Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
Reluctant Hero
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, I’ve always found stories about displaced identity powerful… especially veterans struggling outside rigid systems. The way media, manipulation, and private control weave together here feels intentionally uncomfortable. It forces the reader to sit in that discomfort. Powerful poetry, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, I’ve always found stories about displaced identity powerful… especially veterans struggling outside rigid systems. The way media, manipulation, and private control weave together here feels intentionally uncomfortable. It forces the reader to sit in that discomfort. Powerful poetry, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:36
Reluctant Hero
Friendship said:
Well written, Paul, a powerful poem. Your poem revolves around the lives of Billy, a war veteran struggling with PTSD, and Chelsea, a young woman entangled in a relationship that ultimately leads to tragedy. Their interactions reflect the complexities of human relationships against the backdrop of societal expectations, media sensationalism, and the challenges of reintegration after trauma.
February 28th, 2026 08:50
Friendship said:
Well written, Paul, a powerful poem. Your poem revolves around the lives of Billy, a war veteran struggling with PTSD, and Chelsea, a young woman entangled in a relationship that ultimately leads to tragedy. Their interactions reflect the complexities of human relationships against the backdrop of societal expectations, media sensationalism, and the challenges of reintegration after trauma.
February 28th, 2026 08:50
Reluctant Hero
sorenbarrett said:
Just what I always thought age makes no difference to feelings and even actions if physically possible. Well written Paul. Fun it seems ridiculous because of the age but it all fits human nature at any age.
February 28th, 2026 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Just what I always thought age makes no difference to feelings and even actions if physically possible. Well written Paul. Fun it seems ridiculous because of the age but it all fits human nature at any age.
February 28th, 2026 08:34
Changing Days
Doggerel Dave said:
I need some jolly old tea and scones.....
You\'ve vandalised my mind...
February 26th, 2026 18:47
Doggerel Dave said:
I need some jolly old tea and scones.....
You\'ve vandalised my mind...
February 26th, 2026 18:47
Changing Days
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, there’s something painfully real in the way you move from the marginalized to the existential. It reads like watching systems fail in slow motion. “The man on the bridge has got a head start.” doesn’t romanticize it…it just states it...and that is powerful. Well done here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 26th, 2026 10:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, there’s something painfully real in the way you move from the marginalized to the existential. It reads like watching systems fail in slow motion. “The man on the bridge has got a head start.” doesn’t romanticize it…it just states it...and that is powerful. Well done here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 26th, 2026 10:36
Changing Days
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic dystopia at night and heat of hell during the day. Pray for darkness in this world for none can bear the light. A good read full of metaphor.
February 26th, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic dystopia at night and heat of hell during the day. Pray for darkness in this world for none can bear the light. A good read full of metaphor.
February 26th, 2026 06:49
Angels Touch
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It’s the line “If you had met Ricky, you’d definitely be touched by his presence” that anchors the piece. When that phrase circles back later, it reframes the entire encounter. That moment lands with subtle force. Well done, Paul! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It’s the line “If you had met Ricky, you’d definitely be touched by his presence” that anchors the piece. When that phrase circles back later, it reframes the entire encounter. That moment lands with subtle force. Well done, Paul! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:19
Angels Touch
Doggerel Dave said:
Breast for women, prostate for men if unlucky.
The read was smooth , Paul.
February 24th, 2026 07:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Breast for women, prostate for men if unlucky.
The read was smooth , Paul.
February 24th, 2026 07:21
Angels Touch
sorenbarrett said:
A touching (pun not intended) story that though fantastic makes its point through emotion. Very nicely written Paul it holds meaning in more that the story itself. Giving to others is something sadly lacking in humanity and when it appears it shines like a diamond under light. Loved it
February 24th, 2026 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
A touching (pun not intended) story that though fantastic makes its point through emotion. Very nicely written Paul it holds meaning in more that the story itself. Giving to others is something sadly lacking in humanity and when it appears it shines like a diamond under light. Loved it
February 24th, 2026 05:56
Glasya
Thomas W Case said:
She rides the chaos of desire like a comet through glass—bruised, bright, relentless.
Even as the planets rage, she wakes again, hungry for the next collision.
February 22nd, 2026 09:01
Thomas W Case said:
She rides the chaos of desire like a comet through glass—bruised, bright, relentless.
Even as the planets rage, she wakes again, hungry for the next collision.
February 22nd, 2026 09:01
Glasya
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this feels mythic and cyclical… almost like watching a ritual unfold in slow motion. The repetition of mirror, cradle, and planets gives it a gravity that keeps pulling me back in. It’s sensual, yes… but also haunting. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this feels mythic and cyclical… almost like watching a ritual unfold in slow motion. The repetition of mirror, cradle, and planets gives it a gravity that keeps pulling me back in. It’s sensual, yes… but also haunting. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:56
Glasya
sorenbarrett said:
This is listed as gothic but it feels both surreal and intergalactic in nature. I am not sure why but there is an ancient Egyptian feel that I get from this. Nicely done my friend
February 21st, 2026 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
This is listed as gothic but it feels both surreal and intergalactic in nature. I am not sure why but there is an ancient Egyptian feel that I get from this. Nicely done my friend
February 21st, 2026 07:01
The Face In The Crowd
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this unfolds like a quiet psychological thriller…measured, restrained, and deeply unsettling. It’s emotional, eerie, and grounded all at once. Strong, evocative piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 20th, 2026 02:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this unfolds like a quiet psychological thriller…measured, restrained, and deeply unsettling. It’s emotional, eerie, and grounded all at once. Strong, evocative piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 20th, 2026 02:40
The Face In The Crowd
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting story well told. Loved it
February 19th, 2026 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting story well told. Loved it
February 19th, 2026 07:24
The Face In The Crowd
Friendship said:
This hits hard, a poem of sorrow. Your poem articulates the struggles of moving forward while being haunted by memories, highlighting the enduring impact of love and loss.
February 19th, 2026 07:20
Friendship said:
This hits hard, a poem of sorrow. Your poem articulates the struggles of moving forward while being haunted by memories, highlighting the enduring impact of love and loss.
February 19th, 2026 07:20
Thigh Length Boots
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, “Two strangers, heart-to-heart” is the line that anchors this for me. In the middle of lust, money, and performance…there’s that fragile flash of honesty. It shifts the tone from physical to vulnerable in a single turn. That’s what lingers. A fantastic write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, “Two strangers, heart-to-heart” is the line that anchors this for me. In the middle of lust, money, and performance…there’s that fragile flash of honesty. It shifts the tone from physical to vulnerable in a single turn. That’s what lingers. A fantastic write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:08
Thigh Length Boots
Friendship said:
Your Poem revolves around a fleeting encounter between two individuals, marked by desire and the transactional nature of their relationship. The mention of \"thigh-length boots\" symbolizes allure and power, while the references to money and emotional conflicts highlight the underlying desperation and loneliness present in both characters.
February 16th, 2026 05:07
Friendship said:
Your Poem revolves around a fleeting encounter between two individuals, marked by desire and the transactional nature of their relationship. The mention of \"thigh-length boots\" symbolizes allure and power, while the references to money and emotional conflicts highlight the underlying desperation and loneliness present in both characters.
February 16th, 2026 05:07
Thigh Length Boots
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of that Nancy Sinatra song \"These boots are made for walking\" A seductive read if not outright sexual. A proposition in poetic form.
February 16th, 2026 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of that Nancy Sinatra song \"These boots are made for walking\" A seductive read if not outright sexual. A proposition in poetic form.
February 16th, 2026 05:05
Valentine Present
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Lovely with a cap L. Perfect summary before the end \'All I can see is pound signs.\'
What a poem 😂🤣😇😁
February 15th, 2026 08:46
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Lovely with a cap L. Perfect summary before the end \'All I can see is pound signs.\'
What a poem 😂🤣😇😁
February 15th, 2026 08:46
Valentine Present
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this is pure farce wrapped in sharp social commentary. The escalating surgery talk, the fixation on cost, the absurd final punchline…it’s designed to shock and amuse at the same time. You push the envelope and make it theatrical. Definitely memorable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this is pure farce wrapped in sharp social commentary. The escalating surgery talk, the fixation on cost, the absurd final punchline…it’s designed to shock and amuse at the same time. You push the envelope and make it theatrical. Definitely memorable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:47
Valentine Present
Teddy.15 said:
Anyone would think you are married to. Katie Price 🤣 and may I just laugh out loud at sorrenbarret\'s review lol 🤣 🌹 have a lovely day darling.
February 14th, 2026 07:08
Teddy.15 said:
Anyone would think you are married to. Katie Price 🤣 and may I just laugh out loud at sorrenbarret\'s review lol 🤣 🌹 have a lovely day darling.
February 14th, 2026 07:08
Valentine Present
Friendship said:
Well written , I really enjoy your Humor. Your poem humorously explores the dynamics of a couple\'s conversation about body image, desires, and the absurdity of societal expectations regarding physical appearance. It juxtaposes the desire for cosmetic surgery with the humorous and often absurd expectations that the couple have of each other.
February 14th, 2026 07:04
Friendship said:
Well written , I really enjoy your Humor. Your poem humorously explores the dynamics of a couple\'s conversation about body image, desires, and the absurdity of societal expectations regarding physical appearance. It juxtaposes the desire for cosmetic surgery with the humorous and often absurd expectations that the couple have of each other.
February 14th, 2026 07:04
Valentine Present
sorenbarrett said:
Men have paid for pleasure since the dawn of time it is the trump card that women hold. The problem being that in making your woman more attractive it draws more flies. Happy is the man that has an ugly wife. Vinegar works well as a perfume for flies. Good write Paul
February 14th, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Men have paid for pleasure since the dawn of time it is the trump card that women hold. The problem being that in making your woman more attractive it draws more flies. Happy is the man that has an ugly wife. Vinegar works well as a perfume for flies. Good write Paul
February 14th, 2026 06:10
The Fridge
Doggerel Dave said:
Lost track approximately halfway as to who was who (please substitute ‘whom’ if felt appropriate or technically correct). Themes would appear from my perspective to include beer, unidentified refrigerator and some bed hopping (or should that be ‘crawling’?) Is this a rewarding response to your entertaining piece?
February 13th, 2026 18:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Lost track approximately halfway as to who was who (please substitute ‘whom’ if felt appropriate or technically correct). Themes would appear from my perspective to include beer, unidentified refrigerator and some bed hopping (or should that be ‘crawling’?) Is this a rewarding response to your entertaining piece?
February 13th, 2026 18:11
The Fridge
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this is pub-banter brilliance. The escalating absurdity from lovers to beer to heart attacks builds into that final punchline. It’s less about betrayal and more about priorities… and that’s what makes it funny. “Keep the bloody fridge.” seals it. Well done, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this is pub-banter brilliance. The escalating absurdity from lovers to beer to heart attacks builds into that final punchline. It’s less about betrayal and more about priorities… and that’s what makes it funny. “Keep the bloody fridge.” seals it. Well done, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:47
The Fridge
Friendship said:
Your humor is noteworthy, and your imagination is quite vivid. As a child, my mother would remind me to close the refrigerator, saying that nothing grows inside after opening it. Your poem explores themes of betrayal, heartbreak, and the absurdity of romantic relationships, with a particular focus on the poet\'s feelings of being wronged and humiliated by their former partner.
February 13th, 2026 07:40
Friendship said:
Your humor is noteworthy, and your imagination is quite vivid. As a child, my mother would remind me to close the refrigerator, saying that nothing grows inside after opening it. Your poem explores themes of betrayal, heartbreak, and the absurdity of romantic relationships, with a particular focus on the poet\'s feelings of being wronged and humiliated by their former partner.
February 13th, 2026 07:40
The Fridge
Teddy.15 said:
I am quite sure I\'ve read this one in the past, it has a bitter sweet taste, of course there is humour in everything if we look hard enough, but a woman who cheats and also takes the fridge, well she is practically taking the biscuit. A heartfelt write with an ironic edge. Great write dear Paul. 🌹
February 13th, 2026 07:01
Teddy.15 said:
I am quite sure I\'ve read this one in the past, it has a bitter sweet taste, of course there is humour in everything if we look hard enough, but a woman who cheats and also takes the fridge, well she is practically taking the biscuit. A heartfelt write with an ironic edge. Great write dear Paul. 🌹
February 13th, 2026 07:01
The Fridge
sorenbarrett said:
In this humor there is a message Paul priorities set the limit on values and even they can fall when one becomes sober. A good write my friend
February 13th, 2026 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
In this humor there is a message Paul priorities set the limit on values and even they can fall when one becomes sober. A good write my friend
February 13th, 2026 06:17
Bonding
Doggerel Dave said:
Had to do this in two parts, big nap in between (not as young as I useterbe and the activity was at times, uh, a little intense) At base nothing more than yer average male/female mating dance, and I predict they will eventually live happily ever after.
February 11th, 2026 16:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Had to do this in two parts, big nap in between (not as young as I useterbe and the activity was at times, uh, a little intense) At base nothing more than yer average male/female mating dance, and I predict they will eventually live happily ever after.
February 11th, 2026 16:44
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