Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
The Sand And The Sea
Lorna said:
He\'s an introvert and I just love him. This is lovely and lonely.
November 6th, 2021 09:27
Lorna said:
He\'s an introvert and I just love him. This is lovely and lonely.
November 6th, 2021 09:27
Passing By
orchidee said:
That\'s very old there, the Boer War. Mind you, I was in it! I\'m millions of years old, so I say! lol.
November 6th, 2021 07:50
orchidee said:
That\'s very old there, the Boer War. Mind you, I was in it! I\'m millions of years old, so I say! lol.
November 6th, 2021 07:50
Passing By
dusk arising said:
LOL goof fun write, yes i enjoyed reading this.
November 6th, 2021 04:55
dusk arising said:
LOL goof fun write, yes i enjoyed reading this.
November 6th, 2021 04:55
The Sand And The Sea
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Paul, we all have times of good and bad in our lives but we also have that time when we know we are safe.
Andy
November 6th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Paul, we all have times of good and bad in our lives but we also have that time when we know we are safe.
Andy
November 6th, 2021 01:23
The Sand And The Sea
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This offering skillfully speaks about a lot in minimal expressions. A very good offering Paul. Nicely done. Faved.
November 5th, 2021 09:01
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This offering skillfully speaks about a lot in minimal expressions. A very good offering Paul. Nicely done. Faved.
November 5th, 2021 09:01
The Sand And The Sea
dusk arising said:
Timeless imagery in this cunningly composed masterpiece which I read several times with joy.
Into my favourites
November 5th, 2021 07:07
dusk arising said:
Timeless imagery in this cunningly composed masterpiece which I read several times with joy.
Into my favourites
November 5th, 2021 07:07
The Sand And The Sea
L. B. Mek said:
we All live, a little
in-between,
between the waves of change
and our memory\'s shores;
those sands of Time, can\'t ever be defeated
merely tiptoed: in between
so as to experience
life\'s, easier tides...
(wonderful imagery, cleverly unfurled
to add a level of sophistication to your poetry,
thanks for sharing)
November 5th, 2021 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
we All live, a little
in-between,
between the waves of change
and our memory\'s shores;
those sands of Time, can\'t ever be defeated
merely tiptoed: in between
so as to experience
life\'s, easier tides...
(wonderful imagery, cleverly unfurled
to add a level of sophistication to your poetry,
thanks for sharing)
November 5th, 2021 06:05
The Sand And The Sea
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
So important to feel safe . I like this poem of yours )
So many times in my life , I’ve had that feeling of feeling ‘ unsafe ‘
A nice writing
November 5th, 2021 05:31
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
So important to feel safe . I like this poem of yours )
So many times in my life , I’ve had that feeling of feeling ‘ unsafe ‘
A nice writing
November 5th, 2021 05:31
The Sand And The Sea
Fay Slimm. said:
So well spaced and relatable to many in that situation where being told is not all the story - - a compelling read Paul.
November 5th, 2021 05:24
Fay Slimm. said:
So well spaced and relatable to many in that situation where being told is not all the story - - a compelling read Paul.
November 5th, 2021 05:24
The Vultures Dance
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Paul, why is it that with all the reality of war seen all over the world it is still out there.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Paul, why is it that with all the reality of war seen all over the world it is still out there.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 01:39
The Vultures Dance
dusk arising said:
Realism of the disgusting state which war really is. Lets not kid ourselves, we still attach bayonets to firearms and teach young men how to use them with justo!
Sickeningly realistic your post is compelling reading. Well written.
November 4th, 2021 06:36
dusk arising said:
Realism of the disgusting state which war really is. Lets not kid ourselves, we still attach bayonets to firearms and teach young men how to use them with justo!
Sickeningly realistic your post is compelling reading. Well written.
November 4th, 2021 06:36
The Vultures Dance
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Man\'s lowest in raw color. \"single shots give the rebels confidence\". Potent. Thank you, Paul. Brilliant reflection work.
November 4th, 2021 06:04
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Man\'s lowest in raw color. \"single shots give the rebels confidence\". Potent. Thank you, Paul. Brilliant reflection work.
November 4th, 2021 06:04
Destiny
Goldfinch60 said:
We cannot alter our destiny, no matter how many paths we walk.
Andy
November 4th, 2021 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
We cannot alter our destiny, no matter how many paths we walk.
Andy
November 4th, 2021 01:18
Destiny
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the unique usage of personifying what we call Destiny and the rhyming perfects your message that we cannot escape from fate. Great read.
November 3rd, 2021 16:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the unique usage of personifying what we call Destiny and the rhyming perfects your message that we cannot escape from fate. Great read.
November 3rd, 2021 16:17
Destiny
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An amazing spiral craft of words. One of the most \"poetic\" pieces I have read here. Stands out in its own way. Uniquely quaint, kind of, in a beautiful way. Kudos, fellow writer.
November 3rd, 2021 06:41
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An amazing spiral craft of words. One of the most \"poetic\" pieces I have read here. Stands out in its own way. Uniquely quaint, kind of, in a beautiful way. Kudos, fellow writer.
November 3rd, 2021 06:41
Destiny
spilleronsheet said:
Destiny plays it’s own game. Sometimes I laugh at my own mistakes and then cry over the fate’s play. It’s futile to complain. Let’s flow with way destiny plays.
Well penned dear poet
November 3rd, 2021 06:01
spilleronsheet said:
Destiny plays it’s own game. Sometimes I laugh at my own mistakes and then cry over the fate’s play. It’s futile to complain. Let’s flow with way destiny plays.
Well penned dear poet
November 3rd, 2021 06:01
Mummy Daddy
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Paul and it has much truth in it.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Paul and it has much truth in it.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 01:29
Mummy Daddy
spilleronsheet said:
That was a dark comedy
Love sure isn’t defined by any boundaries
Good one dear poet
November 2nd, 2021 10:18
spilleronsheet said:
That was a dark comedy
Love sure isn’t defined by any boundaries
Good one dear poet
November 2nd, 2021 10:18
Mummy Daddy
dusk arising said:
Confusion of same sex relationships and parent hood comes to mind. Love conquers all though.
November 2nd, 2021 06:19
dusk arising said:
Confusion of same sex relationships and parent hood comes to mind. Love conquers all though.
November 2nd, 2021 06:19
Euphoria.
robin jayne said:
this one had me on the edge of my seat, and absolutely loved the ending. great work, really enjoyed this one!
November 1st, 2021 14:57
robin jayne said:
this one had me on the edge of my seat, and absolutely loved the ending. great work, really enjoyed this one!
November 1st, 2021 14:57
Euphoria.
Mermaid said:
Deep,dark and thought provoking.
Love:
\"...It felt so real, her head was buzzing
Her nagging neighbour...\"
November 1st, 2021 12:41
Mermaid said:
Deep,dark and thought provoking.
Love:
\"...It felt so real, her head was buzzing
Her nagging neighbour...\"
November 1st, 2021 12:41
Euphoria.
spilleronsheet said:
Omg it was so vivid
I felt watching a crime movie
So realistic
Well crafted dear poet
You just created a beautiful play
November 1st, 2021 11:13
spilleronsheet said:
Omg it was so vivid
I felt watching a crime movie
So realistic
Well crafted dear poet
You just created a beautiful play
November 1st, 2021 11:13
The Room
spilleronsheet said:
The poetry gave me goosebumps
And awesome use of imagery
Yet why I felt a person struggling in hell between two lives
October 31st, 2021 11:33
spilleronsheet said:
The poetry gave me goosebumps
And awesome use of imagery
Yet why I felt a person struggling in hell between two lives
October 31st, 2021 11:33
The Room
Goldfinch60 said:
That shard of light must have many memories Paul. Good dark write.
Andy
October 31st, 2021 04:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That shard of light must have many memories Paul. Good dark write.
Andy
October 31st, 2021 04:20
Protocol
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good fun write Paul, sometimes the nod is the best way forwards.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good fun write Paul, sometimes the nod is the best way forwards.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 00:28
Protocol
L. B. Mek said:
A great write!
thanks for choosing to share,
really clever!
I can relate with all three characters, fated
to play-out this gruelling scene
time-n-again, in their lives
and why?
because we, mostly
choose to abide by social norms
just, so as to survive;
as a part of us, still remembers those Neanderthal age\'s
where it was more like:
I bigger, give me
I weaker, best hide - me
we together, big powerful
rob everything, we ever need...
(no bus, as saviour
just the speed of feet
you were Fated with...)
October 29th, 2021 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
A great write!
thanks for choosing to share,
really clever!
I can relate with all three characters, fated
to play-out this gruelling scene
time-n-again, in their lives
and why?
because we, mostly
choose to abide by social norms
just, so as to survive;
as a part of us, still remembers those Neanderthal age\'s
where it was more like:
I bigger, give me
I weaker, best hide - me
we together, big powerful
rob everything, we ever need...
(no bus, as saviour
just the speed of feet
you were Fated with...)
October 29th, 2021 06:23
Protocol
Fay Slimm. said:
LOVE the smile in these lines Paul....... just the ticket the meeting and nodding instead of stopping and believe me I aim to remember - this piece goes into my list of faves.
October 29th, 2021 05:38
Fay Slimm. said:
LOVE the smile in these lines Paul....... just the ticket the meeting and nodding instead of stopping and believe me I aim to remember - this piece goes into my list of faves.
October 29th, 2021 05:38
Protocol
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear writer
Saw a new shade of yours from the poetry you wrote
October 29th, 2021 05:30
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear writer
Saw a new shade of yours from the poetry you wrote
October 29th, 2021 05:30
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