Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
The Honey Trap.
Goldfinch60 said:
Luckily Mojenta has never been in my life Paul.
Good erotic words.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Luckily Mojenta has never been in my life Paul.
Good erotic words.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 00:49
The Honey Trap.
Neville said:
Hang on a mo what\'s a bloomin mojenta when it\'s at home .. :)
October 28th, 2021 13:22
Neville said:
Hang on a mo what\'s a bloomin mojenta when it\'s at home .. :)
October 28th, 2021 13:22
The Honey Trap.
orchidee said:
We\'re not knowing what Mojenta is - that makes two of us not knowing!
October 28th, 2021 07:31
orchidee said:
We\'re not knowing what Mojenta is - that makes two of us not knowing!
October 28th, 2021 07:31
The Honey Trap.
dusk arising said:
I\'m with Teddy on this, what\'s Mojenta?
October 28th, 2021 07:31
dusk arising said:
I\'m with Teddy on this, what\'s Mojenta?
October 28th, 2021 07:31
New Life.
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'She cut the ties
The good, The bad
The menopause;
Finally, the long pause
Followed
by the loneliness
Days became weeks, became months
It was time!
Life begins at forty
Did it, end at forty-six?\'
(forgive my rudeness, in rearranging your lines, dear poet
I just wanted to highlight how smoothly your writing flows
and how much care and thought, you put into those purposed word choices.
thank you, this was an ambitiously brave poetic endeavour
\'in my humble opinion\';
a contemplation of the hidden nuances, in those
easily relatable worries and struggles,
wonderfully executed,
a truly immersive reading experience)
October 26th, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'She cut the ties
The good, The bad
The menopause;
Finally, the long pause
Followed
by the loneliness
Days became weeks, became months
It was time!
Life begins at forty
Did it, end at forty-six?\'
(forgive my rudeness, in rearranging your lines, dear poet
I just wanted to highlight how smoothly your writing flows
and how much care and thought, you put into those purposed word choices.
thank you, this was an ambitiously brave poetic endeavour
\'in my humble opinion\';
a contemplation of the hidden nuances, in those
easily relatable worries and struggles,
wonderfully executed,
a truly immersive reading experience)
October 26th, 2021 04:15
New Life.
jarcher54 said:
It’s impolite to stare
Sorry, I was undressing you
Such black humor in this painful piece... bravo
October 26th, 2021 00:01
jarcher54 said:
It’s impolite to stare
Sorry, I was undressing you
Such black humor in this painful piece... bravo
October 26th, 2021 00:01
New Life.
spilleronsheet said:
It’s emotional and deep
Few words conveyed a lot
Well penned
October 25th, 2021 13:45
spilleronsheet said:
It’s emotional and deep
Few words conveyed a lot
Well penned
October 25th, 2021 13:45
The Little Soldiers
aDarkerMind said:
how loud the powers that be applaud these brave men.
how quick they turn a blind to their suffering once out of uniform;
i applaud you as well Paul;
October 24th, 2021 10:17
aDarkerMind said:
how loud the powers that be applaud these brave men.
how quick they turn a blind to their suffering once out of uniform;
i applaud you as well Paul;
October 24th, 2021 10:17
The Little Soldiers
spilleronsheet said:
The little soldiers are meritorious
It seems
Carrying the whims at please
Well penned dear poet
October 24th, 2021 07:35
spilleronsheet said:
The little soldiers are meritorious
It seems
Carrying the whims at please
Well penned dear poet
October 24th, 2021 07:35
The Crows
Casper_the_ghost said:
Brilliant! There’s a certain dark, Lovecraftian element to this work
October 23rd, 2021 06:58
Casper_the_ghost said:
Brilliant! There’s a certain dark, Lovecraftian element to this work
October 23rd, 2021 06:58
The Photograph
spilleronsheet said:
Great story in poetry
That arose my curiosity
October 22nd, 2021 13:36
spilleronsheet said:
Great story in poetry
That arose my curiosity
October 22nd, 2021 13:36
The Photograph
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhhh
What is it
Horror or tragedy
Dream or nightmare
Loosing the loved one or simply thyself
Strange stories to recount
October 22nd, 2021 13:35
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhhh
What is it
Horror or tragedy
Dream or nightmare
Loosing the loved one or simply thyself
Strange stories to recount
October 22nd, 2021 13:35
The Photograph
aDarkerMind said:
much to read and think about Paul;
good one;
October 22nd, 2021 09:46
aDarkerMind said:
much to read and think about Paul;
good one;
October 22nd, 2021 09:46
Bloodless
L. B. Mek said:
ha! great twist
(that\'s why in all my horror dreams
I play the role of the sniper
so, from a distance
I riddle corpses with a whole magazine full of holes, before
considering its no longer a threat...
or more often, I\'m the one running
until I awake from the nightmare, never looking back..
I\'m telling you,
if they had an Olympics for dreams, I would consider myself in with a genuine chance, at the marathon) lol
sorry, I wanted to respond in a humorous fashion
at least initially, just to help offset the dire seriousness
in what your writing portrays..
there is so many levels, I could identify with
and yet, I doubt I have even scratched the surface;
topics, such as the insightful commentary on male/female relationship dynamics in modernity,
or how, with the extinction of our collective moral compass
and the vile \'warping\' of woman\'s fight for equality and empowerment they deserve;
is disgustingly being corrupted in the everyday violence we\'re being inundated with, and far worse
is fast becoming an accepted form of communication in peoples relationships,
growing worse at a frighteningly alarming rate...?!
yeah, this is a subject for an entire book of study or Poetry
but at least your Bold and Timely write, is insuring
this is one less thing we can act ignorant, about...
(thanks for sharing
such a meaningful write)
October 19th, 2021 03:49
L. B. Mek said:
ha! great twist
(that\'s why in all my horror dreams
I play the role of the sniper
so, from a distance
I riddle corpses with a whole magazine full of holes, before
considering its no longer a threat...
or more often, I\'m the one running
until I awake from the nightmare, never looking back..
I\'m telling you,
if they had an Olympics for dreams, I would consider myself in with a genuine chance, at the marathon) lol
sorry, I wanted to respond in a humorous fashion
at least initially, just to help offset the dire seriousness
in what your writing portrays..
there is so many levels, I could identify with
and yet, I doubt I have even scratched the surface;
topics, such as the insightful commentary on male/female relationship dynamics in modernity,
or how, with the extinction of our collective moral compass
and the vile \'warping\' of woman\'s fight for equality and empowerment they deserve;
is disgustingly being corrupted in the everyday violence we\'re being inundated with, and far worse
is fast becoming an accepted form of communication in peoples relationships,
growing worse at a frighteningly alarming rate...?!
yeah, this is a subject for an entire book of study or Poetry
but at least your Bold and Timely write, is insuring
this is one less thing we can act ignorant, about...
(thanks for sharing
such a meaningful write)
October 19th, 2021 03:49
Bloodless
orchidee said:
An upper-class comment: \'Bit of a spiffing bad day there, old chap, what?!\' lol.
October 18th, 2021 11:03
orchidee said:
An upper-class comment: \'Bit of a spiffing bad day there, old chap, what?!\' lol.
October 18th, 2021 11:03
The Mirror
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted Paul…the mirror is turning as a muse over my mind …
October 17th, 2021 14:06
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted Paul…the mirror is turning as a muse over my mind …
October 17th, 2021 14:06
The Rose
camelot said:
\"Life is a bitch and then you die\". I remember when i heard Nas say that, i never thought i\'d see it incorporated on a poem about love lol. Great poem, i always liked loss-of-innocence type poems, because its true, you gotta grow some thorns in this evil world we live in
October 17th, 2021 08:40
camelot said:
\"Life is a bitch and then you die\". I remember when i heard Nas say that, i never thought i\'d see it incorporated on a poem about love lol. Great poem, i always liked loss-of-innocence type poems, because its true, you gotta grow some thorns in this evil world we live in
October 17th, 2021 08:40
The Rose
spilleronsheet said:
It’s really good
Be the rose
The beauty in its prime
Yet in defence hold the thorns
Not to be be hurt anymore
October 14th, 2021 21:56
spilleronsheet said:
It’s really good
Be the rose
The beauty in its prime
Yet in defence hold the thorns
Not to be be hurt anymore
October 14th, 2021 21:56
The Village Of Trill
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, really clever
thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, really clever
thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 03:51
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