Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
Conceited Freedom
Jabberwocky said:
Well, with me it made me stay, but that\'s another story. Compassion is sometimes a chain.
Interesting poem
October 21st, 2026 15:52
Jabberwocky said:
Well, with me it made me stay, but that\'s another story. Compassion is sometimes a chain.
Interesting poem
October 21st, 2026 15:52
The Night Creatures
sorenbarrett said:
You got me Paul a fun read that makes sense to us old timers that have been there and are now there handing out candy. Oh but it was worse I my day when we roamed the neighborhood with wax for windows and screens of those not home or pretending not to be there, toilet paper and chalk to graffiti the driveways telling neighbors here lives a cheap person. Pranks galore for any unsuspecting and no parent supervision until they checked our haul for needles and razor blades.
October 21st, 2026 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
You got me Paul a fun read that makes sense to us old timers that have been there and are now there handing out candy. Oh but it was worse I my day when we roamed the neighborhood with wax for windows and screens of those not home or pretending not to be there, toilet paper and chalk to graffiti the driveways telling neighbors here lives a cheap person. Pranks galore for any unsuspecting and no parent supervision until they checked our haul for needles and razor blades.
October 21st, 2026 11:46
Conceited Freedom
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bloody hell, Paul! I had to read that twice. There\'s a particular kind of cruelty that doesn\'t even require someone to say anything aloud. The thought that people can be so callous genuinely sickens me. 🖤🌹🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 23:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bloody hell, Paul! I had to read that twice. There\'s a particular kind of cruelty that doesn\'t even require someone to say anything aloud. The thought that people can be so callous genuinely sickens me. 🖤🌹🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 23:04
Conceited Freedom
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
A raw piece this. Unsettlingly brilliant.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 19th, 2026 10:45
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
A raw piece this. Unsettlingly brilliant.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 19th, 2026 10:45
Conceited Freedom
sorenbarrett said:
Now Paul even for me that is dark. It makes total sense and probably has happened millions of times but it kind of takes the shine off romance and puts the thought on what the real purpose of love is and that of propagation of the species, romance nothing more than a ploy and sex itself the false advertising that leads to product maintenance under a legal contract. Well done old boy.
October 19th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Now Paul even for me that is dark. It makes total sense and probably has happened millions of times but it kind of takes the shine off romance and puts the thought on what the real purpose of love is and that of propagation of the species, romance nothing more than a ploy and sex itself the false advertising that leads to product maintenance under a legal contract. Well done old boy.
October 19th, 2026 04:30
Death Of A Clown
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That applause made me feel sick, Paul. I wanted to shout for someone to stop clapping and help him. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2026 14:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That applause made me feel sick, Paul. I wanted to shout for someone to stop clapping and help him. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2026 14:44
Death Of A Clown
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
What a tragic tale, from the fun filled days of yore to the death of humour. The laughter, the bang and then the silence. Awfully sad and profoundly expressed. Well done indeed,
.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 09:22
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
What a tragic tale, from the fun filled days of yore to the death of humour. The laughter, the bang and then the silence. Awfully sad and profoundly expressed. Well done indeed,
.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 09:22
Death Of A Clown
Teddy.15 said:
I never liked clowns 🤡 very well written, off your usual tracks, was it Mary in disguise? lol 💋
October 17th, 2026 08:58
Teddy.15 said:
I never liked clowns 🤡 very well written, off your usual tracks, was it Mary in disguise? lol 💋
October 17th, 2026 08:58
Death Of A Clown
sorenbarrett said:
Being a clown is great fun. The court jester has great freedom. I used to dress as a clown for kid parties and Halloween and always painted a frown on my face. It gave more freedom than a smile that seemed forced and required one to always act happy even when not. This poem speaks of hidden feelings behind the mask and the very act of shooting oneself is not seen as tragic until the end. Nicely done my friend with a deep message
October 17th, 2026 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
Being a clown is great fun. The court jester has great freedom. I used to dress as a clown for kid parties and Halloween and always painted a frown on my face. It gave more freedom than a smile that seemed forced and required one to always act happy even when not. This poem speaks of hidden feelings behind the mask and the very act of shooting oneself is not seen as tragic until the end. Nicely done my friend with a deep message
October 17th, 2026 05:43
Death Of A Clown
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write friend, much enjoyed
October 17th, 2026 05:43
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write friend, much enjoyed
October 17th, 2026 05:43
Lucy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Paul! 🤣 Between Animal Protection and the police, I think Grandad needs a solicitor on permanent retainer! And Lucy? I\'d be checking whether she\'s secretly charging the authorities for her investigative services! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 15th, 2026 21:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Paul! 🤣 Between Animal Protection and the police, I think Grandad needs a solicitor on permanent retainer! And Lucy? I\'d be checking whether she\'s secretly charging the authorities for her investigative services! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 15th, 2026 21:49
Lucy
Doggerel Dave said:
As an ipad promo it will take up a lot of running time...
As a shaggy parrot tale, watch your back John Cleese, a new generation is on its way....
Enjoyed thoroughly, Paul.
October 15th, 2026 16:02
Doggerel Dave said:
As an ipad promo it will take up a lot of running time...
As a shaggy parrot tale, watch your back John Cleese, a new generation is on its way....
Enjoyed thoroughly, Paul.
October 15th, 2026 16:02
Two Rungs
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
Murder most foul and what an ending. A simple twist to the old adage and it\'s still not right. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 15th, 2026 13:00
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
Murder most foul and what an ending. A simple twist to the old adage and it\'s still not right. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 15th, 2026 13:00
Lucy
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Paul LMAO 🤣 feckin funny you got me on the feckin bird seeds 😂
October 15th, 2026 04:51
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Paul LMAO 🤣 feckin funny you got me on the feckin bird seeds 😂
October 15th, 2026 04:51
Lucy
sorenbarrett said:
You made me laugh Paul I thought I knew where this one was going at the beginning but it took a turn and then another by the time I figured out where it was going I was checking my door for the police. You never know where a poem or a story will take you and whom might feel it necessary to file a report.
October 15th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
You made me laugh Paul I thought I knew where this one was going at the beginning but it took a turn and then another by the time I figured out where it was going I was checking my door for the police. You never know where a poem or a story will take you and whom might feel it necessary to file a report.
October 15th, 2026 04:26
Two Rungs
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, bloody hell! 😂 There\'s something particularly disturbing about someone who can rationalize murder as casually as a disappointing career decision. That\'s a frightening sort of ambition! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2026 22:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, bloody hell! 😂 There\'s something particularly disturbing about someone who can rationalize murder as casually as a disappointing career decision. That\'s a frightening sort of ambition! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2026 22:00
Two Rungs
Doggerel Dave said:
Best seller on the listings. Promotional tour begins when?
October 14th, 2026 16:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Best seller on the listings. Promotional tour begins when?
October 14th, 2026 16:45
Two Rungs
sorenbarrett said:
Love the word play Paul I always am a succor for word play. Good one
October 14th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Love the word play Paul I always am a succor for word play. Good one
October 14th, 2026 04:18
Two Rungs
Teddy.15 said:
LOL your last line was what I wanted to write, all I can say is you rung me dry and I fell of me chair lol 🌹
October 14th, 2026 03:48
Teddy.15 said:
LOL your last line was what I wanted to write, all I can say is you rung me dry and I fell of me chair lol 🌹
October 14th, 2026 03:48
Engraved In Stone
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
What a wonderful story, I was engrossed from start to finish and what a finish it was. You are a great storyteller. Bravo.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 13th, 2026 15:43
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Paul,
What a wonderful story, I was engrossed from start to finish and what a finish it was. You are a great storyteller. Bravo.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 13th, 2026 15:43
Engraved In Stone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Paul! You certainly know how to deliver an emotional gut punch! I was thoroughly invested by the end, and I suspect this one will stay with me for a while. Wonderful storytelling, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏
October 12th, 2026 19:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Paul! You certainly know how to deliver an emotional gut punch! I was thoroughly invested by the end, and I suspect this one will stay with me for a while. Wonderful storytelling, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏
October 12th, 2026 19:36
Engraved In Stone
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a hidden epitaph left to the reader to guess. The best way to end a story. Well done Paul
October 12th, 2026 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a hidden epitaph left to the reader to guess. The best way to end a story. Well done Paul
October 12th, 2026 05:57
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