Comments received on poems by Paul Bell



Carver
Rozina said:

Where is this prison? Amazing place, amazing people! Great story.

January 22nd, 2022 18:33

Carver
dusk arising said:

I enjoyed reading this. I haven\'t a clue what it\'s about or if there\'s a moral lesson being offered. But enjoy it i did.... more please - how about continuing this one?

January 22nd, 2022 17:39

Carver
Teddy.15 said:

I\'ve never been in any prison, this is eye opening lol ๐Ÿคฃ. Your language is very clever


Paul I challenge you to write a 3 line poem on love

January 22nd, 2022 08:37

Proxy
Teddy.15 said:

It\'s certainly a compliment as you keep your reader entertained I\'m not a fan of rape in poetry but I believe you have what it takes to write something special in larger pages Paul. I don\'t have a pencil โœ๏ธ but I would support you all the way for your talents

January 21st, 2022 13:25

Proxy
Teddy.15 said:

I think you have the imagination to write a proper thriller Paul. ๐Ÿ’–

January 21st, 2022 09:07

The Letters
Goldfinch60 said:

Powerful emotive words Paul.

Andy

January 21st, 2022 02:43

The Letters
Rozina said:

Hardly get letters these days. All online. Except bills. What a touching story. Reading this made me sad.

January 20th, 2022 21:26

The Letters
spilleronsheet said:

And thatโ€™s the power of letter
Loved the way the letter could mend the way
Good one dear Paul

January 20th, 2022 14:01

The Letters
L. B. Mek said:

\'After a while
we
moved on, from the anger.
We
became, human again.\'..
(If
\'we\' could just
spoon feed this, realisation
to the world, at birth
how far, could we have made it
as a species...)
thanks for sharing, a wonderful read
and I loved those lines,
Anger, is such a cheap emotion

January 20th, 2022 07:55

The Letters
Teddy.15 said:

This is so full of truth between two people who have lost touch with eachother yet through time and space begin again to at least be civil. Divorce isn\'t pretty yet it is so the norm these days but each individual has their own story and this one touched my heart dear Paul. ๐Ÿ’– Letters can mean so much.

January 20th, 2022 06:40

The Letters
dusk arising said:

A story of life which reveals that there is more to walking away than walking away.

January 20th, 2022 06:29

Divorced
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun read Paul.

Andy

January 20th, 2022 02:28

Divorced
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha - laughed my socks off at this divorce story - am wondering if Julie stayed the course and caused even more stress .......... great read Paul

January 19th, 2022 16:19

Divorced
dusk arising said:

Light hearted but a very relateable story. I too walked away from divorce with nothing - to ensure my special daughter would have the best i could give. That was a long time ago and there still remains a strong bond of friendship and mutual respect.
Life changes dramatically after divorce.

January 19th, 2022 11:33

Divorced
Rozina said:

Did the virus help with the poem?! Itโ€™s so funny!

January 19th, 2022 08:58

Divorced
Neil Higgins said:

I once asked an ex what she would like for Xmas?
She said \"A divorce!\"
I said I wasn\'t thinking of spending that much on you ๐Ÿฅณ

A very \"funny\" piece here Paul.I have to admit I have known over the years,several friends,whose lives have ended in turmoil.Some, thankfully,have remained sensible,whilst others have not.
My funniest surreal moment,after living with someone for many years,was discussing who had the LP collection,and the audio tapes,and who had the video recorder and the VHS tapes ๐Ÿคฃ
I am thankfully happily with my \"soulmate\" and me and her are amazingly friends with my ex and her husband of the last 30 years.
Life can be so strange ๐Ÿค”

January 19th, 2022 05:40

Divorced
Teddy.15 said:

LOL oh Paul, I hope the fever is receading. ๐Ÿคฃ Bog off Julie! ๐Ÿ˜‚

January 19th, 2022 04:34

CV
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful fun write Paul, my first laugh of the day - thank you.

Andy

January 19th, 2022 01:55

CV
Rozina said:

Sorry to hear that youโ€™re down with Covid. But youโ€™re still funny! Get well soon.

January 19th, 2022 01:27

CV
spilleronsheet said:

Such a witty poetry
Quite engaging dear Poet

January 18th, 2022 09:27

CV
Neil Higgins said:

I remember the government schemes,where you were \"work\" placed for six months to a year,and earned an extra ยฃ10 on JSA for working stupid hours,when the \"full time employment\" person,was earning a normal salery.They would not offer you a proper job,as it was cheaper to do this,as they got ยฃ1000 a person they took on.
Scum bags.

January 18th, 2022 09:25

CV
L. B. Mek said:

a friend of mine
had to sign-up at the local job centre
cos his company collapsed in 2008,
maybe a few month\'s before he reached retirement
and for those months
the sht they made him go through
re-training schemes alongside teens
homework like assignments
and on and on;
luckily, back then
I had my own thing
so I just signed some papers
told them
he was doing some work placement thing with me
until
eventually, he reached his retirement age and could be free..
(they would call it Fraud
I call it, the humanity within me!)
I hated them
for how low they made him feel, during those months
a working man, for his entire life
but this handful months!
I bet he ha d a few murderous thoughts when doing
his weekly CV interviews/ interrogations

January 18th, 2022 08:36

CV
dusk arising said:

Enjoyed reading this fun piece.

Sorry to read you\'ve got this covid thing, hope you fully recover very soon.

All my CV says is \"writes silly poems\".

January 18th, 2022 08:33

CV
Teddy.15 said:

LOL I feel a helicopter pad roof penthouse siren going off... My CV simply reads (Dangerous) lol ๐Ÿคฃ very funny Paul. I\'ve read some funny stuff on here today, and I\'ve had a good chuckle. ๐Ÿ’–

January 18th, 2022 07:27

Bob It
Rozina said:

Hahaha!

January 17th, 2022 22:46

Bob It
hotidris said:

That\'s a nice humorous poem about a man who\'s nicknamed Bob it.

January 17th, 2022 21:29

Bob It
dusk arising said:

Lol @ Bobbit. Well you certainly closed the door on that relationship!

What a super read, really well penned entertainment.

January 17th, 2022 16:58

Bob It
fallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Lmao,..I remember that!!!๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

January 17th, 2022 11:06

Bob It
Teddy.15 said:

Oh gosh ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜‚ lol Paul, Paul, Paul. ๐Ÿคฃ

January 17th, 2022 09:08

Bob It
L. B. Mek said:

\'Maybe heโ€™s a Ninja lover
I heard him chewing
What the hell are you doing
Iโ€™m coming
For christsakes, not again
No, Iโ€™m ready for you
Well get on with it
Iโ€™ll just close the door
He screamed
Something told me
satisfaction
was A 999, away\'
just pure LOL, Genius!
(in my humble
\'old man\'s, crassly crude
matter-of-fact humour\'s\'
opinionated, perspective),
but still, that boringly prude
conscientiousness, in me
wishes this had an ๐Ÿ”ž, tag
so I could revel, in its hilarity
unreservedly) lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet


January 17th, 2022 08:56

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