Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
The Chuckle Brothers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is brilliantly unhinged…the gossip spiraling, identities flipping, fists flying, romances blooming, all ending with that deadpan “Was it something I said.” It’s sharp, funny, and wonderfully chaotic. Loved this one, Paul. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is brilliantly unhinged…the gossip spiraling, identities flipping, fists flying, romances blooming, all ending with that deadpan “Was it something I said.” It’s sharp, funny, and wonderfully chaotic. Loved this one, Paul. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:52
The Chuckle Brothers
Doggerel Dave said:
The veracity of your reportage is astounding. Each character given an allotted space commensurate with their importance with respect to the occasion. Need I say more….. or less?
December 10th, 2025 06:08
Doggerel Dave said:
The veracity of your reportage is astounding. Each character given an allotted space commensurate with their importance with respect to the occasion. Need I say more….. or less?
December 10th, 2025 06:08
The Chuckle Brothers
Friendship said:
Your poem serves to explore the complexities of relationships and the absurdity of trying to manage them, encapsulated in the idea that despite our best intentions to change the world, we often find ourselves in chaotic and humorous situations. The concluding lines suggest a reflective tone, questioning the nature of communication and human interactions.
December 10th, 2025 05:54
Friendship said:
Your poem serves to explore the complexities of relationships and the absurdity of trying to manage them, encapsulated in the idea that despite our best intentions to change the world, we often find ourselves in chaotic and humorous situations. The concluding lines suggest a reflective tone, questioning the nature of communication and human interactions.
December 10th, 2025 05:54
The Chuckle Brothers
sorenbarrett said:
Now that\'s quite a story told in poetic form. A poem of a word that started a storm. A narrative of life the take and give. A word astray can ruin a perfectly good day. A fun read my friend
December 10th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Now that\'s quite a story told in poetic form. A poem of a word that started a storm. A narrative of life the take and give. A word astray can ruin a perfectly good day. A fun read my friend
December 10th, 2025 04:54
The Falling Snow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul…I know that feeling of seeing things clearly only at the end. Your words sit in that space where loss becomes understanding, and it lands deeply. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 20:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul…I know that feeling of seeing things clearly only at the end. Your words sit in that space where loss becomes understanding, and it lands deeply. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 20:55
The Falling Snow
sorenbarrett said:
A friend a friend whether present of past, whether with you or far away they still remain in hearts and memories friends that can not be taken. Well done
December 8th, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
A friend a friend whether present of past, whether with you or far away they still remain in hearts and memories friends that can not be taken. Well done
December 8th, 2025 06:30
The Falling Snow
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, the poem \"The Falling Snow\" explores themes of inevitability, loss, and the bittersweet nature of life and relationships. It reflects on the passage of time, the consequences of choices, and the idea that fate plays a cruel hand in our lives.
December 8th, 2025 06:17
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, the poem \"The Falling Snow\" explores themes of inevitability, loss, and the bittersweet nature of life and relationships. It reflects on the passage of time, the consequences of choices, and the idea that fate plays a cruel hand in our lives.
December 8th, 2025 06:17
Jack
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, I’m struck by how you hold grief, grit, and wit in the same space. Jack becomes this stubborn symbol of survival and the final twist lands with warmth instead of cliché. It’s a generous piece, my dear friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 4th, 2025 18:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, I’m struck by how you hold grief, grit, and wit in the same space. Jack becomes this stubborn symbol of survival and the final twist lands with warmth instead of cliché. It’s a generous piece, my dear friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 4th, 2025 18:19
Jack
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the tale told with such good bits of humor. In poetic style with rhyme as well. Gave me a smile but I can imagine that getting down on one knee with only one leg would not be easy, would hurt twice as much with all the weight on one knee touching stone and don\'t even mention the getting back up again. The metaphor is subtle in this poem but some of the best part. Loved it
December 4th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the tale told with such good bits of humor. In poetic style with rhyme as well. Gave me a smile but I can imagine that getting down on one knee with only one leg would not be easy, would hurt twice as much with all the weight on one knee touching stone and don\'t even mention the getting back up again. The metaphor is subtle in this poem but some of the best part. Loved it
December 4th, 2025 04:24
Miss Strang
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this is comedy carnage…the glass eye, the vicar disguise, the runaway Rolls, the spiraling logic…each part tops the last. It reads like a fever dream delivered with deadpan precision. Completely hysterical. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 3rd, 2025 18:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this is comedy carnage…the glass eye, the vicar disguise, the runaway Rolls, the spiraling logic…each part tops the last. It reads like a fever dream delivered with deadpan precision. Completely hysterical. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 3rd, 2025 18:41
Miss Strang
sorenbarrett said:
Truth is stranger than fiction and this story is indeed a strange one. A fun read Paul
December 3rd, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
Truth is stranger than fiction and this story is indeed a strange one. A fun read Paul
December 3rd, 2025 06:52
Santas Dilemma
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write Paul. Oh and Merry Christmas.
Andy
December 3rd, 2025 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write Paul. Oh and Merry Christmas.
Andy
December 3rd, 2025 02:27
Santas Dilemma
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this one had me laughing…the sheer chaos of this “letter” and the way the voice barrels forward without a filter is classic you. Dark humor done right. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this one had me laughing…the sheer chaos of this “letter” and the way the voice barrels forward without a filter is classic you. Dark humor done right. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:43
Santas Dilemma
orchidee said:
That\'s telling him! That\'ll teach him not to come down the chimney and fill our lounges with soot. It\'s why I hate Christmas morning - gotta spend it every year cleaning up the lounge cos some fat beardy bloke in welly boots and red costume descended down it! heehee.
December 2nd, 2025 09:59
orchidee said:
That\'s telling him! That\'ll teach him not to come down the chimney and fill our lounges with soot. It\'s why I hate Christmas morning - gotta spend it every year cleaning up the lounge cos some fat beardy bloke in welly boots and red costume descended down it! heehee.
December 2nd, 2025 09:59
Santas Dilemma
arqios said:
We live in an era of mismatched socks and so much more 🤣🙏🏻🕊️
December 2nd, 2025 07:27
arqios said:
We live in an era of mismatched socks and so much more 🤣🙏🏻🕊️
December 2nd, 2025 07:27
Santas Dilemma
Friendship said:
Well said, enjoy your humor.🤣 Your poem \"Dear Santa\" revolves around the humorous and frustrated tone of a husband expressing his dissatisfaction with Santa Claus for a poorly considered gift. This letter illustrates the complexities of relationships, expectations, and miscommunication through the lens of holiday gift-giving.
December 2nd, 2025 05:52
Friendship said:
Well said, enjoy your humor.🤣 Your poem \"Dear Santa\" revolves around the humorous and frustrated tone of a husband expressing his dissatisfaction with Santa Claus for a poorly considered gift. This letter illustrates the complexities of relationships, expectations, and miscommunication through the lens of holiday gift-giving.
December 2nd, 2025 05:52
Santas Dilemma
sorenbarrett said:
My feelings about Christmas exactly Paul and a fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
My feelings about Christmas exactly Paul and a fave
December 2nd, 2025 04:47
Rover
NafisaSB said:
some mourn, others just gather to gossip, for some it\'s their trade..
December 2nd, 2025 00:16
NafisaSB said:
some mourn, others just gather to gossip, for some it\'s their trade..
December 2nd, 2025 00:16
Reunited
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Paul, so sad to leave a child behind.
Andy
December 1st, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Paul, so sad to leave a child behind.
Andy
December 1st, 2025 02:23
Reunited
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve seen echoes of this kind of heartbreak up close…the innocence on one side, the ruin on the other. You captured that unbearable distance with painful clarity. Well done, Paul! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve seen echoes of this kind of heartbreak up close…the innocence on one side, the ruin on the other. You captured that unbearable distance with painful clarity. Well done, Paul! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:45
Reunited
arqios said:
Brings back some Peaches and Herb https://youtu.be/Bu3OQFCsKXQ
November 30th, 2025 08:02
arqios said:
Brings back some Peaches and Herb https://youtu.be/Bu3OQFCsKXQ
November 30th, 2025 08:02
Reunited
Friendship said:
Sorrowful poem, well expressed. The emotional turmoil experienced by a child who yearns for a nurturing presence but is met with the harsh reality of a mother\'s drug dependency.
November 30th, 2025 06:35
Friendship said:
Sorrowful poem, well expressed. The emotional turmoil experienced by a child who yearns for a nurturing presence but is met with the harsh reality of a mother\'s drug dependency.
November 30th, 2025 06:35
Reunited
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t do that too often, Paul will you...Subtly done but painful none the less.
November 30th, 2025 06:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t do that too often, Paul will you...Subtly done but painful none the less.
November 30th, 2025 06:09
Reunited
sorenbarrett said:
It is most sad that we do not consider the effect of our actions on others. Whether suicide, drug addiction, irresponsibility of any type and how others close to us are left with what we have done, financially, emotionally, a burden left behind, our unpaid debt. A sad write Paul and a fave
November 30th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
It is most sad that we do not consider the effect of our actions on others. Whether suicide, drug addiction, irresponsibility of any type and how others close to us are left with what we have done, financially, emotionally, a burden left behind, our unpaid debt. A sad write Paul and a fave
November 30th, 2025 05:07
Rover
Doggerel Dave said:
And in Dull village it is discussed for years - who said what to whom and why they are still not speaking...oh a live and dynamic culture is rich and flowing in that village of...what\'s its name....
November 28th, 2025 16:42
Doggerel Dave said:
And in Dull village it is discussed for years - who said what to whom and why they are still not speaking...oh a live and dynamic culture is rich and flowing in that village of...what\'s its name....
November 28th, 2025 16:42
Rover
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this cracked me up…the chaos, the characters, the absurdity piling on line by line. It’s dark, funny, and so perfectly off-kilter. And of course…the dog steals the whole show. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 28th, 2025 11:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Paul, this cracked me up…the chaos, the characters, the absurdity piling on line by line. It’s dark, funny, and so perfectly off-kilter. And of course…the dog steals the whole show. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 28th, 2025 11:05
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