Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
Bob It
dusk arising said:
Lol @ Bobbit. Well you certainly closed the door on that relationship!
What a super read, really well penned entertainment.
January 17th, 2022 16:58
dusk arising said:
Lol @ Bobbit. Well you certainly closed the door on that relationship!
What a super read, really well penned entertainment.
January 17th, 2022 16:58
Bob It
L. B. Mek said:
\'Maybe he’s a Ninja lover
I heard him chewing
What the hell are you doing
I’m coming
For christsakes, not again
No, I’m ready for you
Well get on with it
I’ll just close the door
He screamed
Something told me
satisfaction
was A 999, away\'
just pure LOL, Genius!
(in my humble
\'old man\'s, crassly crude
matter-of-fact humour\'s\'
opinionated, perspective),
but still, that boringly prude
conscientiousness, in me
wishes this had an 🔞, tag
so I could revel, in its hilarity
unreservedly) lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 17th, 2022 08:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'Maybe he’s a Ninja lover
I heard him chewing
What the hell are you doing
I’m coming
For christsakes, not again
No, I’m ready for you
Well get on with it
I’ll just close the door
He screamed
Something told me
satisfaction
was A 999, away\'
just pure LOL, Genius!
(in my humble
\'old man\'s, crassly crude
matter-of-fact humour\'s\'
opinionated, perspective),
but still, that boringly prude
conscientiousness, in me
wishes this had an 🔞, tag
so I could revel, in its hilarity
unreservedly) lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 17th, 2022 08:56
The Medal
Rozina said:
Emotional blackmail?! A clever story indeed especially that last line!
January 16th, 2022 22:01
Rozina said:
Emotional blackmail?! A clever story indeed especially that last line!
January 16th, 2022 22:01
The Living Dead
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Paul but suicide leaves so much sorrow for others when it happens.
Andy
January 15th, 2022 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Paul but suicide leaves so much sorrow for others when it happens.
Andy
January 15th, 2022 01:26
The Living Dead
Rozina said:
During the total lockdowns the number of suicides jumped up. Pressure had increased on those who had lost their business, income, families broken up. But the kids who spent even more time online and were being bullied was another big group of suicides You\'re right, mental health is a very important issue to bring up.
January 14th, 2022 21:52
Rozina said:
During the total lockdowns the number of suicides jumped up. Pressure had increased on those who had lost their business, income, families broken up. But the kids who spent even more time online and were being bullied was another big group of suicides You\'re right, mental health is a very important issue to bring up.
January 14th, 2022 21:52
The Living Dead
screaming goat. (New and Improved) said:
This is amazing and I love it.
January 14th, 2022 09:19
screaming goat. (New and Improved) said:
This is amazing and I love it.
January 14th, 2022 09:19
The Living Dead
spilleronsheet said:
That’s sad and grief stricken
How sad
Yet why does now everyone think like that
January 14th, 2022 08:21
spilleronsheet said:
That’s sad and grief stricken
How sad
Yet why does now everyone think like that
January 14th, 2022 08:21
The Living Dead
L. B. Mek said:
crude wording, I imagine done
for poetic effect, to awaken
but sadly, just as easily
could backfire and cause
some unsuspecting reader
unnecessary hurt..
(just my wussy-ass
& its soppy, do-gooder
way of thinking
please, ignore my words completely
if you disagree)
I still like, and support
what your poem was trying to achieve, dear Poet
\'At some point soon
She’ll hear that tune
Pushing her nearer
To her doom
The note is already in her head
Recited from the living dead\'
(from the living dead
indeed
how morbidly true
this reads)
January 14th, 2022 07:49
L. B. Mek said:
crude wording, I imagine done
for poetic effect, to awaken
but sadly, just as easily
could backfire and cause
some unsuspecting reader
unnecessary hurt..
(just my wussy-ass
& its soppy, do-gooder
way of thinking
please, ignore my words completely
if you disagree)
I still like, and support
what your poem was trying to achieve, dear Poet
\'At some point soon
She’ll hear that tune
Pushing her nearer
To her doom
The note is already in her head
Recited from the living dead\'
(from the living dead
indeed
how morbidly true
this reads)
January 14th, 2022 07:49
The Planets
L. B. Mek said:
an astronomical take
or rather, tale
on the bee\'s
and that one overwhelmed, platypus
a warning story, on biting more
than you can afford, to algebra
or rather \'al-jabr\'...
January 13th, 2022 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
an astronomical take
or rather, tale
on the bee\'s
and that one overwhelmed, platypus
a warning story, on biting more
than you can afford, to algebra
or rather \'al-jabr\'...
January 13th, 2022 07:05
The Inquiry
L. B. Mek said:
\'I’ll probably hate asking this question. What the hell is a Greek attack.
I’m not too sure Sir, it’s something to do with a wooden horse.
Do you mean he built a wooden horse?
No Sir, he drove their vehicles into camp and arrested them.
And they just allowed this.
They seemed okay about it. Well apart from the officer in charge who said it was UN- American.
My god, Soldier, do you see what i’m up against here. Right, let\'s get to the point when the Colonel arrived.
Right, Sir, the Sergeant was playing chess with the enemy officer. I would say he was about two moves away from getting beat.
Does this have any bearing on the turn of events.
Yes Sir, the Sergeant\'s eyes were rolling.\'
🤣🤣🤣
I\'m dead!
what a fantastic write
damn you need to share your talent with this FUBAR world, we live in
my friend
could bring so many people, laughter relief!
January 11th, 2022 08:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'I’ll probably hate asking this question. What the hell is a Greek attack.
I’m not too sure Sir, it’s something to do with a wooden horse.
Do you mean he built a wooden horse?
No Sir, he drove their vehicles into camp and arrested them.
And they just allowed this.
They seemed okay about it. Well apart from the officer in charge who said it was UN- American.
My god, Soldier, do you see what i’m up against here. Right, let\'s get to the point when the Colonel arrived.
Right, Sir, the Sergeant was playing chess with the enemy officer. I would say he was about two moves away from getting beat.
Does this have any bearing on the turn of events.
Yes Sir, the Sergeant\'s eyes were rolling.\'
🤣🤣🤣
I\'m dead!
what a fantastic write
damn you need to share your talent with this FUBAR world, we live in
my friend
could bring so many people, laughter relief!
January 11th, 2022 08:25
The Inquiry
dusk arising said:
LOL Ireally enjoyed reading this piece. Well done!
January 11th, 2022 07:58
dusk arising said:
LOL Ireally enjoyed reading this piece. Well done!
January 11th, 2022 07:58
The Street
spilleronsheet said:
So poignant
So touching
And made me so teary
That pen of your when did it start writing sad romantic tales
Very good one dear Paul
January 9th, 2022 13:58
spilleronsheet said:
So poignant
So touching
And made me so teary
That pen of your when did it start writing sad romantic tales
Very good one dear Paul
January 9th, 2022 13:58
The Street
Rozina said:
Memories, some sad some happy. They are an important part of our lives. You have started me thinking about places I lived in many years back and the people I met. Thank you.
January 9th, 2022 08:38
Rozina said:
Memories, some sad some happy. They are an important part of our lives. You have started me thinking about places I lived in many years back and the people I met. Thank you.
January 9th, 2022 08:38
Dandelions
Paul Bell said:
This girlfriend, is she normal, doesn\'t have a 27 point plan, not a vegan. lol
January 8th, 2022 04:46
Paul Bell said:
This girlfriend, is she normal, doesn\'t have a 27 point plan, not a vegan. lol
January 8th, 2022 04:46
I\'m Listening.
L. B. Mek said:
if you ever get a chance
watch the film called
\'His Girl Friday\'
1940 with Carry Grant
then try to find a sample of the script
and finally compare it to your write...
I genuinely think, your writing has the potential to be that good
especially your sharp dialogues..
but anyway, what do I know?
just saying I like your style, dear Poet
and Happy New Year!
January 4th, 2022 08:31
L. B. Mek said:
if you ever get a chance
watch the film called
\'His Girl Friday\'
1940 with Carry Grant
then try to find a sample of the script
and finally compare it to your write...
I genuinely think, your writing has the potential to be that good
especially your sharp dialogues..
but anyway, what do I know?
just saying I like your style, dear Poet
and Happy New Year!
January 4th, 2022 08:31
The Fin al Battle.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well written Paul showing how some people are suffering.
Andy
January 4th, 2022 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well written Paul showing how some people are suffering.
Andy
January 4th, 2022 01:30
The Fin al Battle.
Rozina said:
Yes for some there is only hopelessness and drinking till oblivion is to try and shut out memories, fear, loneliness, pain...
Powerful lines.
January 4th, 2022 00:23
Rozina said:
Yes for some there is only hopelessness and drinking till oblivion is to try and shut out memories, fear, loneliness, pain...
Powerful lines.
January 4th, 2022 00:23
The Fin al Battle.
spilleronsheet said:
A battle so well described
But why did drink look like life
A very well crafted and intelligently laid
A truly epic write dear Paul…
January 3rd, 2022 09:05
spilleronsheet said:
A battle so well described
But why did drink look like life
A very well crafted and intelligently laid
A truly epic write dear Paul…
January 3rd, 2022 09:05
Freedom
Neville said:
Now dont that feel so much better
...................................... N x
December 31st, 2021 18:07
Neville said:
Now dont that feel so much better
...................................... N x
December 31st, 2021 18:07
The Straight Lesbian
dusk arising said:
Visions of Alice in Lesbo-land. A very entertaining write and had me scratching my head a bit in places. I\'m worried you\'ll upset a good few LGBT folk along the way but it\'s clearly done in good humour.
December 28th, 2021 08:01
dusk arising said:
Visions of Alice in Lesbo-land. A very entertaining write and had me scratching my head a bit in places. I\'m worried you\'ll upset a good few LGBT folk along the way but it\'s clearly done in good humour.
December 28th, 2021 08:01
Bag For Life.
Rozina said:
This is sad. But it happens. So tough to deal with this. Another reminder about life. Thank you.
December 27th, 2021 23:34
Rozina said:
This is sad. But it happens. So tough to deal with this. Another reminder about life. Thank you.
December 27th, 2021 23:34
Bag For Life.
Neville said:
I am almost ashamed to admit just how much I enjoyed these words … 😎👍 but I sure did …. N :)
December 26th, 2021 07:16
Neville said:
I am almost ashamed to admit just how much I enjoyed these words … 😎👍 but I sure did …. N :)
December 26th, 2021 07:16
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