Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
Jack.
spilleronsheet said:
It’s a beautiful story
Maybe love never ends
Nobody knows how it begins
November 18th, 2021 11:43
spilleronsheet said:
It’s a beautiful story
Maybe love never ends
Nobody knows how it begins
November 18th, 2021 11:43
Jack.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A beautiful story with wondorous twists Paul. I love the lease of life you gave Jack, and really the most superb ending! - Very proper !
November 18th, 2021 08:34
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A beautiful story with wondorous twists Paul. I love the lease of life you gave Jack, and really the most superb ending! - Very proper !
November 18th, 2021 08:34
The Occasions.
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Paul, abusing children is a disgusting thing that abhors me.
Andy
November 18th, 2021 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words Paul, abusing children is a disgusting thing that abhors me.
Andy
November 18th, 2021 01:18
The Occasions.
Paul Bell said:
Her father abused her, so she found comfort in cutting herself.
November 17th, 2021 12:19
Paul Bell said:
Her father abused her, so she found comfort in cutting herself.
November 17th, 2021 12:19
Dolly
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Gripping clarity. These stories need to be told, and you told it well here sir. Bravo!
November 15th, 2021 07:02
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Gripping clarity. These stories need to be told, and you told it well here sir. Bravo!
November 15th, 2021 07:02
Dolly
dusk arising said:
The harsh reality of life in war torn middle east (for example) as seen from a small childs eyes.
I tried to write about this, also from a childs view, several months ago. I didn\'t capture the gravity of realisation nearly so strongly as you have here. Full marks to you. This really hits hard.
I shall put this into my favourites.
November 15th, 2021 05:26
dusk arising said:
The harsh reality of life in war torn middle east (for example) as seen from a small childs eyes.
I tried to write about this, also from a childs view, several months ago. I didn\'t capture the gravity of realisation nearly so strongly as you have here. Full marks to you. This really hits hard.
I shall put this into my favourites.
November 15th, 2021 05:26
Rover
spilleronsheet said:
Rover shall be dearly missed
Why it was a dark comedy?
November 14th, 2021 12:34
spilleronsheet said:
Rover shall be dearly missed
Why it was a dark comedy?
November 14th, 2021 12:34
Rover
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'ve never met this dog but I\'ll miss him too. May he rest in piece. I enjoyed the read, so have a like good sir.
November 14th, 2021 09:06
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'ve never met this dog but I\'ll miss him too. May he rest in piece. I enjoyed the read, so have a like good sir.
November 14th, 2021 09:06
The Honey Trap.
Doggerel Dave said:
Easy -... half a mo, Jen..................ta.....
November 14th, 2021 06:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Easy -... half a mo, Jen..................ta.....
November 14th, 2021 06:13
The Crows
Doggerel Dave said:
One of the most intelligent of the bird kingdom -- fair enough, considering.......
November 14th, 2021 05:58
Doggerel Dave said:
One of the most intelligent of the bird kingdom -- fair enough, considering.......
November 14th, 2021 05:58
Rover
Doggerel Dave said:
Shaggy dog carked it - as we all do eventually - in the meantime any old excuse for a good old piss up is worthy of consideration.
November 14th, 2021 05:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Shaggy dog carked it - as we all do eventually - in the meantime any old excuse for a good old piss up is worthy of consideration.
November 14th, 2021 05:02
The Ex
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Seen a bit of life in your time, haven\'t you, Paul?
Well entertained here.
November 13th, 2021 06:33
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Seen a bit of life in your time, haven\'t you, Paul?
Well entertained here.
November 13th, 2021 06:33
The Two Faces Of War
spilleronsheet said:
So true dear poet
The soldiers out there fighting for peace
But how can war be a solution to peace
We don’t want fights at the cost of human lives
What’s glory and romance in separation from family
A child growing up without a father or mother who is serving for the nation
What a dark imprint it leaves in his mind
Can anything suffice that I wonder
Those lines you used are the best that describes
The sufferings a soldier goes through both physically and immensely is beyond our imaginations
November 11th, 2021 04:36
spilleronsheet said:
So true dear poet
The soldiers out there fighting for peace
But how can war be a solution to peace
We don’t want fights at the cost of human lives
What’s glory and romance in separation from family
A child growing up without a father or mother who is serving for the nation
What a dark imprint it leaves in his mind
Can anything suffice that I wonder
Those lines you used are the best that describes
The sufferings a soldier goes through both physically and immensely is beyond our imaginations
November 11th, 2021 04:36
The Two Faces Of War
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Paul. The saddest of life in our world, may peace come to our lives at some stage.
Andy
November 11th, 2021 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Paul. The saddest of life in our world, may peace come to our lives at some stage.
Andy
November 11th, 2021 01:24
The Two Faces Of War
Fay Slimm. said:
Stark from beginning to end but such a powerful read Paul - - war has its face painted to appear in the right but oh how wrong can killing the innocents be - a read to remember and thanks for sharing its message.
November 10th, 2021 11:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Stark from beginning to end but such a powerful read Paul - - war has its face painted to appear in the right but oh how wrong can killing the innocents be - a read to remember and thanks for sharing its message.
November 10th, 2021 11:41
The Two Faces Of War
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This is epic, Paul. The grim contrasts of two worlds in real time, the abstract faith, the peeling of paint from the wall, desolate kind of feeling. It feels like you were there, as I was reading it. I am so moved, I am out of words. Absolutely epic!
November 10th, 2021 05:36
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This is epic, Paul. The grim contrasts of two worlds in real time, the abstract faith, the peeling of paint from the wall, desolate kind of feeling. It feels like you were there, as I was reading it. I am so moved, I am out of words. Absolutely epic!
November 10th, 2021 05:36
Life
spilleronsheet said:
All we think about the struggles
Without enjoying what we have today
And then one day we are on the bridge of rebirth
The cycle of life
November 9th, 2021 13:31
spilleronsheet said:
All we think about the struggles
Without enjoying what we have today
And then one day we are on the bridge of rebirth
The cycle of life
November 9th, 2021 13:31
Mr& Mrs Smith
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Paul about an illicit liaison.
Andy
November 9th, 2021 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Paul about an illicit liaison.
Andy
November 9th, 2021 01:56
Mr& Mrs Smith
spilleronsheet said:
It took me a Moment
To re read
Something not normal it’s difficult to accept
Love may be blind
But people see it by morality
So it takes times
Well crafted
Something unusual but emerging in news around
November 8th, 2021 07:09
spilleronsheet said:
It took me a Moment
To re read
Something not normal it’s difficult to accept
Love may be blind
But people see it by morality
So it takes times
Well crafted
Something unusual but emerging in news around
November 8th, 2021 07:09
Mr& Mrs Smith
kitty the naughty poet said:
Wow. What a poem. I love the end line what a way to end it.
November 8th, 2021 06:10
kitty the naughty poet said:
Wow. What a poem. I love the end line what a way to end it.
November 8th, 2021 06:10
Mr& Mrs Smith
Lorna said:
Agree with Dusk - didn\'t see the punchline coming.... interesting look into the man\'s mind ....
November 8th, 2021 05:55
Lorna said:
Agree with Dusk - didn\'t see the punchline coming.... interesting look into the man\'s mind ....
November 8th, 2021 05:55
Mr& Mrs Smith
dusk arising said:
Ouch! Forbidden love. Says it all.
What a poem!. Smacks you in the nuts with a punchline if you have a brother. Works two ways of course, or more if you have several brothers. Again.. Ouch!
November 8th, 2021 05:51
dusk arising said:
Ouch! Forbidden love. Says it all.
What a poem!. Smacks you in the nuts with a punchline if you have a brother. Works two ways of course, or more if you have several brothers. Again.. Ouch!
November 8th, 2021 05:51
Mr& Mrs Smith
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An intrigue! I had to read it again. Wonderful gift of words, Paul.
November 8th, 2021 05:33
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An intrigue! I had to read it again. Wonderful gift of words, Paul.
November 8th, 2021 05:33
The Fridge
spilleronsheet said:
Great one dear poet
I laughed a lot
But it happens
And over Kitkat I once had a thief who turned out to be my best friend 🤣
November 8th, 2021 04:27
spilleronsheet said:
Great one dear poet
I laughed a lot
But it happens
And over Kitkat I once had a thief who turned out to be my best friend 🤣
November 8th, 2021 04:27
The Fridge
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Paul, communal fridges can be a nightmare.
Andy
November 8th, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Paul, communal fridges can be a nightmare.
Andy
November 8th, 2021 01:35
The Fridge
Doggerel Dave said:
It has come to my attention that a bloody good laugh with certain very familiar resonances is available at MPS under the simple head “The Fridge”. I will now be monitoring the work of Paul Bell closely.
Thankyou.
November 8th, 2021 00:06
Doggerel Dave said:
It has come to my attention that a bloody good laugh with certain very familiar resonances is available at MPS under the simple head “The Fridge”. I will now be monitoring the work of Paul Bell closely.
Thankyou.
November 8th, 2021 00:06
The Fridge
Lorna said:
Oh how I\'m laughing... anything but NOT the KitKats........
November 7th, 2021 09:05
Lorna said:
Oh how I\'m laughing... anything but NOT the KitKats........
November 7th, 2021 09:05
The Fridge
dusk arising said:
Executive house shares never work peacefully for long.. LOL. Each residence needs an Alan Sugar character to weild the phrase \"You\'re Fired\" now and again.
Great writing. Really enjoyable fun reading.
November 7th, 2021 05:09
dusk arising said:
Executive house shares never work peacefully for long.. LOL. Each residence needs an Alan Sugar character to weild the phrase \"You\'re Fired\" now and again.
Great writing. Really enjoyable fun reading.
November 7th, 2021 05:09
« Return to the profile of Paul Bell
