Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
The Twelve Days Of Christmas
Lorna said:
oh keep it up..... Better than Monty Python......
December 9th, 2021 14:34
Lorna said:
oh keep it up..... Better than Monty Python......
December 9th, 2021 14:34
The Twelve Days Of Christmas
Neville said:
made me larf out loud & I can still feel it in me extremities ...................... N
December 9th, 2021 12:05
Neville said:
made me larf out loud & I can still feel it in me extremities ...................... N
December 9th, 2021 12:05
The Twelve Days Of Christmas
orchidee said:
Good write Paul. lol.
There\'s load of gifts:
Day1: 1
Day 2: 2 +1
Day 3: 3+2+1, etc
If you follow me \'algebra\' there?! lol.
The song goes, e.g. 2 turtle doves AND a partridge, etc.
I worked it out that after Day 12 that\'s 364 gifts! lol.
December 9th, 2021 11:26
orchidee said:
Good write Paul. lol.
There\'s load of gifts:
Day1: 1
Day 2: 2 +1
Day 3: 3+2+1, etc
If you follow me \'algebra\' there?! lol.
The song goes, e.g. 2 turtle doves AND a partridge, etc.
I worked it out that after Day 12 that\'s 364 gifts! lol.
December 9th, 2021 11:26
The Twelve Days Of Christmas
spilleronsheet said:
Nice one Paul
A very unusual event so
Well described, kept me at a edge
What is it ?
Is it a mystery and how finally you stringed in wonders
Left me laughing till the jaw hurts
A great one dear poet
December 9th, 2021 08:51
spilleronsheet said:
Nice one Paul
A very unusual event so
Well described, kept me at a edge
What is it ?
Is it a mystery and how finally you stringed in wonders
Left me laughing till the jaw hurts
A great one dear poet
December 9th, 2021 08:51
The Twelve Days Of Christmas
L. B. Mek said:
\'treeeeeeeeeeEEEEEat!\'
and that\'s exactly
what your read
just gifted, me
meeeeeeeEEEEEEEee! lol
love the fun, thank you!
(forgive my spelling theatrics
and overzealous nature
had dreams of being a Tenor)
December 9th, 2021 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'treeeeeeeeeeEEEEEat!\'
and that\'s exactly
what your read
just gifted, me
meeeeeeeEEEEEEEee! lol
love the fun, thank you!
(forgive my spelling theatrics
and overzealous nature
had dreams of being a Tenor)
December 9th, 2021 06:31
The Twelve Days Of Christmas
woundedheart said:
Some dream what were you drinking the night before lol.
December 9th, 2021 05:30
woundedheart said:
Some dream what were you drinking the night before lol.
December 9th, 2021 05:30
Dump Protocol
Lorna said:
I\'m very much laughing and enjoying it! Oh lordie.... relationships......
December 8th, 2021 11:58
Lorna said:
I\'m very much laughing and enjoying it! Oh lordie.... relationships......
December 8th, 2021 11:58
Dump Protocol
dusk arising said:
I definitely came out of this confused and i read it three times! But hey, relationships can be like that, bloody confusing.
December 8th, 2021 07:08
dusk arising said:
I definitely came out of this confused and i read it three times! But hey, relationships can be like that, bloody confusing.
December 8th, 2021 07:08
Santa\'s Dilema
Lorna said:
You must be so much fun to have around the house..... I laughed so hard. Thanks.
December 7th, 2021 10:37
Lorna said:
You must be so much fun to have around the house..... I laughed so hard. Thanks.
December 7th, 2021 10:37
Santa\'s Dilema
orchidee said:
I saw a Santa in John Lewis store. I thought he would be too \'common\', too childish for their \'superior\' stores! lol.
December 7th, 2021 10:12
orchidee said:
I saw a Santa in John Lewis store. I thought he would be too \'common\', too childish for their \'superior\' stores! lol.
December 7th, 2021 10:12
Santa\'s Dilema
L. B. Mek said:
I grinned like a mad hatter clown
and then I guffawed
looked around sheepishly, apologised
then went back to laughing, quietly
Brilliant fun! 🤣
thank you, a wonderful treat
December 7th, 2021 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
I grinned like a mad hatter clown
and then I guffawed
looked around sheepishly, apologised
then went back to laughing, quietly
Brilliant fun! 🤣
thank you, a wonderful treat
December 7th, 2021 07:19
Glasya
Neville said:
and there\'s poor old me .. too slow to catch on .......... :) N
December 6th, 2021 12:44
Neville said:
and there\'s poor old me .. too slow to catch on .......... :) N
December 6th, 2021 12:44
Glasya
Neville said:
What a terrific title Paul & what a similarly dark yet tantalising main body that follows through with all the gothicity any self respecting Gothic prose poem should have ... seriously reads like my kinda woman to boot sir ........... N
December 5th, 2021 10:20
Neville said:
What a terrific title Paul & what a similarly dark yet tantalising main body that follows through with all the gothicity any self respecting Gothic prose poem should have ... seriously reads like my kinda woman to boot sir ........... N
December 5th, 2021 10:20
The Boots
Draven said:
Nice work! This oddly reminds me of a dark take of a KISS song...
December 4th, 2021 06:00
Draven said:
Nice work! This oddly reminds me of a dark take of a KISS song...
December 4th, 2021 06:00
The Boots
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Highlights the things money can and cannot buy, give, or take even, doesn\'t it? It is very thought provoking and gives a closer look at some of our social ills. A compelling read sir. Through & through.
December 2nd, 2021 08:04
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Highlights the things money can and cannot buy, give, or take even, doesn\'t it? It is very thought provoking and gives a closer look at some of our social ills. A compelling read sir. Through & through.
December 2nd, 2021 08:04
Brothers.
spilleronsheet said:
I wonder what’s the story behind
Another different take I heard from you
Amazed, the way you lyrically weave a story
November 30th, 2021 12:51
spilleronsheet said:
I wonder what’s the story behind
Another different take I heard from you
Amazed, the way you lyrically weave a story
November 30th, 2021 12:51
Mr Mcintosh
Neville said:
you are fast becoming the master of this type of post .. you have quite the knack of leading your reader in one direction then doubling back and catching them unawares ............. you old sleuth you ... whereas, I\'m just an old sloth ................ N
November 28th, 2021 14:25
Neville said:
you are fast becoming the master of this type of post .. you have quite the knack of leading your reader in one direction then doubling back and catching them unawares ............. you old sleuth you ... whereas, I\'m just an old sloth ................ N
November 28th, 2021 14:25
Heaven and Hell
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Being a writer is truly something special isn\'t it? As special as writing something so uncannily original as this. We live in worlds unknown many a times. Truly a special gift you have sir. Story very well told Paul. With delight, I applaud! :-)
November 28th, 2021 13:43
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Being a writer is truly something special isn\'t it? As special as writing something so uncannily original as this. We live in worlds unknown many a times. Truly a special gift you have sir. Story very well told Paul. With delight, I applaud! :-)
November 28th, 2021 13:43
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