. B. Mek said:
this is a very dark outing
of societies taboo topics
and a poetic study, on causality:
like, how we have our fears and hate\'s
rebounded
then unknowingly convince ourselves
that\'s who we, want to be..
and how we covet
the perfect family person
across the street, then
leer endlessly, at the seductively dressed
or how those dressed so invitingly
fume, at the attention
they need
to bolster their warped, self esteem..
(so many topics and themes
you commentate on, bravely
a write of true poetic brevity
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
and I too agree: that hypocrisy
in the mirror
is the very worst kind of betrayal
we\'ll ever know in life
December 13th, 2021 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
this is a very dark outing
of societies taboo topics
and a poetic study, on causality:
like, how we have our fears and hate\'s
rebounded
then unknowingly convince ourselves
that\'s who we, want to be..
and how we covet
the perfect family person
across the street, then
leer endlessly, at the seductively dressed
or how those dressed so invitingly
fume, at the attention
they need
to bolster their warped, self esteem..
(so many topics and themes
you commentate on, bravely
a write of true poetic brevity
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
and I too agree: that hypocrisy
in the mirror
is the very worst kind of betrayal
we\'ll ever know in life
December 13th, 2021 05:39
The Night Dancer
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A paradox of beauty and tragedy, interrupted by death. Powerful writing sir.
December 12th, 2021 12:42
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A paradox of beauty and tragedy, interrupted by death. Powerful writing sir.
December 12th, 2021 12:42
The Night Dancer
spilleronsheet said:
What was noticed was a different feel
To others it may seem a dream
But often they were ignorant
It’s wonder that a poet wrote by…
A very different poetry dear Paul
Good one
December 11th, 2021 13:25
spilleronsheet said:
What was noticed was a different feel
To others it may seem a dream
But often they were ignorant
It’s wonder that a poet wrote by…
A very different poetry dear Paul
Good one
December 11th, 2021 13:25
The Night Dancer
Draven said:
Beautiful but quite sad. I really enjoyed reading this.
December 11th, 2021 13:06
Draven said:
Beautiful but quite sad. I really enjoyed reading this.
December 11th, 2021 13:06
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