Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
The Last Ghost
Michael Edwards said:
Original and a captivating read - super write.
February 18th, 2022 16:08
Michael Edwards said:
Original and a captivating read - super write.
February 18th, 2022 16:08
The Last Ghost
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love the uncanny vibe. This was written very well! Bravo! 💞
February 18th, 2022 09:25
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love the uncanny vibe. This was written very well! Bravo! 💞
February 18th, 2022 09:25
The Last Ghost
L. B. Mek said:
yes, however absurd
I like to imagine
there\'s a grace of kindness that awaits
beyond our 6ft divide, where
friendship and love
will evolve, and once adjoined paths
will resume...
foolish, maybe
but it\'s a soothing thought
so I hold on to it
till, I cross over and check for myself
in that inevitable \'Great Perhaps\'
we all, are destined to greet..
(a great write!
loved how abstract you kept it
open to so many interpretations)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 18th, 2022 07:17
L. B. Mek said:
yes, however absurd
I like to imagine
there\'s a grace of kindness that awaits
beyond our 6ft divide, where
friendship and love
will evolve, and once adjoined paths
will resume...
foolish, maybe
but it\'s a soothing thought
so I hold on to it
till, I cross over and check for myself
in that inevitable \'Great Perhaps\'
we all, are destined to greet..
(a great write!
loved how abstract you kept it
open to so many interpretations)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 18th, 2022 07:17
Living Souls
Michael Edwards said:
This held me from the first line - love it Paul.
February 17th, 2022 12:17
Michael Edwards said:
This held me from the first line - love it Paul.
February 17th, 2022 12:17
Living Souls
sorenbarrett said:
Gothic horror, unpredictable with a different end. I found it entertaining.
February 17th, 2022 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
Gothic horror, unpredictable with a different end. I found it entertaining.
February 17th, 2022 09:43
Living Souls
spilleronsheet said:
Omg
It gave me goosebumps
A mystery laced with humour laced with horror
Truly epic…
February 16th, 2022 13:51
spilleronsheet said:
Omg
It gave me goosebumps
A mystery laced with humour laced with horror
Truly epic…
February 16th, 2022 13:51
3 AM
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the way it was told. It seemed to unfold, each stanza a new understanding, until the inevitable bit me at the end. Well done, very entertaining.
February 16th, 2022 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the way it was told. It seemed to unfold, each stanza a new understanding, until the inevitable bit me at the end. Well done, very entertaining.
February 16th, 2022 11:15
Living Souls
Rocky Lagou said:
Goth is such an interesting style. I love the horror scene and this was written lovely! 👍🌟
February 16th, 2022 10:04
Rocky Lagou said:
Goth is such an interesting style. I love the horror scene and this was written lovely! 👍🌟
February 16th, 2022 10:04
Living Souls
Rozina said:
Oh no I’m an asthmatic too! Just remembered, 9 minutes past 3 in UK is a totally different time here. Thank goodness!
February 16th, 2022 08:54
Rozina said:
Oh no I’m an asthmatic too! Just remembered, 9 minutes past 3 in UK is a totally different time here. Thank goodness!
February 16th, 2022 08:54
Living Souls
dusk arising said:
This reminded me of the 60\'s TV series \"The twilight Zone\" (or twiglet zone as we used to call it).. a delightful twist in the tale of your well constructed piece today.
February 16th, 2022 08:33
dusk arising said:
This reminded me of the 60\'s TV series \"The twilight Zone\" (or twiglet zone as we used to call it).. a delightful twist in the tale of your well constructed piece today.
February 16th, 2022 08:33
The Valentine Present
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write and my first laugh of the day for which I thank you.
Those rusks have a great deal for which to answer.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun write and my first laugh of the day for which I thank you.
Those rusks have a great deal for which to answer.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:54
The Valentine Present
Rozina said:
Haha you’re so funny Paul! But seriously for that amount of money, the whole package includes post-op care, top hotel stay (4 or 5 star hotel) etc - offered in some SE Asian countries where boob jobs are done frequently and effectively! See you around then!
February 14th, 2022 21:59
Rozina said:
Haha you’re so funny Paul! But seriously for that amount of money, the whole package includes post-op care, top hotel stay (4 or 5 star hotel) etc - offered in some SE Asian countries where boob jobs are done frequently and effectively! See you around then!
February 14th, 2022 21:59
The Valentine Present
Rocky Lagou said:
YO! This was a trip!!!! Heheheheh! I actually gagged on the line: \"No, the surgeon says he can take a bit of fat off my breasts and insert it into your penis.\" Y\'alll!!!! The Humanity!!! Lol. Good job though! Happy Valentine\'s 👍💖
February 14th, 2022 11:57
Rocky Lagou said:
YO! This was a trip!!!! Heheheheh! I actually gagged on the line: \"No, the surgeon says he can take a bit of fat off my breasts and insert it into your penis.\" Y\'alll!!!! The Humanity!!! Lol. Good job though! Happy Valentine\'s 👍💖
February 14th, 2022 11:57
3 AM
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! I love this witty piece. Good job! Cleverly composed. 👍💖
February 14th, 2022 11:47
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! I love this witty piece. Good job! Cleverly composed. 👍💖
February 14th, 2022 11:47
3 AM
Rozina said:
Haha, can’t sleep at 3 am - dangerous discussions! Keep practising ‘how to snore realistically!’
February 14th, 2022 01:55
Rozina said:
Haha, can’t sleep at 3 am - dangerous discussions! Keep practising ‘how to snore realistically!’
February 14th, 2022 01:55
3 AM
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhh
That’s a sudden 3 am
Trickeries and talks
Melt the actors in crown
February 13th, 2022 15:35
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhh
That’s a sudden 3 am
Trickeries and talks
Melt the actors in crown
February 13th, 2022 15:35
3 AM
dusk arising said:
This is why I always try to have the personna of \"this one\'s not a keeper\".
February 13th, 2022 09:52
dusk arising said:
This is why I always try to have the personna of \"this one\'s not a keeper\".
February 13th, 2022 09:52
Colours
Paul Bell said:
No, cos I lost ten pounds betting on her. lol. I\'ve tried to comment on your work, but there isn\'t a comment box, confused.
February 12th, 2022 05:00
Paul Bell said:
No, cos I lost ten pounds betting on her. lol. I\'ve tried to comment on your work, but there isn\'t a comment box, confused.
February 12th, 2022 05:00
Colours
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
You hate her because she wore trousers ? Lol
February 12th, 2022 04:42
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
You hate her because she wore trousers ? Lol
February 12th, 2022 04:42
Onions
L. B. Mek said:
fun, purposed crassness
that can\'t discourage us
from finding the depth of insight
you\'ve imbued in-to this, poignant poetic treat..
a gifted brief escape for adult\'s with an open minded, view
of reality\'s
magazine shards of absurd, shit
we have to put up with...
(reads like a modern day nod, to the great thomas gray
and his \'Elegy written in a Country Churchyard\')
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-11779
February 11th, 2022 06:52
L. B. Mek said:
fun, purposed crassness
that can\'t discourage us
from finding the depth of insight
you\'ve imbued in-to this, poignant poetic treat..
a gifted brief escape for adult\'s with an open minded, view
of reality\'s
magazine shards of absurd, shit
we have to put up with...
(reads like a modern day nod, to the great thomas gray
and his \'Elegy written in a Country Churchyard\')
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-11779
February 11th, 2022 06:52
Full Bloom
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Paul, did you get your money back on the guarantee?
Andy
February 11th, 2022 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Paul, did you get your money back on the guarantee?
Andy
February 11th, 2022 01:32
Full Bloom
Rozina said:
Another successful murder. Well done! Done so humorously.
February 10th, 2022 23:45
Rozina said:
Another successful murder. Well done! Done so humorously.
February 10th, 2022 23:45
Full Bloom
dusk arising said:
Did his gravestone read:- RIP Died of a stabbing pain in his chest.
Enjoyed this humourous tale and splendid choice of title.
February 10th, 2022 06:48
dusk arising said:
Did his gravestone read:- RIP Died of a stabbing pain in his chest.
Enjoyed this humourous tale and splendid choice of title.
February 10th, 2022 06:48
Full Bloom
L. B. Mek said:
\'self-emancipation, requires us
to murder our love, sometimes..\'
(what a raw distillation of reality
your bitter brevity, accentuates
so accessibly translucent
and yes, oft
there\'s an alternate, morosely noir
and depressingly bleak
outcome to all that love and romance
we scribblers love to sing about
and depict
as some guaranteed, concrete
of life\'s most wondrously, sublime..
but dear Poet
we sing so fervently, because
of True Love\'s: rarity!)
a Brilliant write, my friend
loved these lines:
\'The steak knife had broken going through his chest
He would have a guarantee for that knife, she thought\'
February 10th, 2022 06:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'self-emancipation, requires us
to murder our love, sometimes..\'
(what a raw distillation of reality
your bitter brevity, accentuates
so accessibly translucent
and yes, oft
there\'s an alternate, morosely noir
and depressingly bleak
outcome to all that love and romance
we scribblers love to sing about
and depict
as some guaranteed, concrete
of life\'s most wondrously, sublime..
but dear Poet
we sing so fervently, because
of True Love\'s: rarity!)
a Brilliant write, my friend
loved these lines:
\'The steak knife had broken going through his chest
He would have a guarantee for that knife, she thought\'
February 10th, 2022 06:02
Calander Girls
spilleronsheet said:
A very enjoyable read
A unique one penned
Really enjoyed the way you went
A smile from ear to ear and I am sure these lines shall revolve around me eyes
Well penned dear Paul
February 8th, 2022 02:28
spilleronsheet said:
A very enjoyable read
A unique one penned
Really enjoyed the way you went
A smile from ear to ear and I am sure these lines shall revolve around me eyes
Well penned dear Paul
February 8th, 2022 02:28
« Return to the profile of Paul Bell
