Comments received on poems by Paul Bell



Dolly
Doggerel Dave said:

Maybe the child shouldn\'t be there anyway....hardly her fault though...

PS: Like the new straight from the shoulder stuff, but wouldn\'t mind a salting of the old schtick occasionally - I need a good laugh sometimes....

August 18th, 2025 16:56

Dolly
Poetic Licence said:

This is packed with raw emotion and real sadness, a child`s view on living through war, the reality of it and what becomes normal to the child. Very nicely crafted write.

August 18th, 2025 15:41

Dolly
sorenbarrett said:

The horrors of war seen through the eyes of a child so accustomed to death that anything short of maimed was not normal. A tragic and sad write. Nicely done with hard hitting emotion

August 18th, 2025 15:36

Final Fall
Spencer Wilhelm said:

Wow. Well done

August 17th, 2025 10:17

Final Fall
Poetic Licence said:

A tragic and sad tail but so well crafted and written, nicely done

August 17th, 2025 09:44

Final Fall
Priya Tomar said:

Short and sad .
A fave !

August 17th, 2025 07:59

Enterprising Girl
Priya Tomar said:

Rhyming is catchy.
A fave....

August 17th, 2025 07:49

Final Fall
2781 said:

The end.

August 17th, 2025 07:48

Final Fall
sorenbarrett said:

In short bites the poem is eaten and digested. Bit by bit differences are spit out and the commonalities outweighed by the dissimilarity tips the scale. A tragic read and uniquely presented. Loved it a fave

August 17th, 2025 07:33

Enterprising Girl
Poetic Licence said:

Nicely crafted humourous write, enjoyed the read

August 16th, 2025 17:59

Enterprising Girl
sorenbarrett said:

Clever rhyming in a most humorous poem. A fun read.

August 16th, 2025 17:40