Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
Dolly
Doggerel Dave said:
Maybe the child shouldn\'t be there anyway....hardly her fault though...
PS: Like the new straight from the shoulder stuff, but wouldn\'t mind a salting of the old schtick occasionally - I need a good laugh sometimes....
August 18th, 2025 16:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Maybe the child shouldn\'t be there anyway....hardly her fault though...
PS: Like the new straight from the shoulder stuff, but wouldn\'t mind a salting of the old schtick occasionally - I need a good laugh sometimes....
August 18th, 2025 16:56
Dolly
Poetic Licence said:
This is packed with raw emotion and real sadness, a child`s view on living through war, the reality of it and what becomes normal to the child. Very nicely crafted write.
August 18th, 2025 15:41
Poetic Licence said:
This is packed with raw emotion and real sadness, a child`s view on living through war, the reality of it and what becomes normal to the child. Very nicely crafted write.
August 18th, 2025 15:41
Dolly
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war seen through the eyes of a child so accustomed to death that anything short of maimed was not normal. A tragic and sad write. Nicely done with hard hitting emotion
August 18th, 2025 15:36
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war seen through the eyes of a child so accustomed to death that anything short of maimed was not normal. A tragic and sad write. Nicely done with hard hitting emotion
August 18th, 2025 15:36
Final Fall
Poetic Licence said:
A tragic and sad tail but so well crafted and written, nicely done
August 17th, 2025 09:44
Poetic Licence said:
A tragic and sad tail but so well crafted and written, nicely done
August 17th, 2025 09:44
Final Fall
sorenbarrett said:
In short bites the poem is eaten and digested. Bit by bit differences are spit out and the commonalities outweighed by the dissimilarity tips the scale. A tragic read and uniquely presented. Loved it a fave
August 17th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
In short bites the poem is eaten and digested. Bit by bit differences are spit out and the commonalities outweighed by the dissimilarity tips the scale. A tragic read and uniquely presented. Loved it a fave
August 17th, 2025 07:33
Enterprising Girl
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted humourous write, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 17:59
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted humourous write, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 17:59
Enterprising Girl
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyming in a most humorous poem. A fun read.
August 16th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyming in a most humorous poem. A fun read.
August 16th, 2025 17:40